| 30.51% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien's charcoal suit seemed too [too]" | | 1 | "Rory's hand went instinctively [instinctively]" | | 2 | "She gestured around [around]" | | 3 | "He pulled back [back]" | | 4 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.305 | | leniency | 0.61 | | rawRatio | 0.278 | | effectiveRatio | 0.169 | |
| 87.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "very" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1194 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "implication" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "constructed" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "intensity" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1184 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 669 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 8 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Books | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Tears | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Books" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Tears" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.603 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 22.34 | | std | 13.28 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 41 | | 35 | 55 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 20 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 29.70% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber eye, one black—both fixed on her." | | 1 | "The scent of him—expensive cologne with something else beneath, something otherworldly—filled the cramped entranceway." | | 2 | "The scent of him, the feel of him, the taste of whiskey and something uniquely Lucien—it overwhelmed her senses." | | 3 | "She found none, only sincerity and something else—vulnerability." |
| |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 678 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.03687315634218289 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014749262536873156 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 11.72 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
| |
| 70.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.45544554455445546 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.74% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 1 | "He turned, his ivory-handled cane" | | 2 | "His gaze swept the room" | | 3 | "He took a step closer" | | 4 | "She found a bottle and" | | 5 | "She sat opposite him, perched" | | 6 | "He swirled the whiskey in" | | 7 | "His mismatched eyes met hers" | | 8 | "He leaned forward, his voice" | | 9 | "He set his glass down" | | 10 | "She gestured around the cramped" | | 11 | "He knelt before her, reaching" | | 12 | "His thumb traced the small" | | 13 | "He reached for her again," | | 14 | "His lips met hers, tentative" | | 15 | "he murmured against her lips" | | 16 | "He pulled back slightly, his" | | 17 | "His voice was soft, pleading" | | 18 | "She paced the small living" | | 19 | "She stopped pacing, turning to" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 25.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts rattled open one" | | 1 | "Rory pulled the door inward," | | 2 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 3 | "The small crescent-shaped scar on" | | 4 | "The words hung between them," | | 5 | "Here he stood, knocking them" | | 6 | "Rory stepped back, just enough" | | 7 | "The scent of him—expensive cologne" | | 8 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched" | | 9 | "Lucien's charcoal suit seemed too" | | 10 | "Books teetered in precarious towers," | | 11 | "He turned, his ivory-handled cane" | | 12 | "His gaze swept the room" | | 13 | "Rory's hand went instinctively to" | | 14 | "He took a step closer" | | 15 | "Rory moved toward the kitchen" | | 16 | "She found a bottle and" | | 17 | "The silence stretched, filled only" | | 18 | "Rory placed the glasses on" | | 19 | "Lucien lowered himself into an" |
| | ratio | 0.869 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned, his voice dropping" | | 1 | "He reached, this time cupping her face in his hands" |
| |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.034 | | leniency | 0.068 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |