Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT05ZS1YHMESCKSGF4JFFHQ

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Model:
GPT-5.1
Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.053906
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
"Do not touch that." The constable froze with his gloved hand an inch above the dead man's boot, head jerking up like a kid caught nicking sweets. The word bounced off the stained tiles and came back thin and nervous. Harlow stepped off the last iron rung of the access ladder and onto the platform. Her boots scraped dust, old ballast, something brittle underfoot. Arc lamps on stands turned the disused station into a stage set, light too white, shadows too black. The Tube line sat silent beside them, twin rails running out into darkness in both directions. She checked her watch without thinking. The cracked leather dug against her wrist. "Thought you had retired, Quinn." Callum Reese appeared from behind one of the lamps, paper mask pulled down to his chin, blond hair damp at the temples. DS stripes on his shoulder, the easy grin of a man who believed the world still made sense. "You keep calling me that, I might," she said. He snorted. "Come see our Sleeping Beauty." He led her to the centre of the platform. The body lay on its back between two support pillars, head tipped a little to the right as if listening to the tunnel. Male, early thirties, lean. Shirt open to the navel, skin pale under the bleaching lamp. No blood on the clothes, no obvious wounds. Just the marks. They spread across his chest in thin, deliberate lines. Circles and intersecting curves, like someone had copied a sketch and lost patience half way. Harlow crouched, her knees popping. "Overdose?" she said. "Yeah," Reese said. "With extra arts and crafts." He flicked a glove toward the far side of the platform. A clear plastic bagged syringe waited on a collapsible trestle, labelled and neat. "Found that tucked by his hand," Reese said. "No sign of a struggle. No wallet gone, no pockets turned out. Junkie comes down here, shoots up, gets weird with a compass and a marker, taps out." "Compass?" Reese reached for another evidence bag on the trestle and held it up. A small brass circle, smeared with grime, caught the light. Its glass face showed a spider web of faint scratches. Where the numbers should have sat, sigils curled and hooked instead, cramped around the edge like insects pressed under glass. "This was his," Reese said. "In his left trouser pocket. Souvenir shop in Soho caught in a crime scene net." The needle inside did not point to the north end of the station. It quivered and held steady against the glass, angled toward the brick wall by the old "Way Out" sign. Harlow watched it for three beats of her heart. "Souvenir shops sell runic compasses now," she said. "Probably somewhere with incense and dreamcatchers," Reese said. "We can ask the Metaphysical Department." He said it like a joke. A few uniforms laughed on cue. Harlow looked back at the chest. The lines were not drawn. The cuts sat shallow but clean, blood dried hard in the grooves. The circles overlapped in three precise places, not many people bothered with that for a laugh. She leaned closer, the smell of dried copper rising, nose catching something else under it, faint and salty, like old stone left wet too long. "SOCO lifted prints?" she said. "Nothing yet," Reese said. "No spray on the walls, no tags. Whoever carved him did it tidy." "Tidy people usually clean up needles," she said. She slid two fingers along the dead man's forearm, pressing against the veiny inside of the elbow. The skin felt smooth. No track marks. No bruises from a cuff or belt. "No kids knackered by spice cleanse like that," she said. Reese shifted his weight. "Early days," he said. "Maybe he practised safe destruction." Harlow let that glide past. She looked at the hand that had held the syringe. Fingers curved, two knuckles grazed. A black crescent of recent dirt sat under the nails. "He came down ladders not used in months," she said, "and still managed dirt under his nails thick enough for a gardener." "We are standing in a dust bowl," Reese said. She straightened, let her eyes move, slow and methodical, away from the body. Dust lay thick on the tiles, soft and grey between the sleepers of the dead track. It turned every footprint into a stamped story. There, by the ladder, clustered boot prints from the team, fresh and sharp-edged. Past those, further along the platform, a single path of smoother ovals came from the tunnel mouth, not the ladder. Trainers, average size, tread worn at the heel. They stopped at the body. And they did not go back. "Where is his return trip?" she said. Reese frowned. "What?" "His prints," she said. "One path, from darkness to the body. No overlap, no messy doubling. He did not walk away from where he fell, and he did not come from the access ladder." "He could have come down the tunnel, carried, dragged, whatever," Reese said. "Look, Quinn, some street pharmacist and his client get creative, client snuffs it, dealer legs it along the sleepers, disturbs his own prints, hides in the mainline like a rat when the first train slows." Harlow walked to the rails. The beam from her hand torch cut across the sleepers, bright white on grey. Dust sat undisturbed on the wooden slats except for a single narrow groove, recent, cutting diagonally from the tunnel mouth toward the body. Like something heavy had slid, not been carried. "A drag mark," she said. Reese came up beside her, peered down. "Maintenance trolleys," he said. "They still come through. Manual override, emergency call, the usual heroics." Harlow walked along the drag line. It ended a foot short of the body. No smear of blood, no hair, nothing to say a head or arm had bumped across it. Just the same clean, fine dust. "They did not move him that way," she said. "Then how did he land there," Reese said, "out of thin air?" Harlow looked at the wall where the fake compass pointed. Old enamel signs with chipped corners, adverts for cigarettes that no longer existed, graffiti in fading black paint. The bricks behind the "Way Out" sign wore a faint fan of soot. Not from fire. It spread in a neat cone from a point on the floor, rising to the middle of the wall. No scorch, no melted grout. She walked back to the body and looked up at the lamps. "You moved him," she said. Reese bristled. "We do not move bodies until the doc signs off," he said. "Then why is there dust under his shoulder," she said. She crouched again, took a latexed thumb and pressed just under the man's right scapula. The body rocked, faintly, and a soft half-moon of clean tile peeped at her. A print, not of fingers, but of pressure where he had not touched. "Someone set him down and stepped away," she said. Reese watched, jaw tight. "Okay," he said. "You want weird, you can have weird. Coroner's keen. But I'll tell you what I see, Harlow. Bloke on some bespoke designer poison, sees God, does a little self-harm art project and dies. Dealer panics, dumps him somewhere off the grid, maybe with a short stay down there first." "Down where," she said. Reese jerked his head toward the tunnel at the north end. A metal gate sat there, half-rolled, rust flaking from its teeth. "Service corridor," he said. "Network Rail, or some subcontractor with fewer vowels in the company name. Padlock's been cut." Harlow walked toward it, her torch picking out a glint where Reese said. The padlock hung from the hasp, its bow sawn clean through. The cut edges shone fresh bright steel. No filings on the ground, no scorch, so not a grinder, neat work. A bolt cutter or something sharper. She looked back at her constables. "Who touched the lock," she said. Silence, then the youngest one, helmet askew, raised his hand like a schoolboy. "PC Dwyer," he said. "When we got here it was hanging like that. I checked the gate, that was it. Did not go in." "Scene log backs him," Reese said quickly. Harlow ducked and stepped through the half-lifted gate. Her shoulders cleared with a flake of rust that whispered down her coat. On the other side, the noise of the platform dropped. The air felt different, thicker, full of old damp concrete and something faintly sweet. Her torch beam picked out a narrow corridor with cable trays bolted to the walls, plastic sheathing aged to the colour of nicotine. Puddles sat in shallow dips in the floor, their surfaces still. "Bring the lamp," she said. A SOCO pushed one of the arc stands under the gate and plugged its cable into a different socket. Light widened the world, pushed the shadows back a little. The corridor ran maybe ten metres then doglegged right out of view. Reese ducked through behind her. "You know this is all civils property," he said. "They will whinge about contamination for a month." "They can send a fruit basket," she said. She moved along the corridor, boots echoing. On the walls, graffiti changed. The spray paint on the platform gates showed tags and swear words. In here, someone had drawn, slow and patient. Circles, triangles, knots of lines that doubled back on themselves. Markings about the size of a hand, chalk in pale blue and dull red. Some clean, some smeared into ghost stains. Her heart ticked once, hard, against her ribs. Three years had not worn all the memory from those shapes. She had seen them on a cellar wall in Tottenham, under the flaring light of a portable halogen, Morris's voice in her ear. Heard the scream. Smell of meat and ozone. She closed her hand around that and set it aside. "Kids from an art course," Reese said behind her. "Alternative geometry club." "These were not for art," she said. Reese made a soft noise. "You took a course in old symbols while I was out chasing burglars," he said. "Something like that," she said. She stopped at the dogleg and peered around. The corridor opened into a rectangular chamber the size of a single Underground carriage. Concrete walls, low ceiling, one old ventilation fan dead in the corner. On the floor someone had drawn a circle in white chalk, thick enough to show texture, twice as wide as a man. The same overlapping curves from the dead man's chest curled inside it, this time complete. Footprints patterned the chalk where someone had stepped through, messier, hurried. The drag line from the rails stopped here, a darker scrape through the whiteness. Reese whistled, softly. "Okay," he said. "Your boys have been busy." Harlow walked to the edge of the circle. Inside, the dust lay thinner, as if a draught had passed through and licked it cleaner. In the very centre, a faint dark smear, like spilled ink rubbed at then left. She crouched, reached, stopped an inch above the smear. "Get me a swab," she said. A SOCO shuffled forward, passed her the kit. She dabbed the cotton bud against the mark. It picked up brown. Dried blood. Old enough to flake, fresh enough to stain. "Two events," she said. "One here, one where we found him. They used the same pattern." "They," Reese said. "You sound very sure about the plural." "See these," she said. She pointed at the shoe marks that crossed the chalk. One set small, narrow, deep at the heel as if the wearer favoured their toes. One broader, flatter, toe pointing out slightly. A third set scratched just at the perimeter, half-prints cut off by the line. "You do not make an effort like this alone," she said. Reese watched the circle, his jaw moving as if he chewed a thought. "And what is this effort for," he said. Harlow looked at the pattern, the curves closing in on each other, the places they pinched like a throat. She had no name that fit in the Met's list of standard motives. "We will ask whoever cut his chest," she said. She straightened. Fabric pulled at her shoulder. Her watch strap bit again. Something in her coat pocket moved. Harlow froze. Slowly, without taking her eyes from the circle, she slid her fingers into the inside pocket of her jacket. The evidence bag with the compass rasped against her knuckles. The plastic had creased warm against its shape. The disk inside trembled, knocking a faint rhythm against the sealed edge. She pulled it out. The needle inside no longer held steady at a polite angle. It spun in a tight, urgent circle, then jerked and locked, pointing not at the wall behind the platform but at the far side of the chamber. Reese's breath changed beside her. "Thought that thing was broken," he said. Harlow lifted the compass level with her chest. The needle twitched, desperate to align. She turned her body, followed where it wanted to point. It settled on the back wall of the chamber, between the dead fan and a stack of forgotten cable drums. Plain concrete, hairline crack running diagonally near the floor. A damp stain spread around the crack like a map of an island. "Get everyone out," she said. Reese frowned. "Quinn." She did not look away from the wall. "Now." Something passed through the air, subtle as a pressure change before a train arrived on an active line, that little shove in the chest that said, weight of air moving. Only no train ran down here. The puddles on the floor shivered once. Chalk dust lifted in a thin breath from the lines at her feet. The arc lamp flickered. "Power issue," Reese said, too loud. The fan in the corner gave a single exhausted turn, blades scraping limescale. The damp patch on the wall darkened at the centre, as if something on the other side had pressed its palm flat to the concrete. The crack thickened. Not with falling fragments, not crumbling. The line simply widened, like a mouth opening. Hairline became finger width, finger width became thumb. Cold spilled out, needle-sharp against the sweat at the back of Harlow's neck. "Everyone out," she said again. The first constable moved, stumbling backwards, bumping the lamp. Its light swung, throwing their shadows huge and bent across the circle. The compass needle snapped so hard against the glass it clicked. The crack tore down the wall in a sudden, breathless rush. Concrete groaned. Dust exploded outward, a dry cough that tasted of stone and rust. Something black and thick pulsed in the widening gap, not emptiness, not quite. It wrinkled like oil on water and then pushed forward, bulging, as if the wall had started to breathe in the wrong direction. The last thing Harlow saw before the lamp failed was that blackness swelling, reaching, its edge catching the light, not flat at all but made of something that glistened and moved. Behind her, someone screamed. Then the concrete split like old bone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags51
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Reese said quickly [quickly]"
1"she said again [again]"
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rawRatio0.039
effectiveRatio0.039
88.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2527
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"slightly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2527
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"quivered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"quivered"
2"weight"
3"methodical"
4"glint"
5"silence"
6"echoing"
7"standard"
8"trembled"
9"flickered"
10"pulsed"
11"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences226
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences226
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences250
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2520
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1985
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Reese"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Reese"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Reese27
Harlow16
Silence1
Tottenham1
Morris1
Underground1
Met1
Dust3
persons
0"Reese"
1"Harlow"
2"Morris"
3"Dust"
places
0"Tottenham"
1"Met"
globalScore0.82
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences140
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening to the tunnel"
1"not quite"
80.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.19
wordCount2520
matches
0"not of fingers, but of pressure"
1"not at the wall behind the platform but at the far side of the chamber"
2"not flat at all but made of something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences250
matches
0"let that glide"
1"was that blackness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs128
mean19.69
std19.34
cv0.983
sampleLengths
04
136
258
313
45
540
69
72
85
955
103
1129
123
138
1424
1536
161
1753
1820
1932
209
218
2214
2312
246
2558
265
2717
288
2931
3010
314
329
3330
3422
359
3613
3770
386
397
402
411
4234
4347
4450
455
467
4715
4837
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences226
matches
0"been carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs339
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences250
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1991
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same clean, fine dust."
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.03063787041687594
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0055248618784530384
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences250
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences250
mean10.08
std6.62
cv0.657
sampleLengths
04
123
213
315
49
518
616
76
87
95
1022
1118
129
132
145
159
1623
174
1811
198
203
219
2215
235
243
253
265
2711
2813
298
3028
311
3213
3310
3410
3520
365
3715
3813
3919
409
418
428
436
446
456
466
475
4812
4916
58.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.384
totalSentences250
uniqueOpeners96
96.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences172
matches
0"Just the marks."
1"Just the same clean, fine"
2"Slowly, without taking her eyes"
3"Only no train ran down"
4"Then the concrete split like"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences172
matches
0"Her boots scraped dust, old"
1"She checked her watch without"
2"He led her to the"
3"They spread across his chest"
4"He flicked a glove toward"
5"Its glass face showed a"
6"It quivered and held steady"
7"He said it like a"
8"She leaned closer, the smell"
9"She slid two fingers along"
10"She looked at the hand"
11"She straightened, let her eyes"
12"It turned every footprint into"
13"They stopped at the body."
14"It ended a foot short"
15"It spread in a neat"
16"She walked back to the"
17"She crouched again, took a"
18"She looked back at her"
19"Her shoulders cleared with a"
ratio0.233
67.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences172
matches
0"The constable froze with his"
1"The word bounced off the"
2"Harlow stepped off the last"
3"Her boots scraped dust, old"
4"Arc lamps on stands turned"
5"The Tube line sat silent"
6"She checked her watch without"
7"The cracked leather dug against"
8"Callum Reese appeared from behind"
9"DS stripes on his shoulder,"
10"He led her to the"
11"The body lay on its"
12"Shirt open to the navel,"
13"They spread across his chest"
14"Circles and intersecting curves, like"
15"Harlow crouched, her knees popping."
16"He flicked a glove toward"
17"A clear plastic bagged syringe"
18"Reese reached for another evidence"
19"A small brass circle, smeared"
ratio0.785
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences91
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"DS stripes on his shoulder, the easy grin of a man who believed the world still made sense."
1"The body lay on its back between two support pillars, head tipped a little to the right as if listening to the tunnel."
2"Her shoulders cleared with a flake of rust that whispered down her coat."
3"Reese watched the circle, his jaw moving as if he chewed a thought."
4"Something passed through the air, subtle as a pressure change before a train arrived on an active line, that little shove in the chest that said, weight of air …"
5"The damp patch on the wall darkened at the centre, as if something on the other side had pressed its palm flat to the concrete."
6"The last thing Harlow saw before the lamp failed was that blackness swelling, reaching, its edge catching the light, not flat at all but made of something that …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags51
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags50
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.658
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.0173%