Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT03EHA70K4XQ6YBQ4WCZ13

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Duration:
29.7s
Cost:
$0.001150

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove. A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating. She paused, glancing back at Nyx, who lingered in the shadows, their form flickering like a candle in the wind. “Are you coming?” Rory called, her voice steady despite the flutter of excitement in her chest. Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly, their silhouette shifting as they stepped forward. “This place breathes with secrets. Tread carefully.” Rory nodded, her heart racing. She turned back to the grove, where the sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled patterns on the ground. The colors were more vibrant here, the greens deeper, the flowers bursting with hues she had never seen. A cluster of blue blossoms swayed gently, their petals shimmering like tiny sapphires. “Look at that,” she whispered, kneeling to examine the flowers. “They’re beautiful.” “Beauty can be deceiving,” Nyx murmured, their voice a soft whisper that seemed to echo in the stillness. “Not all that glitters is harmless.” Rory straightened, brushing dirt from her knees. “You sound like my mother.” “Wise words, then.” Nyx’s lips curled into a shadowy smile. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair flowing like a river of moonlight. “The Grove holds many wonders, but also many trials. We must remain vigilant.” Her pale lavender eyes scanned the surroundings, as if reading the very essence of the place. “Trials?” Rory raised an eyebrow, a mix of curiosity and apprehension swirling within her. “What kind of trials?” “Every step we take may lead us closer to truth or deeper into illusion,” Isolde replied cryptically, her voice melodic yet laced with an undercurrent of caution. “Trust your instincts.” Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who shrugged, their form flickering again. “Instincts can be misleading.” “Great,” Rory muttered, rolling her eyes. “Just what I needed to hear.” They ventured deeper into the grove, the air thickening with an otherworldly energy. The trees loomed tall, their trunks twisted and gnarled, as if they had witnessed centuries of secrets. A soft rustling echoed from above, and Rory looked up to see a flock of iridescent birds flitting through the branches, their wings leaving trails of shimmering light. “Did you see that?” she exclaimed, pointing. “They’re like living jewels!” “Fae creatures,” Isolde said, her voice low. “They are drawn to the magic of this place. But do not approach them carelessly.” Rory nodded, her pulse quickening. The grove felt alive, pulsing with energy. She could almost hear the whispers of the trees, secrets carried on the wind. As they walked, the ground beneath her feet shifted, the soft earth giving way to patches of moss that felt like velvet. “Is it just me, or is time different here?” Rory asked, glancing at Nyx. “Time bends in the Grove,” Nyx replied, their voice barely above a whisper. “An hour here may stretch into days outside.” “Great,” Rory muttered again, her mind racing with possibilities. “Just what I need—more time to get lost.” They continued, the path winding like a serpent through the trees. Suddenly, a low hum filled the air, resonating deep within Rory’s chest. She paused, tilting her head to listen. The sound grew louder, a symphony of notes that seemed to dance around them. “What is that?” she asked, her eyes wide. “Music of the Grove,” Isolde said, her expression distant. “It calls to those who seek.” “Seek what?” Rory pressed, her curiosity piqued. “Answers,” Isolde replied, her gaze fixed on a distant glimmer. “Or perhaps something more.” Rory followed her gaze, spotting a faint light flickering between the trees. It pulsed rhythmically, drawing her closer. She stepped forward, the hum growing louder, wrapping around her like a warm embrace. “Wait,” Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they reached out. “We should be cautious.” But Rory felt an irresistible pull. She moved toward the light, her heart racing with anticipation. As she approached, the source of the glow revealed itself—a small clearing bathed in ethereal light, where a crystal-clear pool shimmered like liquid glass. “Wow,” she breathed, stepping into the clearing. The air felt charged, electric. “It’s beautiful.” Isolde stepped beside her, her eyes reflecting the light. “The Heartstone Pool. It is said to reveal one’s true desires.” Rory knelt at the edge, peering into the water. The surface rippled, and for a moment, she saw flashes of her past—her childhood in Cardiff, the warmth of her mother’s embrace, the pain of leaving everything behind. Then, the images shifted, revealing a future she had never dared to imagine. “Rory,” Nyx’s voice broke through her reverie. “Do not lose yourself in the visions.” She blinked, shaking her head as if to clear the fog. “I… I’m fine.” “Are you?” Nyx’s gaze bore into her, their expression unreadable. “The Grove can ensnare even the strongest of wills.” Rory stood, brushing her hands against her jeans. “I know what I want. I’m not afraid.” “Fear is a natural response,” Isolde said, her voice soft yet firm. “Embrace it, but do not let it consume you.” Rory took a deep breath, grounding herself. “Let’s keep moving. There’s more to see.” They left the pool behind, the hum fading as they ventured further into the grove. The trees began to thin, revealing a vast expanse of wildflowers that stretched as far as the eye could see. The colors exploded in a riot of reds, yellows, and purples, each bloom swaying gently in the breeze. “Look at this place,” Rory exclaimed, her heart soaring. “It’s like a dream.” “Or a trap,” Nyx cautioned, their voice low. “Stay alert.” As they walked, Rory noticed something glimmering among the flowers. She knelt, brushing aside petals to reveal a small, deep crimson pendant nestled in the earth. It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating from it. “Is this…?” she whispered, picking it up. The Heartstone Pendant felt alive in her palm. “An artifact of Dymas,” Isolde said, her eyes widening. “It should not be here.” “Why not?” Rory asked, turning the pendant over in her hand. “It is a sign,” Isolde replied, her voice grave. “A warning or an invitation. We must decide how to proceed.” Rory’s heart raced. The pendant thrummed with energy, and she felt a connection to it, a whisper of destiny. “We can’t leave it here.” “Be cautious,” Nyx warned, their form flickering. “The Grove tests those who seek power.” “I’m not seeking power,” Rory insisted, slipping the pendant into her pocket. “I just want to understand.” “Understanding can lead to peril,” Isolde said, her tone serious. “But it can also lead to freedom.” Rory straightened, determination flooding her veins. “Then let’s find out what this place has to offer.” With that, they pressed on, the grove unfolding before them like a story waiting to be told, each step a new chapter in their journey.
total_cost0.00114977

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
1"Rory muttered again [again]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.492
leniency0.984
rawRatio0.065
effectiveRatio0.063
74.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"gently"
2"very"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1157
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"racing"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"apprehension"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"loomed"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"symphony"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count2
15
word"anticipation"
count1
16
word"crystal"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"warmth"
count2
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"grave"
count1
22
word"raced"
count1
23
word"peril"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"racing"
2"whisper"
3"echo"
4"scanned"
5"eyebrow"
6"apprehension"
7"otherworldly"
8"loomed"
9"echoed"
10"pulse"
11"velvet"
12"symphony"
13"dance"
14"pulsed"
15"anticipation"
16"crystal"
17"charged"
18"electric"
19"warmth"
20"unreadable"
21"grave"
22"raced"
23"peril"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences78
matches
0"g with anticipation"
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
13.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount842
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae1
Grove1
Nyx12
Rory23
Isolde10
Cardiff1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.134
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"whisper that seemed to echo in the stillness"
1"as if reading the very essence of the place"
2"felt like velvet"
3"notes that seemed to dance around them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1153
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean22.61
std13.93
cv0.616
sampleLengths
059
116
219
355
412
524
612
710
841
918
1030
1116
1212
1358
1411
1522
1648
1714
1821
1917
2044
218
2215
237
2414
2532
2614
2740
2814
2920
3050
3114
3214
3319
3416
3521
3614
3753
3813
3910
4033
4115
4214
4311
4420
4524
4614
4717
4817
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs175
matches(empty)
90.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences110
ratio0.018
matches
0"As she approached, the source of the glow revealed itself—a small clearing bathed in ethereal light, where a crystal-clear pool shimmered like liquid glass."
1"The surface rippled, and for a moment, she saw flashes of her past—her childhood in Cardiff, the warmth of her mother’s embrace, the pain of leaving everything behind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount845
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.03195266272189349
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010650887573964497
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean10.48
std5.95
cv0.567
sampleLengths
022
117
220
316
412
57
65
719
818
913
1010
112
1218
136
147
155
1610
1712
1829
1914
204
2127
223
2312
244
256
266
2713
2817
2928
307
314
327
3315
345
357
3614
3722
3814
3913
408
419
428
4311
4412
457
4614
478
489
496
70.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.43636363636363634
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners48
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Suddenly, a low hum filled"
1"Then, the images shifted, revealing"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences78
matches
0"She paused, glancing back at"
1"She turned back to the"
2"she whispered, kneeling to examine"
3"Her pale lavender eyes scanned"
4"They ventured deeper into the"
5"she exclaimed, pointing"
6"She could almost hear the"
7"They continued, the path winding"
8"She paused, tilting her head"
9"she asked, her eyes wide"
10"It pulsed rhythmically, drawing her"
11"She stepped forward, the hum"
12"She moved toward the light,"
13"she breathed, stepping into the"
14"She blinked, shaking her head"
15"They left the pool behind,"
16"She knelt, brushing aside petals"
17"It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating"
18"she whispered, picking it up"
ratio0.244
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"A soft breeze brushed against"
2"She paused, glancing back at"
3"Rory called, her voice steady"
4"Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly,"
5"Rory nodded, her heart racing."
6"She turned back to the"
7"The colors were more vibrant"
8"A cluster of blue blossoms"
9"she whispered, kneeling to examine"
10"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
11"Rory straightened, brushing dirt from"
12"Nyx’s lips curled into a"
13"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
14"Her pale lavender eyes scanned"
15"Rory raised an eyebrow, a"
16"Isolde replied cryptically, her voice"
17"Rory exchanged a glance with"
18"Rory muttered, rolling her eyes"
19"They ventured deeper into the"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1"She paused, glancing back at Nyx, who lingered in the shadows, their form flickering like a candle in the wind."
2"A soft rustling echoed from above, and Rory looked up to see a flock of iridescent birds flitting through the branches, their wings leaving trails of shimmering…"
3"Rory followed her gaze, spotting a faint light flickering between the trees."
4"The trees began to thin, revealing a vast expanse of wildflowers that stretched as far as the eye could see."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount18
matches
0"she whispered, kneeling to examine the flowers"
1"pale lavender eyes scanned, as if reading the very essence of the place"
2"Rory raised, a mix of curiosity and apprehension swirling within her"
3"Isolde replied cryptically, her voice melodic yet laced with an undercurrent of caution"
4"Isolde said, her voice low"
5"Nyx replied, their voice barely above a whisper"
6"Rory muttered again, her mind racing with possibilities"
7"she asked, her eyes wide"
8"Isolde said, her expression distant"
9"Rory pressed, her curiosity piqued"
10"Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they reached out"
11"Nyx’s gaze bore, their expression unreadable"
12"Isolde said, her voice soft yet firm"
13"Rory exclaimed, her heart soaring"
14"Nyx cautioned, their voice low"
15"Isolde said, her eyes widening"
16"Nyx warned, their form flickering"
17"Isolde said, her tone serious"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory muttered (mutter)"
3"she exclaimed (exclaim)"
4"Rory muttered again (mutter)"
5"Rory pressed (press)"
6"Nyx warned (warn)"
7"she breathed (breathe)"
8"Rory exclaimed (exclaim)"
9"she whispered (whisper)"
10"Nyx warned (warn)"
11"Rory insisted (insist)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.794
rawRatio0.48
effectiveRatio0.381
71.8404%