Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06E8FCKRGNH0S0YGTK5VK

Run Details

Duration:
10.2s
Cost:
$0.005100
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thick, pressing down. Rory felt the pull in her chest, a familiar thrumming from the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. The ancient oak standing stones, hunched and moss-covered, pulsed with a faint, inner light, the shimmer of The Veil between them almost visible, like heat rising from tarmac in summer. Nyx, a deeper shadow against the encroaching twilight, glided through first, their form briefly blurring at the threshold. Their barely-there whisper reached Rory. "After you, mortal." Rory took a deep breath, the scent of damp earth and something sweet, like overripe fruit, filling her lungs. She stepped between the stones. The world twisted around her. Colours bled into each other, then snapped back into sharper focus, more vibrant than before. The air warmed, a heavy, humid embrace. The silence that had preceded their crossing intensified, no birdsong, no distant traffic hum. Only the quiet rustle of leaves and the soft pad of their own footsteps. Isolde, her silver hair a luminous waterfall against the deepening gloom, stood on the other side, completely unaffected. She held a gnarled staff that seemed to drink the light, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory. "Welcome to my garden, Aurora," Isolde’s voice, a melodic whisper, brushed Rory’s ears. "A place where time bends like a willow in the wind." Rory looked around. This was Richmond Park, yet it wasn't. Wildflowers, a riot of colours Rory had never seen, pushed up through the grass, glowing softly. Some petals seemed to shift hues before her eyes, an impossibility, yet undeniably real. Towering trees, their bark like polished obsidian, reached twisting branches skyward, their leaves a deep, impossible violet. The light filtering through them was a soft, perpetual twilight, casting everything in shades of amethyst and emerald. The ground beneath her feet remained soft, a carpet of moss and fallen, luminous leaves. A low hum vibrated in the air, a deep, resonant tone that seemed to come from the earth itself. Rory felt it in her bones, a soothing, almost hypnotic rhythm. She glanced at Nyx, their shadowy form outlined against a colossal, bioluminescent mushroom, its cap wider than a small car, pulsing with a soft, blue light. Even Nyx seemed… quieter here, less restless. "The resonance of the Fae," Isolde explained, her voice like the chime of distant bells. "The very breath of this place." Rory took a cautious step forward, the earth squishing softly under her boots. A cluster of glowing insects, like tiny, dancing lanterns, flitted past her face, leaving trails of golden dust in their wake. She reached out, but they danced away, too quick for her grasp. "It's… beautiful," Rory breathed, the wonder making her voice a little unsteady. "And… unsettling." Isolde offered a small, knowing smile, her lips the colour of rose petals. "The Fae Realms are seldom entirely one or the other." They moved deeper into the grove. The pathway, if it could be called that, was a meandering trail through waist-high ferns that brushed against Rory’s legs, their fronds a shimmering, metallic green. The air grew heavier, thick with the scent of something sweet and cloying, like honey mixed with ozone. Ahead, a pool of water glimmered, reflecting the violet canopy above. Its surface was perfectly still, like polished glass, yet a faint mist rose from it, curling and swirling in intricate patterns. Rory approached, drawn by an inexplicable urge. The water was not clear but a deep, inky black, and as she peered closer, she saw pinpricks of light dancing within its depths, like distant stars trapped in liquid. She bent down, a hand hovering over the surface. The water felt cold, a deep, bone-chilling cold, despite the warm air. "Do not touch the Moonpool, Aurora," Isolde's voice was gentle but firm. "Its waters hold reflections of truths best left undisturbed." Rory pulled her hand back, a shiver running down her spine. The pool still beckoned, its secrets whispering, but Isolde's warning resonated. She stood. Nyx drifted to the edge of the pool, their shadowy form leaning over its depths. They lowered a hand, their arm passing *into* the water without a ripple. A faint whisper, almost imperceptible, emanated from Nyx. They withdrew their hand, and for a moment, Rory thought she saw a flicker of something in their violet eyes, a fleeting emotion she couldn’t name before it was gone. "The Shade finds its kin in the shadows," Isolde observed, then turned, her silver hair swaying. "Come. There is more to see." They continued, the vegetation growing denser, more fantastical. Trees with bark that spiralled like ancient horns, their branches adorned with blossoms that resembled elaborate jewels, each petal a different, luminous colour. The air here was almost syrupy, thick with the intoxicating scent of these strange flowers. Rory felt a light-headedness begin to settle over her, a pleasant haze that made the world feel even more dreamlike. She caught sight of a creature, a fleeting streak of iridescent scales and translucent wings, darting between the trees. It moved too fast to properly identify, but it left behind a trail of shimmering dust that slowly dissolved into the air. The faint hum in the air intensified, rising and falling like a deep breath. "What was that?" Rory asked, her voice hushed. "Only one of the grove’s many inhabitants," Isolde replied, her gaze distant, as if seeing beyond the visible. “Always curious, never truly seen.” A clearing opened before them, dominated by a magnificent tree. Its trunk was broader than a small house, its roots snaking across the ground like ancient serpents. From its branches hung delicate, crystalline chimes, catching the perpetual twilight and scattering it into a thousand glittering fragments. As a gentle breeze stirred, the chimes sang, a melody of breathtaking purity that seemed to resonate with the hum of the grove, weaving into a complex symphony that filled the air. Rory closed her eyes, letting the sound wash over her. It was unlike anything she had ever heard, both profoundly melancholic and incredibly hopeful. It felt like the heartbeat of the Fae world, a living, breathing song. She opened her eyes. At the base of the tree, nestled between two colossal roots, was a small, intricately carved wooden table, adorned with bowls of berries the colour of rubies and emeralds, and small, delicate cakes that seemed to shimmer with an inner light. "A simple offering," Isolde gestured towards the table. “To partake is to accept the grove’s hospitality. And its silence.” Rory looked at the feast, hesitant. The berries pulsed with a soft glow. The cakes radiated a sweet, irresistible aroma. She felt a profound hunger, not for food, but for the experience, to truly immerse herself here. She reached out, picking up a single ruby-red berry. It was warm to the touch, and as she brought it to her lips, its scent filled her, rich and earthy and sweet. She bit into it. A burst of flavour, unlike any fruit she had ever tasted, exploded on her tongue, filling her with a warm, tingling sensation that spread through her whole body. She felt a lightness, a sense of profound peace. Nyx, surprisingly, took a small, pale-green cake. Their shadowy fingers absorbed the light from it as they brought it to what would be their mouth. A faint, violet glow emanated from within Nyx for a moment before fading. "It works to quiet the whispers," Nyx’s voice, for once, held a clearer cadence. "The constant clamour of the in-between." Rory ate another berry, savouring the taste, the feeling of warmth spreading through her veins. The air, thick though it was, felt easier to breathe now. The low, resonant hum of the grove became a comfortable companion, a lullaby. She felt utterly at peace, suspended in this magical, impossible place, where time truly had no meaning. It could have been minutes, it could have been hours. She didn't care. Isolde, a timeless figure, watched them both, her pale lavender eyes full of a wisdom that spanned centuries. She held a small, translucent flower, its petals like spun glass, and inhaled its scent slowly. "The Fae Grove accepts you," Isolde said, her voice soft, barely breaking the chime-song. "For now."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:48:14.231Z" 2/19/2026, 3:48:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.381
leniency0.762
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
60.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
5
adverb"truly"
count3
6
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"softly"
2"very"
3"perfectly"
4"slowly"
5"truly"
6"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1375
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count3
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"dancing"
count2
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"depths"
count2
11
word"chilling"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"fleeting"
count2
16
word"crystalline"
count1
17
word"complex"
count1
18
word"symphony"
count1
19
word"profound"
count2
20
word"sense of"
count1
21
word"warmth"
count1
22
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"gloom"
6"vibrated"
7"resonance"
8"dancing"
9"intricate"
10"depths"
11"chilling"
12"down her spine"
13"resonated"
14"flicker"
15"fleeting"
16"crystalline"
17"complex"
18"symphony"
19"profound"
20"sense of"
21"warmth"
22"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"the feeling of warmth"
34.16% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1366
ratio0.001
matches
0"into"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1245
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Veil1
Rory19
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx8
Isolde11
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.737
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"staff that seemed to drink the light, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory"
1"tone that seemed to come from the earth itself"
2"as if seeing beyond the visible"
3"purity that seemed to resonate with the hum of the grove, weaving into a complex symphony that filled the air"
4"felt like the heartbeat of the Fae worl"
5"cakes that seemed to shimmer with an inner light"
53.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.464
wordCount1366
matches
0"not clear but a deep, inky black"
1"not for food, but for the experience, to truly immerse herself here"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean47.1
std30.4
cv0.645
sampleLengths
076
13
279
336
424
590
663
721
846
914
1023
1182
1258
1321
1424
1566
1622
1766
1855
198
2023
2178
2282
2319
24110
2538
2620
27103
2816
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"was gone"
1"was, felt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences103
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1253
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single ruby-red berry."
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03750997605746209
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.015163607342378291
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean13.26
std7.32
cv0.552
sampleLengths
06
117
230
318
45
53
619
75
85
915
107
1114
1214
1318
1418
1513
1611
173
187
1916
2014
2117
2218
2315
2419
2511
2626
273
284
2915
306
3113
3221
3312
3412
352
3613
3710
386
3926
4018
4111
4221
437
4430
459
4612
4712
489
4911
44.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3106796116504854
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners32
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Only the quiet rustle of"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences91
matches
0"Their barely-there whisper reached Rory."
1"She stepped between the stones."
2"She held a gnarled staff"
3"She glanced at Nyx, their"
4"She reached out, but they"
5"They moved deeper into the"
6"Its surface was perfectly still,"
7"She bent down, a hand"
8"They lowered a hand, their"
9"They withdrew their hand, and"
10"They continued, the vegetation growing"
11"She caught sight of a"
12"It moved too fast to"
13"Its trunk was broader than"
14"It was unlike anything she"
15"It felt like the heartbeat"
16"She opened her eyes."
17"She felt a profound hunger,"
18"She reached out, picking up"
19"It was warm to the"
ratio0.297
3.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences91
matches
0"The air grew thick, pressing"
1"Rory felt the pull in"
2"The ancient oak standing stones,"
3"Nyx, a deeper shadow against"
4"Their barely-there whisper reached Rory."
5"Rory took a deep breath,"
6"She stepped between the stones."
7"The world twisted around her."
8"Colours bled into each other,"
9"The air warmed, a heavy,"
10"The silence that had preceded"
11"Isolde, her silver hair a"
12"She held a gnarled staff"
13"Isolde’s voice, a melodic whisper,"
14"Rory looked around."
15"This was Richmond Park, yet"
16"Wildflowers, a riot of colours"
17"Some petals seemed to shift"
18"The light filtering through them"
19"The ground beneath her feet"
ratio0.912
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Even Nyx seemed…"
ratio0.011
46.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The silence that had preceded their crossing intensified, no birdsong, no distant traffic hum."
1"A cluster of glowing insects, like tiny, dancing lanterns, flitted past her face, leaving trails of golden dust in their wake."
2"The pathway, if it could be called that, was a meandering trail through waist-high ferns that brushed against Rory’s legs, their fronds a shimmering, metallic g…"
3"Trees with bark that spiralled like ancient horns, their branches adorned with blossoms that resembled elaborate jewels, each petal a different, luminous colour…"
4"Rory felt a light-headedness begin to settle over her, a pleasant haze that made the world feel even more dreamlike."
5"As a gentle breeze stirred, the chimes sang, a melody of breathtaking purity that seemed to resonate with the hum of the grove, weaving into a complex symphony …"
6"At the base of the tree, nestled between two colossal roots, was a small, intricately carved wooden table, adorned with bowls of berries the colour of rubies an…"
7"Isolde, a timeless figure, watched them both, her pale lavender eyes full of a wisdom that spanned centuries."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory breathed, the wonder making her voice a little unsteady"
1"Rory asked, her voice hushed"
2"Isolde replied, her gaze distant, as if seeing beyond the visible"
3"Isolde said, her voice soft, barely breaking the chime-song"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Isolde explained (explain)"
1"Rory breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
69.9581%