Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT03EC7KKHRSRM86X3YEKRV

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Duration:
1m 16s
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$0.008755
Provider:
Together

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a rhythmic, hollow plinking sound that echoed off the tiled walls of the abandoned Tube station. The air hung heavy and still, smelling of damp earth, copper, and something acrid that scratched at the back of the throat. Harlow Quinn ducked under the crime scene tape, her leather watch catching the harsh glare of the portable work lights set up near the tracks. She ignored the uniformed officer nodding at her perimeter, her focus fixed on the small group huddled around a figure slumped against an old advertising hoarding. The poster, peeling and faded, advertised holidays in Brighton—a stark contrast to the corpse cooling in the shadows. She adjusted the cuffs of her jacket, standing tall among the crouching men. Her sharp jawline tightened as she took in the scene. "Detective Quinn. Glad you could make it." DS Thorne straightened up, clicking his pen shut. He looked exhausted, his tie loosened and his shirt stained with sweat. He gestured to the body with a weary hand. "Victim is male, mid-thirties. No ID yet, but the suit looks expensive. Custom tailored. Looks like a robbery gone wrong, or maybe a deal turned sour. We found the wallet empty about ten yards down the platform." Harlow stepped closer, her eyes scanning the grime-covered floor. She didn't kneel immediately. "Wrong." Thorne blinked, rubbing a hand over his face. "Sorry?" "It's not a robbery." She walked a slow circle around the body, her movements precise, military. The victim lay on his back, arms spread as if welcoming the darkness. His chest was a ruin of dark fabric and congealed blood. "Look at the pockets, Thorne. They’re turned out, but the fabric isn't torn. A desperate junkie or a panicked thief rips, they don't perform a delicate extraction." She crouched down, resting her weight on her heels. She leaned in close to the victim’s face. The eyes were open, staring up at the ceiling of the tunnel with an expression of utter serenity. No fear. No pain. Just acceptance. " Besides, who robs someone in a ghost station? You need a bone token just to get the gate open down here. Our vic either came down here to meet someone who knows the way, or he knew the way himself." Thorne sighed, pulling out his notebook. "We're thinking gang related. Maybe a initiation, or a warning. There's that new clique moving into Camden, dealing that weird drug mix. Blue Lotus, or something." "Blue Lycaeum." Harlow corrected him without looking up. She reached into a pocket and snapped on a pair of latex gloves. "And they don't kill like this." She hovered her hands over the victim's chest. The wound was a single, puncture-like tear directly over the heart. It was small, almost delicate, surrounded by bruising that looked like the petals of a flower. "Where's the weapon?" she asked. "CSU hasn't found it yet. Probably tossed in the river or carried out by the perp." "There's no exit wound. No blood spatter on the wall behind him. If someone stabbed him with enough force to pierce the heart, there would be arterial spray. Here?" She pointed to the pristine tiles. "Nothing. It’s like the blood was just drained out of him." Harlow shifted her attention to the ground beside the victim. Something glinted in the dirt, partially obscured by a discarded newspaper. She reached for it, brushing away the grime. It was a compass. Small, brass casing with a heavy patina of verdigris. The face was etched with intricate sigils that seemed to shift in the uneven light. "Looks like trash," Thorne said, peering over her shoulder. Harlow turned the object over in her palm. The leather strap was broken, the jagged edges suggesting it had been ripped from the victim's wrist. She held it flat. The needle spun wildly, lazily rotating in a full circle before snapping violently to the left. It wasn't pointing North. It was pointing directly at the dead man's chest. "It's not trash." She stood up, slipping the compass into her own pocket. "It's evidence. Have CSU sweep the area for particulates. Specifically, look for sulfur or anything that resembles ash." "Ash? In a Tube station?" "Do it." Harlow walked to the edge of the platform, looking down into the dark maw of the tunnel. A flicker of movement caught her eye—shadows that didn't align with the placement of the lights. She rubbed her thumb over the brass casing in her pocket, the metal cold against her skin. "You think this is supernatural, don't you?" Thorne’s voice dropped low, conspiratorial but uneasy. "Like the Morris case." Harlow turned slowly. Her face was a mask of calm, but her brown eyes were hard. "I think the evidence doesn't support a stabbing. I think the lack of a weapon, the location, and the victim's demeanor suggest something we aren't trained to handle." She walked back to the body, crouching one last time. She lifted the victim's left hand. The fingernails were blue, but not from lack of oxygen. It was a stain, like ink. "Check his hands for residue. And get me the coroner's report the second it lands. If there's no physical weapon recovered, we aren't looking for a man with a knife." A rustling sound echoed from the stairwell leading to the street level. Both detectives looked up. A figure hesitated in the shadows of the archway, clutching a worn leather satchel tight against her chest. Eva Kowalski stepped into the light of the work lamps, her curly red hair a chaotic halo around her face. She adjusted her round glasses, her eyes darting from Thorne to Harlow. "I... I was told this is where the incident was reported." Her voice trembled slightly, and she tucked a lock of hair behind her ear in a sharp, nervous gesture. Thorne stepped forward, his hand moving to his belt. "This is a restricted crime scene, miss. You need to leave." Harlow held up a hand, stopping him. She stared at Eva. "How did you get past the cordon, Eva?" "I know the night watchman. He's... a friend of a friend." Eva swallowed hard, her gaze fixed on the body. She took a hesitant step closer. "Is that him? The courier?" "Courier?" Harlow asked. "I was supposed to meet him. He had an item for me to authenticate. From the Market." Eva looked down at her satchel. "He was late. He’s never late." Harlow felt the weight of the compass in her pocket. "What kind of item, Eva?" "Old. Dangerous." Eva looked up, her green eyes wide and serious. "He said he was being followed. Not by people. By... something else. Something that moves between the lights." Thorne laughed, a short, sharp sound. "Right. Monsters in the Tube. We've got a real job to do here, miss. Please leave." "He's not wrong, Detective." Harlow’s voice cut through the air. She looked at the body again, the single puncture wound, the peaceful expression. The shadow compass pointing at the dead man. "Thorne, secure the perimeter. No one comes in or out without my say-so." She turned to Eva, gesturing for her to step away from the prying eyes of the uniformed officers. "Tell me exactly what this courier was bringing you. And don't leave anything out." Eva glanced at the blood on the tiles, then back to Harlow. She took a deep breath. "It was a key. A bone key. He said it opened a door that shouldn't exist." Harlow nodded slowly. She pulled the brass compass from her pocket and held it out. The needle spun and locked onto Eva's satchel. "I think I found the other half of the delivery."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice trembled slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.55
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.05
84.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"maw"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"echoed"
2"stark"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"pristine"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"maw"
9"flicker"
10"chaotic"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1284
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount805
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn1
Brighton1
Thorne8
Harlow14
North1
Kowalski1
Eva8
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Thorne"
2"Harlow"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places
0"Brighton"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.5
34.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if welcoming the darkness"
1"looked like the petals of a flower"
2"sigils that seemed to shift in the uneven light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1284
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean22.93
std13.74
cv0.599
sampleLengths
044
169
223
37
429
537
613
71
89
94
1036
1127
1241
1341
1432
1527
1635
175
1816
1946
2029
2128
229
2329
2429
2531
265
272
2850
2918
3016
3128
3232
3330
3434
3532
3630
3720
3811
398
4031
413
4229
4310
445
4529
4622
4710
4821
4913
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"was etched"
1"was broken"
2"been ripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs139
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"was pointing"
89.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences107
ratio0.019
matches
0"The poster, peeling and faded, advertised holidays in Brighton—a stark contrast to the corpse cooling in the shadows."
1"A flicker of movement caught her eye—shadows that didn't align with the placement of the lights."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount808
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02599009900990099
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013613861386138614
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12
std7.94
cv0.662
sampleLengths
022
122
225
326
418
513
610
77
88
912
109
1137
129
134
141
158
161
174
1812
1913
2011
2127
229
238
2418
252
262
272
2841
296
3026
318
3213
336
348
3511
3616
375
3816
3935
4011
4110
4211
438
444
459
4615
479
488
4917
63.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4205607476635514
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
41.62% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences74
matches
0"She ignored the uniformed officer"
1"She adjusted the cuffs of"
2"Her sharp jawline tightened as"
3"He looked exhausted, his tie"
4"He gestured to the body"
5"She didn't kneel immediately."
6"She walked a slow circle"
7"His chest was a ruin"
8"She crouched down, resting her"
9"She leaned in close to"
10"She reached into a pocket"
11"She hovered her hands over"
12"It was small, almost delicate,"
13"She pointed to the pristine"
14"She reached for it, brushing"
15"It was a compass."
16"She held it flat."
17"It wasn't pointing North."
18"It was pointing directly at"
19"She stood up, slipping the"
ratio0.446
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences74
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere in the"
1"The air hung heavy and"
2"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
3"She ignored the uniformed officer"
4"The poster, peeling and faded,"
5"She adjusted the cuffs of"
6"Her sharp jawline tightened as"
7"DS Thorne straightened up, clicking"
8"He looked exhausted, his tie"
9"He gestured to the body"
10"Harlow stepped closer, her eyes"
11"She didn't kneel immediately."
12"Thorne blinked, rubbing a hand"
13"She walked a slow circle"
14"The victim lay on his"
15"His chest was a ruin"
16"She crouched down, resting her"
17"She leaned in close to"
18"The eyes were open, staring"
19"Thorne sighed, pulling out his"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a rhythmic, hollow plinking sound that echoed off the tiled walls of the abandoned Tube station."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Thorne’s voice dropped, conspiratorial but uneasy"
1"Eva looked up, her green eyes wide and serious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.05
77.9945%