| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.159 | | leniency | 0.318 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sweetly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "cautiously" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "echoing" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "gloom" | | 6 | "wavering" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "fascinating" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.84% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 42 | | markdownWords | 92 | | totalWords | 1447 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "wall" | | 1 | "warning" | | 2 | "leaned" | | 3 | "Words" | | 4 | "shuddered" | | 5 | "thicker" | | 6 | "tilted" | | 7 | "Inward" | | 8 | "alive" | | 9 | "walls" | | 10 | "here" | | 11 | "what" | | 12 | "shifted" | | 13 | "inside" | | 14 | "move" | | 15 | "parted" | | 16 | "could" | | 17 | "seen" | | 18 | "click" | | 19 | "shifted" | | 20 | "invite" | | 21 | "anything" | | 22 | "unravelling" | | 23 | "burnt" | | 24 | "roots" | | 25 | "things" | | 26 | "Eyes" | | 27 | "both" | | 28 | "\"You carry the weight of a question, little spark.\"" | | 29 | "\"The stone at your throat burns with the answer. But answers are not free.\"" | | 30 | "Don’t" | | 31 | "\"What we have always wanted. A taste. A memory. A *name" | | 32 | "\"Not yours.\"" | | 33 | "\"Hers.\"" | | 34 | "\"Run, little moth. Run and don’t look back.\"" | | 35 | "\"Yes. Her.\"" | | 36 | "\"We know *all" | | 37 | "\"But names have power. And power has a price.\"" | | 38 | "shifted" | | 39 | "moved" | | 40 | "hungry" | | 41 | "now" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1209 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 2.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 27 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hollow | 2 | | Isolde | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Hollow" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.383 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reaching for something buried beneath the moss" | | 1 | "quite water" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.073 | | wordCount | 1447 | | matches | | 0 | "not the absence of light, but something *thicker*, something" | | 1 | "not cold but *alive*, humming with a frequency" | | 2 | "neither male nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 161 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 21.92 | | std | 21.4 | | cv | 0.976 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 78 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 95 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 66 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 61 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 52 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 99.65% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | 0 | "were—curved" | | 1 | "being ripped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 209 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 161 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here didn’t sway—they *leaned*, their gnarled branches twisting toward the centre of the clearing as if reaching for something buried beneath the moss." | | 1 | "Etched into it were symbols—no, not symbols." | | 2 | "Beyond it, darkness yawned—not the absence of light, but something *thicker*, something that swallowed sound." | | 3 | "She reached out blindly, her fingers brushing something smooth and cool—*walls*, but not stone." | | 4 | "The ribs of the beast—if that’s what they were—curved upward into darkness, their surfaces etched with the same shifting symbols as the slab." | | 5 | "Instead, it showed her the grove outside—the standing stones, the twisted trees, the sky above them darkening into twilight." | | 6 | "A sound cut through the silence—a low, resonant *click*, like stone grinding against stone." | | 7 | "Then—" | | 8 | "The blue orbs didn’t follow them in; the only light came from the faint glow of the Heartstone pendant, its crimson pulse the only colour in the suffocating dark." | | 9 | "The walls here weren’t bone—they were *roots*, massive and gnarled, twisting together like the fingers of sleeping giants." | | 10 | "The largest of them—pale, pupil-less, the size of her fist—drifted closer." | | 11 | "A memory flashed behind Rory’s eyes—" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1223 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "vast, long-dead beast," |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.03761242845461979 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012264922322158627 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 161 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 161 | | mean | 8.98 | | std | 6.26 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 40.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.2795031055900621 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Nyx’s form dissolved, seeping" | | 1 | "Then the obsidian *shuddered*." | | 2 | "Then she stepped forward." | | 3 | "Instead, it showed her the" | | 4 | "Then the passage opened up." |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She yanked it free, the" | | 1 | "she muttered, wiping the blade" | | 2 | "She was too busy staring" | | 3 | "It wasn’t a door." | | 4 | "They pulsed faintly, like embers" | | 5 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 6 | "It had been warm since" | | 7 | "She reached out blindly, her" | | 8 | "They pulsed in time with" | | 9 | "It shimmered like oil, catching" | | 10 | "She jerked back." | | 11 | "She dipped her hand into" | | 12 | "It didn’t ripple." | | 13 | "It simply *parted*, like silk," | | 14 | "It was a sound of" | | 15 | "It echoed through the Hollow," | | 16 | "They stood in a vast" | | 17 | "They turned as one, fixing" | | 18 | "She didn’t turn." | | 19 | "She didn’t hesitate." |
| | ratio | 0.191 | |
| 46.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 91 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The blade struck stone with" | | 1 | "She yanked it free, the" | | 2 | "she muttered, wiping the blade" | | 3 | "Nyx materialised beside her, their" | | 4 | "The air in the grove" | | 5 | "The trees here didn’t sway—they" | | 6 | "The scent of crushed herbs" | | 7 | "Isolde’s voice drifted from the" | | 8 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 9 | "She was too busy staring" | | 10 | "It wasn’t a door." | | 11 | "The obsidian slab stood twice" | | 12 | "They pulsed faintly, like embers" | | 13 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 14 | "It had been warm since" | | 15 | "Rory shot them a look." | | 16 | "A sound like laughter, if" | | 17 | "The symbols flared crimson." | | 18 | "Rory stumbled back as the" | | 19 | "The air rushing out smelled" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees here didn’t sway—they *leaned*, their gnarled branches twisting toward the centre of the clearing as if reaching for something buried beneath the moss…" | | 1 | "Beyond it, darkness yawned—not the absence of light, but something *thicker*, something that swallowed sound." | | 2 | "*Inward*, as if the ground beneath her had suddenly become the inside of a vast, breathing thing." | | 3 | "The darkness pressed against her skin, not cold but *alive*, humming with a frequency that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "They pulsed in time with her heartbeat, casting long, wavering shadows that moved independently of their sources." | | 5 | "The perspective *shifted*, as if she were seeing it from above, from below, from *inside* the trees themselves." | | 6 | "The ribs there split apart, revealing a narrow passage, its floor sloping downward into deeper darkness." | | 7 | "The air rushing out was colder, sharper, carrying the scent of frost and something older, something that made the hairs on Rory’s arms rise." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form rippled, their edges blurring as they drifted toward the passage" | | 1 | "The eye drifted, its glow casting long shadows across her face" |
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| 81.82% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.068 | | leniency | 0.136 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.136 | |