Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT021685E4Y8WACAG0G2RGY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.012074
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened and he filled the frame like a memory that had come back to life. Moonlight pinned his suit to him; charcoal fabric pressed across broad shoulders, the ivory handle of his cane catching a sliver of light. One eye burned amber, the other sat like a drop of coal. He looked too clean to have been standing on Brick Lane in the wind. He did not look like someone who left. "Rory." He said nothing else. The name sat between them, heavy and familiar. She leaned against the jamb. Books teetered on the hallway table behind her, pages fanned like small white flags. Ptolemy threaded between her ankles, tail up, unimpressed by drama. She had not expected the night to fracture like this. "Lucien." Her voice came out too even. Fingers curled around the door's wood, thumb brushing the crescent scar on her wrist without meaning to. The motion had been small. He watched it when he stepped forward an inch. He kept his hands visible, cane planted against the threshold like a promise and a warning. He looked at the scar, at the quick, involuntary fold in her hand. The corner of his mouth moved. He did not smile. "You shouldn't be here," she said. "You shouldn't be alone," he answered. Her laugh scraped against the books on the shelf. "Bullshit. You mean I shouldn't be within reach of whatever dragged you away." He blinked, the amber eye warming as if a candle had been nearer. "I didn't drag you," he said. "I thought leaving was the only way to keep you clean of my mess." "Clean?" She pushed the door wider, forcing the space between them. The flat smelled of old paper and tea gone cold. "You left. You packed what you wanted and stepped into the night. You left without a word. That's not keeping anyone clean, Lucien. That's abandonment." His jaw loosened. "I left to stop you getting pulled in—" He stopped himself as if the rest of the sentence tasted bitter. "If someone like me takes root where you are, you'll rot with every kind of dirt that comes with me." He sounded practiced. He sounded exhausted. "Someone like you," she repeated, and the words cut sharper than they should have. "So now all of a sudden you're an ethical choice. You walk out and call it protection." Ptolemy hopped up onto the hallway radiator and surveyed them both with an expression that said, very clearly, this was tedious adult business. Lucien glanced at the cat and his fingers brushed the ivory of his cane. "I thought the less I left behind, the less they would have to follow." "You thought for me," she said. "You'd decided what I could bear and what I couldn't. You didn't give me a choice." He closed his eyes for a long beat, and the flat filled with the hush of that small movement. "I thought—" His voice narrowed. When he spoke again, it bore a softness that did not sit well with his suit's sharp lines. "I thought I could buy time. I thought distance would make the thing that hunts me lose interest. I could not make you safe." "Could not make me safe," she echoed, tasting the syllables like a new poison. "You told me you would stay. You told me you'd be there. I believed you." He stepped one, careful step across the threshold, and the distance between them narrowed by a breath. "You believed me," he repeated. "I never meant to break that." "Then why did you?" The words came small, brittle. "Because I was being honest—" "Honest?" She barked a laugh that bounced off the books. "Honest is staying and explaining. Honest is facing it with me in the room, not leaving me to learn you by the shape of the bed." He let out a sound that was almost a laugh and almost a groan. "You talk to me like I'm one of the things you'd catalogue on those scrolls in Eva's sitting room. Like I'm an entry with a date and a footnote." "You disappeared." She said it like a verdict. "You left, and then I had to explain to myself why. I lay awake threading every possibility—abandonment, fear, protection. I read your habits like they were spells. I tried to guess where you went when you walked away. That was my life for months." A pigeon clattered somewhere in the street below, an ordinary, human noise. He watched her as if the outline of her had shifted and he had been given new light to see it. "I wanted you to choose not to follow me." "And what, Lucien? Make you less of what you are? Turn your shoulders into something you are not?" She scoffed. "You made the decision for me. You took my choice." His fingers opened and closed around the cane; the ivory rattled softly. He reached toward the doorframe, not quite touching it. "If you would have chosen me, the cost would have been—" He faltered. The next words came like confession. "The cost would have eaten you. I couldn't let that happen." "So you left me to bleed out in that choice," she said, and the accusation was less theatrical and more like a wound opened and prodded. Silence settled. Ptolemy yawned a deliberate, enormous yawn and slid down, rubbing against Lucien's shins like he approved of the company. Lucien's hand stilled where the cat leaned. "I thought I could shield you," he said finally. "From enemies who would use you as leverage. From me. I thought the only honest thing to do was to put space between us." "We were already in each other's space, Lucien." She stepped back, letting the doorway take her weight. Her palm came away from the wood wet. "We lived on the same side of a line that had your footprints all over it." "So come inside," he said. Not an order. A plea disguised as an invitation. Her mouth flattened. "Is this a sales pitch now? Admission of guilt and a glass of something? No." A tightness ran through his features. "I didn't come to apologise and leave. I came because something followed me. Something that wants the part of my life that touches you." He raised his chin. "I came because I could not carry what I needed to carry alone anymore." The book stacks watched them like a chorus, spines creasing. Her laugh had gone; there was only the steady hum under her ribs. "So you're looking for a place to dump your mess." "I want you to know," he said. "I want to look at you and not make excuses." "You could have looked at me when you left," she shot back. "You could have said, 'Rory, I'm leaving, and I'm sorry.'" "I could have," he agreed. "And then we'd both have had to make the wrong choices in the dark." He took another step forward. The hallway narrowed. Their breaths met. She could feel the heat rolling off him—an impossible warmth that wasn't just his body. It brushed her face; it made the small hairs on her forearms lift. The pull between them had not eased with time. It had grown the shape of something inconvenient and honest. "This isn't about guilt and absolution," he said. "It's about being ridiculous enough to think I could decide a life for you." "This is about the fact you abandoned me the only way you knew how: by walking away and expecting me to become a shadow in your absence." Her words came clipped. "I did not ask to be part of your world. I volunteered. You took that offering and slammed the door." He closed the last foot of the distance between them and paused in the doorway with his cane behind him, as if the threshold itself demanded ceremony. "I slammed it because I didn't know how to open it again... without bringing monsters across the sill." She watched him. Her hands had gone cold. "And yet here you are, standing in my doorway." "I couldn't find a way to stay away." He let the confession fall into the air like a quiet thing. "I had to see if you were breathing." Ptolemy twined his body between their legs and looked up at her with a face that said, very clearly, he had no patience for riddles. "You could have called," she said. "Sent a message. I would have listened." "I couldn't trust any line that ran through me," he said. "They can trace blood. They can trace words. There were days I wrote your name on the backs of receipts and then burnt the paper because it felt like leaving a trail." She watched him, unable to decide whether to be furious or ache. "So what now? You stand in my hall and declare you couldn't keep away. That's not a plan, Lucien. That's just—" "—the truth," he finished. "The truth is I am tired of running. The truth is I am tired of being the man who leaves. The truth is I want to try being the man who stays." Her laugh was a little. It didn't reach her eyes. "You make promises like weapons. They have an edge." "Then don't take them," he said. "Take me. The good parts. The bad parts. Leave the rest of the weapons in whatever hole I dug them in." She swallowed. The thing hurting in her chest had the same name as the thing that made her stare at a blank wall at two in the morning. Desire had teeth. It had also been betrayed. Words were not heavy enough to balance either. "I don't know if I can trust you," she admitted. There. She had said it. It was a small admission, a raw one. "Neither can I," he answered. "But I know what I want." He reached out then, and for a moment the world condensed to the slow arc of his hand toward her wrist. He did not touch the scar at first. He traced the air above it. "I want to be with you anyway." She watched his fingers with vacant attention, the scar a map of a childhood crack. When his fingers finally brushed her skin, it was only with the pads of his thumb. No fire. No searing. Just pressure like a promise being weighed. "You thought leaving would keep me safe," she murmured. "I thought it would," he said. "I miscalculated." Her breath hitched. He was so close that she felt his heartbeat against the inside of his palm—slower than hers, steady like a drummer who had learned how to count in quarters and beats. It said, in the language of palms and bones, I am here. "You smell like rain," she said suddenly, absurd and specific. He let out a sound that might have been a smile. "And regret." "And cologne you probably ruin on purpose so people remember you." She managed a snarl that nearly softened into a smile. He shifted the cane to his other hand and closed the space between them. Ptolemy wove and waggled and left a small trail of fur that stuck to Lucien's trousers. "Eva's place got some new scrolls," she said, surprising herself with the triviality. "They're scattered on her sofa. You used to comment on the calligraphy." The sentence broke into a laugh that had no iron in it. "I never learned to stop," he said. "Even absence left me reading the margins." She jutted her chin. "Then answer this. If you stay now, what's changed? What makes you think you'll be different?" He rested his forehead against hers before she could frame another question. The contact was not intimate and it was not casual; it was a small surrender. "I have no illusions about myself," he said. "But I'm done pretending I can protect you by erasing myself. I'm going to carry whatever comes. I am asking you not to run from that. If you want to, I will break and need you to be the one to pick me up. If you don't want to, I will step back." Her breath slowed at the heat against her forehead. She could smell the sort of soap he used — clean, expensive, dangerous. Her fingers found his wrist, then his hand, then the cane. The ivory felt warm. "You could get me killed," she said softly. "And you could get me worse things," he countered. "But sitting on opposite sides of a closed door has not helped either of us." She thought of the nights she had spent unravelling possibilities, of the evenings she had imagined his return and how the wanting had become a rumour in her chest. Thoughts unspooled into a single, dangerous desire that pulled her up to meet him halfway. She closed the door behind her with a click that sounded final and delicate all at once. Her fingers lingered on the wood for a heartbeat, then dropped. The hallway dimmed into the room where Eva's books argued in silence. Ptolemy flopped, belly up, indifferent to their great human trouble. "I shouldn't be making this decision in a hallway," she said. "Then take it into a room," he replied. She studied him a long moment, the edge of war and apology and longing layered like the suits he wore. Her chest ached in a way that had nothing to do with danger and everything to do with truth. "Stay in the living room," she said. "On the floor. No bringing other people. No introducing me to the demon father. No dramatic rescues." "I cannot promise the last one," he said. "Then don't," she said. "Promise me simple things." "I can promise simple things," he said. She let out a breath she had been holding since he had stepped into the frame. It became a small laugh, uncontrollable now because the stairs had been climbed and neither of them had a map. She stepped aside and held out the corridor as if it were a bridge. Lucien's hand slid from the cane to her waist without fanfare. The touch was firm and real. It anchored both of them in the sill of the doorway they had once believed would keep them apart. Ptolemy batted at Lucien's cuff as if to grant him some sort of honourable test. Lucien looked down and then up at her, expression open, unprotected. "You're ridiculous," she said. "So are you," he answered. She closed the door behind them and the sound of deadbolts slid into place like sentences sealing a page.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:45:49.777Z" 2/19/2026, 3:45:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags52
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2445
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2445
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"desire"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoed"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"could feel"
5"warmth"
6"desire"
7"traced"
8"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences156
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences201
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2442
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions50
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1390
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy7
Silence1
Lucien7
Eva1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2442
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences201
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean28.73
std17.05
cv0.594
sampleLengths
074
11
212
339
41
537
639
76
86
922
1033
1146
1249
1331
1423
1528
1622
1766
1829
1928
209
215
2236
2343
2452
2542
2630
2751
2826
2928
3033
3141
3214
3318
3448
3533
3617
3722
3830
3947
4022
4151
4245
4317
4428
4525
4613
4743
4833
4936
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences156
matches
0"been given"
1"been betrayed"
2"being weighed"
3"been climbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs269
matches(empty)
14.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences201
ratio0.045
matches
0"Moonlight pinned his suit to him; charcoal fabric pressed across broad shoulders, the ivory handle of his cane catching a sliver of light."
1"His fingers opened and closed around the cane; the ivory rattled softly."
2"Her laugh had gone; there was only the steady hum under her ribs."
3"She could feel the heat rolling off him—an impossible warmth that wasn't just his body."
4"It brushed her face; it made the small hairs on her forearms lift."
5"\"—the truth,\" he finished."
6"He was so close that she felt his heartbeat against the inside of his palm—slower than hers, steady like a drummer who had learned how to count in quarters and beats."
7"The contact was not intimate and it was not casual; it was a small surrender."
8"She could smell the sort of soap he used — clean, expensive, dangerous."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02594810379241517
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005988023952095809
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences201
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences201
mean12.15
std7.97
cv0.656
sampleLengths
017
123
212
314
48
51
64
78
85
914
1010
1110
121
136
1417
155
169
1716
1813
196
204
216
226
239
2413
2513
266
2714
2811
2910
3025
313
3220
3323
343
3514
3617
3723
3814
3914
406
4116
4219
435
4418
4524
4614
4715
4817
495
40.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.24875621890547264
totalSentences201
uniqueOpeners50
27.55% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"Just pressure like a promise"
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount80
totalSentences121
matches
0"He looked too clean to"
1"He did not look like"
2"He said nothing else."
3"She leaned against the jamb."
4"She had not expected the"
5"Her voice came out too"
6"He watched it when he"
7"He kept his hands visible,"
8"He looked at the scar,"
9"He did not smile."
10"Her laugh scraped against the"
11"He blinked, the amber eye"
12"She pushed the door wider,"
13"His jaw loosened."
14"He stopped himself as if"
15"He sounded practiced"
16"He sounded exhausted."
17"she repeated, and the words"
18"He closed his eyes for"
19"His voice narrowed"
ratio0.661
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences121
matches
0"The door opened and he"
1"Moonlight pinned his suit to"
2"He looked too clean to"
3"He did not look like"
4"He said nothing else."
5"The name sat between them,"
6"She leaned against the jamb."
7"Books teetered on the hallway"
8"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles,"
9"She had not expected the"
10"Her voice came out too"
11"Fingers curled around the door's"
12"The motion had been small."
13"He watched it when he"
14"He kept his hands visible,"
15"He looked at the scar,"
16"The corner of his mouth"
17"He did not smile."
18"Her laugh scraped against the"
19"He blinked, the amber eye"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He was so close that she felt his heartbeat against the inside of his palm—slower than hers, steady like a drummer who had learned how to count in quarters and …"
1"Thoughts unspooled into a single, dangerous desire that pulled her up to meet him halfway."
2"She closed the door behind her with a click that sounded final and delicate all at once."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags52
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, and the accusation was less theatrical and more like a wound opened and prodded"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags35
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"She barked (bark)"
3"He faltered (falter)"
4"he agreed (agree)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
6"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.143
80.8380%