Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT063Z8WZ1SGARMVPHEVAVP

Run Details

Duration:
39.2s
Cost:
$0.032106
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and Rory's breath caught. Lucien stood in the corridor, platinum hair dishevelled in a way she'd never seen, one shoulder pressed against the doorframe like he needed it for support. His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach flip. The ivory-handled cane dangled from his left hand, and his charcoal suit looked like he'd slept in it. Or hadn't slept at all. "Aurora." Her name in his mouth, wrapped in that French accent, still did things to her she refused to acknowledge. "How did you—" She stopped. Stupid question. He was an information broker. Finding people was literally his job. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" "That depends." She tightened her grip on the door. Behind her, Ptolemy meowed from somewhere in Eva's chaotic living room. "Are you here to tell me everything that happened three months ago was necessary? That you had no choice? Because I've heard that speech." Something flickered across his face. Pain, maybe. He was good at hiding it, but she'd learned to read the micro-expressions that slipped through his armour. "No." He straightened, rolling his shoulders back. The vulnerability vanished. "I'm here because someone tried to kill me last night, and you're the only person I trust." The words hung between them like a blade suspended by thread. She should close the door. Should tell him to take his trust and his perfect suits and his lies of omission back to whatever hole he'd crawled from. Should remember the way he'd walked out of her life without explanation, leaving only a note that said it was safer this way. Instead, she stepped aside. He moved past her, bringing with him the scent of expensive cologne mixed with something metallic. Blood, she realized. Her eyes dropped to his right side, where his jacket hung strangely. "You're hurt." "Observant as ever." He made it to Eva's threadbare sofa before his leg gave out. He caught himself on the armrest, knuckles white against the faded floral pattern. "Let me see." "It's nothing." "Lucien." She crossed the room in three strides, batting away his hands when he tried to stop her. "Shut up and let me help you." His laugh came out broken. "Still bossy." "Still an idiot who thinks he's invincible." She unbuttoned his jacket, her fingers brushing against his chest. The cotton shirt underneath was soaked through, dark and wet. "Christ. What happened?" "Ghoul. Claws coated with something I haven't identified yet." He winced as she peeled the fabric away from the wound. "I killed it, but not before it got a few good swipes in." The gashes ran from his ribs to his hip, deep enough that she could see muscle. Her medical knowledge extended to basic first aid, but this needed stitches. Maybe worse. "You need a hospital." "Can't. Whoever sent the ghoul will have people watching the emergency rooms." His hand closed over hers, stopping her assessment. His palm was warm, familiar. "I wouldn't have come if there was another option." She met his eyes and saw the truth there. He was terrified. Lucien Moreau, the man who'd once negotiated a ceasefire between two demon factions while standing in a burning building, was scared. "Eva has supplies." She pulled away from his touch, ignoring the way her skin burned where he'd held her. "Supernatural injuries, too?" "Eventually. The poison slows healing." She moved to Eva's bathroom, digging through the cabinet until she found the medical kit her friend kept for emergencies. When she returned, Lucien had his head tipped back against the sofa, eyes closed. In the dim light filtering through Eva's curtains, he looked almost human. Fragile. "This will hurt." She knelt beside him, laying out supplies on the coffee table. Antiseptic. Needle. Thread. Her hands were steady even though her heart hammered. "When has that ever stopped you?" "I'm trying to decide if I should punch you first or stitch you up." "The punching will be less painful." He opened his eyes, and the weight of his gaze pinned her in place. "I owe you an explanation." "You owe me several." She soaked gauze in antiseptic. "Starting with why you're really here." "I told you—" "Bullshit. You have a dozen safehouses across London. You've got contacts who could hide you in places I've never heard of." She pressed the gauze to his wound. He hissed but didn't pull away. "So why show up at Eva's flat, where you knew I'd be?" The silence stretched. Ptolemy jumped onto the back of the sofa, regarding Lucien with feline disdain. "Because I'm tired of running." His voice dropped to barely above a whisper. "Because the people after me won't stop until I'm dead or they are. And because—" He stopped, jaw clenching. "Because what?" "Because I've made a lot of mistakes, Aurora, but leaving you was the worst one." The gauze slipped from her fingers. She stared at him, searching for the lie, the angle, the manipulation. Found none. "You left a note. On my pillow. While I was sleeping." "Yes." "Said it was safer if we weren't seen together." "It was true. Is true." He caught her wrist, thumb brushing over the crescent-shaped scar there. "My father's enemies were circling. I couldn't let them use you against me." "I'm not some damsel who needs protecting." "I know. That's what made it worse." His grip tightened. "You would have fought beside me. Would have put yourself in danger without hesitation. I couldn't live with that." "So you made the choice for me." "Yes." She yanked her hand back, grabbed the needle and thread. "Take off your shirt." He complied without argument, revealing the full extent of the damage. The poison had spread, dark veins radiating from the wounds across his abdomen. She'd seen something similar once, in one of Eva's books about demonic toxins. "This needs more than stitches. You need an antidote." "Working on it. I have people trying to identify the compound." He watched her thread the needle. "There might not be time." "Don't." She positioned the needle. "Don't you dare come here and tell me you're dying." "I'm telling you I might be. There's a difference." She drove the needle through his skin. He didn't flinch. "If you wanted to make amends before shuffling off this mortal coil, you should have brought flowers. Maybe chocolates." "Would you have let me in?" "No." "Well then." They fell into silence. She worked methodically, closing the wounds one careful stitch at a time. His breathing stayed even despite the pain. She'd forgotten this about him—his absolute control, even when his body screamed otherwise. "I thought about you." The words escaped before she could stop them. "After you left. Wondered if you were dead in a ditch somewhere." "Would you have cared?" "Yes. No. I don't know." She tied off a stitch with more force than necessary. "I was angry. Still am." "You have every right." "Stop being so reasonable. It's infuriating." His hand moved to her face, fingers curling against her cheek. She should pull away. Didn't. "I've been called many things, Aurora. Reasonable isn't typically one of them." "Lucien—" "I know. This is complicated. We're complicated." His thumb traced her jawline. "But complicated is better than nothing." She finished the last stitch, tied it off, and finally let herself look at him properly. At the exhaustion carved into his features, the vulnerability he only ever showed her, the want that mirrored her own. "If you leave again—" "I won't." "You don't know that." "No." He pulled her closer, foreheads touching. "But I'd like the chance to try."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She pulled away [away]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.605
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.026
92.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1281
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"clenching"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"stomach"
2"chaotic"
3"flickered"
4"perfect"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"whisper"
9"clenching"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences84
matches
0"was terrified"
1"was scared"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1276
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount773
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory1
French1
Stupid1
Ptolemy2
Eva5
Moreau1
Lucien4
Antiseptic1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Antiseptic"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he'd slept in it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1276
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean17.24
std14.1
cv0.817
sampleLengths
08
164
21
319
423
54
644
725
827
911
1051
114
1231
132
1428
153
162
1725
187
1930
2033
2130
224
2334
2433
2522
265
2747
2826
296
3014
3125
3215
333
3446
3516
3632
372
3815
3920
4011
411
429
4329
447
4529
467
471
4814
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences137
ratio0.015
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach flip."
1"She'd forgotten this about him—his absolute control, even when his body screamed otherwise."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.033419023136246784
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010282776349614395
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean9.31
std6.4
cv0.687
sampleLengths
08
126
215
318
45
51
619
75
82
95
106
115
124
139
1411
1524
165
172
1818
197
203
2117
2211
235
2423
2523
264
2716
283
2912
302
3115
3213
333
342
3518
367
375
382
3917
4010
413
4220
4313
4416
4512
462
474
4820
495
73.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4744525547445255
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners65
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead, she stepped aside."
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences74
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked"
1"Her name in his mouth,"
2"He was an information broker."
3"She tightened her grip on"
4"He was good at hiding"
5"He straightened, rolling his shoulders"
6"She should close the door."
7"He moved past her, bringing"
8"Her eyes dropped to his"
9"He made it to Eva's"
10"He caught himself on the"
11"She crossed the room in"
12"His laugh came out broken."
13"She unbuttoned his jacket, her"
14"He winced as she peeled"
15"Her medical knowledge extended to"
16"His hand closed over hers,"
17"His palm was warm, familiar."
18"She met his eyes and"
19"He was terrified."
ratio0.676
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences74
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Lucien stood in the corridor,"
2"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked"
3"The ivory-handled cane dangled from"
4"Her name in his mouth,"
5"He was an information broker."
6"Finding people was literally his"
7"She tightened her grip on"
8"Something flickered across his face."
9"He was good at hiding"
10"He straightened, rolling his shoulders"
11"The vulnerability vanished."
12"The words hung between them"
13"She should close the door."
14"He moved past her, bringing"
15"Blood, she realized."
16"Her eyes dropped to his"
17"He made it to Eva's"
18"He caught himself on the"
19"She crossed the room in"
ratio0.892
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—amber and black—locked onto hers with an intensity that made her stomach flip."
1"Lucien Moreau, the man who'd once negotiated a ceasefire between two demon factions while standing in a burning building, was scared."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She unbuttoned, her fingers brushing against his chest"
1"He stopped, jaw clenching"
2"He caught, thumb brushing over the crescent-shaped scar there"
3"He pulled, foreheads touching"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.013
leniency0.026
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.026
83.4513%