| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "Lucien turned back [back]" | | 2 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Lucien said simply [simply]" | | 4 | "I said finally [finally]" | | 5 | "I said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.521 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.24 | | effectiveRatio | 0.24 | |
| 88.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1689 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1689 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "racing" | | 3 | "enigmatic" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "potential" | | 6 | "raced" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "implication" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "calculated" | | 12 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1694 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1243 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Silas | 1 | | Brick | 3 | | Lane | 3 | | Hanbury | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Ptolemy | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 15 | | London | 3 | | Impossible | 1 | | Knew | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Empress" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Hanbury" | | 3 | "Street" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.897 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1694 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 27.77 | | std | 17.17 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 58 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 41 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 49 | | 47 | 33 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't happening" | | 1 | "were starting" | | 2 | "was hunting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Cool night air slipped inside, carrying the distant sounds of Brick Lane's nightlife - laughter, car horns, the rhythmic thump of bass from a club three blocks over." | | 1 | "Lucien's heterochromatic eyes - one amber, one black - studied me through the gap." | | 2 | "But another part - the part that had always been too curious for its own good - wanted to know what could possibly bring Lucien Moreau, London's most enigmatic fixer, to my doorstep in the dead of night." | | 3 | "Lucien stepped inside, and I caught the scent of his cologne - something expensive and subtle, with notes of bergamot and cedar." | | 4 | "Whoever was hunting demons had eyes everywhere, and coming to me - someone who existed on the fringes, someone who could disappear if needed - was a calculated risk." | | 5 | "His cane made a soft click against the floor as he positioned himself between me and the door, and I noticed for the first time the slight bulge beneath his left sleeve - a holster, perhaps." |
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| 99.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 846 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.04018912529550828 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01182033096926714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 14.36 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 25 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 65.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4322033898305085 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a voice from the" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 50.43% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "I froze with my hand" | | 1 | "My flat sat above Silas's" | | 2 | "I set the milk down" | | 3 | "I moved to the door" | | 4 | "I whispered, though he couldn't" | | 5 | "I'd installed three of them" | | 6 | "I said, keeping my voice" | | 7 | "He looked immaculate as always," | | 8 | "he said simply" | | 9 | "I almost laughed." | | 10 | "His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly." | | 11 | "I kept my tone light," | | 12 | "I considered this." | | 13 | "He moved through my small" | | 14 | "he said, though his eyes" | | 15 | "I replied, closing the door" | | 16 | "I prompted, crossing my arms" | | 17 | "He moved to the window," | | 18 | "My mind raced through implications." | | 19 | "I said, though I knew" |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 30.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at 2:47" | | 1 | "I froze with my hand" | | 2 | "My flat sat above Silas's" | | 3 | "The building had good bones" | | 4 | "This knock didn't belong to" | | 5 | "I set the milk down" | | 6 | "The apartment felt too quiet," | | 7 | "The knock came again, more" | | 8 | "I moved to the door" | | 9 | "The person standing in the" | | 10 | "Platinum blond hair caught the" | | 11 | "I whispered, though he couldn't" | | 12 | "The deadbolt turned with a" | | 13 | "I'd installed three of them" | | 14 | "The door opened a crack." | | 15 | "I said, keeping my voice" | | 16 | "Lucien's heterochromatic eyes - one" | | 17 | "He looked immaculate as always," | | 18 | "he said simply" | | 19 | "I almost laughed." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Ptolemy, my tabby cat," | | 1 | "Now I stood with my" | | 2 | "Whoever was hunting demons had" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "But another part - the part that had always been too curious for its own good - wanted to know what could possibly bring Lucien Moreau, London's most enigmatic …" | | 1 | "He moved through my small living room with the ease of someone accustomed to assessing spaces quickly, his cane making a soft tap against the hardwood floor." | | 2 | "Lucien turned to face me, and in the dim light from the streetlamps filtering through the window, I could see shadows under his eyes that hadn't been there befo…" | | 3 | "Knew it with a certainty that made my stomach clench." | | 4 | "Whoever was hunting demons had eyes everywhere, and coming to me - someone who existed on the fringes, someone who could disappear if needed - was a calculated …" |
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| 45.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "I kept, but my fingers were white-knuckled around the door edge" | | 1 | "he said, though his eyes were already scanning the room, cataloging exits, potential weapons, anything useful" | | 2 | "I asked, my voice steadier than I felt" | | 3 | "Lucien took, his expression thoughtful" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.042 | |