Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04W3YZC5J0MTQ7CN82AK9

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Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.033255
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora led the way, the Fae-Forged Blade glinting faintly at her side. She had been reluctant to bring Nyx along, but their expertise on the veil and shifts in realms had proven too crucial to ignore. The Grove's entrance loomed ahead, ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary, their surfaces etched with swirls that seemed to undulate in the sunlight. "This is it," Aurora murmured, her voice threading through the still air. Nyx's form was solid, a humanoid silhouette still and tall, their faintly glowing violet eyes sweeping the landscape. "It almost feels like home," they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath. Aurora's bright blue eyes flickered to Nyx before settling on the grove again. "Only way forward," she added, more to herself than her companions, before she stepped between the standing stones. The air changed instantly. Gone was the muted hum of the park; instead, they were enveloped in a symphony of birdcalls and the whispering rustle of leaves. The scent of blooming wildflowers permeated every breath, sweet and dizzying. Rory's shoulders felt the crushing weight of time behaving unusually. "Stay close," she instructed. Nyx drifted beside her, their shadowy form melding with the growing twilight. Aurora reached up to touch the Heartstone Pendant that lay against her chest, feeling comfort in its faint warmth. Beside them walked Isolde Varga, her silver hair floating as though caught in a perpetual breeze. She moved lightly, leaving no footprints in her wake. Each step seemed calculated, every movement imbued with otherworldly grace. "You can sense the magic, can't you?" Isolde's pale lavender eyes were bright with unspoken thoughts. Aurora only nodded, her mind too consumed with the overwhelming beauty of the grove to speak. Effulgent wildflowers sprayed colors like one of nature's own paint-splattered tapestries. Each petal seemed to pulse with its own life, vibrant hues almost hypnotizing in their vividity. Nyx reached out, a shadowy hand brushing the petals of a particularly brilliant bloom. It shivered and glowed faintly, as if the contact woke something within. "This place reverberates with old power," Nyx observed. "Careful, it’s easy to get lost in it." Aurora glanced towards Isolde, hoping for some sort of guidance, but the Seer merely smirked. "Keep going, and you might find what your heart desires. Or fears." The path wound deeper into the grove, the forest breathing around them. Soft, dappled light filtered through the canopy above, creating patterns that danced across the ground. Time seemed to blur, and each step felt heavier, as though they were treading through molasses. Aurora gripped the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade, using the coldness seeping from it to anchor her. Her earlier calm started to waver, replaced by a gnawing sense of unease. “You sense it too, don't you?" Nyx whispered, appearing closer than expected. Aurora nodded. "It's… unnerving." Isolde stopped abruptly, lifting her hand to silence them. She tilted her head, as if listening to some distant, secret melody. "Something hidden awaits us," she spoke slowly, her voice layered with the weight of ages. The world around them shifted. The wildflowers seemed to lean towards them, their vibrant faces almost expectant. Shadows lengthened and thickened, and murmured voices began threading through the trees. “This is different,” Rory whispered, feeling the change palpably. "It feels alive." Nyx's body tensed, their form rippling as if trying to ward something off. "Something is trying to draw us in," they muttered. "Be on guard." Isolde moved forward, her steps confident. Aurora and Nyx had no choice but to follow, their senses on high alert. Aurora nearly stumbled when the path opened into a clearing, the sudden spaciousness nearly overwhelming. In the center of the clearing stood a massive tree, its bark twisted into intricate patterns that gleamed faintly in the dim light. Its vast branches stretched out, forming a natural canopy that blocked out the sky. The air here was denser, almost suffocating, as if the grove was holding its breath. Isolde approached the tree, placing a hand on its trunk. She closed her eyes, her expression serene. "The heart of the grove," she murmured. "It holds secrets that many have sought but few have found." Aurora watched her, a mixture of curiosity and apprehension churning within her. "What does it hold for us?" A faint smile curved Isolde's lips. "Only what you seek." Before Aurora could question her further, the tree's bark began to shimmer. Shapes and patterns shifted, revealing a hidden entrance that seemed to beckon them in. Nyx seemed almost reluctant, their form rippling in hesitation. "Are we sure about this?" they asked, their voice a mere whisper against the stillness. Aurora felt a surge of determination. "We didn’t come this far to turn back now," she said, stepping forward. Isolde nodded in approval. "Into the heart of the grove we go," she said, leading the way. The entrance led to a tunnel that spiraled downward. The walls glowed faintly with an inner light, casting eerie shadows that danced with their movement. It was cooler here, the air tinged with a metallic scent that reminded Aurora of the Fae-Forged Blade. As they descended, the whispers grew louder, indistinct voices weaving through the air. Aurora's heart pounded, every sense heightened. Despite the unease, there was an undeniable thrill in the exploration. The tunnel opened into a cavern, illuminated by bioluminescent fungi that coated the walls in soft blues and greens. Water trickled down from a hidden source, collecting in a clear pool at the center. In the middle of the pool was a pedestal, and upon it, a brilliantly glowing gem. Aurora stepped closer, drawn to the gem's pulsing light. "Is this...?" Isolde's voice held a tinge of amusement. "The Heartstone of the grove. It holds the essence of this place." Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the gem's surface. Warmth radiated from it, spreading through her hand and up her arm, filling her with a sense of peace. For a brief moment, all her fears and doubts melted away. Nyx stood at the edge of the pool, their eyes fixed on the gem. "It’s beautiful," they whispered, their voice almost wistful. Isolde watched them, her expression inscrutable. "Beauty often hides its true nature. Be wary of what you desire." Aurora withdrew her hand, the warmth lingering. "What do we do now?" she asked, looking to Isolde. The Seer smiled, her eyes gleaming with a knowledge she wasn't sharing. "The Heartstone is a key. It will lead you to what you seek, but only if you are willing to follow its path." Aurora took a deep breath, feeling the weight of the moment. "I’m ready," she said, meeting Isolde's gaze. Nyx's form solidified, their determination echoing Aurora’s. "We are all ready." Isolde nodded, her smile widening. "Then let us find what lies beyond." As they turned to leave, the cavern seemed to pulse with a life of its own, the whispers growing louder. Aurora felt a sense of anticipation building within her, knowing that this was just the beginning. Together, they stepped back into the tunnel, the Heartstone's light guiding their way. The path ahead was uncertain, filled with both wonder and danger, but Aurora knew that they were ready for whatever lay in store. The grove had revealed its secrets, and now it was time for them to uncover their own.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she spoke slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.516
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
91.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count3
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"apprehension"
count1
15
word"churning"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"tinged"
count1
18
word"tinge"
count1
19
word"desire"
count1
20
word"gleaming"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"loomed"
2"etched"
3"flickered"
4"symphony"
5"weight"
6"warmth"
7"calculated"
8"otherworldly"
9"unspoken"
10"pulse"
11"sense of"
12"silence"
13"intricate"
14"apprehension"
15"churning"
16"whisper"
17"tinged"
18"tinge"
19"desire"
20"gleaming"
21"echoing"
22"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences90
matches
0"a surge of determination"
1"a sense of anticipation"
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1222
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1031
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Nyx12
Grove1
Aurora22
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Isolde13
Varga1
Seer2
persons
0"Blade"
1"Nyx"
2"Grove"
3"Aurora"
4"Heartstone"
5"Isolde"
6"Seer"
places(empty)
globalScore0.433
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"swirls that seemed to undulate in the sunlight"
1"seemed calculated every movement imbued with otherworldly grace"
2"as if listening to some distant, secret melody"
3"as if trying to ward something off"
4"entrance that seemed to beckon them in"
5"seemed almost reluctant their form rippling in hesitation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.818
wordCount1222
matches
0"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"knew that they"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.42
std14.59
cv0.514
sampleLengths
060
112
232
331
438
514
666
716
843
942
1027
1143
1230
1312
144
1536
1629
1712
1825
1935
2052
2135
2218
2310
2426
2524
2619
2717
2843
2930
3050
3111
3219
3339
3422
3518
3617
3735
3818
3911
4012
4136
4253
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"were enveloped"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were treading"
1"was holding"
2"wasn't sharing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences104
ratio0.01
matches
0"Gone was the muted hum of the park; instead, they were enveloped in a symphony of birdcalls and the whispering rustle of leaves."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1035
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own paint-splattered tapestries."
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03671497584541063
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.018357487922705314
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.75
std5.16
cv0.439
sampleLengths
012
124
224
312
418
514
613
718
84
923
1011
1110
124
1312
1419
1516
169
1710
1816
1916
2011
2116
2214
2312
248
258
2615
2712
2812
2915
3016
3117
3213
3312
342
352
369
3712
3815
395
4012
4112
429
433
4413
459
463
476
4814
4915
62.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.40384615384615385
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences85
matches
0"She had been reluctant to"
1"they whispered, the sound barely"
2"she added, more to herself"
3"She moved lightly, leaving no"
4"It shivered and glowed faintly,"
5"Her earlier calm started to"
6"She tilted her head, as"
7"she spoke slowly, her voice"
8"Its vast branches stretched out,"
9"She closed her eyes, her"
10"they asked, their voice a"
11"she said, stepping forward"
12"she said, leading the way"
13"It was cooler here, the"
14"they whispered, their voice almost"
15"she asked, looking to Isolde"
16"she said, meeting Isolde's gaze"
ratio0.2
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"Aurora led the way, the"
1"She had been reluctant to"
2"The Grove's entrance loomed ahead,"
3"Aurora murmured, her voice threading"
4"Nyx's form was solid, a"
5"they whispered, the sound barely"
6"Aurora's bright blue eyes flickered"
7"she added, more to herself"
8"The air changed instantly."
9"The scent of blooming wildflowers"
10"Rory's shoulders felt the crushing"
11"Nyx drifted beside her, their"
12"Aurora reached up to touch"
13"She moved lightly, leaving no"
14"Each step seemed calculated, every"
15"Isolde's pale lavender eyes were"
16"Aurora only nodded, her mind"
17"Effulgent wildflowers sprayed colors like"
18"Each petal seemed to pulse"
19"Nyx reached out, a shadowy"
ratio0.871
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"Before Aurora could question her"
ratio0.012
35.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Grove's entrance loomed ahead, ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary, their surfaces etched with swirls that seemed to undulate in the sunlight."
1"Beside them walked Isolde Varga, her silver hair floating as though caught in a perpetual breeze."
2"She tilted her head, as if listening to some distant, secret melody."
3"Nyx's body tensed, their form rippling as if trying to ward something off."
4"The air here was denser, almost suffocating, as if the grove was holding its breath."
5"It was cooler here, the air tinged with a metallic scent that reminded Aurora of the Fae-Forged Blade."
6"Warmth radiated from it, spreading through her hand and up her arm, filling her with a sense of peace."
7"The Seer smiled, her eyes gleaming with a knowledge she wasn't sharing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora murmured, her voice threading through the still air"
1"they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath"
2"they asked, their voice a mere whisper against the stillness"
3"they whispered, their voice almost wistful"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"she added (add)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"she spoke slowly (speak)"
6"Rory whispered (whisper)"
7"they muttered (mutter)"
8"she murmured (murmur)"
9"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.645
70.8361%