Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0230NBVDQ9SAFXEA083HC

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Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto the dim platform of the abandoned tube station, the stale air thick with the scent of rust and old graffiti. Her pocket watch thumped against her left wrist, a steady rhythm that matched the click of her boots on the cracked tiles. The Veil Market hummed around her, a low chorus of whispered barter and the occasional clink of glass. Lanterns hung from the vaulted ceiling, casting amber pools that flickered over stalls of forbidden curiosities. She scanned the crowd, eyes narrowing at the chaotic arrangement of wares: jars of pulsing slime, folded maps that shifted when looked at sideways, a row of swords whose blades seemed to swallow light. In the center of the market, a makeshift police tape—black rope and a handwritten sign—circled a small, overturned stall. The sign read “Caution: Supernatural Hazard”. A figure emerged from behind a stack of weathered books, hair tucked behind the left ear in a nervous habit. The woman’s green eyes darted to Quinn, then to the scene, then back, as if measuring how much to reveal. Eva Kowalski clutched a worn leather satchel, its strap digging into her shoulder. Round glasses perched on the bridge of her nose, one lens smudged with ink. “Quinn, you’re late,” Eva muttered, voice low, eyes flicking to the edges of the crime scene. “The victim’s body was found before I could secure the evidence.” Quinn’s gaze lingered on the body, a young man in his twenties, his shirt torn, a deep crimson stain spreading across his chest. The blood pooled in a perfect circle, as if someone had placed a seal over it. The victim’s hand clutched a brass compass, its face etched with sigils that glowed faintly in the lantern light. The compass needle quivered, pointing toward the far end of the market, where a shadowed doorway led to a labyrinth of tunnels. “Who found him?” Quinn asked, voice cutting through the murmurs. A vendor with a scar across his cheek stepped forward, his hands shaking as he lifted a small vial of liquid. “I’m Jax, I sell alchemical cures. He collapsed behind my stall. I heard a scream, then… then the market went silent.” Jax’s eyes darted to the compass, then to the rope. “That thing… it’s not a normal compass. It points to the nearest rift. Some say it’s cursed.” Quinn lifted a hand, the worn leather watch catching the lantern glow. “Show me the rift. If it’s a rift, there should be a distortion in the air, something… off.” Eva slipped off her glasses, the lenses catching the light as she set them aside. “There’s no rift. The market is sealed. The only thing that moves is the market itself, every full moon. The rift must be hidden.” Quinn knelt beside the body, fingers brushing the edge of the compass. The brass was cold, the patina of verdigris spreading like a thin film. She felt the faint hum of energy, a resonance that seemed to pulse in sync with her own heartbeat. The blood smear was too perfect, too symmetric. It didn’t match a wound from a knife; the edges were smooth, as if the blood had been poured rather than spilled. She turned to Eva, who was watching the compass with a furrowed brow. “You said the market moves with the moon. What night is it?” “Full moon,” Eva whispered, tucking a strand of red hair behind her ear. “We’re in the middle of the cycle. The market shifts location at midnight. Tonight’s location is this abandoned station.” Quinn’s mind raced. The market’s movement meant that any evidence left behind could have been tampered with during the shift. If the victim had been killed elsewhere and the body moved, the blood pattern would have been altered. Yet the compass pointed toward a doorway that led deeper into the tunnels, a place few dared to enter. She stood, the leather watch ticking against her wrist, and walked toward the doorway. The air grew colder, the lanterns flickering as if resisting her presence. A faint whisper brushed her ear, like a sigh from a distant cavern. Inside, the tunnel narrowed, walls lined with stone that seemed to breathe. At the far end, a small alcove housed a stone altar, its surface covered in symbols that pulsed with a faint blue light. The compass needle rested on the altar, its tip quivering as if drawn by an unseen force. “Someone’s been here,” Quinn said, voice echoing off the stone. Eva stepped forward, eyes scanning the symbols. “These are protective sigils. They’re used to seal rifts. Someone tried to close it, but… the seal is broken.” Quinn knelt, her fingertips tracing the sigil etched into the compass casing. The sigils matched those on the altar, a pattern of interlocking circles and triangles. She felt a tug, a pull toward the center of the altar, where a shallow depression held a faintly glowing stone. The stone pulsed, its light syncing with her heartbeat. She lifted the stone, the glow intensifying, casting shadows across the tunnel. A low hum rose from the walls, growing louder, resonating with the compass needle. The stone’s surface was smooth, but a faint inscription ran along its edge, a language she recognized from her training: “Veil Compass – Guide to the Unseen.” “Someone used this to guide a rift,” Eva said, voice trembling. “But why would a victim hold it?” Quinn’s eyes narrowed. She remembered the case of DS Morris, her partner, who vanished under mysterious circumstances involving a rift. The memory of the night his eyes swam with an unearthly light, the way his hand had clutched a similar compass, lingered. The same sigils, the same copper casing. Her mind clicked, pieces clicking into place. The victim’s hand still clutched the compass, his fingers tightened around it as if refusing to let go. The blood on his chest formed a circle, a seal, a protective barrier. The compass needle pointed to the altar, to the stone, to the rift. The victim had been a Shade artisan, perhaps, someone who could manipulate the veil between worlds. “Look at his watch,” Quinn said, gesturing to the victim’s wrist. The watch was a cheap replica, its hands stopped at 3:33. The same time she saw on her own watch the night she lost Morris. 3:33—an hour when the veil thinned. Eva’s brow furrowed. “That’s a coincidence?” “Not coincidence,” Quinn replied, voice low. “It’s a marker. Whoever set this up knew the timing of the veil’s thinning. They timed the murder for the full moon, when the market moved, to mask the rift’s presence. The victim was probably trying to seal it, but he was stopped before he could finish.” A sudden crash echoed from the tunnel entrance, a sack of goods spilling onto the floor. Jax burst in, his eyes wide. “Someone’s trying to steal the compass! It’s… it’s moving!” Quinn turned, the compass needle now pointing directly at Jax. The brass case glimmered, the sigils brightening. She stepped forward, the leather watch ticking against her wrist, and snatched the compass from Jax’s grasp. “Give it up,” she told, her tone sharp as a blade. “You’re not the only one who knows its power.” Jax hesitated, eyes darting to the altar, to the stone. “I… I didn’t know. I heard rumors. I thought it was a relic, a trinket to sell.” Eva stepped forward, her round glasses catching the lantern light, her voice steady. “It’s a tool, not a trinket. It guides to the nearest rift. If we can close this one, we can stop whatever’s leaking through.” Quinn held the compass, feeling the hum resonating through her palm. The needle steadied, pointing to the stone, as if urging her to place it back. She knelt, aligning the compass’s face with the altar’s sigils, and pressed the stone into the shallow depression. A surge of light burst from the altar, a wave of energy that rippled through the tunnel. The sigils flared, the blue glow intensifying, then collapsing in a flash of white. The stone cracked, shards scattering across the stone. The compass’s needle spun wildly before coming to rest, pointing straight up, toward the ceiling. The tunnel trembled, and a low rumble rose from the walls. The air cleared, the faint whispers fading. The rift, invisible moments, began to seal itself, the veil tightening like a drawn curtain. Quinn stood, wiping a smear of dust from her cheek. “The rift is sealed,” she said, voice carrying the weight of relief and lingering dread. “But someone set this up. We need to find out who.” Eva looked at the broken stone, the shards glittering. “The artisan who made this… he must have been forced to hide it. The market’s underworld could have sold it to a collector, a cult.” Quinn’s eyes scanned the crowd, catching the glances of vendors who whispered behind their stalls. Her mind catalogued the faces, the nervous ticks, the way a few kept their eyes fixed on the compass’s empty space. She noted the scar on Jax’s cheek, the tremor in his hands, the way the lantern light caught the edge of his sleeve. “Someone wanted the rift open,” Quinn said, voice low, “to let something through. The victim tried to stop it, but he was cut off. The compass was a breadcrumb, a guide for anyone looking for the rift.” Eva nodded, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. “If we can trace the compass’s origin, we can trace the artisan. The Shade craftsmen keep records in the underground. There’s a ledger in the market’s deepest vault.” Quinn glanced at the rope, the police tape still fluttering in the draft. “We’ll need a warrant. This market is a maze, and the moon will move it again soon. We can’t let them slip.” Jax, still shaking, whispered, “I didn’t know. I thought it was just a trinket. I’ll help. I’ll give you anything I know.” Quinn placed a hand on his shoulder, the leather watch pressing into her palm. “You’ll start by telling us who bought the compass. Who paid the most? Who asked for a ‘shadow compass’?” Jax swallowed, eyes darting to the stalls. “A man in a black coat. He never spoke, just handed a bone token. He said he needed something to ‘navigate the unseen.’” Eva’s eyes widened, the memory of a similar token flashing in her mind. “The bone token is the entry pass. Only those with it can enter. It’s tied to the market’s movement.” Quinn tightened her grip on the compass, feeling the faint hum still echoing in her bones. She turned toward the market’s exit, the lanterns casting long shadows. The full moon shone through a broken shaft of light, silvering the grime on the walls. The market’s hidden doors seemed to breathe, ready to shift again. She looked back at Eva, their eyes meeting. “We’ll need to move fast. The market will move at midnight. If the rift reopens, we’ll have no chance.” Eva slipped her glasses back on, the lenses catching the glow of the lantern. “I’ll pull the archives. I’ll find any mention of a Shade artisan named Varek. He was known for crafting compasses that pointed to rifts.” Quinn nodded, her jaw set, the sharp line of her jaw catching the lantern light. “And I’ll talk to the precinct. We’ll get a warrant, a team. No more dead ends.” The market’s crowd began to thin, vendors packing up their wares, the scent of incense mingling with the metallic tang of blood. The abandoned tube station echoed with the soft rumble of trains that never arrived. Quinn felt the weight of her watch, the tick of time reminding her of the night she lost Morris, of the unanswered questions that lingered in the dark. She turned, the compass now empty of its glowing stone, the needle still pointing up. The rift was sealed, but the mystery remained. The bone token lay on the ground, a small white fragment amidst the grime, a reminder that the veil could be breached again. Quinn stepped back into the market’s main concourse, her boots echoing on the tiles, her eyes scanning the faces that had watched the drama unfold. Eva followed, her satchel slung over her shoulder, her fingers tugging at the edge of her glasses. The market’s lanterns flickered once more, shadows dancing across the walls, as if the unseen world was watching them back. Quinn inhaled, the cold air filling her lungs, and set her jaw. She would find the artisan, expose the cult, and close the rift for good. The veil was thin, but she would keep it intact, one clue at a time. The night was far from over, and the underground held more secrets than anyone could imagine. She moved forward, the rhythm of her watch matching the heartbeat of the city, ready to uncover what lay hidden beneath the veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.579
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2160
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2160
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count2
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"echoing"
count3
13
word"scanning"
count2
14
word"tracing"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count2
16
word"trembled"
count1
17
word"weight"
count2
18
word"navigate"
count1
19
word"amidst"
count1
20
word"reminder"
count1
21
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"chaotic"
3"perfect"
4"etched"
5"quivered"
6"resonance"
7"pulse"
8"furrowed"
9"raced"
10"whisper"
11"pulsed"
12"echoing"
13"scanning"
14"tracing"
15"echoed"
16"trembled"
17"weight"
18"navigate"
19"amidst"
20"reminder"
21"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences115
matches
0"felt a tug"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences115
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2159
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1604
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn24
Veil1
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva15
Morris3
Shade1
Jax8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Veil"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
6"Jax"
places(empty)
globalScore0.752
windowScore0.667
9.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if measuring how much to reveal"
1"resonance that seemed to pulse in sync with her own heartbeat"
2"as if resisting her presence"
3"stone that seemed to breathe"
4"as if refusing to let go"
5"as if urging her to place it back"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2159
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"meant that any"
76.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean40.74
std17.05
cv0.419
sampleLengths
081
159
267
327
480
510
642
727
830
939
1074
1125
1232
1357
1439
1552
1610
1726
1856
1953
2018
2156
2260
2342
246
2553
2631
2734
2820
2927
3037
3144
3254
3333
3436
3534
3659
3737
3838
3935
4022
4133
4230
4332
4454
4527
4638
4731
4864
4946
96.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences115
matches
0"been poured"
1"been tampered"
2"been killed"
3"been altered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs285
matches
0"was watching"
1"was watching"
81.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences140
ratio0.021
matches
0"In the center of the market, a makeshift police tape—black rope and a handwritten sign—circled a small, overturned stall."
1"It didn’t match a wound from a knife; the edges were smooth, as if the blood had been poured rather than spilled."
2"3:33—an hour when the veil thinned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1606
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.0186799501867995
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00311332503113325
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean15.42
std6.65
cv0.431
sampleLengths
025
122
218
316
434
519
66
720
820
913
1014
1116
1211
1323
1416
1519
1622
1710
1821
1921
2010
2117
2212
2318
2415
2524
2612
2713
2819
298
3022
3113
3212
3313
3419
353
3617
3718
3819
3914
4012
4113
4212
4323
4417
4510
467
4719
4812
4914
38.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.22857142857142856
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences115
matches
0"Her pocket watch thumped against"
1"She scanned the crowd, eyes"
2"She felt the faint hum"
3"It didn’t match a wound"
4"She turned to Eva, who"
5"She stood, the leather watch"
6"She felt a tug, a"
7"She lifted the stone, the"
8"She remembered the case of"
9"Her mind clicked, pieces clicking"
10"She stepped forward, the leather"
11"she told, her tone sharp"
12"She knelt, aligning the compass’s"
13"she said, voice carrying the"
14"Her mind catalogued the faces,"
15"She noted the scar on"
16"She turned toward the market’s"
17"She looked back at Eva,"
18"She turned, the compass now"
19"She would find the artisan,"
ratio0.183
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences115
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped onto"
1"Her pocket watch thumped against"
2"The Veil Market hummed around"
3"Lanterns hung from the vaulted"
4"She scanned the crowd, eyes"
5"The sign read"
6"A figure emerged from behind"
7"The woman’s green eyes darted"
8"Eva Kowalski clutched a worn"
9"Eva muttered, voice low, eyes"
10"Quinn’s gaze lingered on the"
11"The blood pooled in a"
12"The victim’s hand clutched a"
13"The compass needle quivered, pointing"
14"Quinn asked, voice cutting through"
15"A vendor with a scar"
16"Jax’s eyes darted to the"
17"Quinn lifted a hand, the"
18"Eva slipped off her glasses,"
19"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
ratio0.948
43.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"If the victim had been"
ratio0.009
50.42% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences85
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Her pocket watch thumped against her left wrist, a steady rhythm that matched the click of her boots on the cracked tiles."
1"She scanned the crowd, eyes narrowing at the chaotic arrangement of wares: jars of pulsing slime, folded maps that shifted when looked at sideways, a row of swo…"
2"The victim’s hand clutched a brass compass, its face etched with sigils that glowed faintly in the lantern light."
3"She felt the faint hum of energy, a resonance that seemed to pulse in sync with her own heartbeat."
4"The air grew colder, the lanterns flickering as if resisting her presence."
5"Quinn knelt, her fingertips tracing the sigil etched into the compass casing."
6"She remembered the case of DS Morris, her partner, who vanished under mysterious circumstances involving a rift."
7"A surge of light burst from the altar, a wave of energy that rippled through the tunnel."
8"Quinn’s eyes scanned the crowd, catching the glances of vendors who whispered behind their stalls."
9"Quinn felt the weight of her watch, the tick of time reminding her of the night she lost Morris, of the unanswered questions that lingered in the dark."
10"Quinn stepped back into the market’s main concourse, her boots echoing on the tiles, her eyes scanning the faces that had watched the drama unfold."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Quinn asked, voice cutting through the murmurs"
1"Quinn said, voice echoing off the stone"
2"Eva said, voice trembling"
3"Quinn replied, voice low"
4"she told, her tone sharp as a blade"
5"she said, voice carrying the weight of relief and lingering dread"
6"Quinn said, voice low,"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.105
72.8140%