| 84.62% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she pushed again [again]" | | 1 | "he said firmly [firmly]" | | 2 | "He reacted instantly [instantly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.115 | | effectiveRatio | 0.115 | |
| 76.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1260 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 12.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1260 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unspoken" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "pang" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "firmly" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "magnetic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1256 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 9 | | wordCount | 947 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Breath | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Breath" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1256 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 25.12 | | std | 13.99 | | cv | 0.557 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 54 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "He shifted his weight, leaning slightly on his ivory-handled cane; she could almost see the way his amber eye searched hers, cradling unasked questions." | | 1 | "She could still feel his kiss — electric, dangerous — as though it had happened mere moments ago instead of years." | | 2 | "Her heart raced, this was instinctual for him, but she struggled against the reminder of all the reasons she shouldn’t let him this close—again." | | 3 | "Suddenly, chaos erupted outside; voices yelling, shattering glass, and honking horns swept through the air thick with adrenaline." |
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| 96.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 950 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04421052631578947 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018947368421052633 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 16.31 | | std | 8.52 | | cv | 0.523 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 79.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4935064935064935 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, suddenly, a crash resounded" | | 1 | "Suddenly, chaos erupted outside; voices" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "His presence filled the tiny" | | 1 | "he said, his voice smooth," | | 2 | "She shoved a strand of" | | 3 | "she replied, the name slipping" | | 4 | "she asked, though she knew" | | 5 | "He stepped into the cramped" | | 6 | "She shut the door behind" | | 7 | "He shifted his weight, leaning" | | 8 | "he said, brushing aside the" | | 9 | "she repeated, feigning disinterest, fists" | | 10 | "he replied, a wry smile" | | 11 | "She rolled her eyes, the" | | 12 | "he said, that wicked smile" | | 13 | "she said, her voice betraying" | | 14 | "he mused, leaning comfortably against" | | 15 | "She huffed a laugh, pouring" | | 16 | "They held each other’s gaze" | | 17 | "she pushed again, the host" | | 18 | "He lowered his glass, the" | | 19 | "Her heart caught at the" |
| | ratio | 0.722 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, poised" | | 2 | "His presence filled the tiny" | | 3 | "he said, his voice smooth," | | 4 | "She shoved a strand of" | | 5 | "she replied, the name slipping" | | 6 | "The question hung in the" | | 7 | "she asked, though she knew" | | 8 | "He stepped into the cramped" | | 9 | "She shut the door behind" | | 10 | "The stale scent of yesterday’s" | | 11 | "He shifted his weight, leaning" | | 12 | "he said, brushing aside the" | | 13 | "she repeated, feigning disinterest, fists" | | 14 | "he replied, a wry smile" | | 15 | "She rolled her eyes, the" | | 16 | "he said, that wicked smile" | | 17 | "she said, her voice betraying" | | 18 | "he mused, leaning comfortably against" | | 19 | "She huffed a laugh, pouring" |
| | ratio | 0.963 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped into the cramped flat effortlessly, as if the space could magically expand to accommodate him." | | 1 | "The stale scent of yesterday’s delivery wafted through the room, but Lucien remained unaffected, the tailored lines of his charcoal suit half-shrouded in shadow…" | | 2 | "He shifted his weight, leaning slightly on his ivory-handled cane; she could almost see the way his amber eye searched hers, cradling unasked questions." | | 3 | "She rolled her eyes, the familiar tension between them constructing a wall that felt both impenetrable and dangerously thin." | | 4 | "She could still feel his kiss — electric, dangerous — as though it had happened mere moments ago instead of years." | | 5 | "Breath mingled like fog within the anguish, terror and longing blending within a space that had grown too small for the unspoken and the unsought." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she replied, the name slipping from her lips like a forbidden secret" | | 1 | "he said, that wicked smile still teasing his lips" | | 2 | "he countered, his voice steady" | | 3 | "he replied, his voice softer now" | | 4 | "Lucien murmured, his breath lingering against her skin" | | 5 | "he commanded, urgency thrusting the boundaries between them further dissipating" |
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| 47.96% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Lucien murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.347 | | leniency | 0.694 | | rawRatio | 0.294 | | effectiveRatio | 0.204 | |