Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT01ZSR9T7H68VS9HXDKDR2

Run Details

Duration:
25.2s
Cost:
$0.012680
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sky above Dymas did not bleed red or crackle with fire as Aurora had expected. Instead, it glowed amber, a slow, honeyed light that poured through a thick canopy of fruit-laden vines, dappling the ground in molten gold. The air hung heavy—warm, perfumed, thick with the musk of fermenting nectar and something richer, more cloying. Vanilla, burnt sugar, cloves. Her stomach twisted. Not hunger. Not quite. “This place tastes like a funeral banquet,” Nyx murmured beside her, their voice a breath caught between syllables, like wind through a crack in stone. Their shadow-form flickered between solidity and smoke, drawn thin where the light touched them. Aurora adjusted the strap of the satchel at her hip, fingers brushing the chill of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but alive. A second heartbeat under her ribs. “I wouldn’t call it a banquet,” she said, voice low. “More like a kitchen after midnight. Everyone’s passed out with cake smeared on their faces.” Nyx’s faintly glowing violet eyes shifted toward her. “You’ve known people like that?” “You don’t survive Cardiff without seeing a few too-deep into the crisps.” Ahead, the path coiled between towering stone arches, carved with reliefs of feasts—endless tables, figures reaching with skeletal hands, their mouths open not in joy, but supplication. The fruit in the carvings rotted even as it was offered. A pomegranate burst with worms in one panel. In another, a wine goblet overflowed with what looked like blood, but moved too slowly—thicker, syrupy. Isolde stepped forward, bare feet noiseless on the moss-carpeted stone. She didn’t touch the ground so much as hover above it, her silver hair drifting like mist despite the still air. One hand trailed along the side of an arch. Her pale lavender eyes were unfocused, scanning something beyond sight. “They’re not dead,” she whispered. “They’re remembered. Their hunger is eternal because no one forgets. Not here.” Aurora frowned. “Who’s *they*?” “The chefs,” Nyx answered. “The ones who traded their souls for flavor too divine for mortals. They cook now—not for glory, but to feed the hunger. The Prince demands it.” Belphegor. Prince of Gluttony. Name spoken only in warnings, or over too much wine by fools who didn’t know better. Aurora hadn’t believed in him until the Heartstone Pendant began to pulse in her flat, whispering of rifts behind kitchen walls and cellar doors. They moved deeper. The trees grew stranger. Their trunks were knotted like clenched fists, bark peeling in ribbons that smelled of saffron and decay. Fruit hung from them—plump, impossible shapes. A pear with skin like human cheek. A cluster of grapes the color of old bruises, oozing clear, sweet-scented fluid when one dropped and burst on the path. Nyx reached down, let one of the droplets land on their shadow-fingertip. It sizzled, not with heat, but absence. The drop vanished. So did a patch of their form—like smoke unmade. “Don’t touch anything,” Aurora snapped. “No eating. No drinking. No *tasting*.” She shot a look at Isolde, who only smiled faintly, her gaze already elsewhere. “Hunger remembers all,” Isolde said. “Even the taste of regret.” The ground sloped downward. The air grew heavier. Sounds changed. Not silence, but a muffled hush, as if the world were wrapped in velvet. Then—music. Distant, discordant. A string quartet playing out of time, notes stretching and snapping. A single, sustained flute wailed in the high register, then cut off mid-breath. They passed a fountain. Water—no, not water—flowed in looping spirals from the mouth of a stone face buried in the ground. Its eyes were closed, lips parted. The liquid shimmered like oil, but smelled like fresh bread, hot from the oven. It moved *upward*, defying gravity in slow spirals before curling back down into the basin, where it pooled, golden and thick. Aurora’s mouth watered. She clenched her jaw. Beside her, Nyx recoiled, their form pulling backward like ink swept from paper. “That’s not food. That’s *memory*. That’s a person’s last meal, distilled.” Isolde knelt. Without dipping her fingers in, she inhaled deeply. “Rosemary. Garlic. A child’s laughter. A mother’s hands. A betrayal over wine. This is not nourishment. This is grief made digestible.” Aurora touched the pendant again. It pulsed faster. “There’s a rift close,” she said. “We’re near.” They pressed on. The path dissolved into flagstones choked with flowering weeds—blossoms like chalices, filled with a shimmering, violet liquid. Fireflies, or something like them, drifted in clusters, but their light wasn’t yellow—it was *flavor*. One glowed honey-sweet. Another, smoky like bacon. A third pulsed with the sharpness of citrus, making Aurora’s teeth ache. Then—voices. Not words. Whispers. A chorus of them, layered beneath the music. Murmurs of *more*, of *give me*, of *I’m still hungry*. They came from the trees. From the ground. From the air itself. A shape moved between the vines. Tall. Gaunt. Cloaked in tattered finery—once rich, now stained with sauces dark as tar. Its face was hidden beneath a chef’s toque, but the hands were bare. Skin stretched too tight over bones. Fingers twitched, clutching a phantom knife. It didn’t speak. It didn’t turn. But it *knew* them. Nyx stepped in front of Aurora, their form thickening, darkening. “Don’t look at it. Don’t acknowledge.” Isolde tilted her head, as if listening to a distant song. “He was the best in Marseille. Made a sauce that made a king weep for his dead wife. Then ate the recipe. Swallowed it whole. Said flavor should *belong*, not be written.” The figure twitched. One hand rose—not toward them, but to its own mouth. It mimed tearing something from its throat. Then, silently, it stepped backward and vanished into the vine wall. Aurora exhaled. “We’re being watched.” “We’re being *tasted*,” Nyx corrected. They were in a clearing now. At its center stood a table. Carved from black stone, long enough to seat fifty. It was set. Plates of polished obsidian. Cutlery that looked made of bone. Goblets filled with liquid that shifted color—red to green to gold—as Aurora watched. And on the table—food. But not food as the world knew it. A roast boar, eyes open and *alive*, watching them. Its flesh gleamed, basted in something that smelled of desire and shame. A pie whose crust pulsed. A bowl of soup swirling with tiny, screaming faces—gone the moment she blinked. Aurora’s stomach clenched. Her mouth watered in betrayal. Don’t eat. Don’t drink. Don’t *taste*. She reached for the satchel. Her fingers closed around cold metal—the Fae-Forged Blade. Moonsilver. Isolde’s gift. The blade hummed against her palm, low and steady. As if listening. Nyx moved to the edge of the table, hesitant. “This isn’t a meal,” they whispered. “It’s a test.” Isolde stepped forward, bare feet finally touching the ground. The flowers at her feet curled away, roots retracting. “The Prince invites,” she said. “But the table remembers every guest. Every sin. Every secret craving.” Her pale eyes locked on Aurora. “What do *you* hunger for, Laila?” Aurora froze. No one called her that. Only one person ever had. And he was buried under a different name, under different stones. The Heartstone Pendant burned—not hot, but *aware*. From beneath the table, something stirred. A low, wet sound. Like swallowing. Then, from the shadows beneath the stone, a hand emerged. Not human. Too many joints. Skin like cured meat. It gripped the edge of the table. Another joined it. Then a head. It had no face. Only a mouth—wide, lipless, lined with rows of tiny, needle teeth. It opened slowly. And spoke, in a voice made of chewing. “You’re late,” it said. “The first course was served yesterday.” Nyx stepped back, their form flickering wildly. Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade. Its cold weight grounded her. The mouth smiled. “Sit,” it said. “You must be famished.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.903
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count4
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"flickered"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"scanning"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"velvet"
8"shimmered"
9"desire"
10"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count2
highlights
0"clenched fists"
1"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences150
matches
0"t in joy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences150
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords18
totalWords1295
ratio0.014
matches
0"they"
1"tasting"
2"upward"
3"memory"
4"flavor"
5"more"
6"give me"
7"I’m still hungry"
8"knew"
9"belong"
10"tasted"
11"alive"
12"taste"
13"you"
14"aware"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
79.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1066
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Dymas1
Aurora15
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx9
Belphegor1
Gluttony1
Isolde7
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
One3
Don3
persons
0"Dymas"
1"Aurora"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Blade"
6"One"
places(empty)
globalScore0.796
windowScore0.833
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like blood, but moved too slowly—t"
1"smelled like fresh bread, hot from the ove"
2"something like them, drifted in clusters, bu"
3"as if listening to a distant song"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords5.405
wordCount1295
matches
0"not warm, but alive"
1"not in joy, but supplication"
2"not for glory, but to feed the hunger"
3"not with heat, but absence"
4"Not silence, but a muffled hush, as if the world were wrapped in velvet"
5"not toward them, but to its own mouth"
6"not hot, but *aware*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean19.33
std17.38
cv0.899
sampleLengths
067
139
233
325
413
512
662
750
817
94
1030
1144
123
1355
1431
1525
1610
1751
184
1958
203
214
2224
2331
248
258
263
2751
281
2933
306
3139
3210
3316
3443
3531
365
375
386
396
4035
414
428
4339
448
456
465
4723
4818
4918
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences150
matches
0"was offered"
1"were unfocused"
2"were wrapped"
3"was hidden"
4"was buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences167
ratio0.114
matches
0"The air hung heavy—warm, perfumed, thick with the musk of fermenting nectar and something richer, more cloying."
1"It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but alive."
2"Ahead, the path coiled between towering stone arches, carved with reliefs of feasts—endless tables, figures reaching with skeletal hands, their mouths open not in joy, but supplication."
3"In another, a wine goblet overflowed with what looked like blood, but moved too slowly—thicker, syrupy."
4"Fruit hung from them—plump, impossible shapes."
5"So did a patch of their form—like smoke unmade."
6"Then—music."
7"Water—no, not water—flowed in looping spirals from the mouth of a stone face buried in the ground."
8"The path dissolved into flagstones choked with flowering weeds—blossoms like chalices, filled with a shimmering, violet liquid."
9"Fireflies, or something like them, drifted in clusters, but their light wasn’t yellow—it was *flavor*."
10"Then—voices."
11"Cloaked in tattered finery—once rich, now stained with sauces dark as tar."
12"One hand rose—not toward them, but to its own mouth."
13"Goblets filled with liquid that shifted color—red to green to gold—as Aurora watched."
14"And on the table—food."
15"A bowl of soup swirling with tiny, screaming faces—gone the moment she blinked."
16"Her fingers closed around cold metal—the Fae-Forged Blade."
17"The Heartstone Pendant burned—not hot, but *aware*."
18"Only a mouth—wide, lipless, lined with rows of tiny, needle teeth."
93.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1096
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"clear, sweet-scented fluid"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04105839416058394
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010948905109489052
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean7.75
std6.07
cv0.783
sampleLengths
016
123
217
34
43
52
62
725
814
921
106
116
1210
1315
148
155
1612
1727
1811
198
2016
2110
2221
239
2410
255
2612
272
282
294
3026
311
323
3316
3424
353
364
3717
386
397
4021
4112
427
433
449
455
4620
475
485
494
57.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.39520958083832336
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences118
matches
0"Instead, it glowed amber, a"
1"Then, silently, it stepped backward"
2"Only one person ever had."
3"Then, from the shadows beneath"
4"Too many joints."
5"Then a head."
6"Only a mouth—wide, lipless, lined"
ratio0.059
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences118
matches
0"Her stomach twisted."
1"Their shadow-form flickered between solidity"
2"It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but"
3"she said, voice low"
4"She didn’t touch the ground"
5"Her pale lavender eyes were"
6"They moved deeper."
7"Their trunks were knotted like"
8"It sizzled, not with heat,"
9"She shot a look at"
10"They passed a fountain."
11"Its eyes were closed, lips"
12"It moved *upward*, defying gravity"
13"She clenched her jaw."
14"It pulsed faster."
15"They pressed on."
16"They came from the trees."
17"Its face was hidden beneath"
18"It didn’t speak."
19"It didn’t turn."
ratio0.271
82.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences118
matches
0"The sky above Dymas did"
1"The air hung heavy—warm, perfumed,"
2"Vanilla, burnt sugar, cloves."
3"Her stomach twisted."
4"Nyx murmured beside her, their"
5"Their shadow-form flickered between solidity"
6"Aurora adjusted the strap of"
7"It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but"
8"A second heartbeat under her"
9"she said, voice low"
10"Nyx’s faintly glowing violet eyes"
11"The fruit in the carvings"
12"A pomegranate burst with worms"
13"Isolde stepped forward, bare feet"
14"She didn’t touch the ground"
15"Her pale lavender eyes were"
16"Prince of Gluttony."
17"Name spoken only in warnings,"
18"Aurora hadn’t believed in him"
19"They moved deeper."
ratio0.754
42.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"As if listening."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Instead, it glowed amber, a slow, honeyed light that poured through a thick canopy of fruit-laden vines, dappling the ground in molten gold."
1"Nyx stepped in front of Aurora, their form thickening, darkening."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice low"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora snapped (snap)"
3"Nyx corrected (correct)"
4"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.323
78.5262%