Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT02ZHM5Q6NVRT7KXVE9EGJ

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Duration:
10.1s
Cost:
$0.040195
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crash of books and a surprised yelp jolted Aurora from her thoughts as the door to Eva's cramped flat swung open. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed, darting between towering stacks of research notes with a resentful flick of his tail. Aurora’s heart lurched as she met the heterochromatic eyes of the uninvited guest. "Lucien!" The word slipped from her lips, equal parts surprise and veiled accusation. He stood framed in the doorway, an almost ghostly figure in his tailored charcoal suit, one hand resting with casual grace on his ivory-handled cane. Those misaligned eyes—one amber, one black—held a smirk, the kind that had once infuriated and fascinated her in equal measures. "Aurora," he greeted, his voice smooth as silk. "Charming as ever, I see." "What are you doing here?" Her tone was snappish, a defensiveness born from layers of unresolved tension. "Is that a proper welcome for an old acquaintance?" He stepped inside without invitation, shutting the door with a soft click of finality. The air seemed to thrum with unspoken words. "It's my flat," she retorted, trying to ignore the quickening of her pulse. "You can't just barge in." Eva's cluttered space became a battlefield. Scrolls and tomes were the trenches; the few potted plants, innocent bystanders. Lucien moved with the deliberate grace that always made her feel clumsy by comparison. He tapped a small pile of ancient scripts with his cane. "Quite the setup you've got here. Still into the esoteric, I see." She folded her arms across her chest, eyes narrowed. "Cut the idle chit-chat. What do you want?" His gaze sharpened, cat-like in its predatory intensity. "I need your help." A bitter laugh escaped her. "You need my help? That's rich. What happened to the omnipotent Lucien Moreau?" He smirked, unperturbed. "Even a half-demon has his limitations. It's about Evan." The name felled her, stole the breath from her lungs. She'd left that chapter of her life behind—or so she thought. "What does he have to do with anything?" Lucien moved closer, boots silent against the worn hardwood floors. "He's involved in something you need to know about. Dangerous, even by my standards." Aurora's pulse roared in her ears. Memories of Evan—the torment, the manipulation—flashed like lightning behind her eyes. And here stood Lucien, dragging her back into that storm. "Why should I trust you?" she demanded, her voice trembling despite herself. "You don't have to trust me, but you need to believe the threat is real." He paused, the smirk finally fading, replaced by a rare, earnest expression. "I've seen too many lives ruined by this kind of darkness. I can't let it consume you too." A shiver ran down her spine, a mixture of fear and something else—something that felt too much like yearning. He still had that magnetic pull, damn him. Their proximity gnawed at her resolve. His cologne—something dark and heady—filled her nostrils, awakening a cascade of memories better left buried. Her mind screamed for distance, but her body betrayed her, leaning into the heat radiating from him. "Tell me everything," she said at last, voice faltering. Lucien's eyes softened, just for a moment. "Evan has fallen in with a group called the Obsidian Cabal. They're using eldritch artifacts to consolidate power, and they've set their sights on you." "Me?" The word was a disbelieving whisper. "Yes, you." His gaze bore into hers. "They know about your past, your resilience. You’re the key to something they desperately want." Her mind raced. Was it why she felt the relentless pull to the arcane, even after escaping Evan? The pieces clicked into place, an unwanted puzzle she wished she could unsee. “Why are you telling me this?” Her voice was strung tight with suspicion, emotions warring for dominance. “Because you’re not alone in this.” Lucien’s voice lowered, bringing goosebumps to her arms. “Despite our past, I never wanted to see you hurt.” Heart thudding in her chest, she locked eyes with him. Buried beneath the layers of anger and confusion was a trust she’d once given freely. She hated to admit that it still lingered, however faint. “Fine.” Her tone was more resigned than she wished. “But this doesn’t mean I’ve forgiven you.” “I wouldn’t dare ask for that.” His smirk returned, but it didn’t reach his eyes. For a fleeting moment, they stood in silence, the charged air almost suffocating. His nearness disarmed her, and she cursed the rogue flutter of emotions—anger, attraction, hurt—all circling like vultures over carrion. He extended a hand, bridging the gap between their troubled past and uncertain future. “Shall we get started?” Lucien's words held a promise, one she couldn’t quite decipher. Aurora took a steadying breath and placed her hand in his, the touch sparking a thousand unspoken words. She might be many things, but she wasn’t a coward. Whatever the dark path ahead, she would face it head-on. With or without him. The moment stood poised on a knife-edge. Somewhere in the mess of summed tomes and forgotten scribbles, Ptolemy let out a low growl, as if sensing the tempest brewing. Aurora squared her shoulders, refusing to let the past dictate her future, not when so much was at stake. “Lead the way then,” she said, voice firmer than she felt. Lucien's eyes flashed a mixture of relief and something unspoken. He nodded, let their hands fall away, and turned to face the looming shadow of the unknown. As he moved, Aurora followed, a silent promise hanging in the electrified air between them. The past wasn’t resolved, the hurt wasn’t healed, but there was no turning back now. The stakes had never been higher, and neither had the cost of failure. Misguided but inescapable, their paths once again intertwined, and the future—dark and daunting—awaited them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount977
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount977
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"down her spine"
count1
7
word"yearning"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"fleeting"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"looming"
count1
16
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"silk"
2"tension"
3"unspoken"
4"pulse"
5"intensity"
6"down her spine"
7"yearning"
8"magnetic"
9"resolve"
10"whisper"
11"raced"
12"fleeting"
13"silence"
14"charged"
15"looming"
16"resolved"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords960
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount735
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Eva2
Evan2
Lucien7
Heart1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Heart"
5"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite decipher"
1"as if sensing the tempest brewing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount960
matches(empty)
81.20% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"left that chapter"
1"admit that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean24.62
std13.97
cv0.568
sampleLengths
054
113
245
313
417
531
618
743
812
917
1012
1118
1212
1321
148
1524
1627
1712
1845
1927
2038
219
2232
237
2422
2531
2617
2724
2835
2916
3015
3146
3214
3338
344
3548
3611
3757
3827
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences78
ratio0.103
matches
0"Those misaligned eyes—one amber, one black—held a smirk, the kind that had once infuriated and fascinated her in equal measures."
1"Scrolls and tomes were the trenches; the few potted plants, innocent bystanders."
2"She'd left that chapter of her life behind—or so she thought."
3"Memories of Evan—the torment, the manipulation—flashed like lightning behind her eyes."
4"A shiver ran down her spine, a mixture of fear and something else—something that felt too much like yearning."
5"His cologne—something dark and heady—filled her nostrils, awakening a cascade of memories better left buried."
6"His nearness disarmed her, and she cursed the rogue flutter of emotions—anger, attraction, hurt—all circling like vultures over carrion."
7"Misguided but inescapable, their paths once again intertwined, and the future—dark and daunting—awaited them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.029333333333333333
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.31
std5.36
cv0.436
sampleLengths
022
119
213
313
425
520
68
75
817
923
108
1113
125
136
1412
1514
1611
1712
189
198
208
214
225
2313
243
259
2610
2711
288
2910
3014
316
3211
3310
3412
3527
3618
3719
388
396
4015
4117
429
437
4425
457
467
4715
483
4915
94.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5769230769230769
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners45
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Somewhere in the mess of"
ratio0.016
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences64
matches
0"He stood framed in the"
1"he greeted, his voice smooth"
2"Her tone was snappish, a"
3"He stepped inside without invitation,"
4"she retorted, trying to ignore"
5"He tapped a small pile"
6"She folded her arms across"
7"His gaze sharpened, cat-like in"
8"He smirked, unperturbed."
9"She'd left that chapter of"
10"she demanded, her voice trembling"
11"He paused, the smirk finally"
12"He still had that magnetic"
13"Their proximity gnawed at her"
14"His cologne—something dark and heady—filled"
15"Her mind screamed for distance,"
16"she said at last, voice"
17"His gaze bore into hers"
18"Her mind raced."
19"Her voice was strung tight"
ratio0.438
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences64
matches
0"The crash of books and"
1"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed,"
2"Aurora’s heart lurched as she"
3"The word slipped from her"
4"He stood framed in the"
5"Those misaligned eyes—one amber, one"
6"he greeted, his voice smooth"
7"Her tone was snappish, a"
8"He stepped inside without invitation,"
9"The air seemed to thrum"
10"she retorted, trying to ignore"
11"Eva's cluttered space became a"
12"Scrolls and tomes were the"
13"Lucien moved with the deliberate"
14"He tapped a small pile"
15"She folded her arms across"
16"His gaze sharpened, cat-like in"
17"A bitter laugh escaped her."
18"He smirked, unperturbed."
19"The name felled her, stole"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Those misaligned eyes—one amber, one black—held a smirk, the kind that had once infuriated and fascinated her in equal measures."
1"A shiver ran down her spine, a mixture of fear and something else—something that felt too much like yearning."
2"Somewhere in the mess of summed tomes and forgotten scribbles, Ptolemy let out a low growl, as if sensing the tempest brewing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"he greeted, his voice smooth as silk"
1"she retorted, trying to ignore the quickening of her pulse"
2"she demanded, her voice trembling despite herself"
3"He paused, the smirk finally fading, replaced by a rare, earnest expression"
4"she said, voice faltering"
5"she said, voice firmer than she felt"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she retorted (retort)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
76.3584%