Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02VFBP13C3KX55JB21DN2

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.004914
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts clicked open in rapid succession, the metallic rasp echoing off the narrow hallway walls. The chain rattled before the door swung inward, revealing the cramped chaos of the flat above the curry house. Spices from the kitchen below clung to the air, a thick haze of cumin and turmeric that usually comforted Rory but now felt suffocating. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. Rain dripped from the brim of an invisible umbrella, darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. He leaned against the doorframe, ivory cane hooked over his wrist, looking as though he had stepped out of a boardroom rather than the damp London night. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and one black, scanned the cluttered room behind her before locking onto her face. "Move," Rory said, her hand still on the door. "You're letting the heat out." "Ice, actually. It is positively frigid out here." Lucien stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his polished shoes clicking against the linoleum. He navigated the stacks of books and scrolls with practiced ease, as if he had mapped the terrain of Eva's flat in his sleep. "Your friend Eva has excellent security, though perhaps a touch dramatic with the third bolt." "Eva likes to sleep without worrying about demons kicking down her door." Rory slammed the door shut and engaged the locks again, the sound final and heavy. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. "How did you find this place?" "London is a village for those who know where to listen." Lucien set his cane against a stack of mythology texts, the ivory handle gleaming under the warm lamp light. He shrugged off his coat, revealing a crisp white shirt that seemed untouched by the weather. "And you, my dear Rory, are not as invisible as you think. The scent of cardamom and old paper trails from this building like a beacon." "You have no business being here." "On the contrary." He moved closer, invading her personal space with that maddening calm he always wore like armor. "I have every business. You vanished. Three weeks, Aurora. Not a word. Not a signal." "I told you to leave it alone." Rory backed up until her hips hit the edge of the sofa. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stirred from a pile of research notes, glared at Lucien, and stalked away to the kitchen. "We're done. That was the deal." "Deals require signatures. We had only a verbal agreement made in the back of a moving van while being chased by shadow hounds." Lucien stopped inches from her. He smelled of rain, expensive cologne, and something faintly sulfuric that hinted at his father's lineage. "Hardly binding." "It was clear enough." "Was it?" He tilted his head, the platinum blond hair slicked back perfectly despite the humidity. "Because I recall a woman who looked at me with something far more complicated than dismissal before she ran off to hide in her friend's cupboard of a flat." Rory's pulse hammered against her ribs. She hated how he saw through her, how those mismatched eyes seemed to peel back the layers of her carefully constructed defenses. "I needed space. I needed to figure out who I was without... without all of this." She gestured vaguely at him, at the supernatural world he represented. "And have you?" Lucien's voice dropped, losing its polished edge. "Found yourself?" "I'm working delivery for Yu-Fei. I'm studying law again, sort of. I'm normal." "You are many things, Aurora Carter, but normal is not one of them." He reached out, his long fingers brushing a stray lock of black hair from her cheek. His touch sent a jolt through her, electric and unwelcome. "You carry a scar on your wrist that glows when magic is near. You think like a strategist but feel like a storm. Do not insult me by pretending otherwise." Rory slapped his hand away, though the motion lacked real force. "Don't touch me." "Tell me to leave, then." Lucien didn't retreat. He stood his ground, looming over her slight frame. "Look me in the eye and tell me you want me to walk out that door and never come back. Say it, and I will vanish so completely you will wonder if I ever existed." The words stuck in her throat. The silence stretched between them, filled only by the distant hum of traffic on Brick Lane and the rhythmic drip of rain against the windowpane. She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw the tension in his jaw, the way his thumb rubbed against the fabric of his trousers. He wasn't just here to check on an asset. He was here because he cared, and that terrified her more than any demon. "You left me," she whispered, the accusation tasting like ash. "In Paris. You walked away first." "I walked away to keep you alive." Lucien's voice cracked, a rare fracture in his composure. "Your ex, Evan, he wasn't just abusive, Rory. He was mixed up with things from Avaros. If I stayed close, they would have used me to get to you. Leaving was the only play that kept your heart beating." "You didn't trust me to handle it." "I trusted you too much." He stepped in again, closing the final gap between them. His hands came up to rest on her shoulders, warm and solid. "I knew you would fight. I knew you would try to save everyone, including me, and get yourself killed in the process. So I made the hard choice. I let you hate me." "I didn't hate you." The admission slipped out before she could stop it. "I was furious. I was hurt. But never hate." Lucien let out a breath he seemed to have been holding for weeks. His forehead rested against hers, the cool skin of his brow contrasting with the heat radiating from her. "Good. Because I could not bear the thought of your hatred. Your anger, I can manage. Your indifference, I might survive. But your hate?" He shook his head slightly. "That would have ended me." Rory gripped the lapels of his suit jacket, bunching the fine charcoal wool in her fists. "You can't just show up and fix everything with a speech, Lucien. The mess is still here. Evan is still out there. My life is a wreck." "Then let us clean it up." His eyes searched hers, the amber one swirling with gold flecks, the black one absorbing the light. "Together. No more running. No more secrets. We face whatever comes, side by side." "It won't be easy." "Nothing worth having ever is." He traced the line of her jaw with his thumb, his touch gentle now, reverent. "Besides, I find I have grown quite fond of your chaos." A small, reluctant smile tugged at the corner of Rory's mouth. "You're impossible." "I am persistent." Lucien leaned down, his lips hovering just above hers. "There is a distinction." "Prove it." He closed the distance. The kiss was not tentative; it was a collision of pent-up frustration and longing, fierce and demanding. Rory melted into him, her hands sliding up to thread through his platinum hair, messing the perfect slickness. He tasted of rain and wine, familiar and new all at once. The world outside the flat, with its dangers and complications, faded into the background, replaced by the solid weight of his body against hers and the frantic beat of two hearts syncing up after too long apart. Ptolemy meowed loudly from the kitchen, breaking the moment. Lucien pulled back just enough to look at her, a genuine smile softening his sharp features. "I believe the cat demands dinner." "He's hungry. I'm hungry." Rory kept her hands on his chest, unwilling to let go completely. "There's leftover curry in the fridge." "Curry it is." Lucien kissed her forehead, then stepped back, retrieving his cane. He didn't move toward the door, however. Instead, he began to roll up his sleeves, revealing the forearms corded with muscle and faint, glowing tattoos. "Set the table, Rory. I will heat the food. And then, you are going to tell me everything about this Evan situation, and we are going to make a plan." Rory watched him move toward the kitchen, confident and capable, filling the small space with a presence that felt like home. "You're bossy." "I am efficient." He glanced back over his shoulder, the amber eye catching the light. "Now, plates. Unless you wish to eat like savages." "Shut up and cook, Frenchman." "With pleasure, my love."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.793
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.069
79.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
2"completely"
3"really"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"beacon"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"rhythmic"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"efficient"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"scanned"
2"navigated"
3"practiced ease"
4"gleaming"
5"beacon"
6"pulse"
7"constructed"
8"electric"
9"looming"
10"silence"
11"rhythmic"
12"tension"
13"traced"
14"perfect"
15"familiar"
16"weight"
17"efficient"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1430
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount837
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Moreau1
London1
Lucien12
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore0.783
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed untouched by the weather"
1"felt like home"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1430
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean34.88
std24.69
cv0.708
sampleLengths
059
168
214
362
444
572
66
734
845
946
104
1145
1255
1312
1413
1569
1614
1752
1880
1916
2055
217
2260
2322
2465
2543
2637
274
2831
2913
3016
312
3288
339
3422
3522
3668
3723
3824
395
404
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"The kiss was not tentative; it was a collision of pent-up frustration and longing, fierce and demanding."
99.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount838
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.0405727923627685
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011933174224343675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean15.05
std9.1
cv0.604
sampleLengths
016
119
224
36
416
527
619
79
85
923
1024
1115
1227
1311
146
1530
1616
1726
186
1919
2015
2119
2220
236
2428
2516
262
274
2816
2929
306
3122
3227
3310
342
3513
3629
3710
3830
3911
403
418
429
4335
446
4525
4626
479
4814
4910
75.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4842105263157895
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners46
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, he began to roll"
ratio0.017
40.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences60
matches
0"He leaned against the doorframe,"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"He navigated the stacks of"
3"She turned to face him,"
4"He shrugged off his coat,"
5"He moved closer, invading her"
6"He smelled of rain, expensive"
7"He tilted his head, the"
8"She hated how he saw"
9"She gestured vaguely at him,"
10"He reached out, his long"
11"His touch sent a jolt"
12"He stood his ground, looming"
13"She looked at him, really"
14"He wasn't just here to"
15"He was here because he"
16"she whispered, the accusation tasting"
17"He stepped in again, closing"
18"His hands came up to"
19"His forehead rested against hers,"
ratio0.45
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences60
matches
0"The chain rattled before the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Rain dripped from the brim"
3"He leaned against the doorframe,"
4"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
5"Rory said, her hand still"
6"Lucien stepped inside without waiting"
7"He navigated the stacks of"
8"Rory slammed the door shut"
9"She turned to face him,"
10"Lucien set his cane against"
11"He shrugged off his coat,"
12"He moved closer, invading her"
13"Rory backed up until her"
14"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stirred"
15"Lucien stopped inches from her"
16"He smelled of rain, expensive"
17"He tilted his head, the"
18"Rory's pulse hammered against her"
19"She hated how he saw"
ratio0.95
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He leaned against the doorframe, ivory cane hooked over his wrist, looking as though he had stepped out of a boardroom rather than the damp London night."
1"He navigated the stacks of books and scrolls with practiced ease, as if he had mapped the terrain of Eva's flat in his sleep."
2"He shrugged off his coat, revealing a crisp white shirt that seemed untouched by the weather."
3"His forehead rested against hers, the cool skin of his brow contrasting with the heat radiating from her."
4"Rory melted into him, her hands sliding up to thread through his platinum hair, messing the perfect slickness."
5"Rory watched him move toward the kitchen, confident and capable, filling the small space with a presence that felt like home."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory said, her hand still on the door"
1"Lucien stepped, his polished shoes clicking against the linoleum"
2"Lucien set, the ivory handle gleaming under the warm lamp light"
3"He traced, his touch gentle now, reverent"
4"Lucien leaned down, his lips hovering just above hers"
5"Rory kept, unwilling to let go completely"
6"He glanced back, the amber eye catching the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.034
75.4606%