| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 31 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "Rory muttered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.492 | | leniency | 0.984 | | rawRatio | 0.065 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 74.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
| | 4 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1157 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "eyebrow" | | 6 | "apprehension" | | 7 | "otherworldly" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "symphony" | | 13 | "dance" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "anticipation" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "charged" | | 18 | "electric" | | 19 | "warmth" | | 20 | "unreadable" | | 21 | "grave" | | 22 | "raced" | | 23 | "peril" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1153 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 842 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Rory | 23 | | Isolde | 10 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.134 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to echo in the stillness" | | 1 | "as if reading the very essence of the place" | | 2 | "felt like velvet" | | 3 | "notes that seemed to dance around them" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 22.61 | | std | 13.93 | | cv | 0.616 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 53 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "As she approached, the source of the glow revealed itself—a small clearing bathed in ethereal light, where a crystal-clear pool shimmered like liquid glass." | | 1 | "The surface rippled, and for a moment, she saw flashes of her past—her childhood in Cardiff, the warmth of her mother’s embrace, the pain of leaving everything behind." |
| |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 845 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03195266272189349 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010650887573964497 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 10.48 | | std | 5.95 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 6 |
| |
| 70.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.43636363636363634 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, a low hum filled" | | 1 | "Then, the images shifted, revealing" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, glancing back at" | | 1 | "She turned back to the" | | 2 | "she whispered, kneeling to examine" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 4 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 5 | "she exclaimed, pointing" | | 6 | "She could almost hear the" | | 7 | "They continued, the path winding" | | 8 | "She paused, tilting her head" | | 9 | "she asked, her eyes wide" | | 10 | "It pulsed rhythmically, drawing her" | | 11 | "She stepped forward, the hum" | | 12 | "She moved toward the light," | | 13 | "she breathed, stepping into the" | | 14 | "She blinked, shaking her head" | | 15 | "They left the pool behind," | | 16 | "She knelt, brushing aside petals" | | 17 | "It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating" | | 18 | "she whispered, picking it up" |
| | ratio | 0.244 | |
| 4.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered as Aurora" | | 1 | "A soft breeze brushed against" | | 2 | "She paused, glancing back at" | | 3 | "Rory called, her voice steady" | | 4 | "Nyx’s violet eyes glowed faintly," | | 5 | "Rory nodded, her heart racing." | | 6 | "She turned back to the" | | 7 | "The colors were more vibrant" | | 8 | "A cluster of blue blossoms" | | 9 | "she whispered, kneeling to examine" | | 10 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 11 | "Rory straightened, brushing dirt from" | | 12 | "Nyx’s lips curled into a" | | 13 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 14 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 15 | "Rory raised an eyebrow, a" | | 16 | "Isolde replied cryptically, her voice" | | 17 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 18 | "Rory muttered, rolling her eyes" | | 19 | "They ventured deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.91 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 27.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating." | | 1 | "She paused, glancing back at Nyx, who lingered in the shadows, their form flickering like a candle in the wind." | | 2 | "A soft rustling echoed from above, and Rory looked up to see a flock of iridescent birds flitting through the branches, their wings leaving trails of shimmering…" | | 3 | "Rory followed her gaze, spotting a faint light flickering between the trees." | | 4 | "The trees began to thin, revealing a vast expanse of wildflowers that stretched as far as the eye could see." |
| |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 31 | | uselessAdditionCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, kneeling to examine the flowers" | | 1 | "pale lavender eyes scanned, as if reading the very essence of the place" | | 2 | "Rory raised, a mix of curiosity and apprehension swirling within her" | | 3 | "Isolde replied cryptically, her voice melodic yet laced with an undercurrent of caution" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice low" | | 5 | "Nyx replied, their voice barely above a whisper" | | 6 | "Rory muttered again, her mind racing with possibilities" | | 7 | "she asked, her eyes wide" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her expression distant" | | 9 | "Rory pressed, her curiosity piqued" | | 10 | "Nyx warned, their form solidifying as they reached out" | | 11 | "Nyx’s gaze bore, their expression unreadable" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her voice soft yet firm" | | 13 | "Rory exclaimed, her heart soaring" | | 14 | "Nyx cautioned, their voice low" | | 15 | "Isolde said, her eyes widening" | | 16 | "Nyx warned, their form flickering" | | 17 | "Isolde said, her tone serious" |
| |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 25 | | fancyCount | 12 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 4 | "Rory muttered again (mutter)" | | 5 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 6 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 7 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 8 | "Rory exclaimed (exclaim)" | | 9 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 10 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 11 | "Rory insisted (insist)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 63 | | tagDensity | 0.397 | | leniency | 0.794 | | rawRatio | 0.48 | | effectiveRatio | 0.381 | |