Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT055S99T42GE3JZDH0J7BH

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
52.8s
Cost:
$0.017814
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air pressed thick against Aurora Carter’s arms as she stepped past an oak root as wide as her thigh. The others followed: Nyx, drifting in their shifting half-solid form, bled into the leaf-dappled darkness; Isolde Varga, her silver hair sliding with every step, barely disturbed the loam. The world beyond the stones of the grove fell silent, cut off with the finality of a slammed door. Aurora snatched a breath. The clearing behind — the entrance — no longer resembled Richmond Park as she knew it. Here, wildflowers nodded in clusters too lush, too vivid: sapphire anemones grappling with gaudy gold marigolds, lilies tangled with ferns that glinted silver. Everything shimmered, colours dancing as if light swam through water rather than air. Overhead, boughs locked together into vaulted ribs, ringed by bark so pale it could have been bone. “Is it supposed to smell like this?” Rory’s words rolled forward, voice taut behind bravado. She ducked beneath a clutch of white foxglove bells. “It’s like… every spring at once, and sideways.” Violet flashed beneath Nyx’s cowl. “The Grove hungers for scents we remember, even if we’ve never known them. No wind, no rot — not properly.” Shadows writhed around their fingertips as they glided over moss. “Careful. Roots shift when no one watches.” Isolde didn’t turn. Even her footsteps trailed nothing, not even a bruise of moss. “The heart of things lies ahead. Each must find their own path, though we walk together.” She brushed gloved fingers across a standing stone. The granite shuddered, sap oozing from an ancient gash. “Listen.” Rory stopped. Her own pulse hammered in her ears, but underneath — a note? No, a chorus: wood creaking, a hundred moths whispering, leaves exhaling in language half-forgotten. She swallowed. “You always talk like this, or is it the air?” Isolde’s lips crooked. “You notice fractals, Aurora Carter. Others see only green. A gift. And perhaps, a warning.” She moved deeper, moon-pale and sure, neck arched as if scenting something no one else could. Between trunks loomed arches of thick holly whose leaves gleamed mirror-bright on their silver backs. Every branch cupped beads of dew that never fell. Rory brushed a spray with her knuckles. The droplets clung cool and slick, fizzing against her skin, then slipped away — not down, but up. She blinked at her hand. Dots of crimson light pulsed beneath her shirt: the Heartstone Pendant, warming in measured beats. Each throb shivered up her wrist, through the crescent scar she’d carried since childhood. Nyx hovered near. Shadows coiled around their jaw, hiding their mouth. “The stone knows more than you do. Tells you where not to linger. That’s rare.” Their eyes flickered, violet with the tinge of distant lightning. “I’d listen.” Somewhere ahead, what could only be called music threaded through the wild green. Melodies with no clear instrument: a dull, hollow drumming and filaments of humming so sweet it made Rory’s teeth sting. A thicket parted, and the Grove widened. A path of pale stepping stones — each veined with turquoise and gold — wound around a pool half-shrouded in fog. The water lay impossibly still. Above, a willow hung curtains of ghost-white leaves, each leaf etched with lines of faint blue. Rory caught her breath, reaching to steady herself against the trunk of a yew. “Christ,” she muttered, “this place isn’t on any map.” The bark throbbed under her hand, rhythm syncing with the pendant against her chest. Isolde turned, silver eyes shadowed wonderfully strange. “Maps would fail. The Grove is what memory wants, and what’s hidden between. Time folds. Step poorly, and you might lose hours, or years.” Rory let go of the yew, gaze darting to Nyx. “And you knew we’d survive this?” Nyx shimmered into denser shape, every edge a silhouette. “I guessed you were stubborn enough, Carter. That counts for more than luck.” They slipped past a fallen log slick with blue-green moss. “Look.” Rory moved closer, blinking. On the far side of the pool, half-submerged in shadow, someone had etched symbols into a fallen boulder: spirals, eyes, knots, each fresh as wax. The markings seemed to shift when she tried to fix their lines. With every moment she stared, the cold in her fingers deepened. A crow above croaked, voice echoing and echoing until even Isolde paused, head tilted. “Signs for those who read as Fae do. Leave your reflection; carry nothing away. See your truth, but speak not its shape.” Sarcasm pricked Rory’s voice. “Cryptic, as ever.” A single dimple notched Isolde’s cheek. “Would you rather simple truth? The Grove does not forgive trespass, Aurora Carter. Every step forward carries price. Seek not what you fear to lose.” Rory stepped to the water’s edge. She crouched, peering into the glassy surface. At first, only her own face stared back: blue eyes wide, hair tangled, a frown cutting her brow. But the longer she looked, the more her reflection twisted. A second figure appeared behind her shoulder, out of focus — not Isolde. Not Nyx. Someone taller, with eyes like burning coals. She jerked away, heels skidding over damp stone. “That’s not a joke,” her voice hard, throat raw. Nyx’s shadow-form drew tight beside her, violet eyes crackling. “Don’t watch too long. The Grove shows all hungers, not just yours.” Their whisper scattered over the pool like disturbed dust. Isolde stood by a ring of mushrooms — red-capped, dotted white. She bent and brushed them with her fingers, murmuring to them in syllables Rory couldn’t parse. The mushrooms swelled, doubled in size, released pale motes that floated and flashed, then vanished. Rory shook out her shoulders. “Right. Should we move?” Her trainers left no visible mark, but the pendant fluttered, pulse steadying. They crossed another arc of stones. Beyond the pool, the Grove’s shadows thickened. Every footfall sent ripples through the grass, and now even the smallest birds darted in angles that made no sense. Once, on a branch that bent impossibly low, a toad the size of a melon blinked at her, eyes the same blue as winter twilight. Nyx eyed it, head tilted. “Gatekeepers come in every shape. Mind your vowels; the old ones like jokes.” More trees, impossibly tall, knotted their trunk. Tiny bells swung from the boughs, chiming without wind. A patch of mushrooms glowed faintly, each cap a different hue. Rory touched her pendant, earning another fevered shudder. Isolde traced a symbol across bark. “The Grove tests need. Ask it nothing you regret.” Rory’s throat burned. “Is this a lesson, or are you just trying to scare me?” “Both,” Isolde said, smile tight. “But not for you alone.” Ahead, the air thickened. The trees opened into a half-circle, floored with moss that shimmered like velvet. Ancient oak standing stones ringed the space, every trunk carved with faces old as wind. Their eyes glowed dull amber as Rory passed. A breeze — but not quite — drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey and stone and something fiercer: secrets barely leashed. Rory’s skin prickled. She pressed her hand to the Heartstone; its glow beat like a second, wilder heart. Isolde stepped into the centre of the circle. Her voice, richer now, lilted strange and deep. “We stand where the Veil wears thin. Speak what you wish. The Grove listens — and judges.” A hush. Nothing moved but the pulse of magic, slow as sap. Behind her, Nyx melted into half-light, a ripple in space. “Don’t ask for more than you own. The Grove finds thieves, and never loses what’s stolen.” Rory drew a breath. The silence buzzed with hidden eyes. Wonder trembled on the tip of her tongue, sharp as fear. All around, the Grove waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"grappling"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count3
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"tinge"
count1
11
word"etched"
count2
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"fluttered"
count1
16
word"footfall"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"velvet"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"grappling"
1"shimmered"
2"dancing"
3"footsteps"
4"pulse"
5"loomed"
6"pulsed"
7"measured"
8"throb"
9"flickered"
10"tinge"
11"etched"
12"throbbed"
13"echoing"
14"whisper"
15"fluttered"
16"footfall"
17"traced"
18"velvet"
19"silence"
20"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount988
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
Carter1
Nyx9
Isolde11
Varga1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Rory16
Grove3
Ahead1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Pendant"
5"Rory"
6"Grove"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.69
windowScore0.667
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if scenting something no one else could"
1"appeared behind her shoulder, out of focus — not Isolde"
2"not quite drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey and stone and something fiercer: secrets barely leashed"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.338
wordCount1283
matches
0"not down, but up"
1"not quite — drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey"
2"not of rot, but honey"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
93.90% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean33.76
std16.16
cv0.479
sampleLengths
067
173
232
342
448
540
634
749
834
938
1033
1149
1237
1331
1416
1533
1652
1736
187
1931
2063
2117
2230
2342
2421
2558
2618
2735
2815
2915
3010
3140
3240
3333
3412
3526
3621
375
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences112
ratio0.098
matches
0"The others followed: Nyx, drifting in their shifting half-solid form, bled into the leaf-dappled darkness; Isolde Varga, her silver hair sliding with every step, barely disturbed the loam."
1"The clearing behind — the entrance — no longer resembled Richmond Park as she knew it."
2"Her own pulse hammered in her ears, but underneath — a note?"
3"The droplets clung cool and slick, fizzing against her skin, then slipped away — not down, but up."
4"A path of pale stepping stones — each veined with turquoise and gold — wound around a pool half-shrouded in fog."
5"“Signs for those who read as Fae do. Leave your reflection; carry nothing away. See your truth, but speak not its shape.”"
6"A second figure appeared behind her shoulder, out of focus — not Isolde."
7"Isolde stood by a ring of mushrooms — red-capped, dotted white."
8"“Gatekeepers come in every shape. Mind your vowels; the old ones like jokes.”"
9"A breeze — but not quite — drifted, smelling not of rot, but honey and stone and something fiercer: secrets barely leashed."
10"She pressed her hand to the Heartstone; its glow beat like a second, wilder heart."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.030272452068617558
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010090817356205853
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean11.46
std7.12
cv0.622
sampleLengths
020
128
219
34
416
523
613
717
815
99
108
115
1230
137
143
1511
1624
179
181
192
2012
2114
222
2310
243
2531
2615
279
287
2918
305
3115
3214
333
348
3525
362
3713
3820
397
4021
415
4216
4314
4423
457
4624
4710
486
499
85.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5357142857142857
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners60
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences91
matches
0"Even her footsteps trailed nothing,"
1"Somewhere ahead, what could only"
2"Once, on a branch that"
3"More trees, impossibly tall, knotted"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences91
matches
0"She ducked beneath a clutch"
1"She brushed gloved fingers across"
2"Her own pulse hammered in"
3"She moved deeper, moon-pale and"
4"She blinked at her hand."
5"Their eyes flickered, violet with"
6"she muttered, The bark throbbed"
7"They slipped past a fallen"
8"She crouched, peering into the"
9"She jerked away, heels skidding"
10"her voice hard, throat raw"
11"Their whisper scattered over the"
12"She bent and brushed them"
13"Her trainers left no visible"
14"They crossed another arc of"
15"Their eyes glowed dull amber"
16"She pressed her hand to"
17"Her voice, richer now, lilted"
ratio0.198
58.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air pressed thick against"
1"The others followed: Nyx, drifting"
2"The world beyond the stones"
3"Aurora snatched a breath."
4"The clearing behind — the"
5"Here, wildflowers nodded in clusters"
6"Everything shimmered, colours dancing as"
7"Rory’s words rolled forward, voice"
8"She ducked beneath a clutch"
9"Violet flashed beneath Nyx’s cowl."
10"Shadows writhed around their fingertips"
11"Isolde didn’t turn."
12"She brushed gloved fingers across"
13"The granite shuddered, sap oozing"
14"Her own pulse hammered in"
15"Isolde’s lips crooked."
16"She moved deeper, moon-pale and"
17"Every branch cupped beads of"
18"Rory brushed a spray with"
19"The droplets clung cool and"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Here, wildflowers nodded in clusters too lush, too vivid: sapphire anemones grappling with gaudy gold marigolds, lilies tangled with ferns that glinted silver."
1"Everything shimmered, colours dancing as if light swam through water rather than air."
2"The trees opened into a half-circle, floored with moss that shimmered like velvet."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her trainers left, but the pendant fluttered, pulse steadying"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.071
80.6013%