Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02F5RDTVGXT2D9X7X8N7A

Run Details

Duration:
4m 4s
Cost:
$0.004188
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts slid back. Metal groaned against metal. Rory pulled the door open. Lucien stood on the landing. Rain dampened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. Water dripped from the brim of nothing, his platinum hair slicked back regardless of the weather. The ivory handle of his cane pressed into the palm of a gloved hand. Rory kept her hand on the door. Her knuckles whitened. You found me. London remains small when one knows where to look. Lucien stepped forward. Rory did not move. The space between them shrunk to the width of the threshold. The smell of ozone and expensive cologne drifted off him. It clashed with the scent of curry rising from the floorboards below. Eva expects guests. Eva expects delivery drivers. Not fixers. Lucien tilted his head. The amber eye caught the hallway light. The black pupil swallowed the iris. May I enter? Rory stepped back. The movement felt involuntary. Lucien crossed the threshold. He wiped his shoes on the mat. A tabby cat wound itself around his ankles. Lucien halted. He looked down at the animal. Ptolemy demands tribute. He stays fed. Lucien nudged the cat aside with the tip of his cane. The ivory handle gleamed. He surveyed the room. Stacks of books covered the table. Scrolls spilled from boxes onto the floor. Research notes pinned the walls. You live in a archive. I am staying here. Temporary arrangements suit you. Rory closed the door. She locked the top bolt. The sound echoed in the cramped space. She turned to face him. Lucien stood near the window. The glass rattled in the frame. Wind howled outside Brick Lane. Why are you here, Lucien? Business brought me to London. Curiosity brought me here. You left Marseille without a word. I left to keep you breathing. Rory walked to the table. She moved a stack of papers. Her left wrist brushed the edge. The crescent-shaped scar peeked from her sleeve. Lucien's gaze tracked the motion. You do not get to decide what keeps me breathing. Someone decided otherwise. Evan. The name hung in the air. Rory stiffened. She gripped the edge of the table. He is in prison. Prisons have doors. Doors open. Lucien moved away from the window. He navigated the clutter with precision. The cane tapped against the floorboards. He stopped inches from her. The height difference forced her to look up. His heterochromatic eyes bore into her bright blue ones. You ran to Cardiff. Then London. Now this flat. I move when I need to. You run when you fear. Rory pushed off the table. She stepped into his space. The heat radiating from him differed from human warmth. It hummed under the skin. A demon's heat. I ran because you vanished. You took the file. You took the contact. You took yourself. Protection requires distance. Protection looks like abandonment. Lucien raised a hand. He hovered it near her cheek. He did not touch. The air between them crackled. Rory leaned into the space. Her breath hitched. I watched you from the shadows. You delivered noodles. You studied law. You survived. Survival is not living. No. Lucien dropped his hand. He turned away. He examined a scroll on the wall. Ancient script covered the parchment. You investigate the Avaros realm. I investigate anything that threatens me. Including me. Especially you. Lucien laughed. The sound lacked humour. It scraped against the silence. You possess a sharp mind, Aurora. It dulls when emotion clouds the edge. Do not call me that. Rory? You know what I mean. Lucien turned back. He leaned against the table. He displaced a pile of books. They slid across the wood. We parted because the truth became dangerous. The truth was you chose your father's realm over me. I chose your safety over my heritage. Semantics. Lucien pushed off the table. He closed the distance again. This time he touched. His gloved fingers brushed the scar on her wrist. The leather felt cool. Rory did not pull away. This mark remains. Accidents happen. This was no accident. You bore it the week we met. Memory serves you well. It serves me exclusively. Rory covered his hand with hers. She peeled the glove back. Skin met skin. The contact sent a jolt through her arm. Lucien's pupils dilated. The black swallowed more of the amber. You came back. I never left. Liar. Lucien stepped closer. His chest pressed against hers. The charcoal suit scratched against her jumper. He smelled of rain and old magic. Rory tilted her head. Her lips parted. The cat meowed. Ptolemy jumped onto the table. He knocked over a pen. It rolled to the floor. Lucien did not look away. Rory did not move. The door locks engage automatically. I engaged them manually. Someone approaches. Rory pulled back. She smoothed her jumper. Lucien adjusted his cuff. He slipped the glove back on. Who? Evil wears many faces. Sometimes it wears a neighbour's face. Rory moved to the door. She looked through the peephole. The hallway stood empty. A light flickered overhead. No one is there. They wait. Lucien picked up his cane. He tapped the floor twice. The sound resonated deeper than wood should allow. You cannot stay here. I pay rent. Money holds no weight against what hunts you. Then tell me what hunts me. Lucien walked to the window. He looked down at the street. Cars passed below. Headlights swept across the ceiling. You already know. The bloodline. The pact. The debt. My father dealt with lawyers. Not demons. Your father dealt with things he could not bind. Rory crossed her arms. She leaned against the door. The three deadbolts felt insufficient. You owe me an explanation. I owe you nothing. I gave you years. You gave me silence. Silence keeps hearts beating. Lucien turned from the window. He walked toward her. He stopped within reach. He reached out. He tucked a strand of straight black hair behind her ear. His fingers lingered on her jaw. Come with me. Where? Away from Brick Lane. Away from the scrolls. Away from the past. And go where? Marseille? Avaros? Somewhere safe. Nowhere is safe. I am there. Rory looked at his hand. She looked at his eyes. The amber swirled. The black remained void. You left once. I returned. People leave twice. Lucien dropped his hand. He gripped the cane. The ivory head creaked under the pressure. Then lock the door. Stay here. Wait for the knock. Rory reached for the bolt. Her hand hovered over the metal. Or? Or I walk out. I leave you to the debt collectors. I vanish into the smoke. You would do that. I am a fixer. I fix problems. Sometimes I remove them. Rory stared at him. The tension pulled tight. The cat rubbed against Lucien's leg. He ignored it. You are not a problem. I am a complication. Same thing. Lucien moved to the door. He placed his hand on the handle. He did not turn it. He waited. Rory watched him. The silence stretched. The wind battered the window. The curry scent rose stronger from below. Open it. Rory stepped forward. She placed her hand over his. The leather felt warm now. Not yet. Lucien turned his hand. He interlaced his fingers with hers. The grip tightened. Time runs out, Aurora. It always does. He leaned down. His forehead rested against hers. The contact burned. Rory closed her eyes. The scar on her wrist throbbed. Make the choice. Rory opened her eyes. She looked at the locks. She looked at Lucien. Give me one reason. You love me. I hate you. Lie. Rory pulled her hand away. She stepped back. The space between them widened. Lucien stood by the door. He waited. The cane tapped once. Prove it. Lucien smiled. It did not reach his eyes. Open the door. Walk with me. See what waits outside. Rory reached for the top bolt. She slid it back. The metal shrieked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"silence"
count4
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"resonated"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"navigated"
2"warmth"
3"silence"
4"flickered"
5"resonated"
6"weight"
7"tension"
8"throbbed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences293
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences293
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences293
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen16
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1331
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions94
wordCount1331
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien29
London3
Marseille2
Cardiff1
Avaros2
Aurora2
Rory26
You25
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.411
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1331
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences293
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs133
mean10.01
std9.86
cv0.985
sampleLengths
013
143
210
33
49
540
63
76
817
93
1034
113
123
1337
145
154
164
1737
185
199
206
216
2229
2310
244
2515
264
275
2840
299
306
315
3227
3316
343
354
3627
3714
384
391
4019
415
426
432
442
4511
4613
475
481
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences293
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs296
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences293
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1332
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.026276276276276277
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003003003003003003
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences293
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences293
mean4.54
std2.12
cv0.466
sampleLengths
04
14
25
35
48
516
614
77
83
93
109
113
124
1311
1410
1512
163
174
182
194
207
216
223
233
244
254
267
278
282
296
303
313
3211
334
344
356
367
375
385
394
404
414
425
437
445
455
466
475
485
495
40.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.2696245733788396
totalSentences293
uniqueOpeners79
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences256
matches
0"Sometimes it wears a neighbour's"
1"Then tell me what hunts"
2"Away from Brick Lane."
3"Away from the scrolls."
4"Away from the past."
5"Nowhere is safe."
6"Then lock the door."
7"Sometimes I remove them."
ratio0.031
49.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount109
totalSentences256
matches
0"Her knuckles whitened."
1"You found me."
2"It clashed with the scent"
3"He wiped his shoes on"
4"He looked down at the"
5"He stays fed."
6"He surveyed the room."
7"You live in a archive."
8"I am staying here."
9"She locked the top bolt."
10"She turned to face him."
11"You left Marseille without a"
12"I left to keep you"
13"She moved a stack of"
14"Her left wrist brushed the"
15"You do not get to"
16"She gripped the edge of"
17"He is in prison."
18"He navigated the clutter with"
19"He stopped inches from her."
ratio0.426
16.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences256
matches
0"Metal groaned against metal."
1"Rory pulled the door open."
2"Lucien stood on the landing."
3"Water dripped from the brim"
4"The ivory handle of his"
5"Rory kept her hand on"
6"Her knuckles whitened."
7"You found me."
8"London remains small when one"
9"Lucien stepped forward."
10"Rory did not move."
11"The space between them shrunk"
12"The smell of ozone and"
13"It clashed with the scent"
14"Eva expects guests."
15"Eva expects delivery drivers."
16"Lucien tilted his head."
17"The amber eye caught the"
18"The black pupil swallowed the"
19"Rory stepped back."
ratio0.887
19.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences256
matches
0"Now this flat."
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9194%