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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT04Y3SYG9FMJWGVR7G9S94
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 397B A17B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
4m 35s
Cost:
$0.004519
Provider:
AtlasCloud
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
86.91%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
65.10%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
99.83%
Filter word density
(details)
99.29%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
40.36%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
18.73%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
42.80%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
95.54%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.5076%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The chain lock rattled against
the wood.
Rory didn't ask who was
there.
She swung the door open
and faced the man who had haunted her dreams for six months.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
cramped landing, the smell of spicy lamb curry rising from the floorboards below.
He looked exactly as he
had the night she walked away from him in the rain outside the Old Bailey. Impeccable charcoal suit.
Platinum hair slicked back without
a stray strand.
The ivory handle of his
cane gleamed under the flickering hallway light. You
look
terrible. Rory leaned against the doorframe, blocking the entrance.
Her black hair hung loose
around her shoulders, hiding the
tension
in her neck. And you
look
like you stepped out of a funeral parlour. What do you want, Lucien?
He tapped the cane against
the floor.
The sound echoed in the
narrow space. May I come in? No. He shifted his
weight
.
The amber eye caught the
light while the black one swallowed it. They
know
you are here, Aurora.
Her hand tightened on the
door edge.
The crescent scar on her
left wrist
throbbed
, a phantom pain from a childhood accident that always flared when danger was near. Who knows? Does it matter?
He pushed past her before
she could react.
The scent of expensive cologne
and old paper clung to him, overwhelming the smell of turmeric from the curry house.
Rory slammed the door shut
and threw the three deadbolts.
She turned to find him
standing in the middle of the room, surveying the chaos. Books, scrolls, and research notes covered every surface of Eva's cramped one-bedroom flat. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from atop a stack of legal textbooks and vanished under the sofa.
You have no right to
be here. I have every right. You
are compromised
. I am fine. You are exposed. He walked toward the window, peering through the gap in the curtains. Brick Lane buzzed below, oblivious to the war brewing in its shadows. We ended this.
I told you I wanted
out of your world.
You cannot walk away from
Avaros simply because you wish it. He turned to face her. The tailored suit jacket stretched across his shoulders as he crossed his arms. I did walk away. I changed my number. I moved flats. I stopped delivering to your contacts. And yet here I am. Rory stepped into the room, keeping the coffee table between them. Her bright blue
eyes narrowed
. Why did you come, Lucien?
If this is about the
job I pulled in Camden, I already paid you back. This is not about money. It is about survival. He reached into his inner pocket and withdrew a folded piece of paper. He placed it on the table, sliding it across the scratched wood surface. Rory didn't touch it. Open it. She picked up the paper. A single photograph stared back at her. It showed her leaving the Golden Empress restaurant last night. Yu-Fei Cheung stood in the background, blurred but recognizable. Where did you get this? Taken an hour ago. Her breath hitched. She dropped the photo as if it burned. They are watching the restaurant. They are watching this building.
He tapped the cane against
his leg. The concealed blade inside clicked
softly
. Who are they? The same people who wanted your father dead. The same people who made you flee Cardiff. Rory moved to the kitchen counter and poured a glass of water. Her hand shook
slightly
. She
hated that he
saw it. My father is a barrister. He deals with traffic court and divorce settlements. He deals with things he should not. Lucien walked closer. The heat radiating from him was unnatural, a demon's
warmth
in a cold room. You lied to me. You said there was no danger. I lied to keep you breathing. She spun around, water sloshing over the rim of the glass. Do not pretend you care about my safety. You care about your information. You care about your network. Lucien stopped inches from her. He towered over her five foot six frame, casting a shadow that swallowed her whole. If I did not care, I would have let them take you in Southwark. That was different. Was it? He reached out, his fingers hovering near her jawline. He did not touch her. The air between them crackled with unsaid things. The attraction was a live wire, dangerous and humming. You left me without a word, Rory. You kept secrets. I found the files, Lucien. I
know
what you are. His expression didn't change. The heterochromatic eyes remained steady. And yet you still sleep above a bar in London. You still work for a woman who launders money for the underworld. You are not innocent. I am trying to be. There is no being
slightly
involved. You are either prey or
predator
. He lowered his hand. The moment broke. Rory set the glass down hard. Water pooled on the counter. Get out. No. I said get out. She moved toward the door. Lucien moved faster. He blocked her path, the cane横 across the doorway. Listen to me. They are not coming for you tonight. They are coming now. A crash sounded from the floor below. Glass
shattered
. Screams erupted from the curry house kitchen. The smell of burning spices turned acrid. Rory froze. I told you. Lucien's voice was calm, devoid of panic. He drew the cane from its resting position. The thin blade slid out with a metallic
whisper
. How did they find us? You used your mobile. They triangulated the signal. I turned it off. They have ways. He moved to the window and peeked through the curtain again. Three black vans sat idling outside. Men in tactical gear poured out onto the pavement. We need to move. Now. I am not going anywhere with you. Stay here and die then. He turned back to her. The amber eye glowed faintly in the dim light. Or come with me and live to fight another day. The front door shuddered. A heavy boot kicked the wood. The three deadbolts held, but the frame groaned. Dust fell from the ceiling. Rory looked at the door, then at Lucien. She grabbed her keys from the bowl and shoved her feet into her trainers.
If we survive this, I
am killing you. Lucien offered a rare, sharp smile. It did not reach his eyes. Get in line. The lock snapped. The door flew open. Three masked figures rushed the hallway, weapons raised. Lucien stepped forward, the blade of his cane catching the light. Stay behind me. Rory grabbed a heavy brass lamp from the side table. She weighed it in her hand. I
think
not. She swung the lamp at the first intruder just as Lucien lunged. Steel met bone. The room erupted into chaos.
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2/19/2026, 3:47:24 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
86.91%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
65.10%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1146
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"tension"
count
1
1
word
"echoed"
count
1
2
word
"weight"
count
1
3
word
"throbbed"
count
1
4
word
"warmth"
count
1
5
word
"predator"
count
1
6
word
"shattered"
count
1
7
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"tension"
1
"echoed"
2
"weight"
3
"throbbed"
4
"warmth"
5
"predator"
6
"shattered"
7
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
166
matches
(empty)
99.83%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
5
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
166
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"know"
2
"think"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
99.29%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
166
gibberishSentences
1
adjustedGibberishSentences
1
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"He blocked her path, the cane横 across the doorway."
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1144
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
1
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
52
wordCount
1144
uniqueNames
17
maxNameDensity
1.31
worstName
"You"
maxWindowNameDensity
4.5
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Old
1
Bailey
1
Lucien
12
Aurora
1
Eva
1
Lane
1
Avaros
1
Camden
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Cheung
1
Cardiff
1
Southwark
1
Rory
11
London
1
You
15
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Old"
2
"Bailey"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Eva"
5
"Cheung"
6
"Rory"
7
"You"
places
0
"Lane"
1
"Avaros"
2
"Camden"
3
"Cardiff"
4
"Southwark"
5
"London"
globalScore
0.844
windowScore
0.167
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
87
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1144
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
166
matches
0
"hated that he"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
78
mean
14.67
std
11.69
cv
0.797
sampleLengths
0
30
1
61
2
3
3
22
4
16
5
14
6
4
7
1
8
16
9
6
10
29
11
2
12
31
13
55
14
7
15
7
16
3
17
27
18
12
19
29
20
17
21
5
22
16
23
20
24
35
25
4
26
2
27
31
28
5
29
4
30
11
31
23
32
3
33
16
34
22
35
13
36
24
37
10
38
6
39
11
40
18
41
20
42
14
43
3
44
33
45
7
46
13
47
9
48
26
49
5
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
166
matches
0
"are compromised"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
239
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
166
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1146
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
19
adverbRatio
0.016579406631762654
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.005235602094240838
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
166
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
166
mean
6.89
std
4.04
cv
0.586
sampleLengths
0
7
1
6
2
17
3
18
4
20
5
3
6
8
7
12
8
3
9
8
10
14
11
11
12
5
13
7
14
7
15
4
16
1
17
4
18
12
19
6
20
7
21
22
22
2
23
3
24
8
25
20
26
10
27
15
28
13
29
17
30
7
31
4
32
3
33
3
34
3
35
12
36
12
37
3
38
9
39
11
40
5
41
13
42
4
43
4
44
3
45
6
46
5
47
11
48
5
49
5
40.36%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.29518072289156627
totalSentences
166
uniqueOpeners
49
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
157
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
18.73%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
79
totalSentences
157
matches
0
"She swung the door open"
1
"He looked exactly as he"
2
"You look terrible."
3
"Her black hair hung loose"
4
"He tapped the cane against"
5
"He shifted his weight."
6
"They know you are here,"
7
"Her hand tightened on the"
8
"He pushed past her before"
9
"She turned to find him"
10
"You have no right to"
11
"I have every right."
12
"You are compromised."
13
"I am fine."
14
"You are exposed."
15
"He walked toward the window,"
16
"We ended this."
17
"I told you I wanted"
18
"You cannot walk away from"
19
"He turned to face her."
ratio
0.503
42.80%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
131
totalSentences
157
matches
0
"The chain lock rattled against"
1
"Rory didn't ask who was"
2
"She swung the door open"
3
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4
"He looked exactly as he"
5
"Platinum hair slicked back without"
6
"The ivory handle of his"
7
"You look terrible."
8
"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
9
"Her black hair hung loose"
10
"He tapped the cane against"
11
"The sound echoed in the"
12
"He shifted his weight."
13
"The amber eye caught the"
14
"They know you are here,"
15
"Her hand tightened on the"
16
"The crescent scar on her"
17
"He pushed past her before"
18
"The scent of expensive cologne"
19
"Rory slammed the door shut"
ratio
0.834
95.54%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
3
totalSentences
157
matches
0
"If this is about the"
1
"If I did not care,"
2
"If we survive this, I"
ratio
0.019
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
36
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"He towered over her five foot six frame, casting a shadow that swallowed her whole."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
85.5076%