Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0434C6E024C304H1QBQ93

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
1m 57s
Cost:
$0.059651
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The entrance crouched between two shuttered shops on Camden High Street, a rusted service door with fresh tape strung across it. A pair of uniforms guarded it, boots planted on the greasy slabs, breath ghosting the thin winter air. Quinn checked her watch. Leather strap creaked under her thumb. 04:23. She ducked under the tape. “Morning, Detective.” One of the constables shifted his grip on the clipboard. “Bit of a maze down there. Watch your step.” “If I fall, I’ll land on your deskwork.” Her boots took the concrete stairs without pause. The air thickened as she went down. Old dust, old leaks, the dull hum of the city filtered through layers of brick. The stairwell walls carried peeling cream paint and graffiti in three colours, the newer tags splashed over something older, more deliberate, almost like cramped handwriting. Patel waited at the bottom, tie loosened, suit jacket open over a stab vest. He wiped his nose with the back of his wrist. “You picked a nice spot,” she walked past him into the dark passage, light from his torch flaring over her shoulder. “You’re welcome. Thought you’d enjoy a field trip.” His grin barely held. “Abandoned station under Camden. Got a call about a body, no caller ID, no callback. ARV cleared it, then called us. No trains in decades. No power, no CCTV. Spooky as hell.” Quinn ignored the last bit. “Where’s SOCO?” “On platform level. About to wrap, unless you tell them to rip it all up again.” She followed the passage. Concrete underfoot gave way to old tiles, their white glazed faces stained with an ochre film. The ceiling dipped, pipes and cables ran like veins. Ahead, portable floodlights marked the end of the tunnel with a harsh white flare. “At least the rats are on strike,” Patel muttered. “They’re watching,” she answered. He gave a dry snort. The abandoned platform opened out slow, like a curtain dragged aside. Floodlights on tripods bleached colour from everything, cast hard shadows. The arched roof loomed above, its soot-black curve stitched with cables and rusted fixtures. Old posters clung to the walls in torn ribbons—faded faces selling soap, cigarettes, a West End show that closed before Patel’s birth. The middle of the platform carried the body. Uniforms ringed the scene, bored and braced. A SOCO tech knelt nearby with a camera, flash bursting in intervals. Around the corpse lay a scatter of objects: bottles, used candles, some chalk or paint markings on the tiles, the dull glint of metal. Quinn paused at the platform edge. “Walk me in,” her voice cut through the echo. Patel fell in beside her. “Male. Late twenties, early thirties. No ID. Single stab to the chest. Plenty of blood loss but it pooled wrong. ME will love it. Looks like his heart ruptured or something. We found syringes, spoons, baggies. I’m thinking drug meet gone sideways, bit of ritual nonsense for mood lighting.” Quinn watched the body. The victim lay on his back, arms stretched a fraction out from his sides. Head angled toward the tunnel mouth. Eyes open, fixed on the curved ceiling. His T‑shirt stuck to his chest, black now where it met the knife wound. No knife in sight. Around him, a circle ringed the tiles. Thick line, about a metre in radius. Grey, not quite chalk. Symbols interrupted the line: tight curves, slashes, small hooked marks, each placed at equal points around the circumference. The blood seeped across two of them, but the circle remained unbroken, the red meeting the line without crossing it except where someone’s boot had smeared both. “You reckon junkies did that?” she nodded at the circle. Patel shrugged. “You’ve met hipster occult kids. They google a sigil, copy it in chalk, overdose for aesthetic.” “Who told you that phrase.” “Internet. I keep up.” She stepped closer. The tech stiffened. “Mind the line, please,” his voice chafed. “I see it.” Quinn stopped a hair’s breadth from the grey ring. The dust outside it looked undisturbed, pale film that softened tile edges. Inside the circle, apart from the blood and the victim, the floor looked cleaner. As if more feet had moved there, recently. “How many sets of footprints?” she twisted toward the tech. He checked his notes. “Victim’s. Two more distinct adult sizes. Plus ours, obviously.” “Show me where.” He signalled with a gloved hand. Tape markers dotted the platform. Within the circle, footprints overlapped. Outside, only a narrow arc of prints led toward the tunnel and back, where uniforms and forensics had passed. “Whoever met him stayed in the circle,” Quinn murmured. Patel scratched his jaw. “Or the junkies danced round their candle pit. Same thing.” “Any shoe tread impressions going off toward the tracks?” “Nothing clear. Bits near the edge, could be his, could be old. Dust is weird down there, layers. Too mixed.” She crouched, knees protesting. The grey line looked more granular here. Not chalk. Ash? Ground bone? The thought rose uninvited. She dipped a gloved fingertip close, did not touch. A faint metallic smell wound up, under the tang of blood and disinfectant wipes. Not cremation. Something sharper, mixed with wax and something oily. Her gaze moved to the objects around the body. Three glass bottles, unlabelled. One toppled, dregs thick in the bottom. A spoon blackened on one side. Two syringes, one capped, one open, both without visible residue. Candles in small brass holders, wicks cut short, wax runnels frozen down their sides. A few had extinguished mid-drip, forming thin spikes. “User kit, no gear,” she rose. Patel frowned. “You’ve got syringes. Bagged powder in his pocket. That’s gear.” “They’re clean,” Quinn pointed at the syringes. “One capped, one uncapped, neither used. No blood, no tie‑off marks on his arms. Any track marks?” Tech shook his head. “None. ME confirmed initial.” “So he came to a drug deal with unused syringes, then got stabbed before he managed to shoot up? And his dealer packed up and left everything.” Quinn’s tone stayed flat. Patel pursed his lips. “Panic. Knife comes out, everyone runs. Seen it.” “Then where’s the knife. Where are the footprints beyond the circle.” Her eyes tracked the arc again. “And why set up the candles in a perfect ring, burn them down to match lengths, then bail before the fun starts.” “You think they made the circle after he died?” Patel lifted his shoulders. “Dress the scene, scare the pigs. Play at Satan.” Quinn looked at the symbols again. Each mark had a confidence to it. No hesitation, no retries ground into the dust. Whoever drew them knew the pattern. “Check the baggies,” she turned to the tech. “Composition?” “Prelim gave us sugar cut with caffeine. No proper product yet. Waiting on lab.” “Fake drugs.” Patel’s voice carried more interest. “So he got scammed, took issue, buyer pulls a knife—” “He doesn’t look like he moved.” Quinn nodded at the body’s limbs, the set of his torso. “No defensive wounds?” “None obvious,” the tech glanced down. “Hands clean except—” Quinn stepped round to the right hand. The fingers curled in a loose claw, thumb angled in. Dark smear crept along the side of his index and middle fingers, up toward the nail beds. Not blood. A thin soot line, almost in the shape of something he’d gripped. “Except that,” she completed it. “Like he held a burning object.” “Candle?” Patel edged closer. She glanced at the holders. All sat untouched, centered inside the circle, their wax neat except the drip patterns. The closest to his hand stood a full handspan away, upright. No scorch on the tiles where a candle might have toppled. “He held something. They took it.” She straightened. Patel flipped his notebook. “We’ve got a working theory. This place—” he gestured at the platform “—is a rumour in CID. Blokes call it a ghost market. Word on some encrypted channels about off‑grid swap meets down here. Guns, pills, knock‑off antiques, that sort of thing. Our mystery caller tonight? Might’ve been a rival crew dropping a dime.” Quinn ran a thumb over her watch strap. The leather felt dry. “Anything on those channels about circles and candles.” “Just general ‘don’t mess with the weirdos under Camden.’ You know how kids talk.” She let that sit. Her gaze swept the platform again. The far end carried evidence of more recent use than the rest. Stalls of rough timber and scaffold poles, half dismantled, leaned against the damp wall. A row of trestle tables carried scuffs and scratches, but no goods. A few discarded crates sat empty, their labels peeled away. One metal-framed structure jutted from the wall, a makeshift stall front, its tarpaulin cover rolled up and tied. She walked toward them, boots ticking over the tiles. “None of this was here last survey,” Patel trailed behind. “British Transport Police logs have this place marked as sealed and cleared. Ten, twelve years quiet.” “Someone built a market down here and moved out fast.” Quinn’s fingers skimmed a crate edge. “Any prints?” “Smears, gloves, the works. They wiped their tracks or used magic fairy dust.” Her gaze settled on a small object in a plastic evidence bag, clipped to a board on one of the trestles. A constable moved aside to let her view it. The item looked like a coin at first glance. Off‑white, the size of a two‑pound piece, with rough edges and a hole bored neat through its centre. Small symbols etched around the hole, shallow but crisp. Bone, not plastic. She could almost feel it under her teeth. “Found near the stairs,” the constable offered. “Bagged as a pendant or carved button.” Quinn took the board. The etchings around the central hole curled and hooked, not English letters, not runes she recognised. Worn smooth at the top, where a cord might have threaded through. The underside carried faint scratches, as if it had knocked against other hard surfaces for years. “You ever see that script?” she angled it at Patel. “Looks like something off a metal band logo.” She looked longer. The style of the symbols echoed the marks in the grey circle, the same tight curves and sharp hooks, scaled small. “Get that prioritised at the lab,” she passed the board back. “Material, age, tool marks. And I want a decent photograph of every one of those carvings.” Patel squinted at her. “You think our vic came down with a membership token.” “He ended up inside a private event. They don’t sell groceries down here.” She moved along the trestle. Another bag lay clipped to the same board, half hidden by form sheets. Rectangular, brass. She flipped the paperwork up. Inside, on a square of lint‑free padding, sat a small brass compass. Not standard issue for hikers. Its case carried a soft green bloom in spots, verdigris clinging in pits and seams. The glass face showed an off‑white dial, not marked with cardinal letters. Instead, the edge bore tiny protective sigils, similar again to the circle’s script. The needle inside did not rest on a fixed point. It drifted, nosed this way and that as if it scented something. She tapped the glass through the bag. The needle swung, slow, then locked with intent toward the far wall, away from the tunnels. The direction avoided the stairs, the entrance, the scattered market stalls. It pointed at a section of soot‑black tiles about halfway down the curved wall, where someone had sprayed a crude skull over an older patch of discoloured stone. Patel noticed. “We got a magic compass now?” “Where did you find it.” “One of the ARV lads picked it up near the tracks. Thought it was junk, nearly pocketed it until I glared.” He shifted, uneasy now. “It kept pointing at him till they bagged it. Or so he swears.” Quinn walked toward the point in the wall while she watched the compass. The needle held steady. As she neared, details formed in the stained surface that she had missed from a distance. The brickwork under the tiles bulged in a shallow, bricked-up arch. The mortar at its edges looked newer than the surrounding masonry by a decade, maybe more. A faint, almost imperceptible outline of an older doorway lurked there, under the soot, under the graffiti. Something had been sealed. “BTP records mention any redundant access points on this level.” Her voice carried across to Patel. He consulted his notes, flipped pages. “We’ve got two maintenance tunnels, both mapped. No third arch.” “There was one.” She touched the cool tile with the back of her wrist. “Someone bricked it, then someone else tried to hide the fact. You see this skull tag?” “Yeah. Charming.” The skull’s white curve sat off‑centre, its eyes sprayed over the arch’s highest point. Around it, messy stars and letters covered the mortar lines. Under one of the starred shapes, a trace of that same grey powder clung in the crack, caught out of reach of the cleaner sweeps. “You think your ghost market had a side door.” Patel came to her shoulder. “I think the slightly odd compass is more honest than whoever drafted the station plan.” She watched the needle. It still pointed at the arch, unwavering. Patel exhaled through his teeth. “Alright. So we’ve got a secret door that doesn’t officially exist, a weird token, a magic Boy Scout trinket, and a dead bloke in a circle. Could still be a drug meet.” “Drug meets don’t usually come with keyholes you need bone for.” Quinn nodded toward the token board. “And I don’t like anonymous callers who know where to send us, but not their name.” “Maybe one of the crowd grew a conscience.” She turned back to the body. “Get telecoms to pull every call into Camden control between midnight and four. Landline, mobile, VoIP, all of it. Cross‑check against any devices that hit masts around here then went dark.” “That’s a big net.” “Cast it. We don’t close this as a junkie stabbing.” Patel shifted his weight. “Super will want a direction by briefing.” “He’ll get one.” She walked back into the circle’s perimeter, eyes flicking from symbol to symbol. “Our victim entered a space built for something else. Whoever met him wanted whatever he brought—” her gaze flicked to the smear on his fingers “—and took it. They staged drugs, they left a mess of half‑truths, and they made a neat call to us once they cleared out.” Patel gnawed at his pen. “You keep saying ‘they’.” “He didn’t stab himself in the chest at that angle.” She gestured at the wound. The entry point sat just left of centre, angled downward. Whoever drove the blade had stood close and above him. No torn clothing, no hesitation nicks. “Maybe he knelt,” Patel ventured. “Then where are the bruises on his knees.” Her eyes narrowed at the intact denim. “Why no trace around the tracks. No blood spatter there, no cast-off. Every drop radiates from here. He died inside their circle, in their time.” The tech looked between them, uneasy. “Anything else on him.” Quinn addressed him. “Wallet. Empty of cash, but cards still there. Phone, dead. No damage. One slip of paper.” The tech dug into his folder and held up a smaller evidence bag. Inside lay a torn scrap with a name and number in blue ink. The pen had left a small blot in the loop of the second letter. Quinn recognised the surname at once. Kowalski. “Read the full line,” she did not reach for it. He lifted it. “Eva Kowalski. Then a mobile. No other writing.” Patel whistled. “You know her.” “Research assistant at the British Museum. Restricted archives.” Her jaw tightened. “We picked up her name on a different case.” “The clique?” Patel’s brows climbed. Quinn did not respond. She looked once more at the grey ring, the bone token, the compass that refused to point north, the bricked arch hidden under graffiti and soot. Other eyes had looked at this station tonight and seen a dead buyer, bad batch, typical chaos. Her gaze caught the pattern under the clutter, the line that ran straight through: a closed door, a circle that kept its shape, tools made for a purpose that didn’t fit any drug map. She turned to Patel. “Get SOCO back on their knees. Full trace on the circle compound, candle wax, everything around that doorway. And I want a team from BTP who know more than their paperwork. Whoever drew that arch out of the plans either works with them or took their pen.” He tapped his notebook. “And Eva Kowalski.” “I’ll take her,” Quinn answered. Her fingers brushed the plastic of the compass bag as she passed, watched the needle shiver then settle once more on the sealed arch, as if it tried to press through the glass. “We’ve been looking in the wrong place,” she murmured, more to herself than to anyone else. Then she stepped out of the circle and into the work that waited.
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native_tokens_prompt1009
native_tokens_completion5839
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native_tokens_reasoning2051
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.427
leniency0.854
rawRatio0.023
effectiveRatio0.019
98.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2842
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2842
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"glint"
2"echo"
3"perfect"
4"structure"
5"etched"
6"echoed"
7"standard"
8"unwavering"
9"weight"
10"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences206
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences262
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2836
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1787
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Patel"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Patel"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Quinn20
West1
End1
Patel25
Tech1
English1
One3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Patel"
2"Tech"
3"One"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"West"
4"End"
globalScore0.801
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a coin at first glance"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2836
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences262
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean21.82
std18.25
cv0.837
sampleLengths
039
111
25
321
416
547
624
721
844
97
1016
1143
129
134
145
1557
168
1743
186
199
2054
214
2245
2363
2410
2518
265
274
286
297
3046
3110
3213
333
3435
359
3614
379
3820
3920
4033
4158
426
4312
4424
458
4631
4712
4839
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs298
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences262
ratio0.004
matches
0"Old posters clung to the walls in torn ribbons—faded faces selling soap, cigarettes, a West End show that closed before Patel’s birth."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1792
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"against other hard surfaces"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.025669642857142856
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002232142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences262
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences262
mean10.82
std8.16
cv0.754
sampleLengths
021
118
24
36
41
55
612
79
816
97
1015
1125
1214
1310
1421
1512
1632
175
182
1916
204
2116
229
2314
249
254
265
2711
2810
2914
3022
318
327
3312
3424
356
369
375
3849
394
4014
416
427
4314
444
457
467
474
4818
4927
71.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4367816091954023
totalSentences261
uniqueOpeners114
53.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences187
matches
0"All sat untouched, centered inside"
1"Instead, the edge bore tiny"
2"Then she stepped out of"
ratio0.016
98.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences187
matches
0"She ducked under the tape."
1"Her boots took the concrete"
2"He wiped his nose with"
3"she walked past him into"
4"His grin barely held"
5"She followed the passage."
6"He gave a dry snort."
7"her voice cut through the"
8"His T‑shirt stuck to his"
9"she nodded at the circle"
10"She stepped closer."
11"his voice chafed"
12"she twisted toward the tech"
13"He checked his notes."
14"He signalled with a gloved"
15"She crouched, knees protesting."
16"She dipped a gloved fingertip"
17"Her gaze moved to the"
18"Her eyes tracked the arc"
19"she turned to the tech"
ratio0.305
66.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences187
matches
0"The entrance crouched between two"
1"A pair of uniforms guarded"
2"Quinn checked her watch."
3"Leather strap creaked under her"
4"She ducked under the tape."
5"Her boots took the concrete"
6"The air thickened as she"
7"The stairwell walls carried peeling"
8"Patel waited at the bottom,"
9"He wiped his nose with"
10"she walked past him into"
11"His grin barely held"
12"Quinn ignored the last bit."
13"She followed the passage."
14"The ceiling dipped, pipes and"
15"He gave a dry snort."
16"The abandoned platform opened out"
17"Floodlights on tripods bleached colour"
18"The arched roof loomed above,"
19"The middle of the platform"
ratio0.786
80.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences187
matches
0"As if more feet had"
1"Whoever drew them knew the"
2"Whoever drove the blade had"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Old posters clung to the walls in torn ribbons—faded faces selling soap, cigarettes, a West End show that closed before Patel’s birth."
1"The dust outside it looked undisturbed, pale film that softened tile edges."
2"The underside carried faint scratches, as if it had knocked against other hard surfaces for years."
90.91% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn nodded, the set of his torso"
1"She walked back, eyes flicking from symbol to symbol"
2"she murmured, more to herself than to anyone else"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Patel muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn addressed (address)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences103
tagDensity0.058
leniency0.117
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.078
92.1259%