Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01Y1EFDRFJG827DQ2AP0C

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Duration:
39.7s
Cost:
$0.004478
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts rattled open one by one, each metallic click echoing in the narrow hallway. Rory pulled the door inward, the movement stiff with caution. On the other side stood Lucien Moreau, leaning against the doorframe with practiced nonchalance, his platinum hair catching the dim light of the hallway. One amber eye, one black—both fixed on her. "Rory." Her fingers tightened on the edge of the door. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist whitened with the pressure. "Lucien." "May I come in?" The words hung between them, heavy with implication. Three months of silence. Three months of carefully constructed walls. Here he stood, knocking them down with five syllables. Rory stepped back, just enough to let him pass. The scent of him—expensive cologne with something else beneath, something otherworldly—filled the cramped entranceway. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched his back from his perch on a stack of books, hissing once before darting under the sofa. "Still making friends wherever you go, I see." Lucien's charcoal suit seemed too refined for the chaos of Eva's flat. Books teetered in precarious towers, scrolls lay unfurled across every available surface, and half-empty mugs of tea left rings of brown on important-looking documents. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" He turned, his ivory-handled cane making a soft tap against the floorboards. "I heard you were staying here. With Eva." "Word travels fast in your circles." "Faster than you'd imagine." His gaze swept the room before settling back on her. "You've changed your hair." "I haven't." Rory's hand went instinctively to her straight black hair. "It's the same as always." "No. It's different. You wear it differently now." He took a step closer. "Or perhaps it's just you who's different." Rory moved toward the kitchen area, putting space between them. "I should offer you tea. Or something stronger." "Whiskey if you have it." She found a bottle and two glasses, her movements precise, controlled. The silence stretched, filled only by the clink of glass and the distant sounds of Brick Lane filtering through the thin window. "I didn't expect to see you again." Rory placed the glasses on the only clear corner of the coffee table, amber liquid sloshing against the sides. Lucien lowered himself into an armchair, the cane resting across his lap. "And yet here I am." "Here you are." She sat opposite him, perched on the edge of a cushion stacked high with academic journals. "Why?" He swirled the whiskey in his glass, watching the light catch in the liquid. "There are things left unfinished between us, Rory." "Things were finished three months ago. You made that quite clear." "Did I?" His mismatched eyes met hers. "Or did we both run from something neither of us was ready to face?" Rory laughed, a short, bitter sound. "You're the one who walked away, Lucien. Not me." "Because it was necessary." He leaned forward, his voice dropping. "Because what was happening between us... it was dangerous. For both of us." "We're adults. We can handle danger." "Not this kind." He set his glass down with deliberate care. "My world isn't yours, Rory. No matter how much you might wish otherwise." "And yet here you are. In my world. Again." She gestured around the cramped flat. "Uninvited." "I couldn't stay away." The admission hung in the air between them, raw and unexpected. "I've tried. Gods know, I've tried." Rory's breath caught. "What are you saying?" Lucien pushed himself up from the chair, crossing the small space in two strides. He knelt before her, reaching for her hand. The moment his fingers touched her skin, electricity seemed to crackle through the room. "I'm saying that every demon I've brokered information for, every deal I've made, every night I've spent in the underworld—it all feels meaningless without you." His thumb traced the small scar on her left wrist. "I never should have left. I was a fool." "A coward, you mean." But her voice had lost its edge, softened by the proximity of him, by the intensity in his eyes. "That too." A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Will you forgive me?" Rory pulled her hand away, but didn't move back. "Why should I? Because you show up here unexpectedly, saying pretty words? What's changed, Lucien? Three months ago you told me we could never be together. That your demon heritage and my human life were incompatible." "Everything's changed." He reached for her again, this time cupping her face in his hands. "I've changed. These past months without you... they've shown me what I was willing to give up. And I'm not willing to give it up anymore." His lips met hers, tentative at first, then with growing urgency. Three months of separation, of longing, of regret poured into that kiss. Rory's hands found the lapels of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer, deeper. The scent of him, the feel of him, the taste of whiskey and something uniquely Lucien—it overwhelmed her senses. When they finally broke apart, both were breathless. "I've missed you," he murmured against her lips. "Every day." "Then why did you leave?" Lucien rested his forehead against hers. "Because I was afraid. Of what I feel for you. Of what it might mean. Of what my father's people might do if they discovered us." "And now?" "Now I realize that a life without you isn't worth living in fear." He pulled back slightly, his amber and black eyes searching hers. "I love you, Rory. I think I have from the moment we first met." Tears stung her eyes, but she blinked them back. "You can't just show up here after three months and declare your love. It doesn't work like that." "Then tell me how it works." His voice was soft, pleading. "Tell me what I need to do to earn back your trust. Your love." Rory stood, creating distance once more. She paced the small living area, her steps careful around the towers of books. Ptolemy emerged from under the sofa, winding around her legs before jumping onto a windowsill. "I need time, Lucien. You can't just undo three months of hurt with a few words and a kiss." "I'm not asking you to forget. I'm asking you to consider. To give us another chance." She stopped pacing, turning to face him. "And if I do? What then? What happens when the next danger comes? When your father's people discover us? When your world threatens to consume mine?" Lucien rose to his feet, his expression serious. "Then we face it together. As equals. I won't protect you by pushing you away again. That was my mistake before." Rory studied him, searching for hesitation or deception in his mismatched eyes. She found none, only sincerity and something else—vulnerability. "Stay for dinner," she said finally. "We can talk more then. And tomorrow... we can figure out what comes next." A slow smile spread across Lucien's face, reaching his eyes. "I'd like that. Very much." As he stepped closer, Rory met him halfway, her lips finding his in a promise of second chances and new beginnings.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
30.51% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Lucien's charcoal suit seemed too [too]"
1"Rory's hand went instinctively [instinctively]"
2"She gestured around [around]"
3"He pulled back [back]"
4"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.305
leniency0.61
rawRatio0.278
effectiveRatio0.169
87.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"implication"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"otherworldly"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"implication"
2"silence"
3"constructed"
4"otherworldly"
5"traced"
6"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
96.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1184
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount669
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Moreau1
Eva1
Books1
Rory12
Brick1
Lane1
Tears1
Three3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Books"
4"Rory"
5"Tears"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.603
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1184
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.34
std13.28
cv0.594
sampleLengths
057
11
222
34
427
545
644
76
820
96
1018
1116
1220
1318
145
1533
1626
1717
1820
1922
2011
2121
2215
2323
246
2524
2616
2721
287
2936
3044
3123
3214
3345
3441
3555
368
3710
385
3932
402
4138
4227
4325
4435
4519
4616
4733
4829
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
29.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences101
ratio0.04
matches
0"One amber eye, one black—both fixed on her."
1"The scent of him—expensive cologne with something else beneath, something otherworldly—filled the cramped entranceway."
2"The scent of him, the feel of him, the taste of whiskey and something uniquely Lucien—it overwhelmed her senses."
3"She found none, only sincerity and something else—vulnerability."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount678
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03687315634218289
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014749262536873156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean11.72
std7.12
cv0.608
sampleLengths
015
110
224
38
41
59
612
71
84
98
104
116
129
139
1414
1522
1620
1724
186
1912
208
216
2214
234
2411
255
2613
277
2810
298
305
3111
3222
3326
3412
355
3619
371
3814
398
4011
417
4214
436
449
4510
4613
476
4811
4913
70.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45544554455445546
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her fingers tightened on the"
1"He turned, his ivory-handled cane"
2"His gaze swept the room"
3"He took a step closer"
4"She found a bottle and"
5"She sat opposite him, perched"
6"He swirled the whiskey in"
7"His mismatched eyes met hers"
8"He leaned forward, his voice"
9"He set his glass down"
10"She gestured around the cramped"
11"He knelt before her, reaching"
12"His thumb traced the small"
13"He reached for her again,"
14"His lips met hers, tentative"
15"he murmured against her lips"
16"He pulled back slightly, his"
17"His voice was soft, pleading"
18"She paced the small living"
19"She stopped pacing, turning to"
ratio0.361
25.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences61
matches
0"The deadbolts rattled open one"
1"Rory pulled the door inward,"
2"Her fingers tightened on the"
3"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
4"The words hung between them,"
5"Here he stood, knocking them"
6"Rory stepped back, just enough"
7"The scent of him—expensive cologne"
8"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, arched"
9"Lucien's charcoal suit seemed too"
10"Books teetered in precarious towers,"
11"He turned, his ivory-handled cane"
12"His gaze swept the room"
13"Rory's hand went instinctively to"
14"He took a step closer"
15"Rory moved toward the kitchen"
16"She found a bottle and"
17"The silence stretched, filled only"
18"Rory placed the glasses on"
19"Lucien lowered himself into an"
ratio0.869
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He leaned, his voice dropping"
1"He reached, this time cupping her face in his hands"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.068
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.034
80.2064%