Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02G9QT1VMKEMV5SZ4H489

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29.3s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones rose from the mist, their surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of one's eye. Aurora Carter traced a finger along one of the carvings, the rough bark biting into her skin. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her sweater pulsed, a steady rhythm against her sternum. "Are you certain about this?" Nyx materialized from her shadow, their form coalescing into a humanoid silhouette taller and broader than her. Their violet eyes glowed faintly in the dim light. "You're the one who said Isolde could help us find the rift points." Rory adjusted the delivery bag on her shoulder, the restaurant logo barely visible in the fading light. "Besides, what's the worst that could happen? We get lost in a magical grove?" "The time flows differently here. Minutes could become days. Days could become years." Nyx's voice carried on the breeze, barely louder than the rustling leaves. "We should proceed with caution." Rory stepped between two of the standing stones, the air thickening as she crossed the invisible boundary. The temperature dropped several degrees, and the sounds of Richmond Park faded away, replaced by an otherworldly silence. She turned to find Nyx already beside her, having slipped through the space between shadows. "Whoa," Rory breathed, her bright blue eyes widening. The grove unfolded before them, a circular clearing bathed in perpetual twilight. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep blues that seemed to absorb light, reds that glowed with their own inner fire, and purples so vibrant they hurt to look at directly. In the center stood a massive tree, its silver bark shimmering even without direct sunlight. "Impressive, isn't it?" A woman's voice came from behind them. Rory spun around to find a figure emerging from the tree itself. Isolde Varga moved with impossible grace, her silver hair flowing around her like liquid moonlight despite the absence of wind. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory, and for a moment, the world seemed to tilt on its axis. "You're late," Isolde said, her voice carrying musical notes that seemed to resonate in Rory's bones. "We got held up." Rory instinctively reached for the pendant beneath her sweater, its warmth reassuring against her cool fingers. "Traffic was hell." Isolde's lips curved into a knowing smile. "Hell is closer than you think, child of two worlds. The Veil weakens, and the Prince of Gluttony hungers for what lies beyond." Nyx shifted beside Rory, their form becoming slightly more solid. "The rifts are spreading. We need your guidance to find them before they consume more of the city." "Patience, shadow walker." Isolde glided past them, her feet making no impression on the grass. "First, you must understand what you seek." She led them deeper into the grove, where the colors grew more intense and the air thrummed with latent energy. Rory noticed that the Heartstone Pendant was glowing now, its crimson light visible through the thin fabric of her sweater. "The pendant recognizes this place," Isolde noted without turning. "It was born of similar energies, forged in the fires of Dymas." "Dymas?" Rory asked, the word foreign on her tongue. "A realm of indulgence and excess, where the Prince Belphegor holds court." Isolde gestured to a patch of flowers that seemed to bloom and wither in rapid succession. "Like these flowers, the boundary between worlds is fragile here." As they walked, Rory noticed that the grove defied normal physics. Trees grew in impossible spirals, their branches weaving through each other without touching. Streams flowed uphill, and the sky above remained in perpetual twilight, despite the fact that the sun should have set hours ago. "How long have we been in here?" Rory asked, suddenly aware that her sense of time had completely dissolved. "Time is a river with many currents," Isolde replied cryptically. "In this grove, it pools and eddies, flowing backward and forward simultaneously." Nyx's form wavered. "We cannot linger. The longer we stay, the harder it becomes to return to our own time." "Then we must make haste." Isolde stopped before a pool of liquid that shimmered like oil on water. "Look and see." Rory approached the pool cautiously, Nyx at her side. As she gazed into its depths, images formed—places throughout London where the air seemed to warp and bend, like heat rising from pavement. In these spots, shadows gathered too thickly, and colors appeared slightly off, as if viewed through a prism. "These are the weak points in the Veil," Isolde explained. "Tears between worlds where Hel bleeds into your reality." Rory reached into her delivery bag and pulled out a map of London, marking the locations she recognized from the vision. "There are more than I thought." "The Heartstone will guide you to them," Isolde said. "But you will need protection against what lies beyond." She extended her hand, and a slender dagger materialized in her palm. The blade glowed with a faint luminescence, its leaf-shaped edge catching the impossible light of the grove. "The Fae-Forged Blade," Nyx whispered, their voice filled with reverence. "I haven't seen one in centuries." Isolde offered it to Rory, who took it cautiously. The metal was cold to the touch, colder than it should have been, and seemed to absorb the warmth from her hand. "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde said. "Particularly effective against demons from the Hel realms." Rory attached the sheath to her belt, the weight of the blade unfamiliar but reassuring. "Why are you helping us?" Isolde's lavender eyes darkened. "The Fae Courts exiled me for sharing visions with mortals. Why should I stop now?" A sudden tremor shook the grove, and the colors around them intensified for a moment before fading slightly. Isolde's expression grew serious. "The Veil weakens further. You must go now, before the passage between our worlds closes completely." Rory nodded, tucking the map into her bag. "We'll find the rifts." "Be careful, child of two worlds," Isolde warned. "The pendant responds to the energy of Hel, but it will also draw attention from those who dwell there. Prince Belphegor is not known for his generosity." As they turned to leave, Rory noticed something new in the grove—a path that hadn't been there before, leading deeper into the impossible space. For a moment, she felt an overwhelming urge to follow it, to see what other wonders lay hidden in this place between worlds. "Rory," Nyx's voice pulled her back. "Time." She shook her head, clearing the strange impulse, and hurried after the Shade toward the standing stones. As they passed between the ancient oaks, the sounds of Richmond Park rushed back in—a stark contrast to the otherworldly silence of the grove. The night air felt cold and ordinary after the thrumming energy of Isolde's sanctuary. Rory looked down at the Heartstone Pendant, its crimson glow fading as they stepped fully back into the mundane world. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip remained cold, a constant reminder of the path that lay ahead. "The first rift is close," Nyx said, their form becoming less distinct as they melted back into the shadows of the park. "We should go before anyone notices us here." Rory nodded, her fingers tightening around the pendant. The world felt different now—thinner, as if she could see through it to the magical realms beyond. The veil had been lifted, and there was no going back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.045
67.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count2
3
adverb"cautiously"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"completely"
3"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1241
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"sanctuary"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"traced"
2"pulsed"
3"otherworldly"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"sense of"
7"wavered"
8"shimmered"
9"depths"
10"weight"
11"stark"
12"sanctuary"
13"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1233
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount878
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx9
Rory20
Richmond2
Park2
Varga1
Isolde16
London2
Shade1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
5"Blade"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore0.361
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of one's eye"
1"blues that seemed to absorb light, reds that glowed with their own inner fire, and purples so vibrant they hurt to look at directly"
2"notes that seemed to resonate in Rory's bones"
3"flowers that seemed to bloom and wither in rapid succession"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1233
matches(empty)
90.91% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"noticed that the"
1"noticed that the"
95.12% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.67
std13.85
cv0.483
sampleLengths
056
131
244
330
450
58
656
710
851
916
1023
1130
1228
1322
1440
1521
169
1738
1846
1919
2022
2120
2221
2350
2419
2527
2618
2729
2816
2931
3016
3120
3219
3322
3416
3512
3635
3747
387
3955
4037
4130
4236
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"been lifted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences88
ratio0.057
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep blues that seemed to absorb light, reds that glowed with their own inner fire, and purples so vibrant they hurt to look at directly."
1"As she gazed into its depths, images formed—places throughout London where the air seemed to warp and bend, like heat rising from pavement."
2"As they turned to leave, Rory noticed something new in the grove—a path that hadn't been there before, leading deeper into the impossible space."
3"As they passed between the ancient oaks, the sounds of Richmond Park rushed back in—a stark contrast to the otherworldly silence of the grove."
4"The world felt different now—thinner, as if she could see through it to the magical realms beyond."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount885
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03502824858757062
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.0192090395480226
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean14.01
std6.84
cv0.488
sampleLengths
026
117
213
322
49
530
614
725
85
917
1018
1115
128
1312
1429
1515
1610
1712
1820
1919
2016
2120
223
237
2423
2510
2618
2715
287
2920
3020
319
3212
339
3428
3510
3611
3713
3822
3919
4010
4112
423
4317
4418
453
469
4723
4818
4910
72.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences61
matches
0"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
1"She turned to find Nyx"
2"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
3"She led them deeper into"
4"She extended her hand, and"
5"She shook her head, clearing"
ratio0.098
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter traced a finger"
2"The Heartstone Pendant beneath her"
3"Nyx materialized from her shadow,"
4"Their violet eyes glowed faintly"
5"Rory adjusted the delivery bag"
6"Nyx's voice carried on the"
7"Rory stepped between two of"
8"The temperature dropped several degrees,"
9"She turned to find Nyx"
10"Rory breathed, her bright blue"
11"The grove unfolded before them,"
12"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep"
13"A woman's voice came from"
14"Rory spun around to find"
15"Isolde Varga moved with impossible"
16"Her pale lavender eyes fixed"
17"Isolde said, her voice carrying"
18"Rory instinctively reached for the"
19"Isolde's lips curved into a"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—deep blues that seemed to absorb light, reds that glowed with their own inner fire, and purples so vibrant they hurt to…"
1"Trees grew in impossible spirals, their branches weaving through each other without touching."
2"As they turned to leave, Rory noticed something new in the grove—a path that hadn't been there before, leading deeper into the impossible space."
3"The world felt different now—thinner, as if she could see through it to the magical realms beyond."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory adjusted, the restaurant logo barely visible in the fading light"
1"Isolde glided, her feet making no impression on the grass"
36.36% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Isolde noted (note)"
2"Isolde explained (explain)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.227
69.3606%