| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.452 | | leniency | 0.903 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched fists" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1295 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "they" | | 1 | "tasting" | | 2 | "upward" | | 3 | "memory" | | 4 | "flavor" | | 5 | "more" | | 6 | "give me" | | 7 | "I’m still hungry" | | 8 | "knew" | | 9 | "belong" | | 10 | "tasted" | | 11 | "alive" | | 12 | "taste" | | 13 | "you" | | 14 | "aware" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1066 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.41 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 9 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | One | 3 | | Don | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.796 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like blood, but moved too slowly—t" | | 1 | "smelled like fresh bread, hot from the ove" | | 2 | "something like them, drifted in clusters, bu" | | 3 | "as if listening to a distant song" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 7 | | per1kWords | 5.405 | | wordCount | 1295 | | matches | | 0 | "not warm, but alive" | | 1 | "not in joy, but supplication" | | 2 | "not for glory, but to feed the hunger" | | 3 | "not with heat, but absence" | | 4 | "Not silence, but a muffled hush, as if the world were wrapped in velvet" | | 5 | "not toward them, but to its own mouth" | | 6 | "not hot, but *aware*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 19.33 | | std | 17.38 | | cv | 0.899 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "was offered" | | 1 | "were unfocused" | | 2 | "were wrapped" | | 3 | "was hidden" | | 4 | "was buried" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung heavy—warm, perfumed, thick with the musk of fermenting nectar and something richer, more cloying." | | 1 | "It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but alive." | | 2 | "Ahead, the path coiled between towering stone arches, carved with reliefs of feasts—endless tables, figures reaching with skeletal hands, their mouths open not in joy, but supplication." | | 3 | "In another, a wine goblet overflowed with what looked like blood, but moved too slowly—thicker, syrupy." | | 4 | "Fruit hung from them—plump, impossible shapes." | | 5 | "So did a patch of their form—like smoke unmade." | | 6 | "Then—music." | | 7 | "Water—no, not water—flowed in looping spirals from the mouth of a stone face buried in the ground." | | 8 | "The path dissolved into flagstones choked with flowering weeds—blossoms like chalices, filled with a shimmering, violet liquid." | | 9 | "Fireflies, or something like them, drifted in clusters, but their light wasn’t yellow—it was *flavor*." | | 10 | "Then—voices." | | 11 | "Cloaked in tattered finery—once rich, now stained with sauces dark as tar." | | 12 | "One hand rose—not toward them, but to its own mouth." | | 13 | "Goblets filled with liquid that shifted color—red to green to gold—as Aurora watched." | | 14 | "And on the table—food." | | 15 | "A bowl of soup swirling with tiny, screaming faces—gone the moment she blinked." | | 16 | "Her fingers closed around cold metal—the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 17 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned—not hot, but *aware*." | | 18 | "Only a mouth—wide, lipless, lined with rows of tiny, needle teeth." |
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| 93.07% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1096 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "clear, sweet-scented fluid" |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04105839416058394 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010948905109489052 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 7.75 | | std | 6.07 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 57.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.39520958083832336 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it glowed amber, a" | | 1 | "Then, silently, it stepped backward" | | 2 | "Only one person ever had." | | 3 | "Then, from the shadows beneath" | | 4 | "Too many joints." | | 5 | "Then a head." | | 6 | "Only a mouth—wide, lipless, lined" |
| | ratio | 0.059 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 1 | "Their shadow-form flickered between solidity" | | 2 | "It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but" | | 3 | "she said, voice low" | | 4 | "She didn’t touch the ground" | | 5 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 6 | "They moved deeper." | | 7 | "Their trunks were knotted like" | | 8 | "It sizzled, not with heat," | | 9 | "She shot a look at" | | 10 | "They passed a fountain." | | 11 | "Its eyes were closed, lips" | | 12 | "It moved *upward*, defying gravity" | | 13 | "She clenched her jaw." | | 14 | "It pulsed faster." | | 15 | "They pressed on." | | 16 | "They came from the trees." | | 17 | "Its face was hidden beneath" | | 18 | "It didn’t speak." | | 19 | "It didn’t turn." |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 82.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky above Dymas did" | | 1 | "The air hung heavy—warm, perfumed," | | 2 | "Vanilla, burnt sugar, cloves." | | 3 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 4 | "Nyx murmured beside her, their" | | 5 | "Their shadow-form flickered between solidity" | | 6 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "It pulsed—soft, persistent—not warm, but" | | 8 | "A second heartbeat under her" | | 9 | "she said, voice low" | | 10 | "Nyx’s faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 11 | "The fruit in the carvings" | | 12 | "A pomegranate burst with worms" | | 13 | "Isolde stepped forward, bare feet" | | 14 | "She didn’t touch the ground" | | 15 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 16 | "Prince of Gluttony." | | 17 | "Name spoken only in warnings," | | 18 | "Aurora hadn’t believed in him" | | 19 | "They moved deeper." |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 42.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it glowed amber, a slow, honeyed light that poured through a thick canopy of fruit-laden vines, dappling the ground in molten gold." | | 1 | "Nyx stepped in front of Aurora, their form thickening, darkening." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora snapped (snap)" | | 3 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.387 | | leniency | 0.774 | | rawRatio | 0.417 | | effectiveRatio | 0.323 | |