| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "grappling" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "tinge" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "echoing" | | 14 | "whisper" | | 15 | "fluttered" | | 16 | "footfall" | | 17 | "traced" | | 18 | "velvet" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1283 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 988 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.62 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 11 | | Varga | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Grove | 3 | | Ahead | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | globalScore | 0.69 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if scenting something no one else could" | | 1 | "appeared behind her shoulder, out of focus — not Isolde" | | 2 | "not quite drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey and stone and something fiercer: secrets barely leashed" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.338 | | wordCount | 1283 | | matches | | 0 | "not down, but up" | | 1 | "not quite — drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey" | | 2 | "not of rot, but honey" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 33.76 | | std | 16.16 | | cv | 0.479 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 40 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "The others followed: Nyx, drifting in their shifting half-solid form, bled into the leaf-dappled darkness; Isolde Varga, her silver hair sliding with every step, barely disturbed the loam." | | 1 | "The clearing behind — the entrance — no longer resembled Richmond Park as she knew it." | | 2 | "Her own pulse hammered in her ears, but underneath — a note?" | | 3 | "The droplets clung cool and slick, fizzing against her skin, then slipped away — not down, but up." | | 4 | "A path of pale stepping stones — each veined with turquoise and gold — wound around a pool half-shrouded in fog." | | 5 | "“Signs for those who read as Fae do. Leave your reflection; carry nothing away. See your truth, but speak not its shape.”" | | 6 | "A second figure appeared behind her shoulder, out of focus — not Isolde." | | 7 | "Isolde stood by a ring of mushrooms — red-capped, dotted white." | | 8 | "“Gatekeepers come in every shape. Mind your vowels; the old ones like jokes.”" | | 9 | "A breeze — but not quite — drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey and stone and something fiercer: secrets barely leashed." | | 10 | "She pressed her hand to the Heartstone; its glow beat like a second, wilder heart." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 991 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.030272452068617558 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010090817356205853 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.46 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.622 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 85.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5357142857142857 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Even her footsteps trailed nothing," | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, what could only" | | 2 | "Once, on a branch that" | | 3 | "More trees, impossibly tall, knotted" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked beneath a clutch" | | 1 | "She brushed gloved fingers across" | | 2 | "Her own pulse hammered in" | | 3 | "She moved deeper, moon-pale and" | | 4 | "She blinked at her hand." | | 5 | "Their eyes flickered, violet with" | | 6 | "she muttered, The bark throbbed" | | 7 | "They slipped past a fallen" | | 8 | "She crouched, peering into the" | | 9 | "She jerked away, heels skidding" | | 10 | "her voice hard, throat raw" | | 11 | "Their whisper scattered over the" | | 12 | "She bent and brushed them" | | 13 | "Her trainers left no visible" | | 14 | "They crossed another arc of" | | 15 | "Their eyes glowed dull amber" | | 16 | "She pressed her hand to" | | 17 | "Her voice, richer now, lilted" |
| | ratio | 0.198 | |
| 58.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The air pressed thick against" | | 1 | "The others followed: Nyx, drifting" | | 2 | "The world beyond the stones" | | 3 | "Aurora snatched a breath." | | 4 | "The clearing behind — the" | | 5 | "Here, wildflowers nodded in clusters" | | 6 | "Everything shimmered, colours dancing as" | | 7 | "Rory’s words rolled forward, voice" | | 8 | "She ducked beneath a clutch" | | 9 | "Violet flashed beneath Nyx’s cowl." | | 10 | "Shadows writhed around their fingertips" | | 11 | "Isolde didn’t turn." | | 12 | "She brushed gloved fingers across" | | 13 | "The granite shuddered, sap oozing" | | 14 | "Her own pulse hammered in" | | 15 | "Isolde’s lips crooked." | | 16 | "She moved deeper, moon-pale and" | | 17 | "Every branch cupped beads of" | | 18 | "Rory brushed a spray with" | | 19 | "The droplets clung cool and" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.59% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Here, wildflowers nodded in clusters too lush, too vivid: sapphire anemones grappling with gaudy gold marigolds, lilies tangled with ferns that glinted silver." | | 1 | "Everything shimmered, colours dancing as if light swam through water rather than air." | | 2 | "The trees opened into a half-circle, floored with moss that shimmered like velvet." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her trainers left, but the pendant fluttered, pulse steadying" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.071 | | leniency | 0.143 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |