Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT037CMZZWHFMHFTK6881FT

Run Details

Duration:
57.4s
Cost:
$0.001108
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy thunk. Rory pulled the door open, a complaint about forgotten keys already forming on her lips. It died there. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing, the smell of rain and expensive cologne cutting through the curry-scented stairwell. He looked like a piece of the city’s night had broken off and climbed the stairs — charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair slicked back, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane. The amber and black of his eyes fixed on her, unreadable. For a heartbeat, neither moved. The distant honk of Brick Lane traffic and the drip of water from his coat were the only sounds. “You,” she finally said. The word was flat, a stone dropped into still water. “Aurora.” His voice was the same — a low, smooth baritone that felt like it should belong to a jazz singer, not a half-demon fixer. He didn’t smile. “May I come in?” “No.” He didn’t react to the refusal. His gaze moved past her, taking in the chaotic interior of Eva’s flat — the towers of books threatening to topple, the scrolls weighted down by mugs, the single tabby cat observing from the top of a filing cabinet. “It’s not a social call.” “That makes it worse.” She made no move to step aside. Her left hand, the one with the small crescent scar, tightened on the edge of the door. “How did you even find this place?” “It’s my job to find things. And people.” He shifted his weight, a barely perceptible movement. “Eva is in trouble.” The air left Rory’s lungs. All the old defences — the anger, the coldness she’d practiced in the mirror after leaving him — crumbled. “What kind of trouble?” “The kind that requires a conversation inside, with the door closed.” His heterochromatic eyes held hers. “Please.” That ‘please’ did it. He never said please. She stepped back, letting the door swing inward, and he moved past her into the cramped space. He seemed too large for it, his presence making the bookshelves feel closer, the ceiling lower. He didn’t take off his coat. Ptolemy the cat jumped down and wound himself around Lucien’s polished shoes, purring. “Traitor,” Rory muttered, shutting the door and reactivating all three deadbolts. The finality of the clicks echoed. She turned, crossing her arms over her chest. “Talk.” Lucien leaned his cane against Eva’s desk, his long fingers tracing the spine of a leather-bound tome. He wasn’t looking at her. “She’s been asking questions in places she shouldn’t. Digging into lineages. Specifically, mine.” “Why would she do that?” Now he looked at her. “I believe you know why.” The memory was a physical thing between them, a third person in the room. A rainy night six months ago, in the back room of Silas’s bar. His mouth on hers, his hands in her hair, the taste of whisky and something darker. And then the fight. Her questions about his father, his realm, his demonic heritage. His stone wall of silence. Her walking out. “She’s trying to protect me,” Rory said, her voice quiet. “She’s painting a target on her back. And by extension, on yours.” He finally unbuttoned his coat, but didn’t remove it. “There are entities who monitor such inquiries. They are not academic. They are… proprietorial. They consider certain bloodlines their business.” “And yours is one of them.” “My father’s lineage from Avaros is. Eva’s research tripped a wire. They’ve identified her as a practitioner prying into restricted lore. They won’t approach her directly, not here. They’ll send a collector.” Rory’s stomach turned to ice. “A what?” “A creature that specialises in acquiring troublesome individuals. It will take her, and all her research, and it will make her disappear into a place not on any map.” His tone was clinical, but she saw the tension in the line of his jaw. “It’s already in the city.” “You’ve seen it?” “I’ve felt it. Like a change in atmospheric pressure. It’s hunting.” She uncrossed her arms, her palms slick. “And you’re here why? A warning? After all this time, you just show up to deliver a warning?” He took a step toward her, and the distance in the cluttered room vanished. She could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the perfect cut of his suit, the way his amber eye seemed to catch the lamplight while the black one absorbed it. “I’m here because you are connected to her. That makes you part of the hunt. I couldn’t…” He stopped, his usual eloquence failing. “You couldn’t what, Lucien?” “I couldn’t let that happen.” The words were rough, stripped bare. The air crackled. All the unsaid things crowded in, louder than his warning. The attraction was still there, a live wire she’d never managed to cut. It hummed in the space between their bodies. But so was the hurt, sharp and fresh. “You left,” she said. The accusation hung there. “You asked for truths I couldn’t give.” “I asked for trust!” “They are the same thing!” His composure slipped, a hairline fracture. He looked away, collecting himself. When he spoke again, it was measured. “My truths are dangerous. Knowing them is a liability. I was… trying to keep you clear of that.” “By shutting me out.” “By drawing a line.” He met her gaze again, and the vulnerability she saw there was new, and terrifying. “I failed. Eva is across that line now. And so, inevitably, are you. My methods were flawed.” An apology. From Lucien Moreau. Rory felt the ground tilt. Ptolemy meowed, breaking the spell. “What do we do?” she asked, the fight draining out of her, replaced by a cold, focused fear for her friend. “We find her first. She’s not at her usual haunts. I assume you have ideas.” Rory nodded, her mind clicking into the practical gear. “There’s a reading room at the Bishopsgate Library she uses. And a contact in Soho, a talisman seller. She might have gone to ground with him.” “Then we start there.” He reached for his cane. “We should go now. The night is the collector’s favoured time.” “We?” He paused, his hand on the ivory. “You know her patterns better than I do. And you are, whether I like it or not, already involved. It’s safer if you’re with me.” “Safer.” She gave a short, humourless laugh. “Being with you has never been safe, Luc.” The old nickname slipped out, unbidden. His eyes darkened, the amber one glowing faintly. For a second, she thought he might reach for her. His fingers flexed on the cane handle. “No,” he agreed, his voice a low murmur. “It hasn’t. But tonight, it is the least worst option. For Eva.” He was right. Every instinct screamed at her to send him away, to handle this alone, to avoid the vortex of him. But Eva was out there, and Lucien knew this shadow world. Her choice was no choice at all. “Give me two minutes.” She turned toward the bedroom to grab her boots and a jacket. As she passed him, his free hand shot out, not to grab her, but to hover near her arm. She stopped, the heat of his proximity like a brand. “Aurora.” Her full name, this time. “What happened before… I regret the pain it caused you.” She didn’t look at him. She stared at the bookshelf, at the chaotic, fragile normalcy of Eva’s life. “Regret doesn’t fix it.” “I know,” he said, and the raw honesty in it made her chest ache. “But it’s all I have to offer. For now.” She nodded once, a sharp, mechanical movement, and continued to the bedroom, closing the door softly behind her. She leaned against it, pressing her scarred wrist to her forehead, listening to the silence of the other room. He was still out there. The past was unlocked, the door opened. And somewhere in the London night, something was hunting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1332
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"normalcy"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"chaotic"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
4"tracing"
5"silence"
6"stomach"
7"tension"
8"perfect"
9"measured"
10"normalcy"
11"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
78.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1334
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount887
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Brick1
Lane1
Eva4
Rory7
Lucien5
Silas1
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Silas"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a piece of the city’s night h"
1"felt like it should belong to a jazz si"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.75
wordCount1334
matches
0"not to grab her, but to hover near her arm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.7
std17.48
cv0.708
sampleLengths
027
164
224
314
432
51
650
735
820
928
1017
1160
1226
1335
145
1510
1665
1710
1841
196
2032
217
2249
233
2411
2525
2665
276
284
2911
3042
318
327
334
3441
354
3636
3715
3821
3915
4035
4120
421
4332
4415
4531
4620
4740
4816
4929
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"was unlocked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs149
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was hunting"
51.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences125
ratio0.032
matches
0"He looked like a piece of the city’s night had broken off and climbed the stairs — charcoal suit immaculate, platinum hair slicked back, one hand resting on the ivory head of his cane."
1"“Aurora.” His voice was the same — a low, smooth baritone that felt like it should belong to a jazz singer, not a half-demon fixer."
2"His gaze moved past her, taking in the chaotic interior of Eva’s flat — the towers of books threatening to topple, the scrolls weighted down by mugs, the single tabby cat observing from the top of a filing cabinet."
3"All the old defences — the anger, the coldness she’d practiced in the mirror after leaving him — crumbled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount570
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.02982456140350877
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.67
std7.91
cv0.741
sampleLengths
09
115
23
319
434
511
65
719
84
910
1025
113
124
131
146
1539
165
1711
1817
197
2016
214
225
2319
244
2516
261
274
284
2917
3016
316
3213
3311
346
358
361
3717
385
3913
405
415
425
4314
4413
4516
464
4710
485
493
51.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.344
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences86
matches
0"It died there."
1"He looked like a piece"
2"she finally said"
3"His voice was the same"
4"He didn’t smile."
5"He didn’t react to the"
6"His gaze moved past her,"
7"She made no move to"
8"Her left hand, the one"
9"He shifted his weight, a"
10"His heterochromatic eyes held hers"
11"He never said please."
12"She stepped back, letting the"
13"He seemed too large for"
14"He didn’t take off his"
15"She turned, crossing her arms"
16"He wasn’t looking at her."
17"His mouth on hers, his"
18"Her questions about his father,"
19"His stone wall of silence."
ratio0.57
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences86
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"It died there."
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"He looked like a piece"
5"The amber and black of"
6"The distant honk of Brick"
7"she finally said"
8"The word was flat, a"
9"His voice was the same"
10"He didn’t smile."
11"He didn’t react to the"
12"His gaze moved past her,"
13"She made no move to"
14"Her left hand, the one"
15"He shifted his weight, a"
16"The air left Rory’s lungs."
17"His heterochromatic eyes held hers"
18"He never said please."
19"She stepped back, letting the"
ratio0.86
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Now he looked at her."
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She leaned against it, pressing her scarred wrist to her forehead, listening to the silence of the other room."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, her voice quiet"
1"he agreed, his voice a low murmur"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.071
81.4649%