| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 94.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 881 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 881 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sanctuary" | | 1 | "looming" | | 2 | "unspoken" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "palpable" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "down her spine" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "encounter" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "glint" | | 15 | "charm" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "foreboding" | | 18 | "throb" | | 19 | "reminder" | | 20 | "enigmatic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 882 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 765 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Flat | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Lucien | 15 | | Moreau | 3 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 9 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.52 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a trap" | | 1 | "felt like a subtle invasion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 882 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.28% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 51.88 | | std | 11.65 | | cv | 0.224 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 66 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's gaze drifted from Lucien's heterochromatic eyes – the amber and black orbs seeming to bore into her very soul – to the tailored charcoal suit, impeccably pressed as always." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 764 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.031413612565445025 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009162303664921465 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 17.64 | | std | 8.1 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 49 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 83.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a fluid motion," |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 83.83% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Her mind recoiled, memories of" | | 1 | "She had thought she'd long" | | 2 | "she said finally, her voice" | | 3 | "Her hand remained on the" | | 4 | "She could refuse him entry," | | 5 | "His gaze lingered on a" | | 6 | "He halted in front of" | | 7 | "Her voice, though even, hinted" | | 8 | "His eyes sparkled with a" | | 9 | "She approached Lucien, her bright" | | 10 | "Their fingers brushed during the" | | 11 | "She masked the reaction by" | | 12 | "she began, her voice firm," | | 13 | "he said, the words dropping" | | 14 | "she asked, her tone a" | | 15 | "He leaned forward, his elbows" |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 45.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaked open, its" | | 1 | "Eva's Flat, once a sanctuary," | | 2 | "Aurora Carter stood frozen, her" | | 3 | "The soft glow of the" | | 4 | "The silence was a palpable" | | 5 | "Ptolemy, Eva's curious tabby cat," | | 6 | "Aurora's gaze drifted from Lucien's" | | 7 | "Her mind recoiled, memories of" | | 8 | "She had thought she'd long" | | 9 | "she said finally, her voice" | | 10 | "Her hand remained on the" | | 11 | "Lucien's gaze never wavered, his" | | 12 | "The low, smooth timbre of" | | 13 | "The use of her nickname," | | 14 | "Aurora's grip on the door" | | 15 | "She could refuse him entry," | | 16 | "His gaze lingered on a" | | 17 | "Lucien suggested, his long strides" | | 18 | "He halted in front of" | | 19 | "The sound of cupboards opening" |
| | ratio | 0.83 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, here she stood, her" | | 1 | "Yet, a morbid curiosity got" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His gaze lingered on a few scattered photographs before returning to Aurora, who had not moved from her position by the door." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "his voice sent, a reaction she hastily suppressed" | | 1 | "Lucien suggested, his long strides devouring the distance between them" | | 2 | "His eyes sparkled, the amber seeming to gleam brighter in the fading light" | | 3 | "she began, her voice firm," | | 4 | "he said, the words dropping like a stone into the tense atmosphere" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien suggested (suggest)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |