Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT03ZXNF66D7KDZ6JQK0480

Run Details

Duration:
8.5s
Cost:
$0.003938
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The top lock clicked, then the middle, and finally the bolt scraped back with a familiar rasp. Rory pulled the door open, ready to tell Eva she'd forgotten her keys again. Lucien Moreau stood on her landing. He wore a charcoal suit, perfectly tailored as always, the kind of expensive cloth that whispered of silent money. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, catching the dim hallway light. In one hand, he held his ivory-handled cane, the tip resting on the worn runner. His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – fixed on her, no surprise, no apology, just that calm, assessing gaze she knew too well. Rory’s breath snagged in her throat. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird desperate for escape. Months. It had been months since she saw him, since she walked out of his life without a backward glance, without a single word. She felt the old anger simmer, a low, persistent heat beneath her ribs, threatening to ignite. “You’re early,” she said, her voice a little too sharp, a little too loud in the confined space. A flimsy shield against the sudden storm brewing inside her. Lucien's lips twitched, a fleeting ghost of a smile that never quite reached his eyes. "Punctuality, *ma chérie*, is a virtue." His French accent, that smooth, cultured sound, caressed the words, sending a shiver down her spine. A shiver of fury, she told herself. Nothing more. “I wasn’t expecting you,” Rory said, tightening her grip on the doorknob. Her knuckles turned white. “I wasn’t expecting anyone.” "Evidently," he swept his gaze over her, taking in her worn jeans and faded band t-shirt, the hair she hadn't bothered to tame. A silent judgment, she thought, of her casual attire, a stark contrast to his impeccable presentation. “What do you want, Lucien?” She leaned against the doorframe, crossing her arms over her chest. A defensive posture, she knew, but she couldn't help it. His presence alone was an assault. He stepped into the flat, uninvited, pushing the door gently wider. The scent of his expensive cologne, a blend of woodsmoke and old leather, filled the small space, chasing away the faint aroma of curry from the restaurant below. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around his ankles, purring loudly, rubbing against the fine fabric of his trousers. Even the cat, traitorous beast, seemed to welcome him. “I have information,” Lucien said, his eyes scanning the cluttered living room, the stacks of books and scrolls that covered every available surface. He took it all in, every detail, every change since his last visit. Rory closed the door with a soft click, sealing them inside. “Information about what?” she asked, her voice tight. The anger felt hotter now, coiling in her gut. She hated that he could still do this to her, still stir up all the old emotions with just a look, a word. Lucien moved further into the room, his cane tapping softly on the wooden floor. Ptolemy followed, a furry shadow at his heels. He ran a gloved finger along the spine of a leather-bound grimoire on a bookshelf. “Information you will find… illuminating.” “If you have something to tell me, just say it,” Rory said, her patience fraying. She didn’t want to play his games, not now, not ever again. He turned, his gaze locking with hers. “It concerns the disappearances. The ones you’ve been investigating.” Rory’s heart gave a sudden lurch. The disappearances. The reason she’d been spending restless nights poring over ancient texts with Eva, the reason she hadn’t slept properly in weeks. “How do you know about that?” The question came out sharper than she intended. Lucien simply raised an eyebrow. “My dear Rory, do you truly believe anything happens in this city without my knowledge?” A hint of amusement played in his tone, a subtle mockery that grated on her nerves. “Get to the point, Lucien,” she demanded, her voice an octave lower, laced with a warning. He walked past her towards the small, worn sofa, Ptolemy still trailing him. He settled onto it, his movements fluid and unhurried. The sofa creaked under his weight. Ptolemy immediately hopped onto his lap, kneading against his chest, purring a rumble that vibrated through the quiet room. Lucien stroked the cat’s head, his movements gentle, almost tender. It was a stark contrast to the aloof, dangerous man she knew. “The information is delicate,” he said, his gaze fixed on her. “And it comes with a price.” Rory scoffed. “Of course, it does.” The anger flared brighter, hotter, an inferno in her chest. Everything with Lucien had a price. Everything was a transaction. “You look well,” he said, changing the subject with infuriating ease. His eyes, those mismatched windows to a hidden world, softened just a fraction. “A touch tired, perhaps. But well.” She ignored the compliment, the sudden warmth she felt against her will, the way her skin tingled where his gaze touched her. “I don’t need your pleasantries, Lucien. I need to know what you came here for.” He sighed, a soft, weary sound. “Always so direct, *ma chérie*.” He lifted Ptolemy off his lap, placing the cat gently on the floor. Ptolemy let out an indignant meow, then rubbed against Lucien’s legs. “Very well.” He leaned forward, resting his clasped hands on his cane, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light. “There’s a new player in town. Someone with a particular… taste.” “What kind of taste?” Rory asked, her voice still tight with tension. “One that involves human souls,” Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, serious tone. “And rare, potent magical artifacts.” Rory frowned. “Souls?” She’d dealt with a lot in the supernatural underworld, but soul-snatching was a level of depravity even she hadn’t encountered often. “Who is it?” Lucien leaned back, his gaze lingering on her for a moment longer than necessary. “That, Rory, is where the price comes in.” “What do you want?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. She knew, deep down, that whatever he asked, she would pay. The disappearances, the missing people, gnawed at her. She couldn’t let anything stand in the way of finding them. His eyes narrowed, a flicker of something she couldn't quite decipher passing through them. “I want you to come back to me.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:46:54.017Z" 2/19/2026, 3:46:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.645
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
2"softly"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1053
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"fleeting"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"stark"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"lurch"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"fleeting"
2"down her spine"
3"stark"
4"scanning"
5"lurch"
6"eyebrow"
7"weight"
8"vibrated"
9"warmth"
10"gleaming"
11"tension"
12"whisper"
13"flicker"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1052
ratio0.004
matches
0"ma chérie"
1"ma chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A shiver of fury, she told herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount880
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau1
French1
Lucien10
Ptolemy6
Rory9
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.932
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite decipher passing through them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1052
matches(empty)
90.04% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"hated that he"
97.49% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean35.07
std17.23
cv0.491
sampleLengths
031
16
271
358
428
546
620
739
832
965
1036
1151
1242
1327
1416
1543
1636
1716
1869
1917
2026
2130
2237
2366
2412
2520
2627
2722
2841
2922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – fixed on her, no surprise, no apology, just that calm, assessing gaze she knew too well."
92.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04880817253121453
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011350737797956867
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean12.09
std6.37
cv0.527
sampleLengths
017
114
26
319
412
515
625
76
812
91
1023
1116
1218
1310
1415
1522
167
172
1812
194
204
2123
2216
2316
2410
256
2611
2728
2817
299
3023
3113
3211
338
349
3523
3614
378
3815
395
4015
4112
427
439
446
452
4621
4714
485
4931
61.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.39080459770114945
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners34
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Even the cat, traitorous beast,"
ratio0.014
22.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences71
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit,"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
3"Her heart hammered against her"
4"It had been months since"
5"She felt the old anger"
6"she said, her voice a"
7"His French accent, that smooth,"
8"Her knuckles turned white."
9"he swept his gaze over"
10"She leaned against the doorframe,"
11"His presence alone was an"
12"He stepped into the flat,"
13"He took it all in,"
14"she asked, her voice tight"
15"She hated that he could"
16"He ran a gloved finger"
17"She didn’t want to play"
18"He turned, his gaze locking"
19"she demanded, her voice an"
ratio0.493
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences71
matches
0"The top lock clicked, then"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on her"
3"He wore a charcoal suit,"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
6"Rory’s breath snagged in her"
7"Her heart hammered against her"
8"It had been months since"
9"She felt the old anger"
10"she said, her voice a"
11"A flimsy shield against the"
12"Lucien's lips twitched, a fleeting"
13"His French accent, that smooth,"
14"A shiver of fury, she"
15"Rory said, tightening her grip"
16"Her knuckles turned white."
17"he swept his gaze over"
18"A silent judgment, she thought,"
19"She leaned against the doorframe,"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit, perfectly tailored as always, the kind of expensive cloth that whispered of silent money."
1"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around his ankles, purring loudly, rubbing against the fine fabric of his trousers."
2"Ptolemy immediately hopped onto his lap, kneading against his chest, purring a rumble that vibrated through the quiet room."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she asked, her voice tight"
1"Rory said, her patience fraying"
2"she demanded, her voice an octave lower, laced with a warning"
3"Rory asked, her voice still tight with tension"
4"Lucien said, his voice dropping to a low, serious tone"
5"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.065
78.0465%