Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04TW2KF6CXS16Q998DDKR

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.001374
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain rattled, a harsh, brittle sound against the hollow wood. Rory checked the peephole, her breath hitching in her throat. When she saw the platinum-blond hair slicked back against the damp grey London sky, she yanked the heavy deadbolt across. She didn't bother with the top two; she needed to open it now. The chain held. She undid the latch, swinging the door inward just enough to see him. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. He looked like he hadn't slept in a week, his charcoal suit clinging to shoulders that should have been relaxed but were instead stiff with tension. A bruised knuckle marred the silk of his cuff, darkening the fabric. "You told me you were in Paris," Rory said. The words came out sharp, scraping against her throat. She pressed her palm against the wood, anchoring herself. "The last train was full of demons," Lucien replied. His voice was smooth, cultured, and terrifyingly calm. He didn't reach for the handle. He just looked at her, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one abyssal black— boring into her through the narrow gap. "Is Ptolemy inside?" "Don't worry about the cat. What are you doing here, Lucien?" He shifted his weight. The click of his heel on the pavement sounded like a gunshot in the small hallway. "I need a favor. The kind you never pay back. Or rather, the kind you can never pay." "Get back to France." He stepped closer. Rain dripping from his collar hit the floorboards. He smelled of expensive cologne, gasoline, and something metallic—copper. Blood? "That ex-boyfriend. Evan." Rory’s heart slammed against her ribs. She clenched her fists, the tendons popping in her wrists. The small crescent-shaped scar from years ago itched, a phantom memory of stitches. "He's dead," she lied. "I told you. The police." Lucien’s lips twitched. It wasn't a smile. It was a warning. "Demons don't stay dead, Rory. Especially not Evan. He moved on. And now he's hunting a resource. I didn't come for you." "Yes, you did." The door clicked. The deadbolt slid back. The chain rattled loose. Rory tried to slam it, but Lucien caught the frame. His hand moved with supernatural speed, blocking her path. The heat radiating from him was intense, unnatural. He shoved the door inward, forcing her to step back or be crushed. He walked in, bypassing the cramped entryway and the stack of delivery menus on the table. The flat smelled of stale curry from downstairs and old paper. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, launched himself from a stack of books with a yowl, claws extended. Lucien didn't even flinch. He reached down, a blur of motion, and caught the animal by the scruff of the neck, depositing it gently but firmly on a pile of scrolls. "Ignore the mess," Rory said, grabbing a tea towel from the counter. She needed something to do with her hands. She needed to get him out of her space. "The rent's due. If you're looking for Eva, she's at the clinic." "She's not there," Lucien said. He walked to the window, ignoring the chaos of her life, the dust motes dancing in the light, the stacks of law textbooks that would never be read. He looked out at the brick wall across the alley. "She's safe. But you aren't." "I'm fine." He turned. He moved with a languid grace that belied the violence beneath the surface. He closed the distance between them in two long strides. Rory backed up until her spine hit the shelf of encyclopedias, leaving her trapped. "I saw the bruise," he said. He didn't ask. He stated it. Rory looked away, staring at the knot in his tie. "It's nothing. It's work. Yu-Fei's ex-husband was... emotional." Lucien laughed. A dry, humorless sound. "Yu-Fei’s ex-husband has been dead for five years. Don't lie to me, Laila." The use of her alias hit like a slap. "I'm not Laila. I'm Rory. And I don't work for you." He reached out. The ivory-handled cane clicked against the floorboards, a sharp staccato rhythm. He didn't touch her, but the proximity was overwhelming. He leaned in, invading her personal space until his breath ghosted over her ear, warming the cold skin. "I know who you are," he whispered. "And I know who I am. We were a mistake, Rory. I told you that. We are poison together." "I don't want to be. Which is exactly why you're leaving." "I can't leave." His hand brushed her wrist. His fingers were cold, but the touch sent sparks crackling through her veins. He traced the scar. "He found your old number. The one you gave the cops. Someone in the underworld knows you're back in Brick Lane." A chill ran down her spine. The implications sat heavy in the room. "So what? You're here to be my bodyguard?" "I'm here because I couldn't stay away." The confession hung in the air, thick and suffocating. He looked at her mouth, then up to her eyes. "I spent three years in Marseille wondering if I’d made the right choice by walking away. I drove past this flat every day. I knew you were above the curry house. I knew you were safe." "You watched me." The accusation was breathless. "I kept watch." He gripped the back of her neck, his thumb pressing into the tender skin just below her hairline. His grip was firm, not painful, but possessive. "Aurora." "Stop calling me that." "Rory." He leaned in until their foreheads touched. The amber eye glowed, the pupil dilated. "I didn't come to leave you. I came to fix the rest of it." She wanted to push him away. She wanted to tell him to go back to the demons and the suits and the dangerous cities he frequented. But the fear in her gut was morphing into something else—something hot and dangerous and familiar. She looked at the bite mark on his knuckle. It was already turning purple. He was bleeding out, and he was standing there holding her up. "You're bleeding," she whispered. "It's nothing." He tried to pull away, but she didn't let him. She stepped closer, pressing her hand against his chest, feeling the frantic rhythm of his heart beneath the tailored wool. "It's not nothing. You said you couldn't fix this." She looked up at him, her blue eyes challenging him. "Then why are you here?" Lucien looked at her—really looked at her—for the first time all night. The anger in him drained away, replaced by a hunger that made his eyes ache. He reached up, brushing a stray lock of black hair from her face, his thumb tracing her jawline. "Because," he said, his voice dropping an octave, "I'm done watching from the shadows." He kissed her. It wasn't gentle. It was desperate, a collision of teeth and tongue, tasting of rain and whiskey. He smelled like the dark underside of London, the part of the city that only he dared to navigate. Rory wrapped her arms around his waist, pulling him flush against her. The cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. Ptolemy hissed from the pile of scrolls, but neither of them paid it any mind. Rory felt the way his muscles coiled under her hands, the way the heat of him seemed to anchor her to the spot. She closed her eyes, leaning into the familiar taste of his mouth, the taste of a second chance she hadn't dared to hope for.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"abyssal"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"firmly"
count1
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count2
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"silk"
2"abyssal"
3"weight"
4"firmly"
5"dancing"
6"traced"
7"chill"
8"down her spine"
9"familiar"
10"tracing"
11"navigate"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences98
matches
0"was desperate"
99.13% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1245
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount938
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London2
Moreau1
Lucien8
Rory9
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like he hadn't slept in a week, hi"
1"sounded like a gunshot in the small hallwa"
2"smelled like the dark underside of London"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.803
wordCount1245
matches
0"not painful, but possessive"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.64
std18.94
cv0.639
sampleLengths
041
116
257
327
445
511
638
74
824
929
109
1133
123
1311
1456
1558
1641
1748
182
1939
2012
2118
2228
2311
2441
2526
2611
2746
2821
2962
307
3130
324
3329
3468
354
3632
3724
3845
3914
4058
4162
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"been relaxed"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was morphing"
1"was bleeding was standing"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences120
ratio0.042
matches
0"She didn't bother with the top two; she needed to open it now."
1"He just looked at her, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one abyssal black— boring into her through the narrow gap."
2"He smelled of expensive cologne, gasoline, and something metallic—copper."
3"But the fear in her gut was morphing into something else—something hot and dangerous and familiar."
4"Lucien looked at her—really looked at her—for the first time all night."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount946
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.023255813953488372
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005285412262156448
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean10.38
std6.65
cv0.641
sampleLengths
011
110
220
313
43
513
66
726
812
99
109
119
129
138
146
1519
163
1711
184
1916
2018
214
223
238
249
251
263
276
2810
2913
304
315
323
334
344
3522
363
373
384
394
4010
419
428
4313
4416
4511
4616
474
4827
4912
37.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.24166666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences88
matches
0"She didn't bother with the"
1"She undid the latch, swinging"
2"He looked like he hadn't"
3"She pressed her palm against"
4"His voice was smooth, cultured,"
5"He didn't reach for the"
6"He just looked at her,"
7"He shifted his weight."
8"He stepped closer."
9"He smelled of expensive cologne,"
10"She clenched her fists, the"
11"It wasn't a smile."
12"It was a warning."
13"His hand moved with supernatural"
14"He shoved the door inward,"
15"He walked in, bypassing the"
16"He reached down, a blur"
17"She needed something to do"
18"She needed to get him"
19"He walked to the window,"
ratio0.568
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences88
matches
0"The chain rattled, a harsh,"
1"Rory checked the peephole, her"
2"She didn't bother with the"
3"The chain held."
4"She undid the latch, swinging"
5"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
6"He looked like he hadn't"
7"A bruised knuckle marred the"
8"The words came out sharp,"
9"She pressed her palm against"
10"His voice was smooth, cultured,"
11"He didn't reach for the"
12"He just looked at her,"
13"He shifted his weight."
14"The click of his heel"
15"He stepped closer."
16"He smelled of expensive cologne,"
17"Rory’s heart slammed against her"
18"She clenched her fists, the"
19"The small crescent-shaped scar from"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He walked to the window, ignoring the chaos of her life, the dust motes dancing in the light, the stacks of law textbooks that would never be read."
1"He leaned in, invading her personal space until his breath ghosted over her ear, warming the cold skin."
2"He reached up, brushing a stray lock of black hair from her face, his thumb tracing her jawline."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She looked up, her blue eyes challenging him"
1"he said, his voice dropping an octave,"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.103
74.4361%