Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT067ZSMJ9FCYBZJM1BA76X

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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was thick with the smell of damp concrete and decay. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the final flight of steps, her worn leather watch catching the single swinging bulb of light. The sound of her hard-soled boots echoed in the cavernous space, a sharp, rhythmic report against the silence. Tiles cracked and flaked away from the curved walls, revealing the dark brick beneath. A disused platform stretched into the darkness, a third rail gleaming like a metallic spine. Eva Kowalski stood near the edge of the platform, a small figure swallowed by the gloom. Her round glasses reflected the weak light, and she clutched the strap of her worn leather satchel like a shield. She’d tucked a strand of her curly red hair behind her left ear, a nervous gesture Harlow had already learned to recognise. ‘You’re late.’ ‘Traffic on the Euston Road is a special kind of hell, Evie.’ Harlow’s gaze swept the area. ‘Where is it?’ Eva pointed a trembling finger towards a dark archway, the entrance to an old service tunnel. ‘In there. It’s… not good, Harlow.’ Harlow moved towards the archway, her posture straight, her movements carrying the military precision that had become second nature. The air grew colder as she approached, a deep bone-chill that had nothing to do with the station’s subterranean location. A new smell cut through the dampness. Ozone. And something else, something sweet and acrid. Burnt sugar. She stepped through the archway. The service tunnel was a short, brick-lined corridor. At its far end, a man was slumped against the wall. He was dressed in fine, if slightly eccentric, clothes—a velvet waistcoat over a linen shirt. His skin, however, was the colour of old parchment, pulled tight over his cheekbones. His eyes were open, staring at the ceiling, but they were milky and clouded, like river stones. ‘No visible wounds,’ Eva said from behind her. ‘I checked. No punctures, no contusions, no signs of a struggle. Coroner’s preliminary on the phone agrees. It’s like he just… stopped.’ Harlow knelt. She didn’t touch the body yet. She observed. The victim’s hands were resting in his lap. His right hand was clenched in a tight fist. The space around him was a mess. Shelves along the wall had been pulled down, their contents—jars of strange herbs, bundles of dried flowers, intricately carved bones—scattered across the floor. It looked like a robbery gone wrong. A frantic, violent search. ‘A deal gone sour, perhaps,’ Eva offered, her voice a hushed whisper. ‘This is Silas. He was a Shade artisan. A craftsman. He dealt in rare items. Someone must have wanted something he had.’ ‘If they wanted something, they wouldn’t have left this.’ Harlow gestured with her chin towards the victim’s clenched hand. ‘And they wouldn’t have made this much of a mess. It’s too loud. Too obvious.’ She finally reached out, her gloved fingers gently prying open the dead man’s fist. It was stiff, resistant. Inside was a small brass compass, no bigger than a pocket watch. Its casing had a greenish patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with a series of complex, interlocking sigils. The needle wasn't pointing north. It was spinning, a frantic, silent blur of metal. ‘The Veil Compass,’ Eva breathed. ‘I’ve only read about these. They’re supposed to point toward the nearest supernatural rift. They’re incredibly rare. Silas must have made it himself.’ ‘It’s broken.’ ‘No, look.’ Eva knelt opposite her, pushing her glasses up her nose. ‘The casing is intact. The glass isn’t even cracked. It’s not broken. It’s… active. Overloaded, maybe. I’ve never seen one do this.’ Harlow stood up, her eyes scanning the scattered debris again. The mess. It was chaotic, but there was a pattern to it. The items closest to the victim were the least disturbed. A jar of pickled newts sat upright just inches from his shoe. Further away, a shelf had been completely torn from the wall. ‘You said a deal gone wrong,’ Harlow began, her voice low and steady. ‘Let’s walk through that. A rival artisan, or a dissatisfied customer, comes down here. They argue. Things get heated. They kill Silas. Why? How? There’s not a mark on him.’ ‘Magic? Some kind of curse?’ ‘Possible. But then, our killer ransacks the place, looking for something. The Compass, maybe. But they don’t take it. They leave it in his hand. Why smash up the room if you’re not going to take the prize? And look at his clothes. They’re pristine. No scuff marks on his shoes, no dirt on the knees of his trousers. If there was a struggle, he’d have fought back. He’d have been on the ground.’ Harlow walked to the far end of the corridor, where the wall was darkest. She ran her fingers over the brick. It was cold, almost painfully so. Colder than the rest of the tunnel. ‘The energy here is all wrong,’ Eva said, following her gaze. ‘It feels… thin. Frayed.’ ‘The Compass isn’t pointing at a rift, Evie.’ Harlow turned back to face the body. The spinning needle was a frantic, silver blur in the dead man’s hand. ‘It’s not a compass. It’s a gauge. And Silas wasn’t measuring a rift. He was creating one.’ Eva’s eyes widened. ‘That’s forbidden. The energy required… it’s unstable. It would tear him apart.’ ‘No.’ Harlow’s gaze was fixed on the victim’s desiccated form. ‘It didn’t tear him apart. It took something from him. Look at him. He’s been drained. Every last bit of it. The ransacked room wasn’t a search. It was the aftermath. A violent release of energy. He opened a door, and whatever was on the other side didn’t just walk through. It reached out and pulled him through, atom by atom, leaving only this shell behind.’ She pointed to the spinning needle. ‘That’s not a broken compass. That’s an open connection.’
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount989
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"complex"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"pristine"
count1
13
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"rhythmic"
2"silence"
3"gleaming"
4"gloom"
5"chill"
6"velvet"
7"whisper"
8"etched"
9"complex"
10"scanning"
11"chaotic"
12"pristine"
13"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords983
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount790
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow6
Quinn1
Kowalski1
Shade1
Silas3
Compass1
Eva3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a robbery gone wrong"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount983
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean36.41
std24.86
cv0.683
sampleLengths
084
158
22
320
422
556
65
765
830
968
1034
1134
1264
1328
142
1534
1655
1743
185
1974
2034
2115
2245
2315
2476
256
269
81.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences104
matches
0"was slumped"
1"was dressed"
2"was clenched"
3"been pulled"
4"was etched"
5"supposed"
6"been drained"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs125
matches
0"were resting"
1"wasn't pointing"
2"was spinning"
3"wasn’t measuring"
4"was creating"
99.89% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences133
ratio0.015
matches
0"He was dressed in fine, if slightly eccentric, clothes—a velvet waistcoat over a linen shirt."
1"Shelves along the wall had been pulled down, their contents—jars of strange herbs, bundles of dried flowers, intricately carved bones—scattered across the floor."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount143
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.013986013986013986
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006993006993006993
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean7.39
std5.55
cv0.751
sampleLengths
017
120
218
314
415
516
620
722
82
917
103
1116
122
131
143
1519
1620
177
181
197
202
215
228
2311
2415
2514
2617
278
282
299
306
314
321
332
346
352
368
379
387
3923
407
414
4212
433
445
452
465
477
4819
4910
55.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.38345864661654133
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners51
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Further away, a shelf had"
ratio0.012
52.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences86
matches
0"Her round glasses reflected the"
1"She’d tucked a strand of"
2"She stepped through the archway."
3"He was dressed in fine,"
4"His skin, however, was the"
5"His eyes were open, staring"
6"It’s like he just…"
7"She didn’t touch the body"
8"His right hand was clenched"
9"It looked like a robbery"
10"He was a Shade artisan."
11"He dealt in rare items."
12"It’s too loud."
13"She finally reached out, her"
14"It was stiff, resistant."
15"Its casing had a greenish"
16"It was spinning, a frantic,"
17"They’re supposed to point toward"
18"They’re incredibly rare."
19"It’s not broken."
ratio0.419
47.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences86
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The sound of her hard-soled"
3"Tiles cracked and flaked away"
4"A disused platform stretched into"
5"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
6"Her round glasses reflected the"
7"She’d tucked a strand of"
8"Eva pointed a trembling finger"
9"Harlow moved towards the archway,"
10"The air grew colder as"
11"A new smell cut through"
12"She stepped through the archway."
13"The service tunnel was a"
14"He was dressed in fine,"
15"His skin, however, was the"
16"His eyes were open, staring"
17"Coroner’s preliminary on the phone"
18"It’s like he just…"
19"She didn’t touch the body"
ratio0.826
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"If there was a struggle,"
ratio0.012
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Harlow moved towards the archway, her posture straight, her movements carrying the military precision that had become second nature."
1"The air grew colder as she approached, a deep bone-chill that had nothing to do with the station’s subterranean location."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.8225%