Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06AGHBFGK2Y8ZE21FZYZS

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5
Duration:
1m 44s
Cost:
$0.064786
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Harlow caught the constable's wrist before his glove smeared the bone-white ring. Careful, she said, then stepped past him into the hollow of the platform. Stalls listed against tiled pillars, tarpaulins slumped like shed skins. The air carried spice smoke and the tang of copper. Strings of dead bulbs drooped between ribs of brickwork. Someone had tried to clean, to erase, yet everywhere she looked the place told on itself, char and wax and crushed herbs ground into the cracks. Park raised an eyebrow by the body. He had his suit jacket off and his tie tucked. His latexed hand hovered near a scatter of glass vials in a shallow crate. Rough night, Quinn. She crouched. The corpse leaned against a pillar under a handwritten sign that read Cuts, Curses and Clocks, the paper bled by something dark. Mid thirties, male, olive skin, shaved head. Someone had arranged his hands on his lap. Broken capillaries webbed the whites of his eyes. His lips hung open. Not my night, she said, and slid a torch beam across his face. Teeth intact, tongue swollen. The light picked a flash of creamy grey between his molars. She angled the torch, then pinched on a nitrile and reached in. A small polished token kissed her fingertip. Bone, Park said. She rubbed it against her glove. Smooth. Tiny script scratched into one face, an alphabet she did not recognise at a glance, then a crude symbol on the other, a crescent hooked through a key. She held it flat on her palm. You see that on the way in? Park shrugged. We pulled a dozen of those out of bags. Party favours. University lot put on a show, someone drops, mass panic, a stampede through a service door, and they leave their toys. She looked up at him. Toy witnesses run faster than panic. He smiled with half his mouth. We will find them. Cameras caught figures through the grilles. Fancy cloaks, silly masks. One of the uniforms said performance art. They bolted when a bloke died. It fits. She let the token sit warm on her glove. The bone-white ring on the floor did not fit. It circled the space where the crate lay scattered. The chalk had grit in it. Not classroom stuff. She squatted by the line, nose a handspan over the surface, and let the torch skim. Tiny dark flecks caught the light, densely packed where the line curved around the pillar. Not chalk, she said. Park clicked his tongue. Talc then. Blood spatter analysis will tell you everything and a bedtime story. She dipped one gloved fingertip through the line and brought up powder. Iron prickled at her tongue though she had not tasted it. Bone ash. Oily blacks where fat had kissed flame. She lifted her finger to her nose. Whoever drew this worked hot, she said. Not a student. Park's tone changed. Occult then. She clicked the torch off and stood. The dark felt thicker for a second, then the scene details asserted themselves. A tar line ran in an arc a yard outside the ring, still tacky. Bits of brown resin, crushed like amber glass. Wax drips dotted the tiles, but the drips massed on one side of each puddle, as if dragged in one direction without tilt. Your stampede did not disturb the wax, she said. Your stampede missed the ring. Your stampede stepped here and here, and not here. Park followed her beam as it traced shoe prints. Trainers, cheap, the soles with star treads. A set of boot prints, deeper, a chunk missing from the outer heel of the right. They came in from the tunnel side, crisscrossed the stall, stopped shy of the ring, then doubled back. No smears, no drops of fresh blood across them. He bared his teeth. They tiptoed around the magic circle. My lot will send them a thank you card for preserving evidence. Her jaw tightened. The old anger rose and she put it down in the neat little box she kept for it, like she had been taught. Not tonight. Not the same mistake as before. She moved the torch to the man's shoes. New leather soles, expensive, and a tiny grit caught in one welt that had not caught in the other. Glinting green. She levered it out with her nail, a flake of oxidised metal, Verdigris. She lifted his coat flap. His inside pocket bulged. She slid her hand in and pulled out a small brass compass. The casing wore a crust of green, the kind she saw on old railings by the river. The face was crowded with tiny sigils etched between the points. The needle did not settle. It trembled, a faint quiver like a muscle under skin. Park leaned in. Souvenir from a museum stall. She felt the weight of the thing, how it pulled a fraction toward her wrist. Not magnetism. Something else. Her heartbeat thudded and the old case pressed at her. She glanced at her watch. The leather had cracked along the edge but it kept perfect time, a habit she had never dropped. Order, even in holes like this. She set the compass on the floor inside the ring. The needle snapped to point past the pillar toward a bricked arch with a teal enamel sign, Letters lost to chips. Where the old service tunnel curved away, someone had plastered brick over brick in neat bonds years ago. Her torch fell on the seams of that wall. Mortar smooth, undisturbed. A spider had sheeted the lower corner and dust lay thick as felt on the sill. That, she said, and nodded toward the blocked arch, is not an exit. Trespassing on history now, Park said. Dead bloke, costume party, a token in his mouth. You will tell me it is a black market sacrifice, and I will tell you about ketamine and a heart that gave up. Harlow straightened. She let the back of her glove brush the pillar behind the corpse. Rough indentations notches at hip height, two to each side at even intervals. Hooks had hung here. The sign above them swayed in the air currents people made with their movements. Cuts, Curses and Clocks. The third word struck her as more than decoration. A torn strip of cloth snagged on a nail glimmered with tiny stitches, fibres of silver thread woven through. She crouched again and pulled the corpse's right hand closer, rolled it palm up. The lifelines were mottled. A knife had burred the skin in a straight, careful cut down the centre, not across the wrist, a controlled bleed. Dried blood ringed it, thick and black. Self-inflicted? Neat, she said. Your student bled him like a sheep. You see the edges, clean, one pass. I want the knife. Not serrated. And he is dry inside, but the pool under him is small. If he died here, I missed all the blood that left his body. Park nodded to the ring. It soaked into your circle of crematorium leftovers. She let the comment hang. She took a step and felt grit give under her sole. She crouched and palmed a handful of crushed crystals from under the tarpaulin edge. Camphor. She rolled a piece and the smell hit the back of her nose, sharp and medicinal, and the memory of formaldehyde in a college lab stabbed into the present and stuck. She put the crystals in an evidence bag, then walked the edge of the ring again. On one side, a gap interrupted the line by an inch. Not a break. The drawer of the circle had paused, juddered, then continued. Her torch picked faint scratches on the tile where something heavy had dug in and turned. She moved along that vector with the light. At the end of the vector, by the low wall of the old track bed, shoe prints ended in a cluster, print on print, the star treads churned together. Then nothing. No smear of grease, no imprint on the dusted service steps. No tumble into the bed, no handprint on the ledge. The prints ended as if picked up. Park watched. Kid on someone's shoulders, he said. They had fun with us. She walked to the service door. The chain lay through the handle. The lead seal that Estates used to identify tampering hung unbroken, stamped with last month's date. Cobwebs frilled the hinge and powdery grey clung to the corner inside the frame. He did not run that way, she said. I want your masks from the cameras. I want a list of every university society with keys to anything down here. And I want a word with whomever called this in. Park gestured with the hand not holding his notebook. Witnesses corralled over there. Your favourite kind, three teenagers who discovered morality between shots. And her. He pointed at a woman sitting on a flight case by the broken kiosk. Curly red hair coiled in a loose bun, round glasses, freckles like a sprayed mist across her nose. A battered leather satchel lay at her feet. She looked like a librarian who had taken the wrong turn into a boot sale and refused to admit it. Harlow walked over. The woman stood before she asked. You the one who dialled, Harlow said. The woman nodded. Her hand went to tuck a curl behind her ear and stopped halfway, as if she had trained herself out of habits in rooms full of eyes. Eva Kowalski, she said. Research assistant. British Museum. You work with restricted texts then, Harlow said. Archival handling, she said. Among other things. Tell me about your other things. Eva swallowed. Her voice did not shake. A friend messaged me with an address, a place to find a book you cannot get on a shelf. I came to look. When people screamed, I ran to the stairs and called 999, then a uniform told me to sit. Harlow looked at her shoes. Sensible trainers with a film of dust on the toes. Not the star-tread pattern by the ring. She scanned the satchel. Scuffs, ink blotches, and a new tear along the bottom seam that looked recent. Threads strained white. You got what you came for? Eva kept her eyes on some point a foot left of Harlow's face. I did not pay. They packed up the table. Someone shouted fire. The lights went. I lost my friend. She will text. She always does. Who sent you the address? Eva blinked. I cannot give you that. Harlow watched a small tremor move through the tendons on Eva's neck and counted three heartbeats, then four, and let the silence do work. Eva met it. She shifted her weight and the satchel bumped against her shin with a thunk too solid for paper. Harlow glanced down. The satchel's flap sat crooked, as if something square fought the leather. The bone token in her pocket warmed, or she imagined it. She filed the satchel under Later. She stepped back to the ring. Park had wandered over to the corpse and muttered to a SOCO about lividity stopping at the waistband. The compass on the tile still pointed at the false wall in that urgent, quivering line. Harlow bent and turned its bezel, aligning a sigil that looked like a reversed letter R with the needle point. The vibration steadied. She lifted it and walked the arc again. At the gap in the bone ash line, the needle seized and pulled her wrist towards the bricked arch as if attached by a string. She knelt, held the compass in the space of the break. The needle stopped trembling. It locked true. She spoke without looking. Park, clear the platform. On what basis? On the basis that if I am wrong, you lose three minutes, and if I am right, we all walk out with our skins still wrapped. She heard the scuff of his shoes and the impatient clap of his hand for the uniforms. Boots moved. Voices called. People grumbled. Eva stood up from her flight case and picked her satchel off the floor and cradled it to her. Harlow eased her gloved finger into the gap in the ash and traced the exact place where the line failed. Tiny scorch marks pricked the tile in a crescent that did not match any other around the circle. A handmade flaw. A keyhole. She placed the bone token on the tiles at the edge of the gap, the crescent and key carving face up, and set the compass on top. The needle hummed again, a little song in her hand bones, too high for anyone else to hear unless they were touching. The metal warmed under her palm. Park's voice came from somewhere behind. Quinn, do not, and the rest of it drowned as the compass needle spun and stopped, dead. The air inside the ring thickened, as if the platform exhaled syrup. Candle stumps that had refused to drip now sagged at once and sent fat tears to the tile. The wax followed an invisible slope towards the flaw. A hairline in the mortar at the bricked arch lit red as if a coal sat inside it, then cooled back to dead brick. Harlow stood and stepped back a pace. The compass skittered on the tile as if pulled by thread and stopped with a clink against the edge of the ring. She heard a rattle like teeth in a glass jar. The bone token shivered, spun on its axis, stopped with the key pointing at the arch. Park swore. The uniforms shouted for everyone to hold. Somewhere, the teenager witnesses squealed in a way that was not theatrical. The false wall bowed. It looked like breath from a lung inside the brick. Mortar dust feathered out and hung in the air. Harlow could feel the hair on her forearms stand under her suit jacket. The old anger opened its eyes in its box and stared. She put her palm up to Park without looking at him. Stay. The bricked arch cracked on the right side down three courses, a precise vertical tear. The crack ate its way into the grout and met the floor with a knock like a door closing on carpet. The last thing she registered before the bricks moved was Eva stepping forward with the satchel clutched and her mouth set in a line that belonged in a library when someone mishandled a folio. The wall bulged once and burst, not outward in an explosion, but inward with a fall, like a curtain lifting. Beyond it yawned not the black of a disused tunnel but a cut through the world that showed no brick on the other side. Air poured through with the scent of cold stone and something mineral and wrong. A shape leaned in that did not belong to trains or London or the sensible rules she made herself follow. Park said her name once. Something reached for the circle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2512
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2512
totalAiIsms14
found
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word"eyebrow"
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1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"churned"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
11
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"traced"
2"glinting"
3"etched"
4"trembled"
5"weight"
6"perfect"
7"churned"
8"scanned"
9"silence"
10"could feel"
11"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences264
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences264
filterMatches
0"see"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences264
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2508
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions14
matches
0"Careful, she said, then stepped past him into the hollow of the platform."
1"Not my night, she said, and slid a torch beam across his face."
2"Bone, Park said."
3"Not chalk, she said."
4"Whoever drew this worked hot, she said."
5"Your stampede did not disturb the wax, she said."
6"That, she said, and nodded toward the blocked arch, is not an exit."
7"Trespassing on history now, Park said."
8"Neat, she said."
9"He did not run that way, she said."
10"You the one who dialled, Harlow said."
11"Eva Kowalski, she said."
12"You work with restricted texts then, Harlow said."
13"Archival handling, she said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount2508
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Park"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Quinn2
Cuts2
Curses2
Clocks2
Park17
Verdigris1
Letters1
Estates1
Harlow13
Kowalski1
Museum1
Eva8
Later1
London1
Tiny3
You6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Park"
2"Letters"
3"Estates"
4"Harlow"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
7"Tiny"
8"You"
places
0"Museum"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences172
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a librarian who had taken the"
1"looked like a reversed letter R with the"
2"looked like breath from a lung inside the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.797
wordCount2508
matches
0"not outward in an explosion, but inward with a fall, like a curtain lifting"
1"not the black of a disused tunnel but a cut through the world"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences264
matches
0"along that vector"
1"run that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean33.89
std24.13
cv0.712
sampleLengths
012
168
231
33
451
547
63
742
87
934
1011
1135
1267
134
1417
1539
1610
175
1865
1923
2059
2122
2276
2364
248
2558
2677
2713
2838
2978
3046
311
3248
3313
3478
3548
3659
3713
3842
3939
4085
419
427
4338
448
457
466
4748
4843
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences264
matches
0"been taught"
1"were mottled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs430
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences264
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2512
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.01910828025477707
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0015923566878980893
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences264
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences264
mean9.5
std6.76
cv0.711
sampleLengths
012
113
210
310
49
526
67
710
814
93
102
1122
127
138
148
154
1613
174
1811
1912
207
213
226
231
2428
257
267
272
289
292
3021
315
326
336
344
356
364
377
386
392
409
419
429
436
443
4516
4615
474
484
492
47.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences264
uniqueOpeners88
14.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences235
matches
0"Somewhere, the teenager witnesses squealed"
ratio0.004
77.02% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences235
matches
0"He had his suit jacket"
1"His latexed hand hovered near"
2"His lips hung open."
3"She angled the torch, then"
4"She rubbed it against her"
5"She held it flat on"
6"You see that on the"
7"We pulled a dozen of"
8"She looked up at him."
9"He smiled with half his"
10"We will find them."
11"They bolted when a bloke"
12"She let the token sit"
13"It circled the space where"
14"She squatted by the line,"
15"She dipped one gloved fingertip"
16"She lifted her finger to"
17"She clicked the torch off"
18"Your stampede did not disturb"
19"Your stampede missed the ring."
ratio0.357
68.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount184
totalSentences235
matches
0"Harlow caught the constable's wrist"
1"Stalls listed against tiled pillars,"
2"The air carried spice smoke"
3"Strings of dead bulbs drooped"
4"Someone had tried to clean,"
5"Park raised an eyebrow by"
6"He had his suit jacket"
7"His latexed hand hovered near"
8"The corpse leaned against a"
9"Someone had arranged his hands"
10"His lips hung open."
11"Teeth intact, tongue swollen."
12"The light picked a flash"
13"She angled the torch, then"
14"A small polished token kissed"
15"She rubbed it against her"
16"She held it flat on"
17"You see that on the"
18"We pulled a dozen of"
19"University lot put on a"
ratio0.783
42.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences235
matches
0"Whoever drew this worked hot,"
1"If he died here, I"
ratio0.009
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences108
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The corpse leaned against a pillar under a handwritten sign that read Cuts, Curses and Clocks, the paper bled by something dark."
1"New leather soles, expensive, and a tiny grit caught in one welt that had not caught in the other."
2"If he died here, I missed all the blood that left his body."
3"The lead seal that Estates used to identify tampering hung unbroken, stamped with last month's date."
4"Your favourite kind, three teenagers who discovered morality between shots."
5"Her hand went to tuck a curl behind her ear and stopped halfway, as if she had trained herself out of habits in rooms full of eyes."
6"Somewhere, the teenager witnesses squealed in a way that was not theatrical."
7"The last thing she registered before the bricks moved was Eva stepping forward with the satchel clutched and her mouth set in a line that belonged in a library …"
8"Beyond it yawned not the black of a disused tunnel but a cut through the world that showed no brick on the other side."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2890%