Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT035N3KBSC84TXTTG1HXGC

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Duration:
33.2s
Cost:
$0.001461

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Fantasy genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the archway, her heart racing. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world behind her faded into a distant memory, swallowed by the ethereal glow of the Fae Grove. She paused, taking in the sight before her. Towering trees, their trunks twisted and gnarled, reached towards a sky that pulsed with hues of lavender and emerald. The leaves whispered secrets, rustling softly as if sharing tales of ancient magic. “Isolde’s grove,” she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper. The words felt sacred, reverberating in the stillness. “More like a fairy tale gone wrong,” Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering in and out of solidity beside her. The Shade’s faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the surroundings, a mix of curiosity and caution. “I can feel the magic here. It’s… alive.” “Alive?” Rory raised an eyebrow, her bright blue eyes darting to the shadows that danced at the edges of the grove. “What do you mean?” “Not just the trees,” Nyx said, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. “The very air hums with energy. It’s intoxicating.” As they ventured deeper, the ground beneath their feet transformed from soft earth to a carpet of vibrant wildflowers, each petal glistening with dew that sparkled like diamonds in the dim light. Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers against a delicate bloom, its colour shifting from deep indigo to a soft pink as she touched it. A shiver of delight coursed through her. “Careful,” Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they stepped closer. “Some of these plants can be… temperamental.” “Temperamental?” Rory echoed, a smirk tugging at her lips. “You mean they bite?” “More like they ensnare,” Nyx replied, their tone serious. “This grove is a sanctuary, but it’s also a trap for the unwary.” “Let’s not get trapped, then,” Aurora said, standing up and brushing off her knees. She glanced around, her heart pounding with a mix of excitement and trepidation. “Where’s Isolde?” “Somewhere in the depths,” Nyx replied, gesturing towards a path that wound between the trees, cloaked in shadows. “She’ll be waiting.” They moved cautiously, the air thick with the scent of blooming flowers and something sweetly decayed. The deeper they went, the more the grove seemed to pulse with life. Aurora could hear the distant sound of water trickling, a soft melody that beckoned them forward. “Do you hear that?” she asked, tilting her head. “Water,” Nyx confirmed, their form flickering as they stepped over a root that twisted like a serpent across the path. “It’s a good sign. Isolde often communes near the stream.” As they rounded a bend, the trees parted to reveal a small clearing. A crystalline stream wound through the grove, its waters shimmering with an otherworldly light. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. The water sparkled like liquid silver, reflecting the vibrant colours of the flora surrounding it. “Beautiful,” she breathed, stepping closer to the water’s edge. “Careful,” Nyx warned again, their voice low. “The waters here are enchanted. They can show you visions, but they can also drown you in your own desires.” “Drown me?” Rory scoffed, though a flicker of unease crept into her voice. “I’m not afraid of a little water.” “Not just water,” Nyx replied, their eyes narrowing. “Desire can be a powerful current.” Before Rory could respond, a figure emerged from the shadows, gliding towards them with an ethereal grace. Isolde Varga, the Seer, stood before them, her silver hair cascading like a waterfall down her back. Her pale lavender eyes glimmered with ancient wisdom, and she wore a gown woven from the very essence of the grove, shifting colours with every movement. “Welcome, seekers,” Isolde said, her voice melodic and haunting. “You have come to the heart of the grove, where the veil between worlds is thin.” “Isolde,” Aurora greeted, her voice steady despite the flutter of nerves in her stomach. “We seek your guidance.” “Guidance?” Isolde echoed, tilting her head slightly. “Or perhaps you seek something more? A glimpse into the future, a taste of power?” Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who remained silent, their form flickering in and out of focus. “We need to know about the Heartstone,” she said, her voice firm. “And the dangers that lie ahead.” Isolde’s expression shifted, a flicker of something unreadable crossing her features. “The Heartstone is a key, a bridge between realms. But it is also a burden, a temptation. It calls to those who seek power, and it can corrupt even the purest of hearts.” “Corrupt?” Aurora felt a chill creep down her spine. “What do you mean?” “Desire is a double-edged sword,” Isolde replied, stepping closer to the stream. She gestured towards the water, where images began to swirl and shift, revealing fleeting glimpses of shadowy figures and dark landscapes. “Look, and see what lies ahead.” Rory leaned closer, her heart racing as the visions danced before her eyes. She saw herself standing in a grand hall, the Heartstone pendant glowing fiercely against her chest. Shadows loomed around her, whispering promises of power and glory. But then the scene shifted, and she saw herself surrounded by darkness, the pendant pulsing with a malevolent energy, drawing her deeper into despair. “No!” she gasped, stumbling back. “That can’t be my future!” “Fate is not set in stone,” Isolde said, her voice soothing yet firm. “You have the power to change your path, but it will not come without sacrifice.” “What kind of sacrifice?” Rory demanded, her pulse quickening. “Only you can answer that,” Isolde replied, her gaze piercing. “But know this: the Heartstone will test you. It will reveal your deepest desires and your darkest fears. You must be prepared to face both.” A sudden rustle in the underbrush broke the tension, and Nyx’s form solidified, their eyes wide. “We’re not alone,” they whispered, their voice urgent. “Something’s coming.” Aurora’s heart raced as she turned, scanning the shadows that loomed at the edge of the grove. The air thickened, a palpable sense of dread settling over them. “Isolde, what—” Before she could finish, a figure emerged from the darkness, a hulking silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around it. It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares—tall, with twisted limbs and eyes that glowed like embers. “Leave this place,” it growled, its voice a low rumble that sent shivers down Aurora’s spine. “The grove is not for mortals.” “Stand back!” Nyx shouted, their form flickering as they prepared to defend. Aurora’s hand instinctively went to the Fae-forged blade at her side, its cold touch grounding her. “We won’t leave,” she declared, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her insides. “Not without answers.” The creature snarled, advancing with a predatory grace. “You dare challenge the guardians of the grove?” “Guardians?” Isolde’s voice cut through the tension, calm and commanding. “You know the price of trespass, creature. Stand down, or face the consequences.” The creature hesitated, its glowing eyes flickering between Isolde and Aurora. The air crackled with tension, the grove holding its breath as the confrontation unfolded. “Choose wisely,” Isolde warned, her gaze unwavering. “The grove protects its own, but it will not suffer fools lightly.” Aurora tightened her grip on the blade, ready for whatever came next. The grove pulsed around them, alive with magic and danger, and she knew that the moment of reckoning had arrived.
total_cost0.00146097

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx warned again [again]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.033
effectiveRatio0.033
67.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"cautiously"
count1
4
adverb"sweetly"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
6
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"very"
3"cautiously"
4"sweetly"
5"slightly"
6"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1232
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"racing"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"glistening"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"trepidation"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count2
13
word"crystalline"
count1
14
word"otherworldly"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"desire"
count2
17
word"cascading"
count1
18
word"stomach"
count1
19
word"unreadable"
count1
20
word"chill"
count1
21
word"down her spine"
count1
22
word"fleeting"
count1
23
word"loomed"
count2
24
word"tension"
count3
25
word"raced"
count1
26
word"scanning"
count1
27
word"palpable"
count1
28
word"sense of"
count1
29
word"hulking"
count1
30
word"sent shivers down"
count1
31
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"racing"
2"pulsed"
3"whisper"
4"scanned"
5"eyebrow"
6"glistening"
7"echoed"
8"sanctuary"
9"pounding"
10"trepidation"
11"depths"
12"pulse"
13"crystalline"
14"otherworldly"
15"flicker"
16"desire"
17"cascading"
18"stomach"
19"unreadable"
20"chill"
21"down her spine"
22"fleeting"
23"loomed"
24"tension"
25"raced"
26"scanning"
27"palpable"
28"sense of"
29"hulking"
30"sent shivers down"
31"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences70
matches
0"a flicker of unease"
1"felt a chill"
81.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1229
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount874
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Fae2
Grove1
Shade1
Nyx11
Rory7
Varga1
Seer1
Isolde10
Heartstone1
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Shade"
2"Nyx"
3"Rory"
4"Seer"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.814
windowScore0.667
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sharing tales of ancient magic"
1"silhouette that seemed to absorb the light around it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1229
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.93
std15.89
cv0.569
sampleLengths
076
118
242
325
422
562
617
713
822
929
1021
1145
129
1330
1448
159
1627
1720
1814
1960
2025
2118
2222
2335
2444
2513
2639
2763
2810
2928
309
3135
3226
3328
342
3540
3622
3712
3834
3916
4023
4125
4219
4332
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares—tall, with twisted limbs and eyes that glowed like embers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023972602739726026
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010273972602739725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.41
std6.25
cv0.503
sampleLengths
012
124
28
319
413
510
68
719
815
98
1021
114
1214
138
1432
1523
167
1710
187
199
204
219
2213
2314
2413
252
2618
273
2816
2913
3016
319
3220
3310
3413
3514
366
3715
389
397
4020
4113
427
438
446
4517
4617
4726
489
4916
78.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48484848484848486
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences70
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"she murmured, her voice barely"
2"She glanced around, her heart"
3"They moved cautiously, the air"
4"she asked, tilting her head"
5"she breathed, stepping closer to"
6"Her pale lavender eyes glimmered"
7"she said, her voice firm"
8"She gestured towards the water,"
9"She saw herself standing in"
10"she gasped, stumbling back"
11"they whispered, their voice urgent"
12"It stepped into the clearing,"
13"it growled, its voice a"
14"she declared, her voice steady"
ratio0.214
2.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences70
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"The moment she crossed the"
2"She paused, taking in the"
3"The leaves whispered secrets, rustling"
4"she murmured, her voice barely"
5"The words felt sacred, reverberating"
6"Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering"
7"The Shade’s faintly glowing violet"
8"Rory raised an eyebrow, her"
9"Nyx said, their voice a"
10"Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers"
11"A shiver of delight coursed"
12"Nyx warned, their form solidifying"
13"Rory echoed, a smirk tugging"
14"Nyx replied, their tone serious"
15"Aurora said, standing up and"
16"She glanced around, her heart"
17"Nyx replied, gesturing towards a"
18"They moved cautiously, the air"
19"The deeper they went, the"
ratio0.914
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Before Rory could respond, a"
1"Before she could finish, a"
ratio0.029
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The leaves whispered secrets, rustling softly as if sharing tales of ancient magic."
1"As they ventured deeper, the ground beneath their feet transformed from soft earth to a carpet of vibrant wildflowers, each petal glistening with dew that spark…"
2"Aurora knelt, brushing her fingers against a delicate bloom, its colour shifting from deep indigo to a soft pink as she touched it."
3"Aurora could hear the distant sound of water trickling, a soft melody that beckoned them forward."
4"Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who remained silent, their form flickering in and out of focus."
5"It stepped into the clearing, revealing a creature of nightmares—tall, with twisted limbs and eyes that glowed like embers."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"she murmured, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"Nyx replied, their silhouette flickering in and out of solidity beside her"
2"Nyx said, their voice a whisper carried on the wind"
3"Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they stepped closer"
4"Rory echoed, a smirk tugging at her lips"
5"Nyx replied, their tone serious"
6"Nyx warned again, their voice low"
7"Nyx replied, their eyes narrowing"
8"Isolde said, her voice melodic and haunting"
9"she said, her voice firm"
10"Isolde said, her voice soothing yet firm"
11"Rory demanded, her pulse quickening"
12"Isolde replied, her gaze piercing"
13"they whispered, their voice urgent"
14"Nyx shouted, their form flickering as they prepared to defend"
15"she declared, her voice steady despite the fear clawing at her insides"
16"Isolde warned, her gaze unwavering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"Nyx warned again (warn)"
5"she gasped (gasp)"
6"Rory demanded (demand)"
7"they whispered (whisper)"
8"it growled (growl)"
9"Nyx shouted (shout)"
10"she declared (declare)"
11"Isolde warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
76.0772%