Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02KRVGVGT1RGJF55AGKNQ

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Duration:
2m 40s
Cost:
$0.013921
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door clicked. The second deadbolt snapped back. Rory's fingers hovered over the third lock, the brass warm beneath her thumb. Through the peephole, the corridor warped into a fisheye nightmare of yellowed wallpaper and exposed pipes. She saw the charcoal suit first. Then the cane. She twisted the last bolt. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, his shoulders blocking the hallway light. Rain dripped from the brim of his invisible hat—he wasn't wearing one, but the water in his platinum hair suggested he'd walked through the storm without cover. One eye caught the amber glow from the curry house sign downstairs, the other stayed pitch, a void that drank the shadows. "You missed a button," he said. Rory looked down. Her shirt gaped at the collar, three fasteners undone, the fourth straining. She crossed her arms. "Eva's not here." "I didn't come for Eva." Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles, his tabby tail brushing her calves. The cat hissed. Lucien didn't flinch, but his knuckles whitened around the ivory handle of his cane. The blade inside remained sheathed, for now. "You can't just show up here," Rory said. "I didn't have your new number." "You could have asked around. You're supposed to be good at finding things." The corner of his mouth twitched. Not a smile. "You're wearing the shirt I bought you." She hadn't realized. The fabric, soft and worn at the elbows, had been stuffed in her drawer for six months, untouched since the night she'd left his apartment in Brixton. The night she'd told him some distances couldn't be crossed by people made of different substances. Human and half-demon. Cardiff delivery girl and Marseille fixer. "Why are you here, Luc?" He shifted his weight. The cane tapped against the threshold, a sound like bones knocking. "Your ex is back in London." Rory's hand moved to her left wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar beneath her sleeve. "Evan doesn't concern me anymore." "He bought something from a collector in Highgate last Tuesday. An object designed to find specific heartbeats." Lucien's amber eye flicked to her throat, where her pulse jumped against the skin. "He didn't come back for closure, Laila." The childhood nickname slapped her. She stepped back, allowing the door to swing wider by instinct, by old habit. Lucien entered without invitation, his shoes—Italian leather, unscuffed despite the rain—crossing into Eva's territory. The flat smelled of old paper and turmeric from the restaurant below. Towers of scrolls teetered on the kitchen table. Research on ley lines, on threshold magic, on the proper way to salt a window against things that crawled out of Avaros. Lucien navigated the clutter with practiced ease, though she knew he'd never been here before. He moved like he memorized floorplans in his sleep. "You should have called," Rory said, shutting the door. The three deadbolts clicked home, one, two, three. "I did. You changed your number." "That was two months ago." "And I've been busy arranging for your continued breathing." He leaned his cane against a stack of grimoires. The ivory gleamed. "Evan hired three men. They know you work nights for Yu-Fei. They know about the flat above Silas' bar, the one you moved out of last week. They don't know about this place yet." Rory walked to the kitchenette, putting the counter between them. Her hands shook as she filled the kettle. "So you came to warn me. Noble." "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't pretend this is about courtesy." He rounded the counter, faster than a human should move, and his hand covered hers on the kettle handle. His skin ran hot, feverish, the demon blood singing beneath the surface. "You ran from me because I told you what I was. You didn't run because you were afraid." She didn't pull away. The steam rising between them smelled of copper and rain. "I ran because you lie for a living. Because you trade information like currency and I couldn't tell if anything between us was real." His thumb traced her knuckles, the touch precise, calculated, and devastating. "I never lied about wanting you." "You omitted." "Is that worse?" "In my book?" She finally jerked her hand free, sloshing water onto the linoleum. "Yes." Ptolemy leaped onto the table, knocking a scroll onto the floor. It unfurled between them, a map of London's supernatural veins, red ink marking places where the veil wore thin. Lucien stepped on the parchment without looking down, closing the distance until his breath warmed her temple. "I could have made him disappear," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a register that vibrated in her ribs. "Evan. The men he hired. I could have solved this six months ago with a phone call and a price." "But you didn't." "Because you asked me not to. You said you wanted to handle your own monsters." His hand rose, not touching her, but hovering near the scar on her wrist. The childhood accident. The shape of it matched his thumbnail exactly. "So I watched. From distance. Like you demanded." Rory turned her head. His mismatched eyes consumed her field of vision, the amber bright with something ancient, the black depthless and hungry. She remembered the taste of his mouth in that Brixton flat, licorice and smoke, the way his fingers had felt tracing that same scar while he asked her to stay. "Why now?" she whispered. "Because he's not just looking for revenge anymore. He's looking for the thing that makes you shine." Lucien's hand finally touched her, palm flat against her sternum, above her heart. "You don't know what you are, Rory. But Evan figured it out. And I can't watch from the shadows while he cuts it out of you." She should step back. The kettle screamed, a high electric whine that matched the panic in her ears. Instead, she grabbed his tie, the silk smooth and expensive, and yanked. His mouth crashed into hers, all teeth and desperation, six months of silence breaking like a wave against rocks. He tasted exactly as she remembered, exactly as she'd tried to forget. Lucien's hands framed her face, thumbs pressing into her jaw with possessive urgency. The demon in him showed in the heat radiating through his suit, in the way his tongue swept through her mouth like he was claiming territory. "You don't get to do this," she gasped against his lips, even as her fingers tangled in his rain-wet hair. "You don't get to storm in and—" "Then stop me." She bit his lower lip, hard enough to draw a groan from his chest, a sound that wasn't entirely human. He lifted her onto the counter, scrolls scattering, Ptolemy fleeing to the windowsill. The height put them eye to eye, amber and black and bright blue, all the colors of warning signs. "I needed space," she said, her hands under his jacket, finding the holster he wore beneath the tailored wool. "You needed safety." "I needed to not be a job for you." Lucien pulled back, just enough to let her see the fracture in his composure, the way his perfect mask had cracked down the center. "You think this is professional? You think I give a damn about the fee?" "You tell me. You're the broker." He laughed, sharp and bitter. "I came here with nothing to offer. No deal to make. Just the truth that if he touches you, I'll tear this city apart looking for him. And I won't be civilized about it." The scar on her wrist ached. She remembered getting it, age seven, climbing the fence at her father's office. She remembered Lucien kissing it the night she'd shown him, the way his lips had lingered like he could taste the history in her skin. "You should go," she said, but her legs wrapped around his waist, pulling him closer. "I will." His hands slid under her thighs, lifting her off the counter with demon strength that made her gasp. "After." "After what?" He didn't answer. He carried her through the maze of Eva's books, past the three deadbolts that meant nothing against what walked in the dark, past the cat watching with yellow eyes. The bedroom door stood open, a mouth waiting to swallow them both. Outside, the curry house sign flickered, painting the room in brief flashes of orange light. Lucien set her down on the narrow bed. His cane remained in the other room, the blade sleeping. He stood over her, breathing hard, his shirt finally unbuttoned at the collar where she'd tugged it. "Tell me to leave," he said. "Use my name. Say it like you mean it." Rory sat up. She reached for his scar—not physical, but the invisible one she'd left when she'd walked away. Her fingers rested over his heart, where the demon blood pumped steady and sure. "Lucien." He closed his eyes. "Lock the door," she said. His hand found the bolt. The click echoed through the flat, drowning out the rain.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:46:08.803Z" 2/19/2026, 3:46:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.264
leniency0.528
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"tracing"
2"flicked"
3"pulse"
4"navigated"
5"practiced ease"
6"traced"
7"calculated"
8"vibrated"
9"electric"
10"silk"
11"silence"
12"perfect"
13"flickered"
14"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1496
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1074
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory9
Brixton2
Marseille1
Italian1
Eva2
Avaros1
Ptolemy3
London1
Lucien12
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brixton"
1"Marseille"
2"London"
globalScore0.941
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
66.31% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.337
wordCount1496
matches
0"not touching her, but hovering near the scar on her wrist"
1"not physical, but the invisible one she'd left"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean24.52
std20.21
cv0.824
sampleLengths
046
15
260
36
422
55
635
78
86
913
1016
1155
125
1321
1420
1538
1675
1724
1817
196
205
2155
2225
231
242
2555
2638
2717
282
293
3015
3147
3239
333
3448
3553
364
3756
3861
3939
4027
413
4252
4319
443
459
4638
476
4839
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been stuffed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs180
matches
0"wasn't wearing"
1"was claiming"
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences132
ratio0.023
matches
0"Rain dripped from the brim of his invisible hat—he wasn't wearing one, but the water in his platinum hair suggested he'd walked through the storm without cover."
1"Lucien entered without invitation, his shoes—Italian leather, unscuffed despite the rain—crossing into Eva's territory."
2"She reached for his scar—not physical, but the invisible one she'd left when she'd walked away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1080
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.023148148148148147
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006481481481481481
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean11.33
std8.1
cv0.715
sampleLengths
03
15
213
316
46
53
65
711
827
922
106
113
1212
134
143
155
1611
173
1814
197
208
216
2213
236
243
257
263
2727
2816
293
306
315
324
3311
346
3515
365
3731
387
395
4014
4114
4212
438
4422
4515
469
479
488
496
41.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.29545454545454547
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners39
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Then the cane."
1"Instead, she grabbed his tie,"
ratio0.022
48.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences91
matches
0"She saw the charcoal suit"
1"She twisted the last bolt."
2"Her shirt gaped at the"
3"She crossed her arms."
4"She hadn't realized."
5"He shifted his weight."
6"She stepped back, allowing the"
7"He moved like he memorized"
8"He leaned his cane against"
9"Her hands shook as she"
10"He rounded the counter, faster"
11"His skin ran hot, feverish,"
12"She didn't pull away."
13"His thumb traced her knuckles,"
14"She finally jerked her hand"
15"It unfurled between them, a"
16"His hand rose, not touching"
17"His mismatched eyes consumed her"
18"She remembered the taste of"
19"She should step back."
ratio0.429
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences91
matches
0"The door clicked."
1"The second deadbolt snapped back."
2"Rory's fingers hovered over the"
3"She saw the charcoal suit"
4"She twisted the last bolt."
5"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
6"Rain dripped from the brim"
7"Rory looked down."
8"Her shirt gaped at the"
9"She crossed her arms."
10"Ptolemy wound between Rory's ankles,"
11"The cat hissed."
12"Lucien didn't flinch, but his"
13"The blade inside remained sheathed,"
14"The corner of his mouth"
15"She hadn't realized."
16"The fabric, soft and worn"
17"The night she'd told him"
18"Human and half-demon."
19"Cardiff delivery girl and Marseille"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"One eye caught the amber glow from the curry house sign downstairs, the other stayed pitch, a void that drank the shadows."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, but her legs wrapped around his waist, pulling him closer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.189
leniency0.377
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.075
84.5974%