| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "He glanced back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.397 | | leniency | 0.793 | | rawRatio | 0.087 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 79.05% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "scanned" | | 2 | "navigated" | | 3 | "practiced ease" | | 4 | "gleaming" | | 5 | "beacon" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "constructed" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "looming" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "efficient" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1430 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 837 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Eva | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.783 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed untouched by the weather" | | 1 | "felt like home" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1430 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 34.88 | | std | 24.69 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 52 | | 18 | 80 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 65 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 88 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 68 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The kiss was not tentative; it was a collision of pent-up frustration and longing, fierce and demanding." |
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| 99.50% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 838 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.0405727923627685 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011933174224343675 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 15.05 | | std | 9.1 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 35 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 75.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4842105263157895 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he began to roll" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 40.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one amber" | | 2 | "He navigated the stacks of" | | 3 | "She turned to face him," | | 4 | "He shrugged off his coat," | | 5 | "He moved closer, invading her" | | 6 | "He smelled of rain, expensive" | | 7 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 8 | "She hated how he saw" | | 9 | "She gestured vaguely at him," | | 10 | "He reached out, his long" | | 11 | "His touch sent a jolt" | | 12 | "He stood his ground, looming" | | 13 | "She looked at him, really" | | 14 | "He wasn't just here to" | | 15 | "He was here because he" | | 16 | "she whispered, the accusation tasting" | | 17 | "He stepped in again, closing" | | 18 | "His hands came up to" | | 19 | "His forehead rested against hers," |
| | ratio | 0.45 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain rattled before the" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 2 | "Rain dripped from the brim" | | 3 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 4 | "His heterochromatic eyes, one amber" | | 5 | "Rory said, her hand still" | | 6 | "Lucien stepped inside without waiting" | | 7 | "He navigated the stacks of" | | 8 | "Rory slammed the door shut" | | 9 | "She turned to face him," | | 10 | "Lucien set his cane against" | | 11 | "He shrugged off his coat," | | 12 | "He moved closer, invading her" | | 13 | "Rory backed up until her" | | 14 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stirred" | | 15 | "Lucien stopped inches from her" | | 16 | "He smelled of rain, expensive" | | 17 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 18 | "Rory's pulse hammered against her" | | 19 | "She hated how he saw" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He leaned against the doorframe, ivory cane hooked over his wrist, looking as though he had stepped out of a boardroom rather than the damp London night." | | 1 | "He navigated the stacks of books and scrolls with practiced ease, as if he had mapped the terrain of Eva's flat in his sleep." | | 2 | "He shrugged off his coat, revealing a crisp white shirt that seemed untouched by the weather." | | 3 | "His forehead rested against hers, the cool skin of his brow contrasting with the heat radiating from her." | | 4 | "Rory melted into him, her hands sliding up to thread through his platinum hair, messing the perfect slickness." | | 5 | "Rory watched him move toward the kitchen, confident and capable, filling the small space with a presence that felt like home." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her hand still on the door" | | 1 | "Lucien stepped, his polished shoes clicking against the linoleum" | | 2 | "Lucien set, the ivory handle gleaming under the warm lamp light" | | 3 | "He traced, his touch gentle now, reverent" | | 4 | "Lucien leaned down, his lips hovering just above hers" | | 5 | "Rory kept, unwilling to let go completely" | | 6 | "He glanced back, the amber eye catching the light" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 58 | | tagDensity | 0.034 | | leniency | 0.069 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.034 | |