| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice drifted back [back]" | | 1 | "Nyx said flatly [flatly]" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" | | 3 | "The oracle turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 90.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 62.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1065 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "absolutely" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "constructed" | | 3 | "anticipation" | | 4 | "resonance" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 60.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1049 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 897 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.67 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | September | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Aurora | 15 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 3 | | Eva | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "September" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.664 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like this—a held breath, a thresho" | | 1 | "quite hold still" | | 2 | "seemed placed with intention" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.953 | | wordCount | 1049 | | matches | | 0 | "not the dramatic megaliths of tourist destinations, but subtler stones worn smooth by time, each inscribed with symb" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 29.14 | | std | 22.31 | | cv | 0.766 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 41 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 54 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 61 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "were meant" | | 1 | "been reserved" |
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| 36.40% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 163 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't waiting" | | 1 | "were standing" | | 2 | "wasn't watching" | | 3 | "was listening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary between Richmond Park and the grove had always felt like this—a held breath, a threshold her body recognised even when her mind tried to deny it." | | 1 | "She wasn't waiting for them—she was already moving deeper into the grove, her footsteps silent against the undergrowth." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiant profusion—blues and yellows and crimson reds that belonged to spring, summer, every season but this one." | | 3 | "Not in the modern sense—no scaffolding, no visible seams—but in the way that every element seemed placed with intention." | | 4 | "The pendant beneath her shirt—the Heartstone—remained inert and cool." | | 5 | "At the centre stood a stone circle—not the dramatic megaliths of tourist destinations, but subtler stones worn smooth by time, each inscribed with symbols that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "Or perhaps she did hear it—perhaps it was the same thing." | | 7 | "Not bright—more like remembering light after a long darkness." | | 8 | "It bore only one symbol—a spiral that twisted inward, suggesting depth that the flat stone couldn't possibly contain." |
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| 85.11% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 912 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.05701754385964912 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013157894736842105 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 10.6 | | std | 7.24 | | cv | 0.684 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 69.36% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.46464646464646464 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it seemed to lean" | | 1 | "Then the trees opened like" | | 2 | "Then it compressed." |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She wasn't waiting for them—she" | | 1 | "It wrapped around her wrists" | | 2 | "She didn't turn around." | | 3 | "They pulsed in sequence, creating" | | 4 | "Her gaze found Aurora's and" | | 5 | "It bore only one symbol—a" | | 6 | "She leaned closer." | | 7 | "She saw nothing and everything." | | 8 | "She tilted her head slightly," | | 9 | "Her breath misted now in" |
| | ratio | 0.13 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak stones materialized" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped short, her trainer" | | 2 | "The boundary between Richmond Park" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered, their voice barely" | | 4 | "The Shade had taken something" | | 5 | "Isolde stood twenty paces ahead," | | 6 | "She wasn't waiting for them—she" | | 7 | "Aurora had watched her walk" | | 8 | "Eva caught up to Aurora's" | | 9 | "The moment they crossed the" | | 10 | "Aurora felt it first as" | | 11 | "The mist didn't dissipate so" | | 12 | "It wrapped around her wrists" | | 13 | "The flora here violated every" | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiant profusion—blues" | | 15 | "Aurora knelt to examine a" | | 16 | "Isolde's voice drifted back" | | 17 | "She didn't turn around." | | 18 | "Eva made a noise somewhere" | | 19 | "Nyx said flatly" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade had taken something closer to solid form for the journey, a humanoid shadow with edges that didn't quite hold still." | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first as pressure against her ears, then as a strange heaviness in her lungs, as if the atmosphere itself had thickened." | | 2 | "At the centre stood a stone circle—not the dramatic megaliths of tourist destinations, but subtler stones worn smooth by time, each inscribed with symbols that …" | | 3 | "They pulsed in sequence, creating patterns that might have been writing or mathematics or something for which her language had no equivalent." | | 4 | "Voices speaking in harmonic frequencies that made sense in her bones if not her brain." |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The oracle turned back, her silver hair catching the glow of the symbols" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.346 | | leniency | 0.692 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |