| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 30 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx warned again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.033 | | effectiveRatio | 0.033 | |
| 67.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "cautiously" | | 4 | "sweetly" | | 5 | "slightly" | | 6 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1232 | | totalAiIsms | 42 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | | | 29 | | | 30 | | word | "sent shivers down" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "eyebrow" | | 6 | "glistening" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "trepidation" | | 11 | "depths" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "crystalline" | | 14 | "otherworldly" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "desire" | | 17 | "cascading" | | 18 | "stomach" | | 19 | "unreadable" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "down her spine" | | 22 | "fleeting" | | 23 | "loomed" | | 24 | "tension" | | 25 | "raced" | | 26 | "scanning" | | 27 | "palpable" | | 28 | "sense of" | | 29 | "hulking" | | 30 | "sent shivers down" | | 31 | "unwavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "a flicker of unease" | | 1 | "felt a chill" |
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| 81.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1229 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 874 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Rory | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.814 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sharing tales of ancient magic" | | 1 | "silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 27.93 | | std | 15.89 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 34 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares—tall, with twisted limbs and eyes that glowed like embers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 876 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.023972602739726026 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010273972602739725 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.41 | | std | 6.25 | | cv | 0.503 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 78.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.48484848484848486 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 2 | "She glanced around, her heart" | | 3 | "They moved cautiously, the air" | | 4 | "she asked, tilting her head" | | 5 | "she breathed, stepping closer to" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes glimmered" | | 7 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 8 | "She gestured towards the water," | | 9 | "She saw herself standing in" | | 10 | "she gasped, stumbling back" | | 11 | "they whispered, their voice urgent" | | 12 | "It stepped into the clearing," | | 13 | "it growled, its voice a" | | 14 | "she declared, her voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 2.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered as Aurora" | | 1 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 2 | "She paused, taking in the" | | 3 | "The leaves whispered secrets, rustling" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 5 | "The words felt sacred, reverberating" | | 6 | "Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering" | | 7 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet" | | 8 | "Rory raised an eyebrow, her" | | 9 | "Nyx said, their voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers" | | 11 | "A shiver of delight coursed" | | 12 | "Nyx warned, their form solidifying" | | 13 | "Rory echoed, a smirk tugging" | | 14 | "Nyx replied, their tone serious" | | 15 | "Aurora said, standing up and" | | 16 | "She glanced around, her heart" | | 17 | "Nyx replied, gesturing towards a" | | 18 | "They moved cautiously, the air" | | 19 | "The deeper they went, the" |
| | ratio | 0.914 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, a" | | 1 | "Before she could finish, a" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The leaves whispered secrets, rustling softly as if sharing tales of ancient magic." | | 1 | "As they ventured deeper, the ground beneath their feet transformed from soft earth to a carpet of vibrant wildflowers, each petal glistening with dew that spark…" | | 2 | "Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers against a delicate bloom, its colour shifting from deep indigo to a soft pink as she touched it." | | 3 | "Aurora could hear the distant sound of water trickling, a soft melody that beckoned them forward." | | 4 | "Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who remained silent, their form flickering in and out of focus." | | 5 | "It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares—tall, with twisted limbs and eyes that glowed like embers." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 30 | | uselessAdditionCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering in and out of solidity beside her" | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 3 | "Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they stepped closer" | | 4 | "Rory echoed, a smirk tugging at her lips" | | 5 | "Nyx replied, their tone serious" | | 6 | "Nyx warned again, their voice low" | | 7 | "Nyx replied, their eyes narrowing" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her voice melodic and haunting" | | 9 | "she said, her voice firm" | | 10 | "Isolde said, her voice soothing yet firm" | | 11 | "Rory demanded, her pulse quickening" | | 12 | "Isolde replied, her gaze piercing" | | 13 | "they whispered, their voice urgent" | | 14 | "Nyx shouted, their form flickering as they prepared to defend" | | 15 | "she declared, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her insides" | | 16 | "Isolde warned, her gaze unwavering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 24 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Nyx confirmed (confirm)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx warned again (warn)" | | 5 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 6 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 7 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "it growled (growl)" | | 9 | "Nyx shouted (shout)" | | 10 | "she declared (declare)" | | 11 | "Isolde warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |