Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT05J7S85EY29DD4999NMSG

Run Details

Duration:
59.2s
Cost:
$0.062665
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung inward and the smell of cardamom from the curry house below rushed up the stairwell like a warm hand at Rory's back. Lucien stood on the landing. No umbrella despite the rain that had turned his charcoal jacket two shades darker across the shoulders. His platinum hair, usually slicked into architectural precision, hung in damp strands against his forehead. One amber eye caught the hallway light. The other — the black one — absorbed it. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane with both hands folded over the top, and the posture might have looked casual on anyone who hadn't been trained to make everything look casual. "No." Rory moved to shut the door. His cane caught the edge — not hard, just enough to hold it open by three inches. "I would not be here if there were alternatives." "Find some." "Aurora." Her full name in his accent did something to the air between them. She hated that it still did. She pressed her forehead against the doorframe and stared at the cane wedged in the gap, at the thin seam where the ivory handle met the shaft, where the hidden blade lived. "Eva's not home." "I know. I came to speak with you." Ptolemy threaded between her ankles, pressed his orange face into the gap, and purred at the visitor like a traitor. Rory nudged the cat back with her foot and considered her options. Three deadbolts on this door. She could break his cane if she threw her weight into it. She could call Silas, who'd be closing up the bar downstairs from her own flat across town. She could do a lot of things. She opened the door. Lucien stepped inside and his gaze moved across Eva's flat the way it always moved across rooms — cataloguing exits, surfaces, angles. The stacks of books on every horizontal plane. The scrolls pinned to the walls with thumbtacks. Research notes in Eva's cramped handwriting fanning across the kitchen table like a paper avalanche frozen mid-slide. He did not sit. He stood in the narrow channel between the sofa and the bookshelf and turned his cane slowly in his hands. "You look well." "You look wet. Say what you came to say." Something flickered behind his expression. Not hurt — Lucien didn't do hurt where people could see it. More like recalibration. "There is a contract on a woman named Malphora. Someone in the Avaros expatriate community put it out three days ago." The name dropped through her stomach. Her working alias. The name she'd used exactly twice, both times on jobs Lucien had arranged, both times in rooms full of people she never wanted to see again. "That's not my name." "No. But it is attached to your face." She crossed to the kitchen, not because she wanted tea but because she needed something between them — the counter, distance, the illusion of doing something ordinary. She filled the kettle. Set it on the burner. The blue flame caught and she watched it instead of watching him. "How did you find out?" "I am an information broker, Aurora. I found out because this is what I do." "Right. And you came straight here out of the goodness of your heart." The cane stopped turning. She heard it — the subtle cessation of movement, the way the room thinned when Lucien went still. "I came because whoever placed this contract used details that only someone in my network could have provided. Which means I have a leak. Which means I have a professional problem. But I also came because someone wants you dead, and I find that I have opinions about that." Rory gripped the edge of the counter. The crescent scar on her left wrist stood out pale against her white knuckles. "You had opinions about a lot of things six weeks ago too. Right up until you didn't." There it was. The thing in the room. She hadn't meant to open that door so soon. Maybe she'd meant to keep it shut entirely, the way she'd tried to keep the front door shut, but Lucien had a talent for finding the gaps in things. He set his cane against the bookshelf. The gesture was deliberate — she understood the language of it. He was unarming himself. "What happened in Bermondsey—" "Don't." "—was a failure of judgment on my part." "A failure of judgment." She turned from the counter. "You left me in a room with a Veil-touched arms dealer and two of his people because your contact offered you a better deal on the other side of the building. That's not a failure of judgment, Lucien. That's a choice." "Yes." He held her gaze with both mismatched eyes. "It was." The kettle ticked as the water heated. Ptolemy jumped onto the kitchen table and sat on a pile of Eva's notes about ley line convergences, his tail curling over a diagram of something Rory didn't understand. "I made a calculation," Lucien said. "The deal Vasilis offered would have given us leverage over the entire South London corridor. I believed you could handle Marchetti alone for the four minutes it would take me to—" "I had a chair leg through my shoulder, Luc." His jaw tightened. The muscle worked beneath the sharp line of his cheek. He took one step toward her, then stopped, as though he'd walked into glass. "I know." "You know because you came back and found the blood. Not because you were there." "I know because I carried you to the car. I know because you bled through my jacket and didn't make a sound. I know because you sat in my passenger seat and looked at me like I was something you'd scraped off the bottom of a delivery box, and you were right to." The kettle screamed. Neither of them moved. It shrieked into the small flat for five full seconds before Rory reached back and pulled it off the burner. Silence rushed in to fill the space. "Why didn't you call?" Her voice came out quieter than she wanted. "After. You had my number. You had Eva's number. You could have shown up at the restaurant, at my flat — Silas would have let you up. You just vanished." Lucien pulled a hand across his mouth. For the first time since she'd known him, he looked like a man who'd run out of languages. "Because you were right." The words came rough around the edges. "I made a calculation, and the calculation was wrong, and the cost was you. And I did not know how to stand in front of you and be the man who did that." "So you stood nowhere instead." "Yes." "For six weeks." "Would you have wanted to see me?" Rory opened her mouth, and the honest answer stuck sideways in her throat. She picked up two mugs from the drying rack — muscle memory, the hospitality her mother had drilled into her since childhood, making tea for people even when you wanted to throw the kettle at their head. She dropped a teabag into each. Poured the water. The ordinary choreography of it steadied something inside her chest. "I don't know," she said finally. "But I wanted you to try." Lucien's hand found the back of Eva's kitchen chair. His fingers curled over the wood. Long fingers, scarred across the knuckles. She remembered the specific weight of them on her arm, pulling her behind him when things went sideways at the Whitechapel auction. She remembered the specific absence of them in that room in Bermondsey. "I am trying now." "You're here because someone wants to kill me." "I am here because someone wants to kill you, and I could not sit in my flat and know that and do nothing. Not again. The contract is the reason. You are the cause." He said it the way he said everything — precise, structured, like a man building a sentence the way an architect builds a bridge. But something underneath the structure was shaking. Rory set his tea on the table. Ptolemy sniffed it and looked disappointed. She wrapped both hands around her own mug and leaned against the counter and looked at Lucien Moreau, half-demon information broker, the most put-together man she'd ever met, standing in her best friend's cluttered flat with rain still dripping from his hair, and she saw the cracks. She'd always been able to see the cracks. That was the problem. "Who placed the contract?" "I have three names. Two are proxies. The third is someone I need to meet in person to confirm." "And you want me to come with you." "I want you alive. If that means you come with me, then yes. If that means you lock this door and let me handle it alone, also yes. But I will not make another calculation about what you can handle without asking you first." She took a slow breath. The flat smelled like cardamom and old paper and the ghost of whatever spell Eva had been working on before she left. Rain tapped the window in uneven rhythms. "You broke something, Luc. When you walked out of that room." He nodded. Not a performance, not a deflection. Just a nod. "You don't get to fix that by showing up with a crisis." "I know." "But you're here." "I am here." Rory looked down at the scar on her wrist. Crescent-shaped, childhood accident, the oldest wound she carried. Every scar since had been more complicated. She looked back up. "Drink your tea. Then show me the names." Lucien picked up the mug. His fingers brushed the spot where hers had been. He didn't sit down. She didn't invite him to. But he drank, and she drank, and Ptolemy purred between them on his bed of stolen research, and the rain kept falling on Brick Lane.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.038
96.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"stomach"
3"silence"
4"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1655
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1063
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Silas1
Eva5
Lucien11
Whitechapel1
Bermondsey1
Moreau1
Ptolemy4
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"Bermondsey"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.983
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something between them — the counter, distance"
1"looked like a man who'd run out of langua"
2"smelled like cardamom and old paper and th"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1655
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences141
matches
0"hated that it"
1"open that door"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean21.78
std18.89
cv0.868
sampleLengths
025
153
231
31
423
59
62
71
851
93
108
1173
124
1355
1424
153
169
1720
1821
1935
204
218
2248
235
2415
2513
2622
2749
2821
2917
3046
3122
324
331
348
3550
3611
3736
3837
399
4027
412
4215
4353
4427
457
4642
4725
4844
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been trained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was unarming"
1"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences141
ratio0.071
matches
0"The other — the black one — absorbed it."
1"His cane caught the edge — not hard, just enough to hold it open by three inches."
2"Lucien stepped inside and his gaze moved across Eva's flat the way it always moved across rooms — cataloguing exits, surfaces, angles."
3"Not hurt — Lucien didn't do hurt where people could see it."
4"She crossed to the kitchen, not because she wanted tea but because she needed something between them — the counter, distance, the illusion of doing something ordinary."
5"She heard it — the subtle cessation of movement, the way the room thinned when Lucien went still."
6"The gesture was deliberate — she understood the language of it."
7"\"—was a failure of judgment on my part.\""
8"She picked up two mugs from the drying rack — muscle memory, the hospitality her mother had drilled into her since childhood, making tea for people even when you wanted to throw the kettle at their head."
9"He said it the way he said everything — precise, structured, like a man building a sentence the way an architect builds a bridge."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount909
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0242024202420242
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0044004400440044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean11.74
std10.55
cv0.899
sampleLengths
025
15
217
315
47
59
631
71
86
917
109
112
121
1313
146
1532
163
178
1820
1912
205
2112
2217
237
244
2522
268
278
2817
294
3020
313
329
335
3412
353
3621
376
383
3926
404
418
4227
434
445
4512
465
4715
4813
494
51.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3546099290780142
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences94
matches
0"More like recalibration."
1"Maybe she'd meant to keep"
2"Just a nod."
ratio0.032
54.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences94
matches
0"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"His cane caught the edge"
3"Her full name in his"
4"She hated that it still"
5"She pressed her forehead against"
6"She could break his cane"
7"She could call Silas, who'd"
8"She could do a lot"
9"She opened the door."
10"He did not sit."
11"He stood in the narrow"
12"Her working alias."
13"She crossed to the kitchen,"
14"She filled the kettle."
15"She heard it — the"
16"She hadn't meant to open"
17"He set his cane against"
18"He was unarming himself."
19"She turned from the counter"
ratio0.415
45.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences94
matches
0"The door swung inward and"
1"Lucien stood on the landing."
2"His platinum hair, usually slicked"
3"The other — the black"
4"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
5"Rory moved to shut the"
6"His cane caught the edge"
7"Her full name in his"
8"She hated that it still"
9"She pressed her forehead against"
10"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles,"
11"Rory nudged the cat back"
12"She could break his cane"
13"She could call Silas, who'd"
14"She could do a lot"
15"She opened the door."
16"Lucien stepped inside and his"
17"The stacks of books on"
18"The scrolls pinned to the"
19"He did not sit."
ratio0.83
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"No umbrella despite the rain that had turned his charcoal jacket two shades darker across the shoulders."
1"He leaned on his ivory-handled cane with both hands folded over the top, and the posture might have looked casual on anyone who hadn't been trained to make ever…"
2"She could call Silas, who'd be closing up the bar downstairs from her own flat across town."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.0183%