Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04XVWQ3RESEYGBZT9HTMD

Run Details

Duration:
6.3s
Cost:
$0.000857
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn surveyed the scene with a practiced eye, her gaze sweeping over the damp, graffiti-scarred brickwork of the abandoned Piccadilly Line station. The air hung thick with the smell of stagnant water, decay, and something else… metallic and faintly sweet, like old blood mixed with cheap perfume. Yellow police tape, incongruous against the grimy walls, cordoned off the area around a crumpled heap of fabric. "Anything yet, Miller?" Harlow's voice, usually crisp and commanding, had a rough edge to it. She tucked a stray strand of salt-and-pepper hair behind her ear, the worn leather of her watch strap a familiar weight on her wrist. Uniformed officers milled about, their movements a stark contrast to the static, oppressive atmosphere of the disused tunnel. The only light came from the stark white gleam of their utility lamps, casting long, distorted shadows that danced with every flicker. A young constable, face pale and jaw clenched, emerged from behind the tape. "Just… this, Detective. Found him an hour ago. No signs of forced entry anywhere in the vicinity. Nearest access point is a sealed service grate three blocks over. Not exactly an easy commute." He gestured vaguely with a gloved hand toward the crumpled heap. Harlow approached, her boots crunching softly on loose debris. She knelt beside the victim, a man in his late twenties, dressed in stylish but now mud-splattered clothes. His eyes, wide and unseeing, stared up at the arched ceiling, as if seeking an explanation from the darkness. No visible wounds marred his skin, no blood pooled around him. The only disturbance was the unnatural stillness of his body, sprawled as if dropped from a great height. The metallic scent was stronger here, so faint it was almost subliminal. "Cause of death?" she asked, her voice low. She ran a gloved finger along the edge of the victim's immaculately tailored coat, noting the complete absence of dust or grime. Odd, for someone found in a place like this. "ME's preliminary says suffocation," the constable replied, his voice barely a whisper. "But there's no marks, no signs of struggle. Like he just… stopped breathing." Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened. Suffocation without a mark was rare. Suffocation in an abandoned, sealed-off tube station, with no signs of entry? That was beyond rare. She circled the body, her military-precision bearing evident in her every movement. The victim's pockets had been turned out, but nothing seemed to be missing. His wallet was still there, a substantial amount of cash tucked inside. Expensive watch still on his wrist. "Anything on his ID?" "Liam Foster, age 28. Lived in Kensington. Rich parents. No known enemies, no criminal connections. Just… disappeared two nights ago." Harlow stood, her gaze scanning the cavernous space. The graffiti adorned the walls in vibrant, chaotic bursts of color – crude tags, elaborate murals, ancient symbols she vaguely recognized from police briefings that smelled of the occult. But none of it seemed to connect. No footprints other than their own, no discarded weapons, no disturbed dust motes. It was too clean, too… sterile for such a grim tableau. "He looks like he just stepped out of a nightclub," she muttered, more to herself than to the constable. "Not like someone who spent two days in a derelict tunnel." She tapped the side of her head, a familiar thrumming starting behind her eyes. Something was profoundly wrong. "Detective?" The constable’s voice was hesitant. "Nothing, Miller. Just… thinking." She pushed off the wall she'd been leaning against and walked further into the tunnel, her flashlight beam cutting a swathe through the oppressive gloom. The tracks, overgrown with moss and debris, stretched into the blackness ahead. The air grew colder, carrying with it a faint vibration that seemed to hum through the soles of her boots. A figure emerged from the shadows further down the platform, silhouetted against the stark light of a distant lamp. Eva Kowalski. Her curly red hair was a shock of color against the drab surroundings, rounded glasses perched on her nose. She clutched a worn leather satchel, its contents likely a trove of arcane knowledge. "Harlow! I got your message." Eva's voice was bright, a stark counterpoint to the bleakness of the station. She hurried forward, her green eyes wide with a mix of curiosity and concern. "What is this place? And who is…?" She nodded towards the body, her freckled complexion paling. "Liam Foster," Harlow said, her gaze never leaving Eva's face. "Found him an hour ago. No forced entry, no visible damage, suffocation. And an utter lack of anything that makes sense." Eva cocked her head, her nervous habit of tucking stray hair behind her ear surfacing. "Suffocation without marks? Strange. And in here? This is an… unusual spot for a murder." She ran a hand over the graffiti on the nearest wall, her fingers tracing a complex, angular symbol. "This place has energy, Harlow. Old energy. The kind you find in places that have seen a lot, or… places that *are* a lot." "Energy?" Harlow scoffed, though a flicker of unease stirred within her. She’d learned to respect Eva’s bizarre pronouncements, especially since Morris… since Morris. "I'm after facts, Eva, not feelings. And the facts are, we have a dead man in a sealed tunnel with no explanation." "But what if the explanation isn't standard police procedure?" Eva stepped closer to the body, her gaze sharp, analytical. She knelt, not touching, but observing. "Look at the fabric, Harlow. No soiling. No scuffs. And his shoes… pristine, almost. He wasn't here long. He certainly didn't walk here through the muck and grime of the tunnels. He was brought here. Or… he *appeared* here." Harlow narrowed her eyes. "Appeared? You’re not going to start talking about portals again, are you?" Eva grinned, a flash of white teeth. "Well, it's an abandoned Tube station. And the Veil Market has been known to move locations around… well, around times like this." She gestured to a cluster of arcane symbols etched into the wall near the victim. "These aren’t random tags, Harlow. They’re wards. Old ones. Meant to contain something. Or to mark a threshold." Harlow examined the etchings. They were similar to some of the more esoteric symbols she’d seen associated with illegal occult activity. "Wards for what? And why here?" "That’s the question, isn't it?" Eva stood, pulling a device from her satchel. It was a small brass compass, its face etched with protective sigils, the metal bearing a patina of verdigris. The needle, instead of pointing north, quivered erratically, then settled, pointing toward a black void further down the tunnel. "This Veil Compass," she explained, noticing Harlow’s gaze, "it points to supernatural rifts. Or portals. And right now, it's screaming." Harlow’s gaze followed the needle. It pointed away from the body, toward the deeper darkness where the tracks disappeared. "So you’re saying he didn't walk here. He was *transported* here, possibly through some kind of supernatural disturbance?" "Or he was trying to get *away* from something and this was the only exit nearby," Eva countered, her voice thoughtful. "This place… it’s not just an abandoned station. It’s a nexus. And someone, or something, used it. Look again, Harlow. Not at *how* he died, but at *where* he died. And *why* there was no evidence of his arrival." Harlow looked again, her mind replaying Eva's words. No soiling. Pristine shoes. No signs of entry. The Veil Compass pointing that way. Suffocation, as if breathing had been… removed. She walked towards the spot the compass indicated, her hand resting on the butt of her service weapon. The metallic sweet scent was stronger here, almost cloying. Behind the grimy brickwork, a faint, shimmering distortion in the air shimmered, barely perceptible. It looked like heat haze, but the air was cold. "You think the killer…?" she began. "I think," Eva interrupted, stepping up beside her, the compass held steady, "that Mr. Foster wasn't murdered. I think he suffocated because the ambient reality here is too thin. He was on the wrong side of a very dangerous door, and it slammed shut behind him, leaving him with nothing to breathe."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.531
leniency1
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.059
92.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
8.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"stark"
count4
3
word"oppressive"
count2
4
word"flicker"
count2
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"complex"
count1
12
word"standard"
count1
13
word"pristine"
count2
14
word"etched"
count2
15
word"quivered"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"stark"
3"oppressive"
4"flicker"
5"jaw clenched"
6"whisper"
7"scanning"
8"chaotic"
9"gloom"
10"tracing"
11"complex"
12"standard"
13"pristine"
14"etched"
15"quivered"
16"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"a flicker of unease"
72.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
96.03% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount1
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0.011
matches
0"\"Liam Foster, age 28. Lived in Kensington. Rich parents. No known enemies, no criminal connections. Just… disappeared two nights ago.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords7
totalWords1355
ratio0.005
matches
0"are"
1"appeared"
2"transported"
3"away"
4"how"
5"where"
6"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount907
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Harlow12
Quinn1
Piccadilly1
Line1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Morris2
Veil1
Compass1
Suffocation3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Morris"
5"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.838
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if seeking an explanation from the darkness"
1"vibration that seemed to hum through the soles of her boots"
2"as if breathing had been…"
3"looked like heat haze, but the air was co"
52.40% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.476
wordCount1355
matches
0"not touching, but observing"
1"Not at *how* he died, but at *"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"pointing that way"
94.30% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean46.72
std22.43
cv0.48
sampleLengths
067
139
240
357
487
539
625
769
84
920
1068
1148
126
1361
1454
1548
1631
1772
1845
1964
2016
2162
2227
2371
2437
2560
2680
276
2852
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"been turned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences93
ratio0.011
matches
0"The graffiti adorned the walls in vibrant, chaotic bursts of color – crude tags, elaborate murals, ancient symbols she vaguely recognized from police briefings that smelled of the occult."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount912
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"damp, graffiti-scarred brickwork"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03070175438596491
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.017543859649122806
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.57
std9.62
cv0.661
sampleLengths
024
114
211
318
415
524
618
722
813
944
109
1118
1219
1311
1418
1512
168
1722
189
1912
2013
214
226
2312
244
2512
2613
2712
286
294
3020
318
3229
337
3413
355
366
3719
3825
394
406
4129
4212
4320
4419
452
4619
4714
4818
4914
79.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4946236559139785
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences75
matches
0"She tucked a stray strand"
1"He gestured vaguely with a"
2"She knelt beside the victim,"
3"His eyes, wide and unseeing,"
4"she asked, her voice low"
5"She ran a gloved finger"
6"She circled the body, her"
7"His wallet was still there,"
8"It was too clean, too…"
9"she muttered, more to herself"
10"She tapped the side of"
11"She pushed off the wall"
12"Her curly red hair was"
13"She clutched a worn leather"
14"She hurried forward, her green"
15"She nodded towards the body,"
16"She ran a hand over"
17"She’d learned to respect Eva’s"
18"She knelt, not touching, but"
19"She gestured to a cluster"
ratio0.347
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn surveyed the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"Harlow's voice, usually crisp and"
3"She tucked a stray strand"
4"The only light came from"
5"A young constable, face pale"
6"He gestured vaguely with a"
7"Harlow approached, her boots crunching"
8"She knelt beside the victim,"
9"His eyes, wide and unseeing,"
10"The only disturbance was the"
11"The metallic scent was stronger"
12"she asked, her voice low"
13"She ran a gloved finger"
14"the constable replied, his voice"
15"Harlow’s sharp jaw tightened."
16"Suffocation without a mark was"
17"Suffocation in an abandoned, sealed-off"
18"That was beyond rare."
19"She circled the body, her"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The only light came from the stark white gleam of their utility lamps, casting long, distorted shadows that danced with every flicker."
1"His eyes, wide and unseeing, stared up at the arched ceiling, as if seeking an explanation from the darkness."
2"The only disturbance was the unnatural stillness of his body, sprawled as if dropped from a great height."
3"The graffiti adorned the walls in vibrant, chaotic bursts of color – crude tags, elaborate murals, ancient symbols she vaguely recognized from police briefings …"
4"Eva cocked her head, her nervous habit of tucking stray hair behind her ear surfacing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she asked, her voice low"
1"the constable replied, his voice barely a whisper"
2"she muttered, more to herself than to the constable"
3"She tapped, a familiar thrumming starting behind her eyes"
4"She pushed, her flashlight beam cutting a swathe through the oppressive gloom"
5"She nodded, her freckled complexion paling"
6"She ran, her fingers tracing a complex, angular symbol"
7"Eva stepped, her gaze sharp, analytical"
8"Eva countered, her voice thoughtful"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she explained (explain)"
2"Eva interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.188
71.1351%