Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02TMYNHYGP3W46D6CEJRB

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Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.002095
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered like heat rising off pavement as Aurora stepped through the standing stones. The scent of honeysuckle and damp earth hit her first, thick enough to taste. Her fingers brushed the cold metal of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt—Isolde’s parting gift. "Told you she’d fit right through," Nyx murmured, their voice a rustle of dry leaves. Their shadowy form flickered at the edges, solidifying as they passed the threshold. The grove unfolded before them, wildflowers carpeting the ground in impossible colors—petals the deep violet of twilight, stems glowing faintly like embers. Trees arched overhead, their branches woven so tightly they formed a living ceiling. No wind stirred the leaves, yet the air hummed with something just shy of music. Aurora crouched, brushing her fingertips over a cluster of tiny blue blossoms. They pulsed softly at her touch. "They’re breathing." Nyx’s silhouette darkened, coalescing into something more humanoid. "Don’t pluck them. Fae flowers have teeth." She straightened, wiping her hand on her jeans. The dirt didn’t cling—it fell away like dust. A path of smooth, moss-covered stones wound deeper into the grove. Aurora took the lead, her boots silent against the ground. The further they walked, the heavier the air became, thick with the scent of crushed herbs and something metallic underneath. The trees parted abruptly, revealing a clearing dominated by a pool of water so still it looked like glass. The surface reflected not the sky, but swirls of constellations Aurora didn’t recognize. Nyx went unnaturally still. "Don’t touch the water." Aurora shot them a look. "You’re not my babysitter." "Babysitters don’t watch you get eaten by sentient reflections." Their violet eyes glowed brighter. "Try it if you want. I’ll laugh." She edged closer anyway, curiosity prickling down her spine. The pool’s edge was ringed with smooth white stones, each carved with symbols that made her head ache if she stared too long. The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed warm, then hot—a warning. Something moved beneath the water’s surface. Aurora jerked back as a shape flickered just beneath the reflection—something long and sinuous, gone before she could focus on it. The pendant cooled instantly. Nyx exhaled, a sound like wind through dead branches. "Told you." She ignored them, turning her attention to the far side of the clearing. A massive oak stood sentinel, its trunk wider than her flat back in London. Vines coiled around its bark, heavy with fruit that shimmered like polished gold. Aurora reached for one. "Don’t." She froze. The voice wasn’t Nyx’s. Isolde stepped from between the trees, her silver hair blending with the dappled light. She moved without sound, her lavender eyes fixed on Aurora’s outstretched hand. "The trees remember hunger. Pluck one, and they’ll know yours." Aurora lowered her arm slowly. "You could’ve led with that before sending us in here." Isolde’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. "Would you have listened?" Nyx’s form rippled, their amusement palpable. "She wouldn’t." The half-Fae glided past them, her bare feet leaving no impression in the moss. "Come. What you seek isn’t here." Aurora hesitated, glancing back at the pool. The water remained still, but the reflection of the stars had shifted—they formed a single, unblinking eye. Nyx materialized at her shoulder. "Keep staring, and it’ll stare back." She swallowed hard and turned away. The grove seemed to exhale around them as they followed Isolde deeper, the path narrowing until the trees pressed close on either side. The air grew cooler, the scent of flowers giving way to something sharper—ozone and old stone. The ground sloped downward, the moss thinning to reveal veined marble tiles half-buried in the earth. They gleamed faintly, etched with the same strange symbols as the pool’s stones. Isolde paused at the edge of a crumbling staircase, its steps descending into darkness. "Below lies the threshold. The answers you want—the ones you need—they wait there." Aurora’s fingers found the pendant again. It burned against her skin. "What’s down there?" Isolde tilted her head, silver hair cascading over one shoulder. "What you’re brave enough to face." Nyx chuckled, the sound like dry bones shifting. "Or stupid enough." The staircase beckoned, the shadows at its base shifting in a way that had nothing to do with the light. Aurora took the first step. The marble was ice-cold beneath her boots. The grove held its breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount737
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount737
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"sentinel"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"marble"
count2
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"cascading"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"flickered"
2"pulsed"
3"down her spine"
4"sentinel"
5"palpable"
6"marble"
7"etched"
8"cascading"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences57
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords723
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount618
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde6
Heartstone1
Pendant1
London1
Nyx8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.529
windowScore0.667
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like glass"
61.69% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.383
wordCount723
matches
0"not the sky, but swirls of constellations Aurora didn’t recognize"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean21.26
std13.61
cv0.64
sampleLengths
044
128
250
320
415
516
641
732
88
99
1021
1143
126
1325
1411
1540
164
171
186
1936
2015
2110
228
2320
2424
2511
2645
2729
2827
2914
3016
3111
3232
335
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"was ringed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences74
ratio0.095
matches
0"Her fingers brushed the cold metal of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt—Isolde’s parting gift."
1"The grove unfolded before them, wildflowers carpeting the ground in impossible colors—petals the deep violet of twilight, stems glowing faintly like embers."
2"The dirt didn’t cling—it fell away like dust."
3"The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed warm, then hot—a warning."
4"Aurora jerked back as a shape flickered just beneath the reflection—something long and sinuous, gone before she could focus on it."
5"The water remained still, but the reflection of the stars had shifted—they formed a single, unblinking eye."
6"The air grew cooler, the scent of flowers giving way to something sharper—ozone and old stone."
82.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount630
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"smooth, moss-covered stones"
1"ice-cold beneath her"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.046031746031746035
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012698412698412698
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean9.77
std5.58
cv0.571
sampleLengths
015
114
215
315
413
522
613
715
812
96
102
118
127
138
148
1511
1610
1720
1819
1913
204
214
225
234
2414
257
269
2723
2811
296
3021
314
329
332
3413
3514
3613
374
381
392
404
4114
4212
4310
445
4510
466
474
486
492
45.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.33783783783783783
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her fingers brushed the cold"
1"Their shadowy form flickered at"
2"They pulsed softly at her"
3"She straightened, wiping her hand"
4"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
5"She edged closer anyway, curiosity"
6"She ignored them, turning her"
7"She moved without sound, her"
8"She swallowed hard and turned"
9"They gleamed faintly, etched with"
10"It burned against her skin."
ratio0.196
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air shimmered like heat"
1"The scent of honeysuckle and"
2"Her fingers brushed the cold"
3"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
4"Their shadowy form flickered at"
5"The grove unfolded before them,"
6"Trees arched overhead, their branches"
7"Aurora crouched, brushing her fingertips"
8"They pulsed softly at her"
9"Nyx’s silhouette darkened, coalescing into"
10"She straightened, wiping her hand"
11"The dirt didn’t cling—it fell"
12"A path of smooth, moss-covered"
13"Aurora took the lead, her"
14"The further they walked, the"
15"The trees parted abruptly, revealing"
16"The surface reflected not the"
17"Nyx went unnaturally still."
18"Aurora shot them a look."
19"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
ratio0.982
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their voice a rustle of dry leaves"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.053
leniency0.105
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.105
74.1730%