| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 70.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1002 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "almost alive" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "chilling" | | 12 | "kaleidoscope" | | 13 | "fractured" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "tinged" | | 16 | "scanned" | | 17 | "echoes" | | 18 | "glinting" | | 19 | "desire" | | 20 | "flicked" | | 21 | "glint" | | 22 | "whisper" | | 23 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 981 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 763 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Nyx | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Isolde | 2 | | Suddenly | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.845 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "vibration that seemed to resonate with her own heartbeat" | | 1 | "hue that seemed to pulse" | | 2 | "appeared beneath their touch, glowing with a pale lavender hue that seemed to pulse" | | 3 | "appeared beside her, shadow flickering closer to solidity" | | 4 | "ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life" | | 5 | "sounded like a thousand echoes played simu" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 981 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.95% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 33.83 | | std | 16.43 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 73 | | ratio | 0.137 | | matches | | 0 | "Time felt elastic—an hour inside could be a day outside, or a blink." | | 1 | "The flowers—tall, with petals like liquid silver—swayed even without wind." | | 2 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant hanging at her neck—a Heartstone pulsed softly, almost eager, with a warmth that contrasted the chilling cold of the Fae-Forged Blade she carried." | | 3 | "The grove dissolved behind her, replaced by a vast, shimmering expanse—like a lake of liquid glass stretched to the horizon." | | 4 | "An orchard spread before her, lush and unnatural—fruit of shimmering gold and ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life." | | 5 | "A figure emerged from the mist—draped in flowing robes that shimmered like they were woven from the dawn’s first light, eyes glinting with hunger." | | 6 | "Behind the stranger, the landscape rippled again, revealing a sprawling feast—the tables groaned with impossibly piled food, goblets overflowing with glowing liquids, and beings—more shadows than flesh—dining in a careless, gluttonous riot." | | 7 | "The horizon shimmered again, and the landscape flickered with ghostly visions—images of shadows slipping through cracks, the faint gold glint of forbidden artifacts, the faint whisper of secrets buried beneath the feast." | | 8 | "It tugged at her, promising answers—and danger." | | 9 | "Aurora could feel it—the universe pressing against the edges of her perception, revealing just enough to reel her in deeper." |
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| 94.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 778 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.04627249357326478 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017994858611825194 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 73 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 73 | | mean | 13.44 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 68.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4383561643835616 | | totalSentences | 73 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deeper within the grove," | | 1 | "Suddenly, a ripple coursed through" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed with life, yet" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice like a" | | 2 | "She reached out instinctively, but" | | 3 | "They leaned closer to the" | | 4 | "She moved closer, hesitant, as" | | 5 | "She appeared suddenly, her silver" | | 6 | "She clenched her fist." | | 7 | "Her reflection flickered, then fractured" | | 8 | "She drew in a breath," | | 9 | "they whispered, voice tinged with" | | 10 | "She lowered her voice, more" | | 11 | "It tugged at her, promising" | | 12 | "She stepped forward, her voice" | | 13 | "They all did." |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew thick and" | | 1 | "Time felt elastic—an hour inside" | | 2 | "Aurora’s breath caught in her" | | 3 | "The Grove wasn’t like any" | | 4 | "It pulsed with life, yet" | | 5 | "The ground beneath her sandals" | | 6 | "Nyx hovered just behind her," | | 7 | "they whispered, voice like a" | | 8 | "Aurora stepped forward cautiously, eyes" | | 9 | "The flowers—tall, with petals like" | | 10 | "A bush with leaves glowing" | | 11 | "She reached out instinctively, but" | | 12 | "Nyx replied, voice echoing softly" | | 13 | "They leaned closer to the" | | 14 | "A gentle ripple disturbed the" | | 15 | "She moved closer, hesitant, as" | | 16 | "Isolde’s voice drifted out, half-muffled" | | 17 | "She appeared suddenly, her silver" | | 18 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant" | | 19 | "She clenched her fist." |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "As soon as she stepped" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 16.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her sandals felt warm, almost alive, and a faint hum vibrated through the air, a low vibration that seemed to resonate with her own heartbeat…" | | 1 | "A bush with leaves glowing faintly violet rustled, revealing tiny insects with translucent wings that shimmered like glass." | | 2 | "Faint lines appeared beneath their touch, glowing with a pale lavender hue that seemed to pulse." | | 3 | "She moved closer, hesitant, as if the ground itself warned her against advancing." | | 4 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant hanging at her neck—a Heartstone pulsed softly, almost eager, with a warmth that contrasted the chilling cold of the Fae-Fo…" | | 5 | "An orchard spread before her, lush and unnatural—fruit of shimmering gold and ruby that seemed to pulse with their own life." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, voice tinged with a mixture of awe and caution" | | 1 | "Isolde said quietly, her gaze flickering to the horizon" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |