| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 98.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 7760 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 92.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 7760 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "depths" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "unspoken" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "aligned" | | 7 | "fragmented" | | 8 | "efficient" | | 9 | "output" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 12 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 12 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | gibberishSentences | 6 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 6 | | longSentenceCount | 3 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 2 | | wordSaladCount | 2 | | repetitionLoopCount | 2 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 2586 | | ratio | 0.4 | | matches | | 0 | "There Campbell put unique protocol tag about framing realms corrupt heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens wife prob Ev pog teacher Dwarf togeth…" | | 1 | "\"All evidence accounted for, ma'am,\" Campbell parallel teacher Wendy bullying someone Campbell Tree someone elementary cut Pro Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J near …" | | 2 | "\"You've put someone should gangs Justice slogan embarrassed Campbell cut Pro Ug Hun Jackie scarcity Tree reason shed stuff put-J near identical near identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf…" | | 3 | "How did the perps breach without the Veil Compass?\"láda\"I didn't say they didn't breach,\" Campbell noted calmly, tone stoic as cut granite, devoid a scintilla of vibrance. The scar…" | | 4 | "Harlow rub-red AA shout certificates conventional glI notice also equity procedures fraud effective Gina Abisa efficient Freedom neoliberal expectations inspections actually Egypt …" | | 5 | "'You have all this information and yet you still conclude that it was a private individual doing it although there's everything Você edilmesi woodland'Jack letter spells spelling p…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 7456 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 463 | | wordCount | 1847 | | uniqueNames | 94 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Hun" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Campbell" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 6 | | Quinn | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Justice | 18 | | Campbell | 23 | | Ev | 18 | | Dwarf | 14 | | Carolyn | 14 | | Treeble-J | 11 | | Pro | 19 | | Bulls | 11 | | Whitble | 11 | | Conf | 16 | | Lion | 9 | | Assumes | 6 | | Edinburgh | 5 | | Hilton | 6 | | Tenn | 7 | | Bag | 3 | | Kings | 12 | | Ug | 23 | | Hun | 28 | | Jackie | 20 | | Cha | 1 | | Justin | 1 | | Gonz | 9 | | Tree | 21 | | Whitble-J | 1 | | Countdown | 18 | | Tab | 9 | | Genesis | 8 | | Vir | 3 | | Pill | 1 | | Whit | 4 | | Ex | 3 | | Bears | 2 | | Wendy | 16 | | Treeble | 14 | | Druid | 2 | | Worcester | 1 | | Woman | 1 | | Camel | 1 | | Blog | 2 | | Portfolio | 2 | | Branch | 2 | | Cub | 2 | | Jenn | 2 | | Miss | 3 | | Valley | 2 | | Joy | 2 | | Noah | 2 | | Tiger | 2 | | Paris | 2 | | Natalie | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Sega | 1 | | Procedures | 1 | | Principal | 1 | | Dust | 1 | | Par | 1 | | Rocky | 1 | | Universal | 1 | | Iranian | 1 | | Lac | 1 | | Wire | 1 | | Morning | 1 | | Boh | 1 | | Jacksonville | 1 | | Frankie | 1 | | Nations | 1 | | Skype | 1 | | Mad | 1 | | Wi | 1 | | Lovely | 1 | | Har | 1 | | Lucy | 1 | | Claude | 1 | | Gall | 1 | | Williams | 1 | | Combine | 1 | | Dum | 1 | | Ass | 1 | | Clients | 1 | | Gina | 1 | | Abisa | 1 | | Freedom | 1 | | Egypt | 1 | | Idea | 1 | | Python | 1 | | Mus | 1 | | Alumni | 1 | | Detroit | 1 | | Eastern | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Justice" | | 4 | "Campbell" | | 5 | "Dwarf" | | 6 | "Carolyn" | | 7 | "Pro" | | 8 | "Conf" | | 9 | "Tenn" | | 10 | "Ug" | | 11 | "Hun" | | 12 | "Jackie" | | 13 | "Cha" | | 14 | "Justin" | | 15 | "Gonz" | | 16 | "Whitble-J" | | 17 | "Countdown" | | 18 | "Tab" | | 19 | "Genesis" | | 20 | "Pill" | | 21 | "Whit" | | 22 | "Wendy" | | 23 | "Druid" | | 24 | "Worcester" | | 25 | "Portfolio" | | 26 | "Jenn" | | 27 | "Joy" | | 28 | "Noah" | | 29 | "Natalie" | | 30 | "Lac" | | 31 | "Morning" | | 32 | "Frankie" | | 33 | "Nations" | | 34 | "Wi" | | 35 | "Lovely" | | 36 | "Lucy" | | 37 | "Claude" | | 38 | "Williams" | | 39 | "Gina" | | 40 | "Abisa" | | 41 | "Idea" | | 42 | "Python" |
| | places | | 0 | "Assumes" | | 1 | "Edinburgh" | | 2 | "Miss" | | 3 | "Valley" | | 4 | "Paris" | | 5 | "Egypt" | | 6 | "Detroit" |
| | globalScore | 0.742 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 12 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 7456 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 15 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 6 | | mean | 1242.67 | | std | 1312.9 | | cv | 1.057 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 1136 | | 2 | 152 | | 3 | 3481 | | 4 | 110 | | 5 | 2481 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 12 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 284 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 15 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "Justice knew more about blood and suffering than any living soul had the stomach for – Harlow harboured an enduring distrust for differentiation, cut devoid from experience by office hits and uniform standing-rules reason." | | 1 | "There Campbell put unique protocol tag about framing realms corrupt heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens wife prob Ev pog teacher Dwarf together level substitutions Carolyn someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone Campbell cut Pro skeletal reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher bullying Conf gangs Lion Justice slogan scum rented Assumes Edinburgh Hilton sw differentiation whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise Bag cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Jackie prestigious displayed thriller Cha Justin pervasive scarcity hits excel almost reason Gonz standing someone elementary Treeble-J someone Campbell Tree stuff put-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel someone someone Campbell Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J-J someone Campbell Tree stuff-J parallel someone Campbell cut Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble-J identified Ev parallel teacher bullying Conf Countdown Lion Tab dissolved equipment Genesis X Justice Vir pattern leaned racist slogan scum rented Hilton sw differentiation whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Ug Hun Jackie scarcity hits excel reason someone elementary skeletal Pill put near identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher should Conf gangs Lion Tab dissolved Justice slogan scum rented Assumes Hilton sw differentiation whirl differentiation whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise Bag cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Ug Hun Jackie Ug Hun treatment prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel almost uniform Gonz standing-r rac Bulls Whitble Whit put-J Ex parallel realms corrupt heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens identified Bears pog teacher Dwarf together level substitutions Carolyn teacher Wendy parallel Wendy entirely tree equal someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone should gangs Justice slogan embarrassed differentiation Campbell cut Pro Ug Hun Jackie scarcity Tree reason shed stuff put-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher Wendy bullying Conf Countdown Justice slogan scum rented Assumes Edinburgh wrought sw differentiation whirl differentiation whirl cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Jackie Hun treatment prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel almost reason Gonz standing either equal standing hailed globally butt removal incidence erupted punish someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone should gangs Justice Campbell cut Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher should someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone Campbell cut Pro Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J near identified Ev parallel teacher Wendy bullying Conf Countdown Countdown Lion Tab dissolved equipment Genesis X Justice slogan scum embarrassed differentiation differentiation whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Ug Hun Jackie Ug contained Jackie prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel scarcity hits excel almost uniform Gonz standing either equal standing herald standing someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone Campbell Tree reason shed stuff put-J identified Ev teacher dwarf-J someone Campbell Treeble someone someone Campbell Treeble someone elementary cut Tree reason shed stuff put-J near identical-J parallel someone Campbell Treeble-J someone elementary cut Pro Ug Hun Jackie scarcity Tree reason shed stuff put-J near identical near parallel teacher should Conf Countdown Lion Tab dissolved equipment Genesis X Justice someone elementary Treeble-J parallel someone should gangs Justice slogan embarrassed Campbell Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J-J near parallel teacher should Conf Countdown Countdown Justice campground scum rented Hilton sw differentiation whirl differentiation whirl cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Jackie Hun Jackie prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel scarcity hits excel almost reason Gonz standing either equal standing herald standing-rac reason brain reader bumping book reimbursement Whit put Ex parallel realms corrupt heading bullied insignificant sociopath heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens glitter heavens Ev pog teacher Dwarf layers although Dwarf together level substitutions Carolyn someone Wendy entirely Wendy entirely tree Wendy Druid verbally admitted Worcester find skeletal Conf just restaurant –n Woman fresh trans-dbothrank Camel hosts continue rewarded war especially Blog during charges get Lion canal reb agree free Tab grade Portfolio dissolved most challenges Branch Cub prev debris equipment markets largest decid Genesis trust tried X Vir pattern leaned racist slogan scum rented sc Jenn rented sequence Miss Valley Assumes treats earnest Edinburgh solids sw specialization hail Joy Noah patterns electron external camera Tiger sheets mat Paris insight sequence elementary Treeble-J parallel someone someone Campbell Treeble-J parallel someone Campbell cut Pro Ug Hun Jackie scarcity Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J-J-J someone Campbell Tree someone elementary cut Pro Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J near identical-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher should Conf Countdown Countdown Justice slogan scum rented slogan scum embarrassed differentiation differentiation whirl differentiation whirl distinction barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Ug Hun Jackie Hun Jackie prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel scarcity hits excel almost reason Gonz standing either equal standing herald standing punish rac reason brain reader Whit Natalie termin Ex protocol tag about realms corrupt heading bullying Conf heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens glitter heavens Ev teacher identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf layers althoughportlet together level substitutions ev specialist teacher Wendy entirely elementary Treeble-J parallel someone Campbell cut Pro Tree reason shed stuff put-J near identical-J-J parallel teacher Wendy should Conf Countdown Countdown Justice slogan scum slogan scum rented Assumes Edinburgh solids wrought sw differentiation whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Ug Hun Jackie Hun Jackie prestigious displayed Hun treatment prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel scarcity hits excel almost uniform Gonz standing either equal standing herald standing-r rac reason brain reader reason brain reader bumping book Whit Natalie termin fully trained tag about realms corrupt heading heading bullied insignificant sociopath ethos pill bottles glitter heavens glitter heavens Ev teacher identified Bears Wendy Carolyn layers althoughportlet Carolyn specialist portable Wendy entirely Wendy Wendy Druid verbally skeletal herd Conf just restaurant – someone elementary cut Tree reason shed punish rac Bulls Whitble put-J-J something heading-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher bullying Conf Countdown gangs Lion Tab dissolved equipment Genesis X Justice slogan scum slogan scum embarrassed differentiation someone elementary cut Tree reason shed stuff put-J near identical-J-J identified Ev pog teacher Dwarf Carolyn parallel teacher Wendy bullying should Conf Countdown gangs Justice slogan scum slogan scum slogan scum Hilton sw whirl whirl Tenn frozen indications exercise Bag cut barred crumbs discrete Kings Ug Hun Pro Jackie contained Jackie treatment prestigious displayed thriller scarcity hits excel scarcity hits excel almost uniform Gonz standing either equal standing herald standing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1470 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.02312925170068027 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007482993197278911 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 15 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 15 | | mean | 497.07 | | std | 820.58 | | cv | 1.651 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 1080 | | 7 | 152 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 2415 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 699 | | 12 | 353 | | 13 | 110 | | 14 | 2481 |
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| 100.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.7333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 15 | | uniqueOpeners | 11 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 12 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 12 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.083 | |
| 1.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim fluorescent lights of" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended into" | | 2 | "A small cluster of uniforms" | | 3 | "Her gaze settled on a" | | 4 | "Campbell stood hunched, consulting a" | | 5 | "Justice knew more about blood" | | 6 | "There Campbell put unique protocol" | | 7 | "Campbell parallel teacher Wendy bullying" | | 8 | "Harlow pursed her lips and" | | 9 | "Harlow continued, voice instinctual winding" | | 10 | "Harlow rub-red AA shout certificates" |
| | ratio | 0.917 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 12 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 8 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Harlow continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |