Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT05ZKSGGYR1RZXG37B3MXJ

Run Details

Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000785
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stench of ozone hung heavy in the air, a sharp tang that clawed at Detective Harlow Quinn’s nostrils. She ducked beneath a sagging metal beam, grit crunching under her sensible boots. The abandoned Tube station, a gaping maw of rust and decay, offered a stark contrast to the usual crime scenes. Graffiti in lurid colours snaked across cracked tiles, long-dead advertising posters peeling like sunburnt skin. This was no ordinary dump; this was a place where shadows clung with an unnatural tenacity. "This is it, Detective," a voice rasped, pulling Harlow from her assessment of the graffiti. She turned. Standing near a pool of dark, viscous liquid that hadn’t been there an hour ago was Officer Davies, his face pale in the beam of his torch. A uniformed officer, young, earnest, and clearly out of his depth. "You're sure?" Harlow’s voice was a low rumble, accustomed to cutting through noise and chaos. She swept her own torch beam across the cavernous space. The air felt thick, charged, like the moment before a lightning strike. "Forensics confirmed it. Whatever happened, it was violent. Minimal trace evidence, though.” Davies shifted, his torch beam dancing nervously. "They said you'd be… interested." Harlow grunted, stepping closer to the spill. It wasn't blood. It had a metallic sheen that shifted with the light, and it smelled faintly of burnt sugar and something else… something that tickled the edges of her memory. She knelt, her sharp jawline set in concentration. “Minimal trace evidence? In a place like this?” She ran a gloved finger along the edge of the spill. It was cool to the touch, unnervingly so. "That’s what’s weird, Quinn," a new voice chimed in, smoother, laced with a dry amusement. Harlow didn’t need to look. Eva Kowalski’s distinctive scent, a blend of old paper and Earl Grey tea, preceded her. Eva emerged from the gloom, her curly red hair a vibrant splash of colour against the monochrome ruin. Round glasses perched on her freckled nose, and she clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it contained state secrets. "Eva," Harlow acknowledged, rising. Her own worn leather watch caught the light. "What are you doing here?" "Davies called, remember? Said you might need a historical perspective. Or perhaps just the company of someone who won’t faint at the sight of… this." Eva gestured vaguely at the spill with a slender finger. Her green eyes, magnified by her glasses, scanned the surroundings. "Historical perspective on what? A chemical spill?" Harlow’s brow furrowed. The military precision in her bearing was evident even here, amidst the grime. Eighteen years on the force, and she’d seen a lot, but this felt… different. She’d lost DS Morris three years ago under circumstances that still made her gut clench. Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins. She pushed the thought away. Focus. "This isn't just any chemical spill, Harlow," Eva said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "Look at the edges of the pool. See the scorch marks? And the way the concrete has… warped?" Harlow refocused her torch beam. Eva was right. Around the periphery of the spill, the concrete was not merely stained, but subtly, almost imperceptibly, buckled. It looked as if some tremendous heat, or pressure, had been applied from *within*. "It’s like something ruptured,” Eva continued, her fingers fumbling to tuck a stray curl behind her ear, a nervous habit Harlow had noticed before. “A pocket of extreme energy. Or maybe… a doorway." "A doorway?" Harlow scoffed, though the word settled like a stone in her stomach. She’d been dealing with increasingly strange cases lately, whispers of things that defied rational explanation. Her partner’s death had been the first sign, a case she’d reluctantly shelved as ‘unsolved’ rather than accept the impossible. Now, standing in this forgotten underbelly of London, the impossible felt a little closer. "This place, Harlow," Eva said, her voice gaining a hushed reverence. "It's known. Or rather, it *was* known. An old access point, a place where the Veil thins. Especially during certain lunar phases.” Harlow’s gaze snapped to Eva. “The Veil Market?” Eva gave a small, tight nod. “Or a place close to it, perhaps. They move, you know. Like shadows. But they leave traces.” She tapped a gloved finger against her satchel. “Things that can be… coaxed out.” Harlow moved further into the cavern, her torch beam cutting through the oppressive darkness. Evidence didn't add up. A violent crime scene with minimal trace evidence. A strange, metallic-smelling liquid that wasn't blood. Damaged concrete that suggested something more than a simple explosion. And Eva, her childhood friend, the quiet academic, speaking of thin places and moving markets. "Davies, did your team find anything else?" Harlow called back, her voice echoing. "Just this, Detective. Odd residue further back, near the old ticket booth. Looks… crystalline." Davies’s voice sounded strained. Harlow turned back toeva. “Crystalline residue.” “A byproduct, perhaps,” Eva mused. “Of whatever energy passage occurred. Sometimes, residual power will solidify into something tangible.” She opened her satchel, the worn leather groaning. From within, she withdrew a small, brass object. It was a compass, its casing etched with intricate sigils, clouded with a patina of verdigris. Harlow’s eyes narrowed. “Where did you get that?” “From the Market, of course,” Eva replied, as if surprised by the question. “Just a little trinket. They call them Veil Compasses. Supposed to point towards… rifts. Or portals.” She held it out. The needle, instead of pointing north, spun wildly before settling with a decisive click, indicating a point deeper within the station, beyond the oil slick and the warped concrete. Harlow stared at the compass, then at the dark, churning puddle. Her mind, trained to categorize, to rationalize, struggled to fit the pieces. Ribbons of salt-and-pepper hair were brushed back from her forehead, a testament to her focus. She remembered the look on her partner’s face in their last moments, the unnatural glare in his eyes. She remembered the unexplainable phenomena that riddled that case, the official reports that made no sense. “What exactly were they selling here, Eva?” Harlow asked, her voice low and dangerous. Eva adjusted her glasses, her gaze meeting Harlow’s. “Information, Detective. Enchanted goods. Banned alchemical substances. And sometimes,” she paused, her green eyes holding a glint of something akin to excitement, “sometimes they sell passage.” The compass needle twitched, an urgent, silent signal. Harlow’s hand instinctively went to her side, a phantom weight where her service weapon usually rested. But this was not a situation for bullets. This was a situation for understanding. She took a step towards the direction indicated by the agitated compass, the smell of ozone and burnt sugar growing stronger. The warped concrete seemed to hum beneath her feet. Davies, momentarily forgotten, stood frozen, his torch beam shaking. "Harlow, wait," Davies stammered. Harlow ignored him. She pointed her torch towards the terminus of the dead railway tunnel, where the compass needle now held steady, quivering with anticipation. The air there seemed to shimmer, as if viewed through heat haze, though the temperature in the station remained stubbornly cold. She saw now what others had missed: the disturbance wasn't just on the ground, but in the very fabric of the space. The evidence didn't just not add up; it pointed to a calculus far beyond the ordinary.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:47:59.234Z" 2/19/2026, 3:47:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.742
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
87.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"nervously"
count1
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"nervously"
1"reluctantly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1223
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"maw"
count1
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"dancing"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"furrowed"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"crystalline"
count2
13
word"tangible"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"intricate"
count1
16
word"churning"
count1
17
word"testament"
count1
18
word"glint"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"maw"
1"stark"
2"charged"
3"dancing"
4"gloom"
5"scanned"
6"furrowed"
7"amidst"
8"whisper"
9"stomach"
10"oppressive"
11"echoing"
12"crystalline"
13"tangible"
14"etched"
15"intricate"
16"churning"
17"testament"
18"glint"
19"weight"
20"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences90
matches
0"g with anticipation"
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1219
ratio0.002
matches
0"within"
1"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount962
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow20
Quinn1
Tube1
Officer1
Davies5
Kowalski1
Earl1
Grey1
Morris1
London1
Eva13
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Officer"
3"Davies"
4"Kowalski"
5"Earl"
6"Grey"
7"Morris"
8"Eva"
places
0"Detective"
1"London"
globalScore0.46
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something akin to excitement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.82
wordCount1219
matches
0"not merely stained, but subtly, almost imperceptibly, buckled"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"riddled that case"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean40.63
std24.82
cv0.611
sampleLengths
083
115
240
337
424
573
676
717
845
962
1034
1139
1233
1363
1433
158
1637
1758
1813
1918
206
2150
228
2362
2472
2514
2634
2777
284
2984
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"been applied"
1"were brushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
85.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences99
ratio0.02
matches
0"This was no ordinary dump; this was a place where shadows clung with an unnatural tenacity."
1"The evidence didn't just not add up; it pointed to a calculus far beyond the ordinary."
96.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount613
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.040783034257748776
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.022838499184339316
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.31
std7.12
cv0.579
sampleLengths
019
113
220
315
416
515
62
727
811
915
1010
1112
1219
135
147
153
1620
178
188
1919
208
2115
225
2315
2418
2523
264
278
285
2935
3010
3110
3213
3313
341
3515
362
372
385
391
4016
4118
425
433
4417
4514
4624
479
4814
4915
60.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.41414141414141414
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences83
matches
0"She ducked beneath a sagging"
1"She swept her own torch"
2"It wasn't blood."
3"It had a metallic sheen"
4"She knelt, her sharp jawline"
5"She ran a gloved finger"
6"It was cool to the"
7"Her own worn leather watch"
8"Her green eyes, magnified by"
9"She’d lost DS Morris three"
10"She pushed the thought away."
11"It looked as if some"
12"She’d been dealing with increasingly"
13"Her partner’s death had been"
14"She tapped a gloved finger"
15"She opened her satchel, the"
16"It was a compass, its"
17"She held it out"
18"Her mind, trained to categorize,"
19"She remembered the look on"
ratio0.301
14.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences83
matches
0"The stench of ozone hung"
1"She ducked beneath a sagging"
2"The abandoned Tube station, a"
3"Graffiti in lurid colours snaked"
4"This was no ordinary dump;"
5"a voice rasped, pulling Harlow"
6"A uniformed officer, young, earnest,"
7"Harlow’s voice was a low"
8"She swept her own torch"
9"The air felt thick, charged,"
10"Davies shifted, his torch beam"
11"Harlow grunted, stepping closer to"
12"It wasn't blood."
13"It had a metallic sheen"
14"something that tickled the edges"
15"She knelt, her sharp jawline"
16"She ran a gloved finger"
17"It was cool to the"
18"a new voice chimed in,"
19"Harlow didn’t need to look."
ratio0.892
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now, standing in this forgotten"
ratio0.012
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The stench of ozone hung heavy in the air, a sharp tang that clawed at Detective Harlow Quinn’s nostrils."
1"Standing near a pool of dark, viscous liquid that hadn’t been there an hour ago was Officer Davies, his face pale in the beam of his torch."
2"Round glasses perched on her freckled nose, and she clutched a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it contained state secrets."
3"She’d been dealing with increasingly strange cases lately, whispers of things that defied rational explanation."
4"She remembered the unexplainable phenomena that riddled that case, the official reports that made no sense."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper"
1"Harlow scoffed, though the word settled like a stone in her stomach"
2"Eva said, her voice gaining a hushed reverence"
3"Harlow called back, her voice echoing"
4"She opened, the worn leather groaning"
5"Eva replied, as if surprised by the question"
6"Harlow asked, her voice low and dangerous"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"a new voice chimed in (chime in)"
1"Harlow acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"Eva continued (continue)"
3"Harlow called back (call back)"
4"Davies stammered (stammer)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.323
76.6628%