Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT05Q1G0W91ZMS7953R1Z9B

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Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.010229
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Together

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock turned before the key even touched the tumblers. A heavy, metallic click echoed in the hallway, followed by the groan of warped wood against the frame. I froze, takeaway bag swinging from my fingers. The scent of spicy grease and cheap plastic warred with something far more dangerous drifting through the gap: ozone, expensive cologne, and the distinct copper tang of old blood. I didn't run. I dropped the bag. The prawn crackers exploded across the grimy hallway carpet of the building above Silas' bar. My hand went to the back of my jeans, grasping for the knife I kept sheathed there. Empty. I’d left it on the bedside table. The door swung inward fully, revealing a silhouette that blocked out the dim yellow light of the corridor. "Bad habit, Rory. Leaving yourself vulnerable." Lucien Moreau stepped into my flat like he owned the deed and the mortgage. He looked like a storm contained in a charcoal suit. The fabric was cut sharp enough to slice glass, hugging shoulders that seemed too broad for the cramped space. His platinum hair was slicked back, highlighting the mismatched gaze—one eye burning amber, the other a void of absolute black. I scanned him quickly. No visible injuries, but the tip of that ivory-handled cane stained the floorboards with a dark smear. Not oil. "I locked the door." "A polite suggestion." He tapped the cane against the ground, the sound sharp as a gunshot. "Nothing more." "You're trespassing." "I'm saving your life." He walked past me, ignoring the personal boundary of the doorway, his shoulder brushing mine. The contact sent a jolt through my system, a mix of revulsion and that treacherous, familiar heat. "Again. I really must stop doing this pro bono." I slammed the door and turned, leaning back against the wood. "Get out, Lucien." He was already examining the room. My small living space, cluttered with law textbooks I refused to throw away and delivery uniforms, looked pathetic under his scrutiny. He picked up a framed photo of Eva and me from uni, his gloved fingers tracing the glass. "Your little Welsh solicitor act doesn't suit you. We both know you prefer the darkness." "I prefer privacy. Something you clearly lack." He set the photo down. Perfectly straight. He turned, and the air in the room seemed to thicken, heavy with the predatory aura of his half-demon heritage. The amber eye fixed on me, dissecting my defences. "Do you know why I'm here?" "Because you enjoy tormenting me? Because you couldn't stand the fact that for once, I walked away first?" The corner of his mouth twitched. It wasn't a smile. "You didn't walk away. You fled. Like a frightened child." "I fled a massacre. Or did you forget the warehouse in Camden?" "I remember." He took a step closer. The floorboards didn't creak. "I remember you leaving me to deal with the Cleaners while you ran for the hills. I remember the silence in my ear when I called your name." "You were using me as bait!" "I was using you as leverage." Another step. He was too close now. I could smell the sandalwood and the sulphur underneath. "There is a difference." "Get out." "No." The word dropped into the space between us, heavy and final. He raised the cane, the ivory handle pointing towards my chest. He didn't touch me, but I felt the pressure of it against my sternum. "You've been busy, Aurora. Delivering noodles for the Golden Empress? Hiding in plain sight. Clever. But stupidity eventually outweighs cleverness." "I don't know what you're talking about." "You took something from the vault." "I've never been in your vault." "Not mine." His voice dropped an octave, vibrating in my chest. "The Avaros vault. The one in the sewers beneath the Tate. The wards were tripped three nights ago." I kept my face blank. Poker face. Brendan Carter’s daughter. "I was working a double shift." "Don't." He lunged, his hand shooting out to grip my wrist. His gloved fingers were tight, bruising. He pulled my hand up, forcing me to look at the small, crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. He brushed his thumb over it, almost gently. "I taught you better than to lie to me, Laila. Your pulse jumps. Your pupils dilate. You are an open book written in a language only I can read." I ripped my hand away, backing up until my spine hit the bookshelf. "I didn't take anything." "Then why is a bounty hunter from the Brimstone Guild currently sitting in the bar downstairs, drinking scotch and asking the bartender about the pretty girl in 4B?" My heart hammered against my ribs. Silas wouldn't talk. Silas was solid. But a demon bounty hunter didn't need words. They needed scent. "They can't come in here," I said, my voice steadier than I felt. "It's rented. I have squatter's rights." "Squatter's rights don't apply to extradimensional entities." Lucien moved with terrifying speed, closing the distance in a blur. He slammed a hand against the shelf by my head, trapping me. "They are coming, Rory. And they aren't coming to negotiate." "Why do you care?" He stared down at me, the black eye swirling like smoke. For a second, the mask slipped. I saw the exhaustion, the rage, and something else that terrified me more than the demon blood. "Because if they take you, they'll take you apart piece by piece to find what you stole. And I..." He stopped, jaw clenching. "I find I dislike the idea of anyone else breaking my toys." "I'm not your toy." "No." He leaned in, his breath hot against my ear. "You're the one that got away. And that is a loose end I intend to tie up." The floorboards below us shuddered. A deep, resonant boom vibrated through the soles of my boots. It wasn't the bass from the bar music. It was something hitting the building's foundation. Lucien’s head snapped up. He looked at the ceiling, then at the door. The amber eye flared bright. "Time's up." "What was that?" "The front door of the bar just gave way." He grabbed my arm, his grip iron. "Silas is putting up a fight, but he's only mortal." "Silas!" "He'll live if we move. Now." Lucien dragged me towards the window. "We're on the third floor!" "We're jumping." "Like hell we are!" I yanked my arm back, stomping my heel down onto his instep. He didn't flinch, but his grip loosened for a fraction of a second. I scrambled for the kitchen counter, grabbing the heavy cast-iron skillet. Lucien sighed, sounding genuinely disappointed. "Crude. But effective." The door to my flat exploded inwards. Splinters of wood and twisted metal flew across the room. The frame buckled, and a creature of shadow and jagged bone stepped through. It smelled of rotting meat and petrol. It had no eyes, just a vertical slit where a face should be, and too many limbs. It screeched, a sound that liquefied my thoughts. "Behind me!" Lucien moved. He didn't retreat; he stepped into the path of the creature. The ivory cane twisted in his hand, the sheath falling away to reveal a blade that shimmered with pale, cold light. "Go!" he roared, the command laced with a demonic thrum that rattled my teeth. I didn't argue. I climbed onto the windowsill, the rain slick against my palms. I looked back just as Lucien swung the blade. The arc was beautiful, a perfect crescent of silver. The shadow-creature lunged. "Lucien!" He turned his head, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine. A terrifying grin split his face. "Jump, Rory." Then the shadows swarmed him, swallowing him whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.232
leniency0.464
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"perfectly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"treacherous"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"clenching"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"scanned"
2"treacherous"
3"familiar"
4"tracing"
5"silence"
6"pulse"
7"clenching"
8"vibrated"
9"shimmered"
10"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount868
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva1
Carter1
Lucien7
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Carter"
3"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a storm contained in a charco"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1283
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean18.87
std15.84
cv0.839
sampleLengths
028
137
239
38
418
56
663
723
84
918
102
1145
1214
1345
1415
157
1636
176
1818
1920
2012
2139
226
2326
242
251
2636
2720
287
296
306
3129
3216
3372
3417
3528
3623
3719
3840
394
4034
4135
424
4327
4431
4518
462
473
4826
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences135
ratio0.015
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked back, highlighting the mismatched gaze—one eye burning amber, the other a void of absolute black."
1"He didn't retreat; he stepped into the path of the creature."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount392
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02806122448979592
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.017857142857142856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean9.5
std6.43
cv0.677
sampleLengths
010
118
28
329
43
54
615
717
81
97
1018
116
1214
1310
1419
1520
164
1717
182
194
2016
212
222
2319
2417
259
2611
273
286
2921
3018
3115
327
335
342
3520
369
376
3818
396
404
4110
4212
437
444
4528
466
478
485
499
37.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2962962962962963
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners40
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then the shadows swarmed him,"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences86
matches
0"I froze, takeaway bag swinging"
1"I didn't run."
2"I dropped the bag."
3"My hand went to the"
4"I’d left it on the"
5"He looked like a storm"
6"His platinum hair was slicked"
7"I scanned him quickly."
8"He tapped the cane against"
9"He walked past me, ignoring"
10"I slammed the door and"
11"He was already examining the"
12"My small living space, cluttered"
13"He picked up a framed"
14"He set the photo down."
15"He turned, and the air"
16"It wasn't a smile."
17"He took a step closer"
18"He was too close now."
19"I could smell the sandalwood"
ratio0.616
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences86
matches
0"The lock turned before the"
1"A heavy, metallic click echoed"
2"I froze, takeaway bag swinging"
3"The scent of spicy grease"
4"I didn't run."
5"I dropped the bag."
6"The prawn crackers exploded across"
7"My hand went to the"
8"I’d left it on the"
9"The door swung inward fully,"
10"Lucien Moreau stepped into my"
11"He looked like a storm"
12"The fabric was cut sharp"
13"His platinum hair was slicked"
14"I scanned him quickly."
15"He tapped the cane against"
16"He walked past me, ignoring"
17"The contact sent a jolt"
18"I slammed the door and"
19"He was already examining the"
ratio0.953
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The fabric was cut sharp enough to slice glass, hugging shoulders that seemed too broad for the cramped space."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"He lunged, his hand shooting out to grip my wrist"
1"I said, my voice steadier than I felt"
2"He stopped, jaw clenching"
3"He leaned in, his breath hot against my ear"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he roared (roar)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.036
leniency0.071
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.036
80.5994%