Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT03N5P6YC43CASDS8TSKBR

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Duration:
22.9s
Cost:
$0.011690
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hissed down the tiled walls of the abandoned Tube station, pooling in oily puddles across cracked concrete. The air smelled of wet rust and something else—charnel, faint but insistent, like meat left too long in a cellar. Fluorescent strips strung haphazardly by the Met’s forensics team flickered above, casting jagged shadows that made the place pulse like a diseased lung. Detective Harlow Quinn stood near the body, arms crossed, jaw clenched hard enough to grind bone. Her worn leather watch dug into her wrist as she flexed her fingers, counting seconds under her breath. Nineteen. Twenty. The silence didn’t stretch—it coiled. “Blunt force trauma,” said DS Patel, crouched beside the corpse. “Back of the skull, fractured inward. Likely from a pipe or crowbar. Time of death, between two and four a.m.” Quinn didn’t answer. Her sharp eyes swept the wall behind the body—a faded mosaic of the old Camden Town sign, half-eroded by damp, tiles missing. But not randomly. The gaps formed a shape. A circle. Three lines descending like claws. Her breath hitched, just once. “You see it?” she asked. Patel glanced up, frowning. “See what?” “That’s no water stain. That’s deliberate. Etched into the mortar.” He straightened, wiping his gloves on his trousers. “Could be kids. Graffiti.” Quinn stepped closer. The circle wasn’t carved. The tiles had *collapsed inward*, as if something had pushed from behind the wall. But the plaster was dry. No recent damage. No access point. She turned, scanning. The platform was littered with forensic markers—yellow cones, numbered tags—but something was off. No blood trail. No footprints leading away. No signs of a struggle, save the single wound. The victim, a man in his thirties, wore a cheap suit and a bone pendant around his neck. Not police issue. Not anything she’d seen before. “Cause of death is clear,” Patel said, “but we’ve got no ID, no wallet, no phone. Nothing. Feels like a clean wipe.” “Too clean,” Quinn muttered. She knelt, ignoring the damp seeping through her trousers. The man’s hands—no defensive wounds. No dirt under the nails. No bruising. As if he hadn’t fought. As if he’d stood there. Let it happen. Or been unable to. Her gaze snagged on his left palm. A faint red smudge, like ink. She leaned in. Not ink. A residue. Powdered, almost. She lifted the hand, careful not to disturb evidence. A sigil. Faint, drawn in pigment or ash. Circle with a barred cross inside. “Patel,” she said. “Did anyone touch his hands?” “No. We tagged and bagged the pendant, but we’re waiting on the coroner for prints.” She released the hand, stood. “Get that palm scanned. Full spectral analysis. And pull the security feeds from every exit in Camden Underground. I don’t care if they’re three years old. I want to see if this man entered the Tube system at all last night.” Patel blinked. “You think he didn’t come through here?” “I think,” Quinn said, voice low, “no one should be able to die in the middle of a public space with no one seeing a damn thing.” A beat. Patel nodded, radioing the request. Quinn stepped back, eyes narrowing. Her watch ticked—nineteen, twenty. She flexed her hand again. Then she saw it. The compass. On the edge of the platform, half-hidden beneath a torn tarp, sat a small brass compass. Not military. Not police. Old. The casing green with verdigris, the face etched with tiny, spiraling marks. She moved toward it, crouched. The needle didn’t point north. It trembled, swinging slowly, deliberately, to the east wall—where the mosaic had collapsed. Impossible. She reached for it. “Don’t touch that!” A voice—female, urgent—cut through the hum of generators. Quinn turned. A woman stood at the base of the stairwell, silhouetted by the dim emergency lights. Curly red hair haloed around her round glasses, rain dripping from her worn satchel. Freckles stood out like flecks of rust across her nose. She wore a long coat splattered with mud. Quinn stood, hand drifting toward her sidearm. “Police. Identify yourself.” The woman lifted her hands, one of them tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous flick Quinn noted instantly. “Eva Kowalski. Research assistant at the British Museum. I—I heard there was an incident. I was in the area.” “At three in the morning? In an abandoned Tube station?” Quinn’s voice was flat. Eva swallowed. “I—” “Your ID.” Eva fumbled her satchel, withdrew a laminated card. Quinn snatched it, scanned it. Legitimate. Issued by the Department of Occult Antiquities. A division Quinn didn’t recall approving access for. “Occult Antiquities?” she asked. “It’s a—well, it’s a subsection of Ancient Civilizations. We deal with classified texts. Rare artifacts.” Quinn handed back the ID. “And what would bring you *here*, Ms. Kowalski?” Eva stepped forward, eyes darting to the compass. “That,” she said. “It shouldn’t be here. That’s a Veil Compass. Extremely rare. It doesn’t point north. It points to rifts.” Quinn’s spine went rigid. “Rifts.” “Portals. Weak spots between our world and… others.” Patel snorted behind her. “Right. Ghosts and goblins. We’re dealing with a murder, not a fairy tale.” Eva turned on him, voice sharp. “You think this is clean? No blood trail? No witnesses? In a *public station*? You’ve got a body that shouldn’t be here, and you’re not asking why no one heard a thing.” Quinn held up a hand. “Enough.” She looked at the compass again. “You’re saying this thing detects… what? Gateways?” Eva nodded. “And that needle? It’s pointing to a rupture. Not just a mark on the wall. A tear.” Quinn walked to the mosaic. Pressed her palm against the cracked tiles. Cold. Not just damp. A deep, unnatural chill, like touching the inside of a freezer. She stepped back. “So someone came through that wall.” “Or something,” Eva whispered. Patel shook his head. “This is absurd. We’ve got evidence. Forensics will confirm.” “Then explain this.” Quinn pointed to the compass. “Compass needles don’t just decide to face walls. And explain the sigil on his hand. Why’s he got occult markings and a bone pendant shaped like a key?” Eva’s breath caught. “A key?” She rushed forward, ignoring protocol, and knelt by the body. Quinn didn’t stop her. “The bone token,” Eva murmured. “He had entry rights. He was in the Market.” “The *what*?” “The Veil Market. An underground network. Runs beneath London. Moves every full moon. Sells enchanted goods. Forbidden alchemy. Information from places that don’t exist on maps.” Patel laughed. “You’re both cracked.” Quinn didn’t laugh. She remembered her partner, Morris. How he’d vanished in an alley three years ago. No blood. No trace. Just a single black feather and a smell like burnt hair. She’d written it off. Stress. Trauma. Now, she wasn’t sure. “Last full moon,” Quinn said quietly, “where was this station?” Eva looked up. “It *was* the Veil Market. This platform hosted it two nights ago. They erase all traces before dawn.” Quinn stared at the compass. Then at the wall. “So he wasn’t murdered here,” she said. Eva nodded. “He died *there*. On the other side. This body… it was pushed through. Or returned.” “Returned?” Patel’s voice cracked. Quinn stepped to the edge of the platform, looking down the dark tunnel. The compass needle twitched, still fixed east. “Someone didn’t want us to find the real crime scene,” she said. “They dumped the body here to mislead us. To bury it in false logic.” She turned back, face hard. “But they forgot one thing.” Eva looked up. “What?” Quinn pointed to the compass. “It talks back.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.038
92.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"deliberately"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"mosaic"
count3
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count2
9
word"spectral"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"jaw clenched"
3"silence"
4"fractured"
5"mosaic"
6"etched"
7"scanning"
8"scanned"
9"spectral"
10"trembled"
11"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences136
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences173
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1261
ratio0.006
matches
0"collapsed inward"
1"here"
2"public station"
3"what"
4"was"
5"there"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount772
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Met1
Harlow1
Quinn23
Patel9
Camden1
Town1
Eva11
Department1
Occult1
Antiquities1
Morris1
persons
0"Met"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Patel"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
globalScore0.01
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1261
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean15.38
std13.91
cv0.904
sampleLengths
061
141
230
340
45
55
66
710
812
932
1058
1122
124
1334
144
1531
1614
178
1815
1946
209
2127
227
2314
244
252
2633
275
285
2913
301
314
323
3310
3447
357
363
3741
3814
393
402
4129
424
4315
4413
4529
465
478
4817
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"was littered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences173
ratio0.052
matches
0"The air smelled of wet rust and something else—charnel, faint but insistent, like meat left too long in a cellar."
1"The silence didn’t stretch—it coiled."
2"Her sharp eyes swept the wall behind the body—a faded mosaic of the old Camden Town sign, half-eroded by damp, tiles missing."
3"The platform was littered with forensic markers—yellow cones, numbered tags—but something was off."
4"The man’s hands—no defensive wounds."
5"Her watch ticked—nineteen, twenty."
6"It trembled, swinging slowly, deliberately, to the east wall—where the mosaic had collapsed."
7"A voice—female, urgent—cut through the hum of generators."
8"The woman lifted her hands, one of them tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous flick Quinn noted instantly."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount785
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.035668789808917196
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01019108280254777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences173
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences173
mean7.29
std6.64
cv0.911
sampleLengths
018
120
223
316
418
51
61
75
810
920
103
1122
123
135
142
155
165
175
184
192
2010
218
224
233
244
2514
265
273
283
293
3013
313
324
339
3418
353
365
3722
384
399
405
415
422
435
445
453
464
477
486
493
59.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3930635838150289
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"Then she saw it."
1"Just a single black feather"
2"Then at the wall."
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences100
matches
0"Her worn leather watch dug"
1"Her sharp eyes swept the"
2"Her breath hitched, just once."
3"He straightened, wiping his gloves"
4"She turned, scanning."
5"She knelt, ignoring the damp"
6"Her gaze snagged on his"
7"She leaned in."
8"She lifted the hand, careful"
9"She released the hand, stood."
10"Her watch ticked—nineteen, twenty."
11"She flexed her hand again."
12"She moved toward it, crouched."
13"It trembled, swinging slowly, deliberately,"
14"She reached for it."
15"She wore a long coat"
16"She looked at the compass"
17"She stepped back."
18"She rushed forward, ignoring protocol,"
19"She remembered her partner, Morris."
ratio0.22
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences100
matches
0"Rain hissed down the tiled"
1"The air smelled of wet"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn stood near"
3"Her worn leather watch dug"
4"The silence didn’t stretch—it coiled."
5"Quinn didn’t answer."
6"Her sharp eyes swept the"
7"The gaps formed a shape."
8"Her breath hitched, just once."
9"Patel glanced up, frowning."
10"He straightened, wiping his gloves"
11"Quinn stepped closer."
12"The circle wasn’t carved."
13"The tiles had *collapsed inward*,"
14"She turned, scanning."
15"The platform was littered with"
16"The victim, a man in"
17"She knelt, ignoring the damp"
18"The man’s hands—no defensive wounds."
19"Her gaze snagged on his"
ratio0.71
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"As if he hadn’t fought."
1"As if he’d stood there."
2"Now, she wasn’t sure."
ratio0.03
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Fluorescent strips strung haphazardly by the Met’s forensics team flickered above, casting jagged shadows that made the place pulse like a diseased lung."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, voice low,"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.113
88.4717%