Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT05MCSC9NE97BWP74J4K6P

Run Details

Duration:
7m 59s
Cost:
$0.019673
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt hadn't slid home before the knock came again, insistent, three precise raps that suggested cane rather than knuckles. Rory twisted the handle. Lucien Moreau filled her doorway like a charcoal shadow tailored by Savile Row, his ivory-handled cane resting against the jamb, his heterochromatic eyes catching the hallway's bare bulb. One amber, one black, both unblinking. "You're not wearing shoes," he said. Rory looked down at her bare feet, then back at his polished Oxfords. "You're blocking my door." "Inviting me in would demonstrate better hospitality." "Breaking and entering would demonstrate worse judgement." She didn't move. The scar on her left wrist ached, phantom pain from a childhood she'd tried to bury under takeaway containers and constitutional law textbooks. "How did you find me?" "The same way I found your ex-boyfriend's offshore accounts." Lucien leaned his weight onto the cane, a gesture she recognised as pain management rather than affectation. His platinum hair caught the light, slicked back with the precision of a man who viewed disorder as a personal insult. "Though this address required less decryption. Silas really ought to invest in better security downstairs. That lock on the service entrance is standard B&Q issue." "Silas values discretion over deterrence." "How very East End." Lucien stepped forward. She didn't step back, which brought them chest to chest in her narrow threshold, the scent of his cologne, something expensive and smoky with hints of bergamot and ash, cutting through the grease-trap smell from the kitchen below. He wore his suits like armour, charcoal wool that cost more than three months of her delivery wages. "Are we conducting this conversation in a doorway, Rory, or shall we discuss why a Malphas envoy was spotted in Whitechapel this evening asking questions about a certain Welsh delivery driver with bright blue eyes and illegal knowledge of preternatural contract law?" Her spine straightened. She hadn't heard that name spoken aloud since she'd fled Cardiff, since she'd left Evan bleeding on his marble floor and taken the night bus to London with nothing but a rucksack and the certain knowledge that hell had better lawyers than the Crown Court. It sat between them like a drawn blade. "Inside," she said. "Now." She turned, leaving him to follow or not, and walked into her studio flat. The space barely accommodated her unmade bed and the scavenged desk where she mapped delivery routes for Yu-Fei's restaurant. Lucien closed the door behind him, three deadbolts clicking into place with a sound that made her shoulders tense. He moved through her space with the economy of a predator who knew exactly where the exits were, his cane tapping a slow rhythm against the floorboards. "You look tired," he said, eyeing the cold takeaway containers stacked by the sink. "You look armed." "The cane serves multiple purposes." "So I've seen." The last time she'd watched him unsheathe that thin blade from its ivory shaft, he'd buried it to the hilt in Evan's associate's shoulder. Lucien had wiped the arterial spray off with a monogrammed handkerchief before offering her a ride to London in his customised Bentley. That was six months ago. He'd left his number scrawled on a betting slip from Paddy Power. She'd burned it in the sink, watching the paper curl into ash, thinking that would sever the thread between them. "You didn't call," he said, touching a stack of her law textbooks. Dust coated his fingertips. He rubbed them together with distaste. "You didn't give me reason to." "I gave you a blank cheque and safe passage from a man who fractures ribs for recreation. Most women send flowers." "I'm not most women." "No." He turned, and the amber eye caught the light from her desk lamp, glowing like a warning beacon. "You're the only human I've met who can identify the binding clauses in a Faustian contract whilst vomiting into my Italian leather footwell." "That was one time." "You wept on my Brioni tie." "You offered your shoulder." "I offered my services. You accepted the lift. Then you disappeared into this charming hovel above a public house and cut contact." He advanced, cane tapping, until he stood at the edge of her personal space, near enough that she could see the faint scar bisecting his left eyebrow, the one he'd gotten in Marseille before he'd learned to walk between worlds. "Which suggests either profound gratitude or profound fear. Which was it, Aurora?" He never called her Aurora. The formality struck like a slap, reverting her to the girl she'd been in Cardiff, the barrister's daughter who'd believed in signatures and certainties. "Get out." "Eva is missing." The words landed like the cane's blade striking stone. Rory's breath stopped. Her hand found the edge of the desk, gripping until her knuckles whitened. "What?" "Forty-eight hours. Her flat on Brick Lane shows signs of forced entry. Three deadbolts, professionally bypassed. Not a scratch on the metal." Lucien withdrew his phone from his breast pocket with two fingers, displaying a photograph. Eva's tabby, Ptolemy, lay dead in the hallway, orange fur matted, neck broken, positioned with ceremonial precision beside an open book of ancient Sumerian protective texts. "The cat was decorative. The research wasn't. Eva had been mapping the ley lines beneath East London, specifically the nodes that disrupt infernal tracking." Rory's hands shook. She gripped the desk edge tighter, the wood biting into her palms. The air in the flat felt suddenly thin, insufficient. Eva had been the one to convince her to leave Evan, the one who'd held her hair while she cried in the station toilets, the one who'd known about the pregnancy test before Rory had thrown it away. "Why come to me?" Her voice emerged steady, law-court steady, the tone she used when facing down hostile witnesses. "You have sources. You have your father's connections in Avaros. You speak four languages and trade in secrets. Why disturb my peace for this?" "Because Eva was researching protective wards when they took her. Specifically, wards designed to hide half-human children from their sires." Lucien closed the distance between them, close enough that she could see the flecks of molten gold in the amber eye, the absolute obsidian void in the black. His breath smelled of cognac and forbidden places. "And six months ago, when I drove you to London, you told me in a moment of weakness that you were carrying your ex-husband's child." "I didn't tell you anything. You inferred." "You pressed your palm against your abdomen in the rear-view mirror seventeen times during the drive. You refused champagne when I offered to celebrate your freedom. You became physically ill at the smell of iron." He lifted his hand, not touching her, but hovering near her wrist, near the small scar there, then lower, near her stomach. "The envoys believe you carry Malphas blood. They won't stop with Eva. They'll tear this city apart block by block, slaughter every familiar face, burn every bridge you've built. Unless we give them something else to hunt." "What?" Her heart hammered against her ribs, a trapped bird. "What could possibly distract them from that?" "Me." The window exploded. Glass shards sprayed across her unmade bed, glittering like diamonds in the lamplight. Rory hit the floor, Lucien's body covering hers with crushing weight, his cane clattering against the wall. A figure landed where they'd stood microseconds before, seven feet of scaled muscle and burning sulphur-yellow eyes, sulphur stinging Rory's nostrils as the demon straightened, sniffing the air with a nose broken and reset multiple times, and smiled with too many teeth that dripped phosphorescent saliva onto her floorboards. "Little Rory," it growled, voice like gravel in a blender, clawed hands flexing. "Daddy's waiting. And Daddy's hungry."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:47:47.78Z" 2/19/2026, 3:47:47 AM
model"moonshotai/kimi-k2.5-0127"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency460
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time478380
tokens_prompt4556
tokens_completion8950
native_tokens_prompt4112
native_tokens_completion7921
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning6905
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.01967265
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"a1659736-3cfc-47d9-b48f-303c93c57b11"
id"chatcmpl-RBZfHc3lvPwAI7EY4DV3LKN7"
is_byokfalse
latency63
model_permaslug"moonshotai/kimi-k2.5-0127"
provider_name"DeepInfra"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771472867-dYwW4Kxam82DENIrKZCN"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-RBZfHc3lvPwAI7EY4DV3LKN7"
total_cost0.01967265
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"DeepInfra"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.682
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1298
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"marble"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"profound"
count2
7
word"disrupt"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"standard"
2"marble"
3"predator"
4"beacon"
5"eyebrow"
6"profound"
7"disrupt"
8"stomach"
9"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount836
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Savile1
Row1
Rory7
Oxfords1
Cardiff2
Evan3
London2
Crown1
Court1
Yu-Fei1
Bentley1
Paddy1
Power1
Dust1
Marseille1
Aurora1
Eva2
Ptolemy1
Sumerian1
Lucien8
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Dust"
5"Eva"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Paddy"
3"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.775
wordCount1290
matches
0"not touching her, but hovering near her wrist, near the small scar there, then low"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.71
std31.62
cv1.03
sampleLengths
021
138
26
317
47
538
672
75
8105
956
104
1179
1214
133
145
153
1683
1722
186
1921
204
2142
224
236
244
2574
2629
272
283
2925
301
3186
3262
3343
3481
357
3694
3717
381
393
4079
4118
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount841
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02497027348394768
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035671819262782403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean15.73
std13.71
cv0.872
sampleLengths
021
14
228
36
46
513
64
77
810
923
105
1126
1221
1325
145
157
1638
1718
1842
193
2045
218
223
231
2414
2519
2619
2727
2814
293
305
313
3224
3322
345
3512
3620
3712
384
396
406
4121
424
4319
4423
454
466
474
4862
4912
68.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43902439024390244
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.76% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences51
matches
0"She didn't move"
1"His platinum hair caught the"
2"She didn't step back, which"
3"He wore his suits like"
4"Her spine straightened."
5"She hadn't heard that name"
6"It sat between them like"
7"She turned, leaving him to"
8"He moved through her space"
9"he said, eyeing the cold"
10"He'd left his number scrawled"
11"She'd burned it in the"
12"he said, touching a stack"
13"He rubbed them together with"
14"He turned, and the amber"
15"He advanced, cane tapping, until"
16"He never called her Aurora."
17"Her hand found the edge"
18"She gripped the desk edge"
19"Her voice emerged steady, law-court"
ratio0.471
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences51
matches
0"The third deadbolt hadn't slid"
1"Rory twisted the handle."
2"Lucien Moreau filled her doorway"
3"Rory looked down at her"
4"She didn't move"
5"The scar on her left"
6"Lucien leaned his weight onto"
7"His platinum hair caught the"
8"Lucien stepped forward"
9"She didn't step back, which"
10"He wore his suits like"
11"Her spine straightened."
12"She hadn't heard that name"
13"It sat between them like"
14"She turned, leaving him to"
15"The space barely accommodated her"
16"Lucien closed the door behind"
17"He moved through her space"
18"he said, eyeing the cold"
19"The last time she'd watched"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He wore his suits like armour, charcoal wool that cost more than three months of her delivery wages."
1"Lucien closed the door behind him, three deadbolts clicking into place with a sound that made her shoulders tense."
2"He moved through her space with the economy of a predator who knew exactly where the exits were, his cane tapping a slow rhythm against the floorboards."
3"The formality struck like a slap, reverting her to the girl she'd been in Cardiff, the barrister's daughter who'd believed in signatures and certainties."
4"Rory hit the floor, Lucien's body covering hers with crushing weight, his cane clattering against the wall."
5"A figure landed where they'd stood microseconds before, seven feet of scaled muscle and burning sulphur-yellow eyes, sulphur stinging Rory's nostrils as the dem…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"it growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.045
81.4092%