Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02XPGZP0CWSV6YHTSYPVC

Run Details

Duration:
37.8s
Cost:
$0.031416
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could knock a third time. Eva stood in the gap, barefoot and disheveled, wearing an oversized jumper that hung off one shoulder. Her dark curls were piled on top of her head in a messy bun, and she held a half-eaten piece of toast in one hand. Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles, tail swishing. They stared at each other. "Rory." Eva's voice came out flat. "Can I come in?" Eva didn't move. Her jaw worked. "It's been six months." "I know." "Six months, and now you just show up at half seven on a Thursday morning." Rory shifted the canvas bag higher on her shoulder. "I wouldn't be here if it wasn't important." "That's what you said the last time." Eva took a bite of her toast, chewing slowly, deliberately. "Right before you disappeared." Heat crawled up Rory's neck. "That's not fair." "Isn't it?" Eva crossed her arms, the toast dangling from her fingers. "You shagged me, told me you needed space to sort your head out, then vanished. Changed your number. Eva from the library said you'd moved flats. I had to hear from Yu-Fei that you were even still in London." "I did need space." "Space. Right." Eva laughed, bitter and sharp. "Well, you've had six months of it. So what changed?" Rory glanced over her shoulder at the stairwell. The curry house below hadn't opened yet, but voices drifted up from the street — the clatter of morning deliveries, someone shouting about a parking space. She lowered her voice. "Someone tried to kill me last night." Eva's expression shifted. The hardness in her eyes fractured, replaced by something closer to alarm. She stepped back, pulling the door wider. "Get in." Rory slipped past her into the familiar chaos of the flat. Books covered every surface — stacked on the coffee table, piled beside the sofa, balanced precariously on the windowsill. Scrolls lay unfurled across the kitchen counter, held down by coffee mugs and a butter knife. The air smelled like burnt toast and bergamot tea. Eva threw all three deadbolts. "Tell me." "I was making a delivery in Shoreditch. Corner of Holywell Lane. This bloke came out of nowhere, grabbed me, shoved me against the wall." Rory set her bag on the floor, rolling her shoulder where it still ached. "Had a knife. Started asking about something called the Malphora Seal." Eva went very still. "You know what that is." "Shit." Eva set the toast down, running both hands over her face. "Shit, shit, shit." "So you do know." "This is my fault." Eva turned away, pacing toward the window. Ptolemy darted out of her path, disappearing under the sofa. "I should have told you. I meant to tell you, but then everything happened, and you left, and I thought—I thought maybe it was better if you didn't know." Rory's chest tightened. "Eva. What is the Malphora Seal?" "It's you." The words landed wrong, like a book falling spine-first onto concrete. Rory blinked. "What?" Eva faced her again. Dark circles shadowed her eyes, and her hands twisted together at her waist. "Your grandmother — your mum's mum — her maiden name was Malphora. She was from a family of weavers. Not fabric weavers. Reality weavers. People who could manipulate the threads between realms." "That's ridiculous." "You asked me to research your family tree last year. Remember? You wanted to know why strange things kept happening around you. Why you always knew when someone was lying, why doors unlocked when you touched them, why that tosser Evan could never track you down no matter how hard he tried." Eva's voice rose. "I found things, Rory. Old things. Your grandmother sealed something before she died. Something dangerous. And she bound it to her bloodline." Rory's mouth had gone dry. "You're saying I'm the seal." "You're the lock and the key both." Eva stepped closer, her hand reaching out before she seemed to catch herself and pulled it back. "There are people — creatures, demons, all sorts — who want what she locked away. They've been looking for decades. I thought I'd covered your trail. Changed enough records, buried enough connections that no one would make the link between Aurora Carter and the Malphora line." "Apparently you missed one." "Apparently I did." Eva's gaze dropped to Rory's wrist, to the small crescent scar visible beneath her sleeve. "The bloke with the knife. Did he say anything else?" "Said I had something that belonged to his employer. Said they'd been very patient, but their patience had limits." Rory touched her wrist unconsciously. "I kneed him in the bollocks and ran. Went to ground at Silas' place for a few hours, then came here." "Does anyone know you're here?" "Just Silas. And..." Rory hesitated. "Lucien." Eva's expression shuttered. "The Frenchman." "He helped me in Battersea last month. Said I could call if I needed information." "And you trust him?" "I don't trust anyone right now." The words came out sharper than Rory intended. "I came here because you're the only person who knows about this supernatural shite. The only person who might actually be able to help." Eva was quiet for a long moment. She moved to the kitchen counter, clearing a space among the scrolls and pulling out two mugs. The kettle sat on the hob, still warm from her morning tea. She relit the gas. "I never wanted to hurt you," Rory said. "I know." "I panicked. After that night, I—" Rory pressed her palms against her eyes. "Everything in my life had already gone sideways. Evan, leaving Cardiff, feeling like I was constantly looking over my shoulder. And then you and I finally..." She dropped her hands. "It felt too good. Too easy. Like something else was about to go wrong." Eva spooned loose tea into an infuser. "So you made something go wrong." "Yeah." The kettle began to whistle. Eva poured hot water into both mugs, the steam rising between them. She pushed one across the counter toward Rory. "I shouldn't have shut you out," Rory said. "I'm sorry." Eva wrapped both hands around her own mug. Her knuckles had ink stains on them — blue and black, from whatever she'd been transcribing before Rory knocked. "I'm sorry too. For not telling you about your grandmother. About what you're carrying." "What am I carrying, exactly?" "I don't know yet. The records are fragmented. Your grandmother was careful." Eva took a sip of her tea, wincing at the heat. "But whatever it is, it's powerful enough that people are still hunting for it twenty-five years after her death. And now they know where to find you." Rory's hand trembled slightly as she lifted her mug. The tea tasted bitter, under-steeped. "So what do we do?" "We figure out what the seal actually contains. Then we figure out how to keep you alive." Eva met her gaze across the counter. "And we do it together. No more running off." "No more keeping secrets." "Deal." Ptolemy emerged from beneath the sofa, tail high, and jumped onto the counter between them. He sniffed at Rory's mug, whiskers twitching with disdain, before settling down into a loaf. Eva reached out and scratched behind his ears. Her other hand rested on the counter, fingers drumming against the scarred wood. Rory set her mug down and covered those fingers with her own. Eva didn't pull away.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.03
79.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
2"very"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"fragmented"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"familiar"
2"fragmented"
3"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount587
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity4.09
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory21
Ptolemy3
Eva24
Heat1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like burnt toast and bergamot tea"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean21
std19.9
cv0.948
sampleLengths
011
151
25
36
44
510
62
715
817
921
108
1151
124
1317
1445
1524
1655
177
1849
194
205
2115
224
2350
249
252
2614
2749
282
2977
3010
3170
324
3328
3445
355
366
375
3815
394
4038
4140
428
432
4457
4513
461
4725
4810
4941
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"were piled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs110
matches(empty)
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"The curry house below hadn't opened yet, but voices drifted up from the street — the clatter of morning deliveries, someone shouting about a parking space."
1"Books covered every surface — stacked on the coffee table, piled beside the sofa, balanced precariously on the windowsill."
2"Her knuckles had ink stains on them — blue and black, from whatever she'd been transcribing before Rory knocked."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount587
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.022146507666098807
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008517887563884156
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean10.96
std9.79
cv0.893
sampleLengths
011
117
225
39
45
56
64
73
83
94
102
1115
129
138
1417
154
165
173
1812
1939
204
217
2210
238
2426
254
267
273
2812
297
302
3111
3219
3316
349
355
362
3738
3811
394
405
4112
423
434
4411
4510
4629
473
486
492
60.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.39823008849557523
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her dark curls were piled"
1"They stared at each other."
2"Her jaw worked."
3"She lowered her voice."
4"She stepped back, pulling the"
5"She moved to the kitchen"
6"She relit the gas."
7"She dropped her hands"
8"She pushed one across the"
9"Her knuckles had ink stains"
10"He sniffed at Rory's mug,"
11"Her other hand rested on"
ratio0.194
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences62
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva stood in the gap,"
2"Her dark curls were piled"
3"They stared at each other."
4"Eva's voice came out flat"
5"Eva didn't move."
6"Her jaw worked."
7"Rory shifted the canvas bag"
8"Eva took a bite of"
9"Heat crawled up Rory's neck."
10"Eva crossed her arms, the"
11"Eva laughed, bitter and sharp"
12"Rory glanced over her shoulder"
13"The curry house below hadn't"
14"She lowered her voice."
15"Eva's expression shifted."
16"The hardness in her eyes"
17"She stepped back, pulling the"
18"Rory slipped past her into"
19"Books covered every surface —"
ratio0.968
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva crossed, the toast dangling from her fingers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva laughed (laugh)"
1"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.121
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.061
82.5531%