Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0423TE3D9M30XYMB6DENP

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.018514
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora yanked the door open before the second deadbolt clicked. He filled the frame, too tall for the cramped landing, suit jacket wrinkled, cane balanced at his fingertips. Ptolemy’s hiss ricocheted from just inside the flat. “I knew it,” she said, voice low. “You’d show up.” He stepped forward without an invitation. The third bolt turned with a reluctant groan. The door swung shut behind him, muffling Brick Lane’s distant clatter. He dropped the cane tip and rubbed his palm over the ivory handle. Amber eye caught the weak bulb light. Black eye measured the bookshelves collapsing under scrolls and dog-eared textbooks. He inhaled. Sandalwood and something sharp—like old iron. “Leave,” she said, pressing her shoulder against the door. The tabby bristled, claws scratching the wood. “I need you, Aurora.” His French accent curved around her name like a caress. She bristled. “We aren’t on good terms.” She’d said that the last time he vanished, too. His gaze slid to her wrist. The crescent scar peeked from beneath her sleeve. She caught him staring. “Scar’s healed.” “Not all wounds show on skin.” His voice turned softer. “Open up.” She shoved a pile of papers at him. “Then go someplace else.” He caught one by the corner. A page erupted with chalk-dust symbols. Occult research Eva had insisted she help with. Aurora flattened the stack. “This isn’t for you.” He pocketed the top sheet. “I made contact in Avaros.” He set the rest on a wobbling side table. Books toppled. A leather-bound volume smacked the floor, spine crackling. She froze. “What did you summon?” His jaw tightened. He tapped the cane heel. “Nothing yet. But I can’t handle—” He cut himself off, exhaled. “I can’t do this without you.” She braced her hands on her hips. “Then let me shut the door in your face.” He advanced. Cat darted between them. “Don’t,” Aurora warned. Ptolemy’s tail lashed. “You’re scaring her.” Lucien halted. Tip-toed around the cat. He crouched. “She’s fine.” He offered a pale hand. “Truce?” Aurora hesitated. The air smelled of old paper and something electric. Her breath ticked in her chest. “Truce doesn’t mean trust.” He rose. Leaning on the cane, he regarded her. Suit jacket fell open to reveal a crisp waistcoat, bronze buttons glinting. “No. It means I’m out of options.” A siren barked outside. She glanced towards the window. “How long are you here for?” “Until you help me—or you call the police.” She pinched the bridge of her nose. “You’d threaten me?” “Desperate.” He straightened. “I’ll go. But you’ll regret it.” “Go, then.” He clicked the cane on the floor. “Rules.” She stared. “Rules?” “Three. One—no surprises after tonight. Two—stay out of my nightmares. Three—take me seriously.” He rattled off each like a confession. She swallowed. “What happens if I refuse?” He drew a breath. “I won’t leave until you agree.” Aurora scanned the room. Half the counter was stacked with Eva’s research. Heated coils hummed on a hotplate beneath a rusty cauldron. A loose scroll dangled over the edge. She crossed to it. Rolled it up, careful fingers brushing his. Sparks flickered at her skin. She dropped the bundle. He swiped his sleeve. “What’s on your mind?” She rounded on him. “You can’t stay here.” He didn’t flinch. “This flat is the only place I know you’ll find me.” She folded her arms. “Fine. One hour. Then you leave.” He lifted his chin. “I’ll take payment later.” Her jaw clenched. “We’re settled.” He tapped his cane. “Then let’s talk.” He motioned toward the battered couch, its cushions ragged. “Sit.” She glared but moved, brushing past him. He watched her from the threshold, muscles coiling. When she sank low on the threadbare fabric, he closed the distance—stopping a breath away. She tasted cedar and regret. “What did you bring back from Avaros?” she asked. He avoided the question. “How have you been?” She flicked her hand at the table. “Busy. Don’t pretend to care.” He tapped a finger against his palm. “I care about truth.” She laughed, hollow and brittle. “The truth is you left. And I didn’t want a goodbye.” He tilted his head. “You wanted me to fight.” She stared at the faded carpet. “Fight what?” “Us.” He dropped beside her, too close. Their knees pressed, fabric brushing. “I didn’t fight because I thought you’d break.” She’s always been too direct. But the ache he carried matched hers. She wished she could fix it with words, but words hid more than they revealed. Ptolemy leapt onto Lucien’s lap. He brushed a hand through the tabby’s fur. “Hello, little bureaucrat.” The cat hissed, then purred when Lucien scratched behind the ears. Aurora bit her lip. A surge of something that felt almost like jealousy blew through her. She crossed her arms, kicked at the floor. “Why come back now?” she demanded. He met her gaze. “Because you’re the only one who can read these.” He held up the chalked symbol she’d handed him. “And because I owe you apologies.” She turned away. “You owe me more than apologies.” He reached out, caught her wrist. Heat bloomed between them. She froze. “Don’t.” His thumb brushed the scar. “I’m sorry I left. I’m sorry I didn’t trust you.” She clenched her teeth. “You don’t get to be sorry now.” He tightened his grip. “Try me.” Her voice cracked. “You have no idea what I felt…” He drew in close, gaze unwavering. “Help me. Prove we’re better at this together.” She shivered where thigh met knee. He smelled of old secrets. Of promise and danger. Sirens came closer. Red light flickered through the curtained window. Aurora watched the shadows shift across his face. She pulled her hand free. He let go, but the air between them held electric tension. She met his heterochromatic stare. Black and amber waiting. She said nothing. Lucien tapped the cane. Blade concealed under the silver ferrule gleamed faintly. “I’ll get the kettle on,” he said, voice calm. “We’ll need coffee.” She nodded, throat raw. She leapt up and crossed to the kitchenette. The kettle sputtered to life. Steam hissed. She arranged two chipped mugs on the counter. He slid onto a stool, cane resting across his lap. He watched her, each movement deliberate. The old hurt whispered in her chest. A single thread binding them frayed and teased. She brought the mugs over. The first she handed him. He traced her fingers, shivering at the contact. Then she took the second and perched on the couch arm—just out of reach. They held the mugs between them, warmth seeping into chilled palms. “Explain Avaros,” she said. He lifted the mug, paused. “It isn’t our world. The shadows breathe. They whisper. Magic corrodes from the inside.” She closed her eyes at that description. “And you want me to stop it.” He set the mug down. Clink. “I need your mind. Your tenacity. Your stubborn refusal to accept defeat.” She let the words sink in. Stubborn. She’d battled herself every day since he disappeared. Her fingers trembled around the mug’s rim. Silence stretched. Then a heavy knock on the door rattled the frame. Her foot shot out. “Who is it?” she called. No answer. Just three heavy raps again. Lucien stood, cane thudding. “Not Eva.” They exchanged a glance. Shadows pooled at the door’s edges. She eased off the bolt. He pressed his ear to the wood. Faint click of tumblers resetting. Footsteps on the landing. Aurora yanked the door open. Floodlights swept in. Three uniformed wardens, masks concealing every feature, levitation glyphs tattooed across their collars. They raised crystal staves. Aurora staggered back. Lucien leapt forward, cane raised. One warden spoke, voice cold: “Lucien Moreau, you are under arrest for breach of the Veil Accord.” Lucien’s amber eye flared. Light exploded from his palm. Aurora’s scream swallowed the flat as reality shattered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His French accent curved around [around]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.58
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.029
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"electric"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"chilled"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"crystal"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"electric"
2"glinting"
3"scanned"
4"flickered"
5"jaw clenched"
6"flicked"
7"unwavering"
8"tension"
9"traced"
10"warmth"
11"chilled"
12"whisper"
13"trembled"
14"silence"
15"footsteps"
16"crystal"
17"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences168
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences217
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1308
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount969
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
French1
Eva2
Books1
Ptolemy3
Aurora10
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Books"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.984
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1308
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences217
matches
0"said that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs90
mean14.53
std9.42
cv0.648
sampleLengths
036
110
225
339
416
514
616
720
812
912
1028
1129
126
1325
1416
156
169
1716
1821
1928
2015
218
2210
239
242
258
263
2720
287
2910
3049
318
328
3314
3410
358
365
3717
3830
3914
408
4112
4211
4316
449
458
4620
4727
4816
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences168
matches
0"was stacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs219
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences217
ratio0.014
matches
0"Sandalwood and something sharp—like old iron."
1"When she sank low on the threadbare fabric, he closed the distance—stopping a breath away."
2"Then she took the second and perched on the couch arm—just out of reach."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.022564102564102566
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010256410256410256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences217
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences217
mean6.03
std3.49
cv0.58
sampleLengths
010
118
28
37
43
56
68
711
813
97
1011
112
126
139
147
1514
162
1714
186
198
204
212
2210
232
248
254
266
276
288
294
304
315
3214
332
348
352
364
373
385
3911
406
417
429
432
444
453
463
473
482
494
56.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.35023041474654376
totalSentences217
uniqueOpeners76
68.97% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences145
matches
0"Then she took the second"
1"Then a heavy knock on"
2"Just three heavy raps again."
ratio0.021
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount85
totalSentences145
matches
0"He filled the frame, too"
1"she said, voice low"
2"He stepped forward without an"
3"He dropped the cane tip"
4"she said, pressing her shoulder"
5"His French accent curved around"
6"She’d said that the last"
7"His gaze slid to her"
8"She caught him staring."
9"His voice turned softer"
10"She shoved a pile of"
11"He caught one by the"
12"He pocketed the top sheet."
13"He set the rest on"
14"His jaw tightened."
15"He tapped the cane heel."
16"He cut himself off, exhaled"
17"She braced her hands on"
18"He offered a pale hand"
19"Her breath ticked in her"
ratio0.586
18.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences145
matches
0"Aurora yanked the door open"
1"He filled the frame, too"
2"Ptolemy’s hiss ricocheted from just"
3"she said, voice low"
4"He stepped forward without an"
5"The third bolt turned with"
6"The door swung shut behind"
7"He dropped the cane tip"
8"Amber eye caught the weak"
9"Sandalwood and something sharp—like old"
10"she said, pressing her shoulder"
11"The tabby bristled, claws scratching"
12"His French accent curved around"
13"She’d said that the last"
14"His gaze slid to her"
15"The crescent scar peeked from"
16"She caught him staring."
17"His voice turned softer"
18"She shoved a pile of"
19"He caught one by the"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, voice low"
1"She’d, too"
2"He motioned, its cushions ragged"
3"he said, voice calm"
4"warden spoke, voice cold:"
92.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She’d (would)"
1"Aurora warned (warn)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"warden spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.116
81.9711%