| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1216 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "desire" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1192 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "up" | | 1 | "pop" | | 2 | "“Siúil a Rún”" | | 3 | "Welcome." | | 4 | "Rory." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 985 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Empress" | | 7 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.586 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing her weight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.839 | | wordCount | 1192 | | matches | | 0 | "not loud, but deep, as if the sound came from miles underground" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 14.72 | | std | 12.86 | | cv | 0.874 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The floor gave beneath Rory’s boot—soft, elastic, like pressing into warm bread." | | 1 | "The standing stones behind them—those ancient oaks marking the Fae Grove—had vanished." | | 2 | "She glanced at her wrist—her crescent-shaped scar still there." | | 3 | "Sweet rot and something else—caramelised fig, black truffle, burnt sugar, and beneath it, iron." | | 4 | "Trees grew with fruit the colour of bruises—purple, deep blue, glistening wetly as if freshly lacquered." | | 5 | "It pulsed—just once, warm against her skin." | | 6 | "They screamed—not loud, but deep, as if the sound came from miles underground." | | 7 | "Not in the wind—of their own accord." | | 8 | "Its trunk was black, segmented like a spine, and instead of fruit, it bore hanging pendants—each one a tiny, beating heart wrapped in glass." | | 9 | "One lashed out—quick, precise—slashing across Rory’s forearm." | | 10 | "Where it landed, a flower sprouted—crimson petals, black veins." | | 11 | "The flower exploded in a burst of ash and scent—fresh laundry, rain on hot pavement, the chalky smell of classrooms." | | 12 | "The other—narrow, half-buried under roots—snaked toward a dark alcove where something glowed a dull, pulsing red." | | 13 | "A hand emerged—long, elegant, pale." |
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| 83.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 552 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "purple, deep blue, glistening" | | 1 | "paper-thin, translucent, veins" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.04528985507246377 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012681159420289856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 7.27 | | std | 5.43 | | cv | 0.748 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 65.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.42073170731707316 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a shimmering amber haze" | | 1 | "Instead, thick streams of dark" | | 2 | "Then they crumbled." | | 3 | "Then an arm." | | 4 | "Then a shoulder." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boot stayed sunken halfway" | | 1 | "Her voice cut low, tight" | | 2 | "Her silver hair drifted as" | | 3 | "She glanced at her wrist—her" | | 4 | "She tilted her head" | | 5 | "It pulsed—just once, warm against" | | 6 | "She hadn’t asked who gave" | | 7 | "Their skin was paper-thin, translucent," | | 8 | "They screamed—not loud, but deep," | | 9 | "Their violet eyes flickered toward" | | 10 | "They reached a garden enclosed" | | 11 | "Its trunk was black, segmented" | | 12 | "She stepped forward." | | 13 | "She hissed, stepping back." | | 14 | "It opened with a soft" | | 15 | "It looked like her mother’s." | | 16 | "She yanked the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 17 | "Her mother’s voice filled the" | | 18 | "She picked it up." | | 19 | "Her and Eva, arms around" |
| | ratio | 0.177 | |
| 88.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The floor gave beneath Rory’s" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t move." | | 2 | "Her boot stayed sunken halfway" | | 3 | "A thread of crimson light" | | 4 | "Her voice cut low, tight" | | 5 | "Isolde stepped forward, bare feet" | | 6 | "Her silver hair drifted as" | | 7 | "The standing stones behind them—those" | | 8 | "Rory slowly pulled her boot" | | 9 | "The floor sealed behind her" | | 10 | "She glanced at her wrist—her" | | 11 | "A small comfort." | | 12 | "The air tasted thick, cloying." | | 13 | "Trees grew with fruit the" | | 14 | "Vines slithered along the ground" | | 15 | "Orchards stretched into the distance," | | 16 | "Nyx shifted, shadows peeling from" | | 17 | "Isolde said, stepping lightly onto" | | 18 | "She tilted her head" | | 19 | "Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched a valley" | | 1 | "Now it hummed, quiet, insistent." | | 2 | "Before the accident." | | 3 | "Before Rory stopped answering calls." |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees grew with fruit the colour of bruises—purple, deep blue, glistening wetly as if freshly lacquered." | | 1 | "They screamed—not loud, but deep, as if the sound came from miles underground." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.29% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.229 | | leniency | 0.457 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.171 | |