Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT03EF78MBHPZAQ72FSRCKQ

Run Details

Duration:
37.0s
Cost:
$0.004463
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against the pavement as Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the police tape. Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair glistened with moisture. She checked her worn leather watch. 3:17 AM. "Quinn. About time." DS Miller shifted from foot to foot, his breath forming clouds in the cold night air. Harlow scanned the exterior of the abandoned Tube station entrance. Camden's nightlife pulsed blocks away, but here, silence pressed down like a physical weight. "What've we got?" "Unusual one." Miller motioned toward the dark tunnel mouth. "Male victim, mid-thirties. No ID. Uniform found him during a routine patrol of abandoned tunnels." Harlow stepped into the station. The air grew thick and stale. Emergency lights cast long shadows across cracked tiles. She moved with military precision, her sharp jawline tightening as she took in the scene. The body lay sprawled near the ticket counter. His arms outstretched, face frozen in an expression of terror. His clothes—expensive suit—were pristine except for the dark stain spreading across his chest. Miller shone his torch on the victim. "Single stab wound to the heart. No weapon found. Wallet and phone are missing. Looks like a robbery gone wrong." Harlow knelt beside the body. Something caught her eye—a small circular indentation on the victim's right hand, between thumb and forefinger. "Robbery?" "Open and shut case. Probably some junkie looking for cash." Harlow stood and walked the perimeter. Her gaze swept over discarded tickets, graffiti covering the walls, the empty kiosks. Nothing seemed out of place except— "Who found the body?" "PC Davies. He was doing a sweep of the area after reports of homeless persons sheltering here." "Where is he now?" "Outside. Giving his statement." Harlow approached the far wall. She ran her fingers over a section where the paint appeared fresher than the surrounding graffiti. Behind her, Miller sighed. "See something, Quinn?" "Maybe." She pressed against the wall. A section gave way slightly, revealing a hidden door. "This wasn't a robbery, Miller." Miller joined her, frowning. "What are you talking about?" "The victim's right hand. Circular mark. Like he was holding something small and round. Something important to him." Harlow pointed to the victim's still form. "And his suit—too expensive for a random robbery victim to be wandering around abandoned tunnels." "Maybe he was lost." "In a suit and tie? At 3 AM?" Harlow shook her head. "He came here for a reason." A new voice cut through the silence. "Or he was brought here." Both detectives turned. Eva Kowalski stood at the entrance to the main station, her curly red hair escaping its pins, round glasses perched on her nose. She clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest. "Eva?" Harlow raised an eyebrow. "What are you doing here?" "The British Museum's archives have records of this place. I was researching when I heard about the police activity." She adjusted her glasses, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. "This station wasn't just abandoned. It was sealed for a reason." Miller stepped forward. "And you are?" "Dr. Eva Kowalski. Occult researcher." She approached the body, careful not to disturb anything. "May I?" Harlow nodded. Eva knelt, her freckled complexion pale in the emergency lighting. She examined the victim's hands, the wound, the position of the body. "See these symbols?" Eva pointed to faint markings on the floor around the victim. "They're protective sigils. Someone was trying to contain something." Miller scoffed. "You're telling me this was some kind of ritual killing?" "Not exactly." Eva opened her satchel and pulled out a small brass compass with a verdigris patina. The face was etched with protective sigils. "This is a Veil Compass. Points to supernatural rifts. The victim had one." Harlow's eyes narrowed. "How do you know?" "The indentation on his hand matches the base precisely. And—" She reached into the victim's jacket pocket, pulling out a small bone token. "This is the entry token for the Veil Market." "The what?" Miller asked. "A hidden supernatural black market that operates beneath Camden. Moves locations every full moon. Tonight was the full moon." Eva stood, brushing dust from her trousers. "The victim wasn't robbed. He was silenced." Harlow paced the small area. "So he came to the market, had the Compass, and someone killed him for it?" "Or for what he found with it." Eva held the Compass out. The needle spun wildly before pointing toward the hidden door Harlow had discovered. "There's something through there. Something powerful." Miller rubbed his temples. "This is insane. You're suggesting supernatural elements in a straightforward murder investigation." Harlow stopped pacing. "What if I told you three years ago, DS Morris died under similar circumstances? In an abandoned building with symbols like these?" Miller's face paled. "That was ruled as an accidental collapse. Structure failure." "I never believed that." Harlow's voice dropped. "Morris was investigating something. Something that got him killed. This victim has the same marks, the same symbols." Eva stepped closer. "The Veil Market deals in more than just enchanted goods. They trade information too. Forbidden knowledge. If your partner discovered something dangerous—" "He would have tried to expose it." Harlow finished. She turned to the hidden door. "We need to see what's through there." Miller blocked her path. "We need a warrant. Proper procedure." "There's no time." Harlow pressed against the door again. It creaked open, revealing a narrow staircase descending into darkness. "If whoever did this is still down there—" "The Compass is reacting strongly." Eva held it out. The needle vibrated, pointing straight down the stairs. "Whatever's down there, it's active now." Miller hesitated, then nodded. "I'll call for backup. You two—don't do anything stupid until I get back." Harlow and Eva waited until he disappeared around the corner. Then they approached the staircase. "You knew about this place," Harlow said. "I suspected. The records mentioned it, but I couldn't access the restricted archives without proper authorization." Eva adjusted her glasses. "Until now." Harlow pulled her torch from her belt. "After what happened to Morris, I promised myself I'd find the truth. No matter where it led." The stairs descended into darkness. Water dripped somewhere in the distance. Eva gripped her satchel tighter. "If the legends are true, the Market only appears to those who know how to look. And it doesn't like intruders." Harlow flicked on her torch. "Good thing we're not shopping."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"pristine"
5"eyebrow"
6"etched"
7"structure"
8"vibrated"
9"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1060
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Miller sighed."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount537
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.91
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow21
Quinn1
Miller12
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared fresher than the surrounding graffiti"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1060
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean18.93
std10.46
cv0.553
sampleLengths
031
119
224
33
424
534
631
727
821
91
1010
1125
124
1317
144
154
1625
173
1820
199
2040
214
2218
2312
2435
2510
2643
276
2816
2924
3023
3112
3237
337
3432
354
3633
3720
3831
3916
4025
4112
4225
4325
4422
4510
4627
4723
4817
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
68.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences115
ratio0.026
matches
0"His clothes—expensive suit—were pristine except for the dark stain spreading across his chest."
1"Something caught her eye—a small circular indentation on the victim's right hand, between thumb and forefinger."
2"Nothing seemed out of place except—"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount542
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.016605166051660517
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.007380073800738007
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.22
std6.12
cv0.664
sampleLengths
015
18
26
32
419
510
614
73
89
915
105
116
128
1315
148
1510
1613
177
1820
195
2016
211
2210
236
2413
256
264
2717
284
294
305
3116
324
333
346
359
365
374
385
3925
4015
414
4212
436
447
455
463
4723
489
495
75.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4608695652173913
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners53
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then they approached the staircase."
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
1"She checked her worn leather"
2"She moved with military precision,"
3"His arms outstretched, face frozen"
4"His clothes—expensive suit—were pristine except"
5"Her gaze swept over discarded"
6"She ran her fingers over"
7"She pressed against the wall"
8"She clutched a worn leather"
9"She adjusted her glasses, tucking"
10"She approached the body, careful"
11"She examined the victim's hands,"
12"She reached into the victim's"
13"She turned to the hidden"
14"It creaked open, revealing a"
ratio0.224
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences67
matches
0"The rain lashed against the"
1"Her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair"
2"She checked her worn leather"
3"DS Miller shifted from foot"
4"Harlow scanned the exterior of"
5"Camden's nightlife pulsed blocks away,"
6"Miller motioned toward the dark"
7"Harlow stepped into the station."
8"The air grew thick and"
9"Emergency lights cast long shadows"
10"She moved with military precision,"
11"The body lay sprawled near"
12"His arms outstretched, face frozen"
13"His clothes—expensive suit—were pristine except"
14"Miller shone his torch on"
15"Harlow knelt beside the body."
16"Something caught her eye—a small"
17"Harlow stood and walked the"
18"Her gaze swept over discarded"
19"Nothing seemed out of place"
ratio0.97
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"DS Miller shifted, his breath forming clouds in the cold night air"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"Harlow pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.129
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.065
84.0437%