Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02JNXCZX0NDP281BD5CF1

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant over her neck, the crimson gem humming faintly as the wind brushed the ancient oak stones. The grove’s wildflowers swayed in a rhythm she could not name, their scent tinged with something metallic, like rain on iron. She felt the Veil’s edge ripple, a thin shimmer that only those with sight could pierce. Nyx hovered just beyond the shadows, their violet eyes flickering like candlelight in a dark room. “Do you feel it?” Aurora asked, voice low, eyes narrowed at the faint distortion ahead. Nyx’s form shifted, becoming a ripple of darkness that brushed the ground. “It throbs,” they replied, voice a whisper that rode the wind. “A doorway between worlds.” Isolde stepped forward, silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight, her pale lavender eyes scanning the space between the stones. She placed a hand on the earth, and the ground seemed to sigh. “The grove guards a rift,” she murmured, the words falling like riddles. “Only those bearing a gift may cross.” A soft chime echoed from Aurora’s pocket, the Heartstone’s pulse quickening. She glanced at the pendant, its glow matching the amber hue of the sky overhead, a sky that seemed to melt into molten gold as if the sun lingered in perpetual dusk. She swallowed, feeling the weight of centuries hidden in the soil. She moved, each step deliberate, the grass parting under her boots. The air grew cooler, a faint scent of cinnamon and burnt sugar curling around her. In the distance, a low hum rose, resonating through the stone floor. She lifted her hand, feeling a vibration that traveled up her arm, as if the ground itself breathed. “Listen,” she said, turning to Nyx. “It’s not wind. It’s— Nyx cut her words short, a shadow curling around a low branch, revealing a narrow passage hidden behind a veil of ivy. The opening pulsed with a silvery light, the kind that made Aurora’s breath catch. She stepped closer, the Fae‑Forged Blade sheathed at her hip catching a glint of the light. The slender, leaf‑shaped dagger seemed to hum in response, its cold surface sending a shiver up her spine. The passage widened into a cavern, walls covered in strange glyphs that glowed faintly, their patterns shifting like living ink. The ceiling arched high, dripping with a luminescent moss that painted the space in shades of teal and violet. A river of liquid light flowed through the center, its surface rippling with colors that defied naming. Aurora knelt, dipping her fingers into the river. The liquid was warm, humming against her skin, and the Heartstone’s glow intensified, its pulse syncing with the river’s rhythm. She pulled back, water clinging to her fingertips, the pendant now radiating a soft heat that seeped into her bones. Nyx drifted above the water, their shadowy form stretching across the mossy floor. “The Veil thins here,” they said, voice barely audible over the river’s song. “Hel’s scent lingers.” Isolde walked along the edge, her feet leaving no imprint. She lifted a small crystal from her sat, its surface reflecting the river’s light in a kaleidoscope of colors. She turned it toward Aurora, and the crystal projected a vision—a fleeting glimpse of a banquet hall in Dymas, tables piled high with exotic fruit, a prince in amber robes laughing as he carved a massive roast. The image dissolved as quickly as it appeared, leaving a faint aftertaste of honeyed wine in the air. Aurora’s eyes widened. “Dymas,” she breathed. “Gluttony’s realm.” Isolde nodded, her smile thin. “The Veil’s tears bind worlds. A portal opens where the heart of a place beats strongest.” A low rumble echoed through the cavern, the walls trembling as if something massive shifted within. The river’s flow accelerated, the light turning from teal to a fierce crimson. The Heartstone pulsed faster, its warmth now a heat that throbbed against Aurora’s chest. “Stay close,” Nyx warned, their silhouette flickering, stretching toward the walls as if to test their solidity. “The portal can swallow.” Aurora lifted the Fae‑Forged Blade, its cold metal biting the air. The blade sang, a faint hum that resonated with the cavern’s glyphs. She pressed the dagger against a rune, and the glyph flared, cracking the stone with a sound like glass shattering. A hidden door swung open, revealing a staircase spiraling down into darkness, each step etched with runes that glowed faintly under the blade’s light. The group descended, the air growing denser, the scent of incense and burnt amber filling their nostrils. Shadows clung to the walls, moving like living veins. Aurora could hear a distant chant, low and rhythmic, as if unseen beings sang in unison. A faint breeze brushed her cheek, carrying a whisper of laughter that sounded both human and not. At the bottom, they entered a vaulted chamber. The ceiling arched high, its surface a tapestry of stars that shifted with each breath. In the center stood an altar of obsidian, its surface polished to a mirror finish. Upon it rested a crystal sphere, pulsing with an inner glow that matched the Heartstone’s rhythm. Isolde approached, her silver hair shimmering in the starlight. She placed a hand on the sphere, and the air rippled like water disturbed by a stone. The sphere projected a map of the Veil’s rift points, each node glowing in different colors. One node pulsed a deep crimson—Dymas. Another shone a cool violet—Hel’s shadow realm. A third glimmered emerald—an unknown place hidden beyond mortal comprehension. Aurora’s fingers brushed the sphere’s surface, feeling a surge of power that coursed through her. The Heartstone’s glow merged with the sphere’s light, forming a vortex of crimson and silver. The vortex swirled, drawing the trio’s attention toward a narrow doorway on the far side of the chamber. Nyx drifted ahead, their form dissolving into pure shadow as they slipped through the doorway. The darkness behind them seemed to breathe, a living entity that inhaled and exhaled with a slow, deliberate rhythm. Aurora followed, the Fae‑Forged Blade humming against her side, the cold metal a reassuring anchor. Isolde lingered a moment longer, eyes closed, listening to the hum of the Veil. The corridor beyond the doorway was narrow, walls lined with veins of crystal that pulsed like a heartbeat. The light from the crystals cast prismatic shadows that danced across the floor, forming patterns that resembled ancient runes. Aurora felt a tingling on her skin, as if the very air were charged with electrical anticipation. They emerged into a cavern larger than any she had imagined. The ceiling was a dome of glass, revealing a sky of swirling aurora that painted the darkness with ribbons of violet, amber, and teal. The ground beneath them was a mosaic of stone tiles, each tile etched with a different symbol—some resembling the Fae’s leaf, others bearing the sigil of Dymas’ Prince Belphegor. In the center of the cavern stood a massive archway, its frame composed of intertwined vines of blackened metal and living stone. The arch pulsed with a faint violet light, the same hue that colored Nyx’s eyes. Beyond the arch, a portal shimmered, a thin veil of distortion that rippled like heat on a summer road. Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone’s pulse matching the portal’s rhythm. She placed her hand on the arch’s frame; the cold metal sent a shiver up her arm, but the vines felt warm, as if alive. The portal’s surface rippled, showing flashes of a banquet hall—gluttonous feasts, endless plates, laughter echoing through grand halls. “Dymas,” she whispered, awe lacing her voice. “We can see it.” Nyx hovered beside her, their form merging with the shadows on the walls. “The Veil thins here,” they said, voice a breath. “We must decide whether to step through.” Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the aurora’s light. She placed the Fae‑Forged Blade against the arch, the blade’s cold edge glinting. The blade sang, a low tone that resonated with the portal’s hum. The arch shivered, vines tightening as if acknowledging the blade’s power. “The gate will close when the heart stops beating,” Isolde said, eyes bright, “and the Veil will mend.” Aurora felt the Heartstone throb, a steady rhythm syncing with her own pulse. She lifted the pendant, its crimson glow flooding the cavern, casting shadows that danced like living silhouettes. The portal’s surface swelled, the violet distortion expanding into a vortex of light and darkness. She heard a distant clink, like crystal breaking, and a low, resonant laugh that seemed to come from the walls themselves. The scent of burnt sugar grew stronger, mingling with the metallic tang of blood. The ground trembled, and a ripple of heat coursed through the floor. “Hold fast,” Nyx warned, their form flickering as if battling an unseen wind. “The portal will test us.” Aurora tightened her grip on the blade, feeling the cold metal seep into her palm. She glanced at Isolde, who nodded, her expression unreadable, a smile playing at the corners of her mouth. The Fae‑Forged Blade glowed brighter, its edge cutting through the portal’s veil as if slicing a fabric. The vortex surged, and a wave of wind slammed into them, carrying whispers that sounded like distant voices—some pleading, some cackling. Aurora’s hair lifted, the wind tugging at her shoulders. She felt the Heartstone’s heat rise, its pulse now a steady drumbeat that matched the cavern’s own rhythm. She stepped into the vortex, feeling the world bend around her. The portal’s edges dissolved, and she found herself standing on a marble floor, surrounded by towering columns of crystal that sang with a low, harmonic tone. The sky above was a tapestry of stars, each one pulsing with a rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. Across the room, a figure loomed—tall, draped in a robe of amber, a crown of grapes and figs resting upon his brow. He lifted a goblet, the liquid inside glittering like liquid gold. He smiled, a grin that revealed teeth stained with the hue of wine. “Welcome, traveler,” the figure said, voice rich and resonant. “You have crossed the Veil and entered the realm of excess.” Aurora glanced at Nyx, who floated beside her, their violet eyes narrowing. “We come for answers,” Aurora replied, voice steady. “And for a way home.” The figure raised his goblet, and the cavern filled with the scent of ripe fruit and spiced meat. The air thickened, a sense of both danger and delight swirling together. Aurora felt the Heartstone’s heat surge, the pendant glowing brighter than ever before. She tightened her grip on the Fae‑Forged Blade, the cold edge a reminder of her purpose. “We will not be swayed by your feasts,” she said, eyes fixed on the figure. “We seek the path that leads back.” The figure laughed, a sound that reverberated off the crystal walls. “All paths lead through the heart of gluttony,” he replied, gesturing to the banquet hall beyond a curtain of shimmering light. “But beware, for the heart can consume as easily as it feeds.” Nyx’s shadow stretched, forming a blade of darkness that sliced through the air, cutting a small rift in the curtain. The opening revealed a hallway lined with mirrors that reflected not just their images but moments from their past—Aurora’s scar on her wrist, the night she fled Evan, the moment she first held the Heartstone. Isolde stepped through, her reflection singing a silent lullaby that seemed to echo through the cavern. She turned to Aurora, her eyes bright. “The Veil watches,” she whispered, “and the choices we make shape its threads.” Aurora felt a surge of resolve. She stepped forward, the Fae‑Forged Blade humming louder, the Heartstone’s glow flooding the hallway. The portal ahead swirled, a vortex of crimson and violet that promised both danger and discovery. She turned to Nyx, who nodded, their form solidifying into a silhouette of living shadow. “We move as one,” Nyx said, voice the wind. Isolde raised her hand, the silver light of her gift surrounding her. “The Veil will bend, not break,” she said, and the mirrors shattered, rain of crystal shards scattering across the floor. Aurora stepped into the vortex, feeling the world tilt, the air crackling with power. The Heartstone’s pulse matched the rhythm of the portal, a steady drumbeat that guided her forward. The Fae‑Forged Blade cut through the veil, a clean slice that opened a path. The vortex opened wider, revealing a tunnel of light that stretched beyond sight. Aurora felt the warmth of the Heartstone spread through her, the chill of the blade grounding her. She glanced back at Nyx and Isolde, both poised at the edge, ready to follow. “Let us go,” Aurora said, voice steady, and stepped into the tunnel, the alien world behind her fading into a distant hum as the Veil reshaped itself around their passage.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:46:07.686Z" 2/19/2026, 3:46:07 AM
model"openrouter/aurora-alpha"
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tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion3390
native_tokens_prompt1687
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0
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api_type"completions"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.917
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2149
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2149
totalAiIsms57
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count6
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count5
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count8
9
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
10
word"fleeting"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count2
14
word"etched"
count2
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"tapestry"
count2
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
19
word"mosaic"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"glinting"
count1
23
word"throb"
count1
24
word"trembled"
count1
25
word"unreadable"
count1
26
word"marble"
count1
27
word"loomed"
count1
28
word"sense of"
count1
29
word"reminder"
count1
30
word"reverberated"
count1
31
word"echo"
count1
32
word"resolve"
count1
33
word"shattered"
count1
34
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"whisper"
2"scanning"
3"echoed"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"pulsed"
7"glint"
8"crystal"
9"kaleidoscope"
10"fleeting"
11"warmth"
12"throbbed"
13"resonated"
14"etched"
15"rhythmic"
16"tapestry"
17"charged"
18"anticipation"
19"mosaic"
20"shimmered"
21"echoing"
22"glinting"
23"throb"
24"trembled"
25"unreadable"
26"marble"
27"loomed"
28"sense of"
29"reminder"
30"reverberated"
31"echo"
32"resolve"
33"shattered"
34"chill"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"a surge of resolve"
4.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen85
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions92
wordCount1970
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone14
Pendant1
Veil4
Nyx15
Isolde11
Aurora26
Blade8
Dymas2
Hel1
Fae9
Evan1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Veil"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Aurora"
5"Blade"
6"Hel"
7"Fae"
8"Evan"
places
0"Dymas"
globalScore0.84
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"sky that seemed to melt into molten gold as if the sun lingered in perpetual dusk"
1"as if acknowledging the blade’s power"
2"laugh that seemed to come from the walls themselves"
3"as if battling an unseen wind"
4"as if slicing a fabric"
5"sounded like distant voices—some pleading"
6"lullaby that seemed to echo through the cavern"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.467
wordCount2140
matches
0"not just their images but moments from their past"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
76.26% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean42.8
std17.84
cv0.417
sampleLengths
078
115
227
351
454
556
610
770
856
948
1029
1184
128
1321
1443
1521
1667
1759
1854
1965
2048
2163
2254
2364
2456
2553
2611
2729
2846
2918
3045
3147
3218
3350
3448
3556
3646
3720
3825
3943
4038
4144
4255
4336
4436
4524
4632
4744
4845
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs343
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences65
ratio0.108
matches
0"Isolde walked along the edge, her feet leaving no imprint. She lifted a small crystal from her sat, its surface reflecting the river’s light in a kaleidoscope of colors. She turned it toward Aurora, and the crystal projected a vision—a fleeting glimpse of a banquet hall in Dymas, tables piled high with exotic fruit, a prince in amber robes laughing as he carved a massive roast. The image dissolved as quickly as it appeared, leaving a faint aftertaste of honeyed wine in the air."
1"Isolde approached, her silver hair shimmering in the starlight. She placed a hand on the sphere, and the air rippled like water disturbed by a stone. The sphere projected a map of the Veil’s rift points, each node glowing in different colors. One node pulsed a deep crimson—Dymas. Another shone a cool violet—Hel’s shadow realm. A third glimmered emerald—an unknown place hidden beyond mortal comprehension."
2"They emerged into a cavern larger than any she had imagined. The ceiling was a dome of glass, revealing a sky of swirling aurora that painted the darkness with ribbons of violet, amber, and teal. The ground beneath them was a mosaic of stone tiles, each tile etched with a different symbol—some resembling the Fae’s leaf, others bearing the sigil of Dymas’ Prince Belphegor."
3"Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone’s pulse matching the portal’s rhythm. She placed her hand on the arch’s frame; the cold metal sent a shiver up her arm, but the vines felt warm, as if alive. The portal’s surface rippled, showing flashes of a banquet hall—gluttonous feasts, endless plates, laughter echoing through grand halls."
4"The vortex surged, and a wave of wind slammed into them, carrying whispers that sounded like distant voices—some pleading, some cackling. Aurora’s hair lifted, the wind tugging at her shoulders. She felt the Heartstone’s heat rise, its pulse now a steady drumbeat that matched the cavern’s own rhythm."
5"Across the room, a figure loomed—tall, draped in a robe of amber, a crown of grapes and figs resting upon his brow. He lifted a goblet, the liquid inside glittering like liquid gold. He smiled, a grin that revealed teeth stained with the hue of wine."
6"Nyx’s shadow stretched, forming a blade of darkness that sliced through the air, cutting a small rift in the curtain. The opening revealed a hallway lined with mirrors that reflected not just their images but moments from their past—Aurora’s scar on her wrist, the night she fled Evan, the moment she first held the Heartstone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount360
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.019444444444444445
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.008333333333333333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean32.92
std19.99
cv0.607
sampleLengths
025
121
216
316
415
512
611
74
819
913
1012
117
1211
1332
1411
1511
1615
1712
1818
196
204
2170
2256
2348
2429
2584
268
2710
2811
2943
3021
3167
3259
3354
3465
3548
3663
3754
3864
3956
4053
4111
4229
4346
4418
4545
4647
4718
4850
4948
45.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2923076923076923
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners19
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences62
matches
0"She felt the Veil’s edge"
1"they replied, voice a whisper"
2"She placed a hand on"
3"she murmured, the words falling"
4"She glanced at the pendant,"
5"She swallowed, feeling the weight"
6"She moved, each step deliberate,"
7"She lifted her hand, feeling"
8"she said, turning to Nyx"
9"They emerged into a cavern"
10"she whispered, awe lacing her"
11"She heard a distant clink,"
12"She stepped into the vortex,"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"She turned to Nyx, who"
ratio0.242
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora slipped the silver chain"
1"The grove’s wildflowers swayed in"
2"She felt the Veil’s edge"
3"Nyx hovered just beyond the"
4"Aurora asked, voice low, eyes"
5"Nyx’s form shifted, becoming a"
6"they replied, voice a whisper"
7"Isolde stepped forward, silver hair"
8"She placed a hand on"
9"she murmured, the words falling"
10"A soft chime echoed from"
11"She glanced at the pendant,"
12"She swallowed, feeling the weight"
13"She moved, each step deliberate,"
14"The air grew cooler, a"
15"She lifted her hand, feeling"
16"she said, turning to Nyx"
17"Nyx cut her words short,"
18"The passage widened into a"
19"Aurora knelt, dipping her fingers"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount26
matches
0"She glanced at the pendant, its glow matching the amber hue of the sky overhead, a sky that seemed to melt into molten gold as if the sun lingered in perpetual …"
1"She lifted her hand, feeling a vibration that traveled up her arm, as if the ground itself breathed."
2"Nyx cut her words short, a shadow curling around a low branch, revealing a narrow passage hidden behind a veil of ivy. The opening pulsed with a silvery light, …"
3"The passage widened into a cavern, walls covered in strange glyphs that glowed faintly, their patterns shifting like living ink. The ceiling arched high, drippi…"
4"Aurora knelt, dipping her fingers into the river. The liquid was warm, humming against her skin, and the Heartstone’s glow intensified, its pulse syncing with t…"
5"Isolde walked along the edge, her feet leaving no imprint. She lifted a small crystal from her sat, its surface reflecting the river’s light in a kaleidoscope o…"
6"A low rumble echoed through the cavern, the walls trembling as if something massive shifted within. The river’s flow accelerated, the light turning from teal to…"
7"Aurora lifted the Fae‑Forged Blade, its cold metal biting the air. The blade sang, a faint hum that resonated with the cavern’s glyphs. She pressed the dagger a…"
8"The group descended, the air growing denser, the scent of incense and burnt amber filling their nostrils. Shadows clung to the walls, moving like living veins. …"
9"At the bottom, they entered a vaulted chamber. The ceiling arched high, its surface a tapestry of stars that shifted with each breath. In the center stood an al…"
10"Aurora’s fingers brushed the sphere’s surface, feeling a surge of power that coursed through her. The Heartstone’s glow merged with the sphere’s light, forming …"
11"Nyx drifted ahead, their form dissolving into pure shadow as they slipped through the doorway. The darkness behind them seemed to breathe, a living entity that …"
12"The corridor beyond the doorway was narrow, walls lined with veins of crystal that pulsed like a heartbeat. The light from the crystals cast prismatic shadows t…"
13"In the center of the cavern stood a massive archway, its frame composed of intertwined vines of blackened metal and living stone. The arch pulsed with a faint v…"
14"Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone’s pulse matching the portal’s rhythm. She placed her hand on the arch’s frame; the cold metal sent a shiver up her arm, b…"
15"Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the aurora’s light. She placed the Fae‑Forged Blade against the arch, the blade’s cold edge glinting. The blade…"
16"Aurora felt the Heartstone throb, a steady rhythm syncing with her own pulse. She lifted the pendant, its crimson glow flooding the cavern, casting shadows that…"
17"She heard a distant clink, like crystal breaking, and a low, resonant laugh that seemed to come from the walls themselves. The scent of burnt sugar grew stronge…"
18"Aurora tightened her grip on the blade, feeling the cold metal seep into her palm. She glanced at Isolde, who nodded, her expression unreadable, a smile playing…"
19"The vortex surged, and a wave of wind slammed into them, carrying whispers that sounded like distant voices—some pleading, some cackling. Aurora’s hair lifted, …"
20"She stepped into the vortex, feeling the world bend around her. The portal’s edges dissolved, and she found herself standing on a marble floor, surrounded by to…"
21"Across the room, a figure loomed—tall, draped in a robe of amber, a crown of grapes and figs resting upon his brow. He lifted a goblet, the liquid inside glitte…"
22"Nyx’s shadow stretched, forming a blade of darkness that sliced through the air, cutting a small rift in the curtain. The opening revealed a hallway lined with …"
23"Aurora felt a surge of resolve. She stepped forward, the Fae‑Forged Blade humming louder, the Heartstone’s glow flooding the hallway. The portal ahead swirled, …"
24"Aurora stepped into the vortex, feeling the world tilt, the air crackling with power. The Heartstone’s pulse matched the rhythm of the portal, a steady drumbeat…"
25"The vortex opened wider, revealing a tunnel of light that stretched beyond sight. Aurora felt the warmth of the Heartstone spread through her, the chill of the …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Aurora asked, voice low, eyes narrowed at the faint distortion ahead"
1"she murmured, the words falling like riddles"
2"they said, voice barely audible over the river’s song"
3"each tile etched, others bearing the sigil of Dymas’ Prince Belphegor"
4"she whispered, awe lacing her voice"
5"Isolde said, eyes bright,"
6"Nyx warned, their form flickering as if battling an unseen wind"
7"the figure said, voice rich and resonant"
8"Aurora replied, voice steady"
9"she said, eyes fixed on the figure"
10"she said, and the mirrors shattered, rain of crystal shards scattering across the floor"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"The figure laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.917
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.417
61.8311%