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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04QNGZ1KCJ189S5WDANV1
Run Details
Model:
DeepSeek V3.2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.001175
Provider:
Novita
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.95%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
60.39%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
78.43%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
77.45%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
98.83%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
71.79%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
62.37%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
55.16%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
64.10%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
85.38%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
27.31%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
44.33%
Technical jargon density
(details)
53.57%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
82.1360%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The smell hit first—ozone and
burnt sugar, the kind that sticks to the back of your throat.
Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under
the police tape strung across the entrance to the disused lift shaft.
The abandoned Tube station beneath
Camden was a maze of Victorian brick and modern decay, but the real action was down here, in the places the public never saw.
The crime scene unit’s portable
lights cast harsh white beams across the cavernous space. In the center of the cracked concrete floor, a circle about six feet in diameter was scorched black, the pattern too geometric, too
perfect
for any conventional fire. No heat source, no accelerant residue, just that crisp, unnerving sigil burned into the ground. Around it, the usual markers.
A body bag zipped shut
on a gurney.
Evidence markers like little plastic
tombstones.
Sergeant Miller looked up from
his tablet.
His face was pale under
the lights. “Quinn. Took your time.” “Traffic’s a beast, even for the dead.”
She adjusted the worn leather
watch
on her wrist, a habit. Her eyes swept the scene. “What’ve we got?” “Male, late fifties. No ID yet. Cause of death… undetermined.”
Miller gestured at the circle
. “No signs of trauma. No ligature marks. Tox screen will take days. He was just… lying in the middle of that.” “Heart attack?” “Maybe. But the burn pattern…”
Quinn stepped closer, careful not
to disturb the perimeter.
The air hummed, a faint
vibration she felt in her molars.
She’d felt that before, three
years ago, in a warehouse by the docks right before everything went to hell.
Right before Morris stopped answering
his radio. “Who found him?” “Anonymous tip called in about a ‘disturbance.’ Uniforms got here, found the door to this service access kicked in from the outside, and him in here. Cold. No witnesses. This place is off every maintenance map from the last twenty years.”
Miller’s gaze followed hers to
the burn marks. “We’re thinking some kind of ritual thing. Kids, maybe. Goths. Lighting fires, got spooked, ran off.” “And left their
perfectly
drawn, occult-looking circle behind? Kids are messy.”
Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened
. She crouched, her movements precise, military.
She didn’t touch the scorched
line, just studied it. The pattern wasn’t random graffiti.
The lines intersected at precise
angles, forming symbols that made her eyes water if she stared too long. “This wasn’t drawn with spray paint and a lighter. This is
etched
. Branded.” “You’re seeing things, Quinn. It’s soot.”
She stood, brushing non-existent dust
from her trousers. “Where’s his personal effects?” Miller nodded toward a forensics officer bagging items near the wall. Quinn walked over. In a clear evidence bag lay a few coins, a handkerchief, a packet of mints, and a small, tarnished brass compass. The officer sealed it. “Can I see that?” Quinn asked. The officer hesitated, then handed her the bag. Quinn held it up to the light. The compass was old, the casing verdigris-stained brass.
Its face was etched with
tiny,
intricate
markings—
not nautical directions, but odd, angular sigils
. The needle
wasn’t pointing
north.
It was quivering, spinning in
a slow, lazy circle,
as if searching
. “Compass is broken,” Miller said, coming up behind her. “Is it?” Quinn watched the needle. It didn’t spin wildly.
It drifted, then would jerk
a few degrees to the left, hold, then drift again. Like it was
being pulled
. “Where was this found?” “In his left hand. Clutched tight.” She turned the bag over. The patina was uneven, worn smooth in places as if from constant handling. A tool, not a trinket. “He was holding it when he died. That means something.” “It means he liked old compasses.” Miller’s patience
was thinning
. “Look, the brass are upstairs wanting answers. We’ve got a John Doe in an unauthorized location with no obvious cause of death. Occult angle is a dead-end press nightmare. Let’s keep it simple. Homeless guy, bad heart, squats in a weird place, dies. End of.” Quinn’s gaze drifted from the compass back to the scorched circle. Then to the walls. The brickwork was stained with decades of damp, but near the floor, about ten feet from the circle, she saw something else. A smudge. She walked over, crouched again. “What now?” “Boot print.”
It was faint, a partial
in the thick dust, right at the edge where the light from the portable lamps
started to
fade. The tread was distinctive—deep, aggressive lug patterns. Not the smooth soles of a homeless man’s worn shoes. Not police issue. “Someone else was here. Stood right here, watching.” “Could be from the uniforms.” “They’d have logged it. And they wouldn’t stand this far back.”
She rose, pacing the distance
. From the print to the body’s location was a direct line of sight. “He wasn’t alone.” Miller sighed, the sound
echoing
in the dank space. “Even if he wasn’t, what’s the play? We’ve got no suspect, no motive, no weapon.” “The circle is the weapon. Or the result of one.”
She pointed at the compass
in the evidence bag. “And that’s the key. He was using it to find this place, or to find something in this place.” “A compass points north, Quinn. That one’s busted.” “It’s not pointing north. It’s pointing.”
She looked at the quivering
needle, then at the blackened sigil on the floor. A cold certainty settled in her gut. “He was looking for something specific. Something that leaves a mark like that. And he found it. Or it found him.”
She walked back to the
center, standing at the edge of the burn. The humming was louder here.
She closed her eyes for
a second, and behind her lids she saw Morris’s face, the static on the radio, the smell of ozone and copper. The same smell. “You’re connecting dots that aren’t there,”
Miller said, his voice lower now
. “Again.” Her eyes snapped open. “The evidence is all here, Miller. You just have to look at it without deciding what it has to be first. The kicked-in door suggests forced entry, but by whom? Him? Or the person who followed him? The body is in the center of a
perfect
, burned symbol, but there’s no soot on him, no scorching on his clothes. The effect was localized to the floor only. That’s not a fire. That’s a discharge.” “A discharge of what?” “Energy.” The word hung in the cold air. She gestured to the compass. “Supernatural energy. He had a device that detects it. He came here because it led him here. Something happened. A confrontation, or an accident. The energy released, left that mark, and killed him. The person with the boot print watched it happen, then left.” She met Miller’s skeptical gaze. “It’s the only sequence that fits every piece.” Miller shook his head, a slow, weary motion. “It fits if you believe in ghost stories and magic compasses. I need something I can put in a report. A drug deal gone bad. A fall. A medical event.” “And the circle?” “Art project. Coincidence.” “Coincidence is the excuse of the lazy detective.” The words came out sharper than she intended. Morris used to say that. She saw the flash of irritation in Miller’s eyes, the same look her old partner would get before he’d tell her to rein it in. “I’m not lazy, Quinn. I’m practical. You’re chasing shadows. You have been since—” He stopped himself, but the meaning was clear. Since Morris. Quinn looked back at the compass needle. It had stopped spinning. It pointed,
unwavering
, directly at her. A
chill
traced
her spine. She took a slow step to the side. The needle shifted, tracking her movement, then swung back to orient on the scorched circle on the floor. “See that?” she asked. Miller looked. “It’s stuck.” “It’s not stuck.” She moved again, quicker this time, walking a wide arc. The needle pivoted smoothly, its tip following her like a silent accusation before jerking back to the circle as if on a tether. “It’s attuned. It’s reacting to the residual energy in this room, and it’s reacting to… proximity.” She stopped walking. The pieces locked together. The victim had the compass. The compass led him to a place of powerful energy—this spot. He activated something, or triggered something. The energy discharged, killing him and branding the floor. But the compass was still active. It was still pointing to the source. The source wasn’t gone. It was just dormant. And it was right beneath their feet. “We need to seal this area. Full quarantine. No one else comes down here until we get a… a specialist.” The word felt alien on her tongue. “A specialist.” Miller’s laugh was hollow. “What kind of specialist, Quinn? A ghostbuster?” “Someone who understands things that don’t fit in your reports.” She held up the evidence bag, the compass needle now trembling violently. “This isn’t a case for a
standard
autopsy or a drug squad. This is something else. And if we ignore it, if we write it up as a vagrant heart attack, we’re going to miss it. And the next body won’t be some anonymous John Doe in a forgotten hole. It’ll be one of ours.” The
silence
that followed was thick, broken only by the distant drip of water. Miller stared at the compass, at the
unwavering
needle pointed at the black sigil. For the first time, doubt
flickered
across his face,
not in her theory, but in the sheer, unsettling wrongness of the object in the bag
. “What do you want to do?”
he finally asked, his voice quiet
. Quinn looked at the scorched earth, then at the faint boot print in the dust. Someone else knew. Someone else had seen. A witness, or a participant. They were out there. And they had a head start.
created_at
"2026-02-19T03:47:18.328Z"
2/19/2026, 3:47:18 AM
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tokens_completion
2576
native_tokens_prompt
1033
native_tokens_completion
2244
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
21
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"She moved again [again]"
1
"he finally asked [finally]"
dialogueSentences
56
tagDensity
0.375
leniency
0.75
rawRatio
0.095
effectiveRatio
0.071
96.95%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1641
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
60.39%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1641
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"perfect"
count
2
1
word
"etched"
count
2
2
word
"intricate"
count
1
3
word
"echoing"
count
1
4
word
"unwavering"
count
2
5
word
"chill"
count
1
6
word
"traced"
count
1
7
word
"standard"
count
1
8
word
"silence"
count
1
9
word
"flickered"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfect"
1
"etched"
2
"intricate"
3
"echoing"
4
"unwavering"
5
"chill"
6
"traced"
7
"standard"
8
"silence"
9
"flickered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
109
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
109
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
142
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
75
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1632
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
78.43%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
33
wordCount
978
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.43
worstName
"Miller"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow
1
Quinn
10
Tube
1
Camden
1
Victorian
1
Miller
14
Morris
4
Since
1
persons
0
"Harlow"
1
"Quinn"
2
"Miller"
3
"Morris"
4
"Since"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.784
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
68
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"as if searching"
77.45%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
1.225
wordCount
1632
matches
0
"not nautical directions, but odd, angular sigils"
1
"not in her theory, but in the sheer, unsettling wrongness of the object in the bag"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
142
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
51
mean
32
std
23.77
cv
0.743
sampleLengths
0
63
1
76
2
18
3
26
4
36
5
2
6
5
7
46
8
3
9
65
10
66
11
6
12
12
13
39
14
6
15
54
16
9
17
34
18
6
19
33
20
55
21
44
22
2
23
53
24
5
25
32
26
24
27
38
28
8
29
48
30
47
31
13
32
78
33
4
34
70
35
38
36
3
37
3
38
46
39
23
40
48
41
4
42
4
43
52
44
66
45
27
46
13
47
77
48
53
49
12
98.83%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
109
matches
0
"was etched"
1
"being pulled"
71.79%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
3
totalVerbs
156
matches
0
"wasn’t pointing"
1
"was quivering"
2
"was thinning"
62.37%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
4
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
4
totalSentences
142
ratio
0.028
matches
0
"The smell hit first—ozone and burnt sugar, the kind that sticks to the back of your throat."
1
"Its face was etched with tiny, intricate markings—not nautical directions, but odd, angular sigils."
2
"The tread was distinctive—deep, aggressive lug patterns."
3
"The compass led him to a place of powerful energy—this spot."
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
984
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"casing verdigris-stained brass."
1
"distinctive—deep, aggressive lug"
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.03353658536585366
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.006097560975609756
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
142
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
142
mean
11.49
std
10.8
cv
0.94
sampleLengths
0
17
1
17
2
29
3
14
4
28
5
15
6
5
7
8
8
6
9
7
10
7
11
4
12
18
13
5
14
3
15
15
16
21
17
2
18
5
19
9
20
11
21
19
22
7
23
3
24
49
25
16
26
15
27
6
28
9
29
5
30
18
31
13
32
6
33
8
34
4
35
11
36
3
37
21
38
4
39
6
40
8
41
7
42
8
43
14
44
5
45
12
46
9
47
6
48
4
49
15
55.16%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
10
diversityRatio
0.3732394366197183
totalSentences
142
uniqueOpeners
53
64.10%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"Right before Morris stopped answering"
1
"Then to the walls."
ratio
0.019
85.38%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
35
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"His face was pale under"
1
"She adjusted the worn leather"
2
"Her eyes swept the scene."
3
"She’d felt that before, three"
4
"She crouched, her movements precise,"
5
"She didn’t touch the scorched"
6
"She stood, brushing non-existent dust"
7
"Its face was etched with"
8
"It was quivering, spinning in"
9
"It didn’t spin wildly."
10
"It drifted, then would jerk"
11
"She turned the bag over."
12
"She walked over, crouched again."
13
"It was faint, a partial"
14
"She rose, pacing the distance"
15
"She pointed at the compass"
16
"She looked at the quivering"
17
"She walked back to the"
18
"She closed her eyes for"
19
"Her eyes snapped open."
ratio
0.337
27.31%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
90
totalSentences
104
matches
0
"The smell hit first—ozone and"
1
"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2
"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
3
"The crime scene unit’s portable"
4
"A body bag zipped shut"
5
"Evidence markers like little plastic"
6
"Sergeant Miller looked up from"
7
"His face was pale under"
8
"She adjusted the worn leather"
9
"Her eyes swept the scene."
10
"Miller gestured at the circle"
11
"Quinn stepped closer, careful not"
12
"The air hummed, a faint"
13
"She’d felt that before, three"
14
"Miller’s gaze followed hers to"
15
"Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened"
16
"She crouched, her movements precise,"
17
"She didn’t touch the scorched"
18
"The pattern wasn’t random graffiti."
19
"The lines intersected at precise"
ratio
0.865
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
104
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
44.33%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
29
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"The smell hit first—ozone and burnt sugar, the kind that sticks to the back of your throat."
1
"The lines intersected at precise angles, forming symbols that made her eyes water if she stared too long."
2
"It was quivering, spinning in a slow, lazy circle, as if searching."
3
"The needle pivoted smoothly, its tip following her like a silent accusation before jerking back to the circle as if on a tether."
53.57%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
21
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"Miller said, his voice lower now"
1
"He stopped, but the meaning was clear"
2
"he finally asked, his voice quiet"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
56
tagDensity
0.089
leniency
0.179
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
82.1360%