Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT040FRKYME2Q7E0ZYR86Q2

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Duration:
41.2s
Cost:
$0.060500
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones appeared without warning. One moment Rory was pushing through a thicket of brambles, cursing under her breath as thorns snagged her jacket sleeve. The next, she stumbled into a clearing that had no business existing in the middle of Richmond Park. Seven oak pillars rose from the earth in a rough circle, each one carved with symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of her vision. Ancient. That was the word that surfaced in her mind, unbidden. Not old. Ancient. The distinction felt important, though she couldn't say why. "Well." Nyx's voice drifted past her ear like smoke. "She wasn't lying about the entrance." The shade materialized beside her, their form coalescing from the shadows cast by the standing stones. In the dappled afternoon light, they looked almost solid — a tall silhouette of darkness given human shape, violet eyes gleaming with what might have been curiosity. "You sound surprised." Rory stepped closer to the nearest pillar, drawn by the carvings despite herself. Up close, they resolved into something almost recognizable. Leaves, perhaps. Or flames. Or neither. "Surprised implies expectation." Nyx tilted their head, that gesture they did when processing something new. "I expected nothing. The Fae are notoriously difficult about their borders." The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory's chest — not the sharp warning it gave near Hel portals, but something softer. A recognition. She pressed her palm against it through her shirt and felt warmth spread through her fingers. "This is it, then." She looked back at Nyx. "Isolde's grove." "One way to find out." The space between the standing stones shimmered. Not quite visible, more like heat rising from summer pavement, distorting the trees beyond into something fluid and uncertain. Rory had seen the Veil before — glimpsed it through windows at wrong angles, caught its shimmer in rain-slicked streets at midnight. But she'd never stood this close to a place where it wore thin. She stepped forward. The world tilted. For one nauseating second, Rory existed in two places at once. She could feel the packed earth of Richmond Park beneath her boots and something else — moss, cool and impossibly soft — pressing up through it like a memory. The air tasted of autumn leaves and honey and something sharp, metallic, like the aftermath of lightning. Then the sensation passed, and she was through. "Bloody hell," she breathed. The grove spread before her in defiance of every natural law she'd ever learned. The clearing should have been perhaps thirty feet across, contained by the standing stones. Instead, it stretched into impossible distance — a meadow of wildflowers that rolled toward a horizon that couldn't exist, beneath a sky that held both stars and daylight in the same breath. Violets carpeted the ground nearest her, their petals so deeply purple they were almost black. Beyond them, a riot of color — blues and golds and reds she had no names for — swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel. And rising from the meadow's heart, a single tree. Not an oak, though it shared something of an oak's shape. Its trunk twisted upward in a spiral, bark the color of old silver, branches spreading wide to catch light that seemed to come from everywhere at once. Blossoms covered every limb, white and pink and palest gold, and they fell in a constant slow rain that never seemed to diminish the tree's crown. "Time moves strangely here." Nyx's voice came from her left, though she hadn't seen them cross through. "I can feel it. Stuttering." Rory tore her gaze from the tree. "Stuttering?" "Like a heartbeat that can't find its rhythm." The shade's form flickered, edges blurring before resolving sharp again. "We should be careful. An hour here might be minutes outside. Or days. The Fae don't experience time as mortals do." "And you?" Violet eyes found hers. "I stopped experiencing time properly three hundred years ago. This place feels almost familiar." Something in their voice made Rory look away. She'd learned, over the past months, to recognize when Nyx was remembering. The silences that stretched too long. The way their form grew less substantial, as if grief could make them fade. She didn't push. Instead, she started walking toward the tree. The flowers parted around her feet without being crushed, stems bending aside and springing back as if eager to make way. No — that wasn't quite right. They weren't bending. They were never there in the first place, reforming behind her in a new configuration. The path she walked existed only in the moment of her walking. "Do you hear that?" Rory stopped mid-stride. Music. No, not music — the suggestion of it. A melody that lived in the space between notes, felt more than heard. It seemed to emanate from the tree itself, from the slow spiral of falling blossoms, from the very light that touched this place. "I hear echoes." Nyx had caught up, moving through the meadow without disturbing a single flower. "Traces of something that was once sung here. The Fae leave marks on places they touch. This grove has been lived in for a long time." "How long?" "Longer than my mortal life. Longer than my existence as I am now." They paused, head tilted. "Long enough that the ground itself remembers." Rory's hand drifted to the pendant again. Still warm. Still pulsing with that gentle recognition. Whatever this place was, whatever power hummed through its impossible earth and alien sky, the Heartstone knew it. Or knew something like it. The tree drew closer with each step, though Rory could have sworn she wasn't covering any distance. Its trunk was wider than she'd realized — ten feet across, perhaps more, bark carved with the same writhing symbols as the standing stones. But here, in this light, they resolved into something almost readable. Stories. The carvings told stories. Births and deaths and everything between, spiraling up the trunk in an endless chronicle she could almost understand. She reached out— "I would advise against touching that." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere, a woman's voice like wind through crystal chimes. Rory's hand froze an inch from the bark. "Most who read the Tree's memories find themselves lost in them." The voice grew closer, warmer, more solid. "Some for days. Some forever." She turned. Isolde Varga stood among the falling blossoms as if she'd always been there, silver hair catching light that seemed to bend toward her. She was smaller than Rory had expected — barely five foot five, with features too delicate to be entirely human. Her eyes were the pale lavender of the horizon, and when she smiled, it was the smile of someone who had seen centuries of mortals stumble into her grove with the same wide-eyed wonder. "Aurora Carter." Isolde's gaze moved to Nyx, something flickering in its depths. "And Aldric. Or what remains of him." Nyx went still. Absolutely, completely still, in a way that made them look more like a statue than a living thing. "That name," they said quietly, "hasn't been spoken to me in a very long time." "Names have power. Surely you remember that much." Isolde began to walk, leaving no footprints in the moss, no trace of her passage through the flowers. "You sought me out. Both of you. I saw you coming before you knew you would. The question, then, is why you came at all." Rory found her voice. "We need answers." "Answers." Isolde laughed, soft and sad and impossibly old. "Everyone needs answers. The trouble is that answers rarely come in the shapes we expect. You came asking about the tears in the Veil. About why they're spreading. About what hunts you through the shadows of London." "You know what's hunting me?" "I know many things." The Seer stopped before the tree, pressing one palm against its bark without hesitation. The carvings pulsed with light where she touched them. "I know that you carry a stone forged in Dymas, given by hands you've never seen. I know that your friend exists in the spaces between dying and dead, and that something in Hel wants him back. I know that the Veil is weakening — not in the way it weakens each winter, but truly weakening. Thinning. Coming apart at seams that have held for millennia." She turned back to face them, and her eyes had changed. No longer pale lavender but something deeper, shot through with gold and darkness in equal measure. "What I do not know is whether you can stop it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"they said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.054
85.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1418
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"resolved"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"aftermath"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"resolving"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"depths"
count1
13
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"resolved"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"shimmered"
5"could feel"
6"aftermath"
7"flickered"
8"resolving"
9"familiar"
10"echoes"
11"crystal"
12"depths"
13"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
21.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1428
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1078
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Hel1
Nyx8
Veil1
Violet1
Music1
Varga1
Isolde4
Seer1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Nyx"
3"Violet"
4"Varga"
5"Isolde"
6"Seer"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
globalScore0.897
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to writhe at the edge of her vision"
1"Not quite visible, more like heat rising from summer pavement, distorting the trees beyond into something fluid and uncertain"
2"light that seemed to come from everywhere at once"
3"light that seemed to bend toward her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.101
wordCount1428
matches
0"not the sharp warning it gave near Hel portals, but something softer"
1"not in the way it weakens each winter, but truly weakening"
2"No longer pale lavender but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean28.56
std22.2
cv0.777
sampleLengths
06
138
249
315
443
530
626
738
811
95
1061
113
123
1357
148
154
1660
1749
1864
1922
208
2139
222
2318
2443
257
2657
277
2845
2942
302
3124
3238
3352
3426
356
3623
3723
382
3977
4019
4121
4215
4351
447
4546
465
4793
4827
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
44.05% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was pushing"
1"was remembering"
2"weren't bending"
3"wasn't covering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences115
ratio0.096
matches
0"In the dappled afternoon light, they looked almost solid — a tall silhouette of darkness given human shape, violet eyes gleaming with what might have been curiosity."
1"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory's chest — not the sharp warning it gave near Hel portals, but something softer."
2"Rory had seen the Veil before — glimpsed it through windows at wrong angles, caught its shimmer in rain-slicked streets at midnight."
3"She could feel the packed earth of Richmond Park beneath her boots and something else — moss, cool and impossibly soft — pressing up through it like a memory."
4"Instead, it stretched into impossible distance — a meadow of wildflowers that rolled toward a horizon that couldn't exist, beneath a sky that held both stars and daylight in the same breath."
5"Beyond them, a riot of color — blues and golds and reds she had no names for — swaying in a breeze she couldn't feel."
6"No — that wasn't quite right."
7"No, not music — the suggestion of it."
8"Its trunk was wider than she'd realized — ten feet across, perhaps more, bark carved with the same writhing symbols as the standing stones."
9"She reached out—"
10"She was smaller than Rory had expected — barely five foot five, with features too delicate to be entirely human."
88.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same wide-eyed wonder."
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04677268475210477
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00841908325537886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.42
std9.72
cv0.783
sampleLengths
06
120
218
326
41
510
62
71
89
99
106
1116
1227
1316
148
152
162
172
1815
1911
2020
212
2216
239
242
255
267
2719
2822
2913
303
313
3211
3329
3417
358
364
3714
3814
3932
4015
4125
429
4311
4427
4526
4617
475
487
491
79.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5043478260869565
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then the sensation passed, and"
1"Instead, it stretched into impossible"
2"Instead, she started walking toward"
3"Still pulsing with that gentle"
4"Absolutely, completely still, in a"
5"No longer pale lavender but"
ratio0.073
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences82
matches
0"She pressed her palm against"
1"She looked back at Nyx"
2"She stepped forward."
3"She could feel the packed"
4"Its trunk twisted upward in"
5"She'd learned, over the past"
6"She didn't push."
7"They weren't bending."
8"They were never there in"
9"It seemed to emanate from"
10"They paused, head tilted"
11"Its trunk was wider than"
12"She reached out—"
13"She was smaller than Rory"
14"Her eyes were the pale"
15"they said quietly"
16"She turned back to face"
ratio0.207
81.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences82
matches
0"The standing stones appeared without"
1"The next, she stumbled into"
2"That was the word that"
3"The distinction felt important, though"
4"Nyx's voice drifted past her"
5"The shade materialized beside her,"
6"Rory stepped closer to the"
7"Nyx tilted their head, that"
8"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
9"She pressed her palm against"
10"She looked back at Nyx"
11"The space between the standing"
12"Rory had seen the Veil"
13"She stepped forward."
14"The world tilted."
15"She could feel the packed"
16"The air tasted of autumn"
17"The grove spread before her"
18"The clearing should have been"
19"Violets carpeted the ground nearest"
ratio0.756
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Instead, it stretched into impossible distance — a meadow of wildflowers that rolled toward a horizon that couldn't exist, beneath a sky that held both stars an…"
1"Its trunk twisted upward in a spiral, bark the color of old silver, branches spreading wide to catch light that seemed to come from everywhere at once."
2"The way their form grew less substantial, as if grief could make them fade."
3"The flowers parted around her feet without being crushed, stems bending aside and springing back as if eager to make way."
4"Her eyes were the pale lavender of the horizon, and when she smiled, it was the smile of someone who had seen centuries of mortals stumble into her grove with t…"
5"Absolutely, completely still, in a way that made them look more like a statue than a living thing."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The shade's form flickered, edges blurring before resolving sharp again"
1"Isolde's gaze moved, something flickering in its depths"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Isolde laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.108
74.4654%