| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 25 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said aloud [aloud]" | | 1 | "Finally he turned [Finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.391 | | leniency | 0.781 | | rawRatio | 0.08 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 95.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1138 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1138 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "eyebrow" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 28 | | totalWords | 1129 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "click" | | 1 | "protect" | | 2 | "nothing" | | 3 | "I" | | 4 | "He’d taken that hit for her." | | 5 | "you" | | 6 | "you" | | 7 | "‘Just because you’re half monster doesn’t mean you have to become one" | | 8 | "she" | | 9 | "nothing" | | 10 | "shink" | | 11 | "Unhinged" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.80% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 653 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Listened | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 8 | | Rory | 14 | | Etched | 1 | | St | 1 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.428 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 77 | | mean | 14.66 | | std | 14.52 | | cv | 0.99 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 57 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts were all thrown—she’d checked twice after the last incident—but something in the way the wood groaned against its frame told her the space behind the door wasn’t empty." | | 1 | "A soft *click*—the fridge shutting." | | 2 | "His amber eye caught the light; the black one didn’t." | | 3 | "The flat smelled of old paper, cumin from the curry house below, and the faint metallic tang of ink—Eva’s latest obsession with summoning sigils drawn in iron gall." | | 4 | "That was the worst part—like calm was something he wore, like the tailored charcoal suits that never wrinkled, no matter the chaos." | | 5 | "“You don’t get to decide what’s necessary for me.” She stepped forward, close enough to see the faint scar along his jawline—a wound from a soul-sickle, the kind only demons can wield." | | 6 | "Etched into his skin—black, pulsing faintly—was a sigil." | | 7 | "That night came back—the smoke, the dying wards, the way his father’s blood had seeped into the cracks of the pavement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 661 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03328290468986384 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006051437216338881 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 8.12 | | std | 7.77 | | cv | 0.957 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 61.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4028776978417266 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 92.59% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Always better to assume." | | 1 | "Finally, he turned" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 75.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice low" | | 1 | "She dropped the keys into" | | 2 | "she said aloud, buying time" | | 3 | "He didn’t turn." | | 4 | "He poured a second cup." | | 5 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 6 | "It never did." | | 7 | "His eyebrow lifted." | | 8 | "His voice didn’t rise" | | 9 | "It never did." | | 10 | "He reached into his coat" | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched." | | 12 | "She didn’t touch it." | | 13 | "She stepped forward, close enough" | | 14 | "*He’d taken that hit for" | | 15 | "He tapped the photograph" | | 16 | "He turned his wrist, pushed" | | 17 | "She’d seen it carved into" | | 18 | "She looked at his face." | | 19 | "His voice dropped, roughened" |
| | ratio | 0.361 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain rattled like a" | | 1 | "Rory paused, hand still on" | | 2 | "The deadbolts were all thrown—she’d" | | 3 | "she called, voice low" | | 4 | "She dropped the keys into" | | 5 | "she said aloud, buying time" | | 6 | "A soft *click*—the fridge shutting." | | 7 | "Someone had been inside long" | | 8 | "Rory yanked the door open." | | 9 | "Lucien stood at Eva’s kitchen" | | 10 | "Steam curled around his face," | | 11 | "He didn’t turn." | | 12 | "Rory said, leaving the knife" | | 13 | "He poured a second cup." | | 14 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 15 | "It never did." | | 16 | "Rory stepped inside and kicked" | | 17 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 18 | "Lucien pushed the second cup" | | 19 | "Silence stretched, thin and sharp." |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could speak, the" | | 1 | "As if the wood had" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 16 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.234 | | leniency | 0.469 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.031 | |