Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02AV4ZDEB512ZHQBJN2Z6

Run Details

Duration:
21.9s
Cost:
$0.009476
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of rust and damp concrete, thick with the residue of forgotten commuters and something sharper—something wrong. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling staircase into the belly of the abandoned Camden Underground station, her boots striking each step with measured precision. The beam of her torch cut through the black like a scalpel, revealing cracked tiling, graffiti swallowed by mold, and the skeletal remains of a ticket booth choked in ivy. Her breath came steady, but her jaw tightened with every step. This wasn’t just another crime scene. Not with the bone token still warm in her coat pocket. She’d found it on the victim—an art dealer named Lorne Pryce—clutched so tightly in his right hand that the coroner had to pry open the fingers at the mortuary. No fingerprints, no signs of struggle in his flat, yet he’d been dead less than four hours when the call came in. And now here she was, standing in a sealed-off substation that hadn’t seen human traffic in over thirty years, the official records showing its decommission in 1988. Except someone had been here tonight. “Over here.” The voice came from the far end of the platform. Quinn turned. A figure emerged from behind a collapsed service kiosk—short, wiry, hunched slightly under the weight of a battered leather satchel. Curly red hair caught the torchlight like flame. Round glasses reflected the beam back at her in fractured glimmers. Eva Kowalski. Research assistant. Occult historian. And, until three nights ago, a name Quinn had never heard. “You’re late,” Eva said, tucking a loose coil of hair behind her left ear. She didn’t look nervous. Not exactly. But she did it again, seconds later, as if pulled by a wire. “I don’t take orders from museum staff,” Quinn replied, sweeping the torch across the platform. “You called it in?” Eva nodded. “Night watchman found Pryce. Thought he was trespassing. Called Security. They recognised him from the news. Called you.” “Which one of them found the body?” “The younger one. Jenkins.” “And you were here why?” “I had access. Research permissions. Restricted access to subterranean infrastructures with pre-industrial architectural elements.” She shrugged. “It’s a niche. But useful.” Quinn studied her. Sharp green eyes, flicking too fast between Quinn and the spot near the tracks. Nervous energy, but not fear. Not the kind that came from guilt, anyway. More like she was counting seconds. She stepped forward, her leather watch creaking against her cuff. “Let’s see it.” Pryce lay facedown at the edge of the platform, one arm flung forward as if he’d been reaching for the rails. No blood. No trauma visible. The pathologist’s preliminary report said cardiac arrest. But the skin on his neck was mottled with a web of violet lines—like bruising, but too symmetrical, too deliberate. Quinn knelt, gloved fingers brushing the collar of his coat. The fabric was dry. The floor beneath him, too. No moisture, even here, where condensation wept down the walls. Then she saw it. A faint shimmer in the air above his outstretched hand—like heat haze on tarmac, but cold to the touch when she passed her palm over it. “See that?” she asked. Eva didn’t answer right away. When she did, her voice was low. “You weren’t supposed to.” Quinn stood. “Explain.” “It’s a residual trace. A bleed-through. Like when a radio picks up a dead station.” “A bleed-through from what?” Eva hesitated. Then reached into her satchel. Pulled out a small brass compass, its surface streaked with green corrosion. The needle spun wildly, then locked—not north, but toward the center of the platform, where the air seemed to dip, like an invisible funnel. “This is a Veil Compass,” Eva said. “It points to ruptures. Weak spots between this world and others.” Quinn’s hand instinctively went to her sidearm. “You’re telling me there’s a portal here?” “I’m telling you one opened. Recently. Long enough for something to come through. Or for something to be taken.” Quinn turned back to the body. Pryce had been an art dealer, yes—but his last acquisition had been a 15th-century grimoire linked to banned Hermetic sects. She’d seen the file. Seized from a private collector in Prague. Supposedly destroyed in transit. It hadn’t been. “He didn’t die of a heart attack,” she said slowly. “No,” Eva agreed. “He was unraveled.” “Unraveled.” “The energy signature… it doesn’t match any known cause of death. But in the texts, it’s described as a ‘soul-tear.’ When a person is caught between worlds. Their essence gets… fragmented.” Quinn stepped toward the center of the platform, where the compass needle trembled. The air hummed. Faint, but unmistakable. Like the aftermath of a struck tuning fork. She dropped to one knee, scanning the ground. The dirt was packed down, but near the rails, something glinted—tiny, metallic. She brushed it clear. A shard of brass. Etched with symbols. She pulled out her notepad, snapped a photo with her phone, then held it up to Eva. “That’s a binding sigil,” Eva said. “Protective. But broken. Someone was trying to seal something. Or keep it contained.” “And Pryce had the other half,” Quinn realized. “The token. Not just access. A counterweight.” Eva’s breath caught. “You’ve seen this before?” Quinn didn’t answer. Three years ago. The warehouse by the Thames. Morris—her partner—had gone in first. Radio silence. They found his body slumped against a rusted chain, his face frozen in terror. No wounds. No tox screen anomalies. Just those same violet tracings on his neck. The case was closed as unexplained cardiac trauma. Buried under red tape. Forgotten. Until now. “This wasn’t a murder,” Quinn said, standing. “It was a summoning. Pryce wasn’t the target. He was the key.” Eva’s fingers tightened around the compass. “Then whoever used him is still out there. And they’re not done.” Quinn looked down at the dead man’s hand. The bone token had been confiscated as evidence. But now she saw something the coroner had missed—a thin groove carved into the inside of his ring finger. Not a wedding band. Too wide. A channel. For a seal. “He wasn’t just holding the token,” she said. “He wore it. Until the moment it broke free.” Eva exhaled. “The Market moves tomorrow. Full moon. If they’re using Pryce’s access…” “They’ll be back,” Quinn finished. “And I’ll be waiting.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.053
85.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1065
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"fractured"
count1
3
word"fragmented"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"aftermath"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"weight"
2"fractured"
3"fragmented"
4"trembled"
5"aftermath"
6"scanning"
7"etched"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"n in terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1052
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount775
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn16
Camden1
Underground1
Lorne1
Pryce3
Kowalski1
Eva12
Hermetic1
Prague1
Thames1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Pryce"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places
0"Prague"
1"Thames"
globalScore0.468
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.951
wordCount1052
matches
0"not north, but toward the center of the platform"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean21.47
std20.16
cv0.939
sampleLengths
019
182
278
36
42
551
617
733
819
920
107
114
125
1321
1436
1513
1682
174
1826
194
2016
213
2215
234
2443
2518
2614
2719
2841
293
3010
316
321
3331
3427
3524
367
3717
3819
3915
407
4159
422
4319
4418
4546
4617
4713
489
91.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences99
matches
0"was mottled"
1"was packed"
2"was closed"
3"been confiscated"
91.60% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences125
ratio0.08
matches
0"The air tasted of rust and damp concrete, thick with the residue of forgotten commuters and something sharper—something wrong."
1"She’d found it on the victim—an art dealer named Lorne Pryce—clutched so tightly in his right hand that the coroner had to pry open the fingers at the mortuary."
2"A figure emerged from behind a collapsed service kiosk—short, wiry, hunched slightly under the weight of a battered leather satchel."
3"But the skin on his neck was mottled with a web of violet lines—like bruising, but too symmetrical, too deliberate."
4"A faint shimmer in the air above his outstretched hand—like heat haze on tarmac, but cold to the touch when she passed her palm over it."
5"The needle spun wildly, then locked—not north, but toward the center of the platform, where the air seemed to dip, like an invisible funnel."
6"Pryce had been an art dealer, yes—but his last acquisition had been a 15th-century grimoire linked to banned Hermetic sects."
7"The dirt was packed down, but near the rails, something glinted—tiny, metallic."
8"Morris—her partner—had gone in first."
9"But now she saw something the coroner had missed—a thin groove carved into the inside of his ring finger."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount786
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03816793893129771
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011450381679389313
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean8.42
std6.86
cv0.816
sampleLengths
019
124
230
311
46
511
629
722
827
96
102
1110
122
1320
148
1511
162
172
182
1911
2014
214
222
2313
2415
254
262
2718
287
294
305
3116
325
333
3414
355
368
376
3810
393
4021
412
423
437
4420
4510
464
475
4810
494
66.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.416
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences75
matches
0"More like she was counting"
1"Then she saw it."
2"Then reached into her satchel."
3"Supposedly destroyed in transit."
4"Just those same violet tracings"
ratio0.067
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences75
matches
0"Her breath came steady, but"
1"She’d found it on the"
2"She didn’t look nervous."
3"She stepped forward, her leather"
4"She’d seen the file."
5"It hadn’t been."
6"she said slowly"
7"She dropped to one knee,"
8"She brushed it clear."
9"She pulled out her notepad,"
10"They found his body slumped"
ratio0.147
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air tasted of rust"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"Her breath came steady, but"
4"This wasn’t just another crime"
5"She’d found it on the"
6"The voice came from the"
7"A figure emerged from behind"
8"Eva said, tucking a loose"
9"She didn’t look nervous."
10"Quinn replied, sweeping the torch"
11"Quinn studied her."
12"She stepped forward, her leather"
13"Pryce lay facedown at the"
14"The pathologist’s preliminary report said"
15"Quinn knelt, gloved fingers brushing"
16"The fabric was dry."
17"The floor beneath him, too."
18"A faint shimmer in the"
19"Eva didn’t answer right away."
ratio0.587
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"And, until three nights ago,"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"And now here she was, standing in a sealed-off substation that hadn’t seen human traffic in over thirty years, the official records showing its decommission in …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.053
90.1974%