Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06BDG31PSHC3T0DQ79QT7

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.032761
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew colder with each step down into the earth. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed on the grimy concrete stairs, a lonely percussion against the oppressive silence of the abandoned Tube station. Above, the rumble of Camden was a distant memory. Down here, the world was stale air, damp decay, and the faint, metallic tang of old electricity. Blue and white police tape stretched across the archway leading to the platform, a garish slash of modernity in the century-old rot. PC Davies, young enough that his uniform still looked stiff on him, stood beside it. He shifted his weight from one foot to the other. "Detective. Forensics are just finishing up." Quinn dipped under the tape, her gaze already sweeping the platform. The domed ceiling was layered with soot and grime, ceramic tiles cracked and missing like broken teeth. A single, powerful halogen lamp, set up by the SOCO team, bleached a wide circle of the platform, throwing everything else into sharp, monstrous shadow. In the centre of that light lay the body. "Talk to me, Davies." Quinn’s voice was low, cutting through the stillness. She stopped a few feet from the victim, hands tucked into the pockets of her long coat. "John Doe. No ID. Tramp, looks like, from the state of him. Medical Examiner puts time of death between ten and midnight last night. Found by a pair of urban explorers this morning." Davies gestured vaguely with a gloved hand. "No witnesses. No cameras down here that work, obviously. Looks like a deal gone sour. He got the short end of it." Quinn approached the body. The man wasn't a tramp. The clothes were worn, yes, but they were cut from a-heavy, dark wool that she didn't recognise. His boots were handmade, scuffed but of high quality. And the satchel at his side, though empty, was fine, tooled leather. He lay on his back, eyes open and fixed on the peeling advertisements for long-dead products on the far wall. There was no blood. Not a single drop on the dusty platform. She crouched, her knees protesting. Her gaze traced the man’s form. "Cause of death?" "That’s the thing." Davies shuffled closer. "ME’s stumped for now. No entry or exit wounds. No visible trauma, aside from... that." He pointed to the man’s chest. On the pale skin, visible through the parted shirt, was a mark. It wasn't a bruise or a burn. It was a perfect, intricate spiral of ruptured capillaries, a delicate, fractal pattern that seemed to bloom from just over his heart. It was a beautiful, horrifying purple-black. Quinn’s eyes narrowed. She had seen a lot of ways a person could be killed. This was not one of them. "What kind of weapon does that?" "Beats me. Some kind of custom job? A taser, maybe? One with a hell of a kick." "A taser stops the heart. It doesn't paint pictures on the skin." She looked around the platform, her eyes adjusting to the harsh shadows beyond the lamp. "No weapon found?" "Not a thing. Killer must've taken it with him. Along with whatever they were trading." Quinn stood, the worn leather of her watch creaking on her wrist. Her salt-and-pepper hair was a stark crown in the harsh light. She began to walk the perimeter of the scene, her movements precise. The dust was thick, a grey blanket over everything. Forensics had marked their own footprints with small plastic flags. There were the victim’s tracks, a scuffed trail leading from the dark tunnel entrance to the centre of the platform where he fell. And there were the urban explorers’ prints, chaotic and overlapping near the stairs. But there was nothing else. "Davies, how did the killer leave?" The PC shrugged. "Same way he came in, I suppose. Through the tunnels." "Show me the tracks." He pointed a thumb back towards the gaping maw of the tunnel. "We followed them a ways. They just... stop. About twenty yards in. Figured he knows the passages, found a service ladder or something." Quinn walked toward the tunnel, her own footsteps methodical in the dust. The halogen light didn't reach this far. She pulled a small, powerful torch from her coat. The beam cut a clean cone through the darkness. She saw the victim's footprints, the deep impressions made by the forensics team. She saw nothing else. No second set of tracks leading out. "The dust is undisturbed, Davies." Her voice was flat. "From here all the way back to the body. No one walked out this way." "Maybe he walked on the rails?" Davies offered, his voice lacking conviction. Quinn swung the beam onto the rails. They were coated in the same fine, grey powder. Virgin territory. She walked back to the body, her jaw tight. Her gaze fell on something metallic glinting just at the edge of the light, half-hidden under the lip of the platform. Davies and the forensics team had missed it. She crouched again, pulling on a pair of latex gloves. It was a small brass compass, its casing green with age. She picked it up. It felt heavy, solid. The face wasn't marked with North or South, but with a series of interlocking sigils etched into the glass. The needle wasn't still. It spun lazily, a slow, counter-clockwise rotation, pointing at nothing and everything. "What is that?" Davies peered over her shoulder. "I don't know. Junk, maybe." But she didn't believe it. She pocketed it, sealing the evidence bag with a sharp tug. Her eyes returned to the problem of the missing killer. No footprints leading away. No weapon. A victim with an impossible wound. It felt familiar. It felt like DS Morris’s last case. The memory was a cold shard of ice in her gut. That same sense of a puzzle with missing pieces, of a rulebook that everyone else was reading from while she had a different version entirely. "Look." Davies pointed towards the wall behind the body. "Forensics found this. It’s weird." Quinn walked over. Scrawled on the grimy tile in what looked like charcoal was a complex symbol, a circle containing a jagged, asymmetrical star. It wasn’t gang graffiti. The lines were too deliberate, too certain. "Occult nonsense," Davies said with a dismissive wave. "Probably part of the deal. Some weirdo drug thing." Quinn stared at the symbol. It wasn't just nonsense. It felt deliberate. Planned. A statement. Her mind raced. Undisturbed dust. An impossible wound. A spinning compass. A symbol on the wall. The pieces didn't fit. You couldn't just add them up. It was like trying to solve an equation where none of the numbers were real. "He didn't walk out of here, Davies." "What are you saying, Detective? He flew?" Quinn didn't answer. Her eyes scanned the entire scene one more time, from the stairs to the dark tunnel, to the body, to the wall. She was missing something. The most obvious thing. Morris had always told her that. *It's always right there, Harlow. You just have to change the way you're looking.* She looked at the wall again, not at the symbol, but at the wall itself. The brickwork was old, solid. No hidden doors, no loose panels she could see. But as she stared, her eyes playing tricks in the stark light and deep shadow, she saw it. A faint distortion in the air, right in front of the wall, about six feet wide. It was like the heat-haze rising from tarmac on a summer's day. A slight shimmering, a warping of the grimy tiles behind it. She took a slow step towards it. "Boss? What is it?" "Quiet." She lifted her gloved hand, reaching out to the empty space. The air grew colder, charged with a strange static that made the hairs on her arm stand on end. It felt like the moments before a lightning strike. The world seemed to narrow to the space between her fingertips and that invisible curtain. She remembered Morris, bleeding out on the floor of that warehouse three years ago, whispering about a door that wasn't there. Her fingers trembled, inches from the wall. inches from the shimmer.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Davies gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"She looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.138
96.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"stark"
count2
8
word"chaotic"
count1
9
word"maw"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"methodical"
count1
12
word"glinting"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"complex"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"scanned"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
20
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"perfect"
6"intricate"
7"stark"
8"chaotic"
9"maw"
10"footsteps"
11"methodical"
12"glinting"
13"etched"
14"familiar"
15"sense of"
16"complex"
17"raced"
18"scanned"
19"charged"
20"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords14
totalWords1361
ratio0.01
matches
0"It's always right there, Harlow. You just have to change the way you're looking."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1101
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow2
Quinn11
Tube1
Camden1
Davies8
North1
South1
Morris3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
23.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"pattern that seemed to bloom from just over his heart"
1"felt like DS Morris’s last case"
2"looked like charcoal was a complex symbol"
3"felt like the moments before a lightnin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.735
wordCount1361
matches
0"not at the symbol, but at the wall itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean34.9
std27.59
cv0.791
sampleLengths
059
147
26
362
429
562
679
714
821
953
1027
1117
1230
1315
1495
156
1613
174
1835
1961
2024
2112
2256
2364
248
2589
2614
2735
2817
2956
307
317
3253
3386
347
354
361
3775
3811
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"was layered"
1"were coated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was reading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences137
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.01818181818181818
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0036363636363636364
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean9.93
std6.56
cv0.661
sampleLengths
011
122
29
317
422
515
610
76
811
917
1025
119
1212
1317
1440
1522
164
175
1817
199
2012
2120
224
238
245
256
263
276
2815
296
3012
317
3222
336
343
3512
366
376
3817
3927
403
4115
4212
4311
4412
459
4610
4723
4813
495
54.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.36496350364963503
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners50
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences113
matches
0"He shifted his weight from"
1"She stopped a few feet"
2"His boots were handmade, scuffed"
3"He lay on his back,"
4"She crouched, her knees protesting."
5"Her gaze traced the man’s"
6"He pointed to the man’s"
7"It wasn't a bruise or"
8"It was a perfect, intricate"
9"It was a beautiful, horrifying"
10"She had seen a lot"
11"She looked around the platform,"
12"Her salt-and-pepper hair was a"
13"She began to walk the"
14"He pointed a thumb back"
15"She pulled a small, powerful"
16"She saw the victim's footprints,"
17"She saw nothing else."
18"Her voice was flat"
19"They were coated in the"
ratio0.425
35.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences113
matches
0"The air grew colder with"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed"
2"PC Davies, young enough that"
3"He shifted his weight from"
4"Quinn dipped under the tape,"
5"The domed ceiling was layered"
6"A single, powerful halogen lamp,"
7"Quinn’s voice was low, cutting"
8"She stopped a few feet"
9"Davies gestured vaguely with a"
10"Quinn approached the body."
11"The man wasn't a tramp."
12"The clothes were worn, yes,"
13"His boots were handmade, scuffed"
14"He lay on his back,"
15"She crouched, her knees protesting."
16"Her gaze traced the man’s"
17"Davies shuffled closer"
18"He pointed to the man’s"
19"It wasn't a bruise or"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was a perfect, intricate spiral of ruptured capillaries, a delicate, fractal pattern that seemed to bloom from just over his heart."
1"She remembered Morris, bleeding out on the floor of that warehouse three years ago, whispering about a door that wasn't there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She looked around, her eyes adjusting to the harsh shadows beyond the lamp"
1"Davies offered, his voice lacking conviction"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8266%