Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06C0G2VRQGK52X4KRA15T

Run Details

Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.000712
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thick and humid as the group crossed the threshold of the standing stones, roots twisting like veins beneath their feet. Old oak trunks loomed on either side, twisted and gnarled, their bark etched with faint runes that shimmered faintly under the dim light. Time felt elastic—an hour inside could be a day outside, or a blink. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. The Grove wasn’t like any park she’d known. It pulsed with life, yet not the kind she’d expect from mundane flora. The ground beneath her sandals felt warm, almost alive, and a faint hum vibrated through the air, a low vibration that seemed to resonate with her own heartbeat. Nyx hovered just behind her, shifting slightly, shadow flickering at the edge of her vision. “This place isn’t natural,” they whispered, voice like a breeze slipping through a crack. “The boundaries are thin here.” Aurora stepped forward cautiously, eyes scanning the vibrant colors that defied seasons. The flowers—tall, with petals like liquid silver—swayed even without wind. A bush with leaves glowing faintly violet rustled, revealing tiny insects with translucent wings that shimmered like glass. She reached out instinctively, but they darted away as soon as she moved. “Feels like the whole place is watching,” she murmured. “Or waiting,” Nyx replied, voice echoing softly as shadows curled around their form like smoke. They leaned closer to the nearest standing stone, fingertips brushing its surface. Faint lines appeared beneath their touch, glowing with a pale lavender hue that seemed to pulse. “This isn’t just an illusion. There’s magic here—something ancient, holding it together.” A gentle ripple disturbed the air, and Aurora spun around. Somewhere deeper within the grove, a symmetrical arch of light flickered, like a mirage, shimmering with hues of gold and purple. She moved closer, hesitant, as if the ground itself warned her against advancing. “I think we should be careful,” Isolde’s voice drifted out, half-muffled by her quiet steps. She appeared suddenly, her silver hair shimmering like moonlit water, her gaze fixed on the glowing arch. “This place—what lies beyond it—it’s no simple find. The Fae took risks for places like this, and usually for good reason.” Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant hanging at her neck—a Heartstone pulsed softly, almost eager, with a warmth that contrasted the chilling cold of the Fae-Forged Blade she carried. She clenched her fist. “We need to see what’s on the other side.” As soon as she stepped through the glowing gateway, the landscape shifted. The grove dissolved behind her, replaced by a vast, shimmering expanse—like a lake of liquid glass stretched to the horizon. The sky above rippled with swirling colors, a kaleidoscope of shifting vision. Crimson clouds floated low, swirling with amber streaks, casting an unearthly glow over the terrain. The ground beneath her shifted too, now a mirror-like surface, rippling with each movement. Her reflection flickered, then fractured as if the world was a mirror broken and remended anew. She drew in a breath, feeling the odd, almost electric charge in the air. Nyx appeared beside her, shadow flickering closer to solidity. “This is Hel,” they whispered, voice tinged with a mixture of awe and caution. “The realm of excess, of gluttony, and overindulgence. We’re not just in a different place—we’re in a different *world*.” Aurora’s eyes scanned the landscape, and her gaze caught a distant spire, faint and shrouded in mist. An orchard spread before her, lush and unnatural—fruit of shimmering gold and ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life. Birds with iridescent wings flitted through the air, singing melodies that sounded like a thousand echoes played simultaneously. “Feels… off,” Aurora murmured. “Like the place is alive, but not in a good way.” “Or it’s feeding on us,” Isolde said quietly, her gaze flickering to the horizon. “Be wary. The Fae can hide secrets behind beauty. Don’t trust anything you see here.” Suddenly, a ripple coursed through the landscape. A figure emerged from the mist—draped in flowing robes that shimmered like they were woven from the dawn’s first light, eyes glinting with hunger. A smile stretched across their face, toothy and knowing. “Welcome,” the stranger intoned in a voice that lacked warmth but carried a strange sort of respect. “You’ve entered Dymas, the heart of Gluttony. Few leave unscathed.” Aurora stepped forward, her fingers curling around the Fae-Forged Blade her. “We’re just looking. No trouble.” The figure tilted their head. “Looking is trouble. The realm demands its toll. But perhaps… you seek more than just a glance.” Behind the stranger, the landscape rippled again, revealing a sprawling feast—the tables groaned with impossibly piled food, goblets overflowing with glowing liquids, and beings—more shadows than flesh—dining in a careless, gluttonous riot. Nyx’s shadow shifted, tense. “That’s not just a feast. It’s a trap. The realm steals vitality, feeds on desire—” Aurora cut them off, raising her voice. “We’re not here to indulge. We just need information—something about the boundary, about the Veil.” The stranger’s grin widened, sharp and predatory. “The Veil is thin here, fragile as a dying ember. That’s why you’ve come. But beware—nothing here is free. Not even knowledge.” Aurora’s gaze flicked to the pendant, feeling the faint pulse grow stronger. She lowered her voice, more to herself than anyone else. “If I can just get close enough….” The horizon shimmered again, and the landscape flickered with ghostly visions—images of shadows slipping through cracks, the faint gold glint of forbidden artifacts, the faint whisper of secrets buried beneath the feast. It tugged at her, promising answers—and danger. She stepped forward, her voice firm. “We’re not leaving without answers.” The scene stretched and shimmered like broken glass. Some truths here might come at a price. Aurora could feel it—the universe pressing against the edges of her perception, revealing just enough to reel her in deeper. And she knew, despite the allure, the risk. They all did.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.087
70.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1002
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count5
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"almost alive"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"flickered"
count3
10
word"warmth"
count2
11
word"chilling"
count1
12
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
13
word"fractured"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"tinged"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count1
18
word"glinting"
count1
19
word"desire"
count1
20
word"flicked"
count1
21
word"glint"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
23
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"etched"
2"shimmered"
3"pulsed"
4"almost alive"
5"vibrated"
6"scanning"
7"echoing"
8"pulse"
9"flickered"
10"warmth"
11"chilling"
12"kaleidoscope"
13"fractured"
14"electric"
15"tinged"
16"scanned"
17"echoes"
18"glinting"
19"desire"
20"flicked"
21"glint"
22"whisper"
23"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
68.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords981
ratio0.001
matches
0"world"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount763
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Grove1
Aurora10
Nyx4
Heartstone1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde2
Suddenly1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.845
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"vibration that seemed to resonate with her own heartbeat"
1"hue that seemed to pulse"
2"appeared beneath their touch, glowing with a pale lavender hue that seemed to pulse"
3"appeared beside her, shadow flickering closer to solidity"
4"ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life"
5"sounded like a thousand echoes played simu"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount981
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
95.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean33.83
std16.43
cv0.486
sampleLengths
059
155
234
353
49
555
644
753
841
959
1044
1142
1256
1315
1429
1540
1627
1716
1822
1932
2019
2122
2229
2329
2439
2511
2636
278
283
99.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"were woven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs139
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences73
ratio0.137
matches
0"Time felt elastic—an hour inside could be a day outside, or a blink."
1"The flowers—tall, with petals like liquid silver—swayed even without wind."
2"Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant hanging at her neck—a Heartstone pulsed softly, almost eager, with a warmth that contrasted the chilling cold of the Fae-Forged Blade she carried."
3"The grove dissolved behind her, replaced by a vast, shimmering expanse—like a lake of liquid glass stretched to the horizon."
4"An orchard spread before her, lush and unnatural—fruit of shimmering gold and ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life."
5"A figure emerged from the mist—draped in flowing robes that shimmered like they were woven from the dawn’s first light, eyes glinting with hunger."
6"Behind the stranger, the landscape rippled again, revealing a sprawling feast—the tables groaned with impossibly piled food, goblets overflowing with glowing liquids, and beings—more shadows than flesh—dining in a careless, gluttonous riot."
7"The horizon shimmered again, and the landscape flickered with ghostly visions—images of shadows slipping through cracks, the faint gold glint of forbidden artifacts, the faint whisper of secrets buried beneath the feast."
8"It tugged at her, promising answers—and danger."
9"Aurora could feel it—the universe pressing against the edges of her perception, revealing just enough to reel her in deeper."
94.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount778
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04627249357326478
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.017994858611825194
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean13.44
std6.56
cv0.488
sampleLengths
023
123
213
36
48
513
628
715
814
95
1012
1110
1218
1313
149
1515
1612
1716
1812
1910
2021
2113
2215
2317
2421
2528
264
279
2812
2920
3012
3115
3214
3316
3414
359
3614
3719
3817
3921
4018
414
4211
4314
4415
457
4624
479
4817
4910
68.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4383561643835616
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Somewhere deeper within the grove,"
1"Suddenly, a ripple coursed through"
ratio0.036
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences56
matches
0"It pulsed with life, yet"
1"they whispered, voice like a"
2"She reached out instinctively, but"
3"They leaned closer to the"
4"She moved closer, hesitant, as"
5"She appeared suddenly, her silver"
6"She clenched her fist."
7"Her reflection flickered, then fractured"
8"She drew in a breath,"
9"they whispered, voice tinged with"
10"She lowered her voice, more"
11"It tugged at her, promising"
12"She stepped forward, her voice"
13"They all did."
ratio0.25
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air grew thick and"
1"Time felt elastic—an hour inside"
2"Aurora’s breath caught in her"
3"The Grove wasn’t like any"
4"It pulsed with life, yet"
5"The ground beneath her sandals"
6"Nyx hovered just behind her,"
7"they whispered, voice like a"
8"Aurora stepped forward cautiously, eyes"
9"The flowers—tall, with petals like"
10"A bush with leaves glowing"
11"She reached out instinctively, but"
12"Nyx replied, voice echoing softly"
13"They leaned closer to the"
14"A gentle ripple disturbed the"
15"She moved closer, hesitant, as"
16"Isolde’s voice drifted out, half-muffled"
17"She appeared suddenly, her silver"
18"Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant"
19"She clenched her fist."
ratio0.875
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"As soon as she stepped"
ratio0.018
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The ground beneath her sandals felt warm, almost alive, and a faint hum vibrated through the air, a low vibration that seemed to resonate with her own heartbeat…"
1"A bush with leaves glowing faintly violet rustled, revealing tiny insects with translucent wings that shimmered like glass."
2"Faint lines appeared beneath their touch, glowing with a pale lavender hue that seemed to pulse."
3"She moved closer, hesitant, as if the ground itself warned her against advancing."
4"Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant hanging at her neck—a Heartstone pulsed softly, almost eager, with a warmth that contrasted the chilling cold of the Fae-Fo…"
5"An orchard spread before her, lush and unnatural—fruit of shimmering gold and ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"they whispered, voice tinged with a mixture of awe and caution"
1"Isolde said quietly, her gaze flickering to the horizon"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
3"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.348
73.6524%