| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she spoke slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.516 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |
| 91.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "glinting" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "symphony" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "calculated" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "apprehension" | | 15 | "churning" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "tinged" | | 18 | "tinge" | | 19 | "desire" | | 20 | "gleaming" | | 21 | "echoing" | | 22 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of the moment" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "a surge of determination" | | 1 | "a sense of anticipation" |
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| 15.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 90 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1222 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.31% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1031 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Nyx | 12 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 13 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Blade" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Seer" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.433 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "swirls that seemed to undulate in the sunlight" | | 1 | "seemed calculated every movement imbued with otherworldly grace" | | 2 | "as if listening to some distant, secret melody" | | 3 | "as if trying to ward something off" | | 4 | "entrance that seemed to beckon them in" | | 5 | "seemed almost reluctant their form rippling in hesitation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.818 | | wordCount | 1222 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 28.42 | | std | 14.59 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 66 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | |
| 98.99% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | 0 | "were treading" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "wasn't sharing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Gone was the muted hum of the park; instead, they were enveloped in a symphony of birdcalls and the whispering rustle of leaves." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1035 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own paint-splattered tapestries." |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03671497584541063 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018357487922705314 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 5.16 | | cv | 0.439 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 62.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.40384615384615385 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She had been reluctant to" | | 1 | "they whispered, the sound barely" | | 2 | "she added, more to herself" | | 3 | "She moved lightly, leaving no" | | 4 | "It shivered and glowed faintly," | | 5 | "Her earlier calm started to" | | 6 | "She tilted her head, as" | | 7 | "she spoke slowly, her voice" | | 8 | "Its vast branches stretched out," | | 9 | "She closed her eyes, her" | | 10 | "they asked, their voice a" | | 11 | "she said, stepping forward" | | 12 | "she said, leading the way" | | 13 | "It was cooler here, the" | | 14 | "they whispered, their voice almost" | | 15 | "she asked, looking to Isolde" | | 16 | "she said, meeting Isolde's gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora led the way, the" | | 1 | "She had been reluctant to" | | 2 | "The Grove's entrance loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Aurora murmured, her voice threading" | | 4 | "Nyx's form was solid, a" | | 5 | "they whispered, the sound barely" | | 6 | "Aurora's bright blue eyes flickered" | | 7 | "she added, more to herself" | | 8 | "The air changed instantly." | | 9 | "The scent of blooming wildflowers" | | 10 | "Rory's shoulders felt the crushing" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 12 | "Aurora reached up to touch" | | 13 | "She moved lightly, leaving no" | | 14 | "Each step seemed calculated, every" | | 15 | "Isolde's pale lavender eyes were" | | 16 | "Aurora only nodded, her mind" | | 17 | "Effulgent wildflowers sprayed colors like" | | 18 | "Each petal seemed to pulse" | | 19 | "Nyx reached out, a shadowy" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora could question her" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 35.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove's entrance loomed ahead, ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary, their surfaces etched with swirls that seemed to undulate in the sunlight." | | 1 | "Beside them walked Isolde Varga, her silver hair floating as though caught in a perpetual breeze." | | 2 | "She tilted her head, as if listening to some distant, secret melody." | | 3 | "Nyx's body tensed, their form rippling as if trying to ward something off." | | 4 | "The air here was denser, almost suffocating, as if the grove was holding its breath." | | 5 | "It was cooler here, the air tinged with a metallic scent that reminded Aurora of the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 6 | "Warmth radiated from it, spreading through her hand and up her arm, filling her with a sense of peace." | | 7 | "The Seer smiled, her eyes gleaming with a knowledge she wasn't sharing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora murmured, her voice threading through the still air" | | 1 | "they whispered, the sound barely more than a breath" | | 2 | "they asked, their voice a mere whisper against the stillness" | | 3 | "they whispered, their voice almost wistful" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she added (add)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she spoke slowly (speak)" | | 6 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "they muttered (mutter)" | | 8 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 9 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.484 | | leniency | 0.968 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.645 | |