Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06EPN7PVTQWH79EYMS3D4

Run Details

Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.002536
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, its hinges protesting the sudden interruption of their evening slumber. Eva's Flat, once a sanctuary, now felt like a trap. Aurora Carter stood frozen, her bright blue eyes fixed on the figure looming in the dimly lit corridor. The soft glow of the setting sun, filtering through the grimy Brick Lane windows, danced across Lucien Moreau's chiseled features, accentuating the sharp planes of his face. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the air thick with unspoken words and unresolved tension. The silence was a palpable entity, its presence suffocating the cramped flat. Ptolemy, Eva's curious tabby cat, wove in and out of Lucien's legs, the soft purring a stark contrast to the unease hanging between the two. Aurora's gaze drifted from Lucien's heterochromatic eyes – the amber and black orbs seeming to bore into her very soul – to the tailored charcoal suit, impeccably pressed as always. Her mind recoiled, memories of their complicated past tumbling forth like a rogue wave. She had thought she'd long since fortified herself against the turmoil Lucien Moreau embodied. Yet, here she stood, her defenses breached by a single, unexpected visit. "Lucien," she said finally, her voice firm, a touch too loud in the hushed atmosphere. "What are you doing here?" Her hand remained on the door handle, a subconscious attempt to maintain a barrier between them. Lucien's gaze never wavered, his eyes locked onto hers with an unnerving intensity. "May I come in, Rory?" The low, smooth timbre of his voice sent a shiver down her spine, a reaction she hastily suppressed. The use of her nickname, once a term of endearment, now felt like a subtle invasion. Aurora's grip on the door handle tightened, her mind racing. She could refuse him entry, slam the door shut, and pretend this encounter never happened. Yet, a morbid curiosity got the better of her. What could Lucien possibly want after all this time? With a curt nod, she stepped aside, allowing him to enter. As Lucien crossed the threshold, his eyes scanned the flat, taking in the familiar chaos of books and research notes. His gaze lingered on a few scattered photographs before returning to Aurora, who had not moved from her position by the door. "A drink, perhaps?" Lucien suggested, his long strides devouring the distance between them. He halted in front of the small kitchenette, his back to her. "I see Eva still hasn't seen fit to update her beverage selection." The sound of cupboards opening and closing filled the air, accompanied by the soft clinking of glassware. Aurora finally stirred, shutting the door and leaning against it, her eyes never leaving Lucien's back. "You didn't come here for small talk or to critique Eva's tea collection." Her voice, though even, hinted at a deeper wariness. Lucien turned, a wry smile twisting his lips as he extended a cup of steaming tea in her direction. "Always so quick to cut to the chase, Rory." His eyes sparkled with a knowing glint, the amber seeming to gleam brighter in the fading light. "I suppose that's part of your charm." Aurora pushed off from the door, her long, black hair swaying with the abrupt movement. She approached Lucien, her bright blue eyes flashing with a warning, but took the offered cup nonetheless. Their fingers brushed during the exchange, the fleeting touch sending a jolt of electricity through her. She masked the reaction by taking a deliberate sip of the scalding tea, the heat a welcome distraction. "Now, Lucien," she began, her voice firm, "state your business. You wouldn't show up unannounced without a compelling reason." Aurora retreated to the windowsill, cradling the cup in her hands, her gaze drifting toward the bustling streets of Brick Lane as the sky transitioned into a deep, foreboding blue. Lucien set his own cup down on the cluttered coffee table, his movements economical. For a moment, he stood there, framed by the soft, golden light emanating from the table lamp, his face a mask of contemplation. Then, with a fluid motion, he settled onto the couch, his eyes never leaving Aurora's profile. "I've received information regarding Evan," he said, the words dropping like a stone into the tense atmosphere. "It seems your ex has been inquiring about your... whereabouts." Aurora's gaze snapped back to Lucien, her heart sinking. The mere mention of Evan's name was enough to transport her back to a time she'd rather forget. A time when Lucien Moreau had played a significant, albeit complicated, role in her life. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist seemed to throb in solidarity, a stark reminder of the turbulent past they shared. "Why would you think I'd care?" she asked, her tone a careful blend of indifference and caution, as she raised the cup to her lips once more. The tea, now a tad cooler, served as a prop to mask her burgeoning unease. Lucien's smile, this time, was a low, enigmatic curve of his lips. "Oh, Rory. Don't play coy with me. We both know why I'm here, and it has little to do with your ex." He leaned forward, his elbows resting on his knees, his gaze burning with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "It's about unfinished business. Ours."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
94.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount881
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount881
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"looming"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"palpable"
count1
6
word"stark"
count2
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count2
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"encounter"
count1
12
word"scanned"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"charm"
count1
16
word"fleeting"
count1
17
word"foreboding"
count1
18
word"throb"
count1
19
word"reminder"
count1
20
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"looming"
2"unspoken"
3"tension"
4"silence"
5"palpable"
6"stark"
7"wavered"
8"intensity"
9"down her spine"
10"racing"
11"encounter"
12"scanned"
13"familiar"
14"glint"
15"charm"
16"fleeting"
17"foreboding"
18"throb"
19"reminder"
20"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords882
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount765
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Flat1
Carter1
Brick2
Lane2
Lucien15
Moreau3
Eva2
Aurora9
Evan1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.52
windowScore0.667
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a trap"
1"felt like a subtle invasion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount882
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
21.28% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean51.88
std11.65
cv0.224
sampleLengths
069
155
270
336
452
554
642
754
838
952
1066
1149
1253
1327
1464
1542
1659
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
85.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences50
ratio0.02
matches
0"Aurora's gaze drifted from Lucien's heterochromatic eyes – the amber and black orbs seeming to bore into her very soul – to the tailored charcoal suit, impeccably pressed as always."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount764
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.031413612565445025
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009162303664921465
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean17.64
std8.1
cv0.459
sampleLengths
014
110
218
327
418
512
625
730
814
914
1012
1115
1221
1313
1423
1516
1610
1715
189
199
2011
2120
2222
2313
2412
2529
2616
2722
2819
2926
307
3115
3217
3316
3418
3549
3614
3723
3816
3917
4010
419
4218
4315
4422
4527
4615
4712
4842
495
83.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners25
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then, with a fluid motion,"
ratio0.021
83.83% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences47
matches
0"Her mind recoiled, memories of"
1"She had thought she'd long"
2"she said finally, her voice"
3"Her hand remained on the"
4"She could refuse him entry,"
5"His gaze lingered on a"
6"He halted in front of"
7"Her voice, though even, hinted"
8"His eyes sparkled with a"
9"She approached Lucien, her bright"
10"Their fingers brushed during the"
11"She masked the reaction by"
12"she began, her voice firm,"
13"he said, the words dropping"
14"she asked, her tone a"
15"He leaned forward, his elbows"
ratio0.34
45.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences47
matches
0"The door creaked open, its"
1"Eva's Flat, once a sanctuary,"
2"Aurora Carter stood frozen, her"
3"The soft glow of the"
4"The silence was a palpable"
5"Ptolemy, Eva's curious tabby cat,"
6"Aurora's gaze drifted from Lucien's"
7"Her mind recoiled, memories of"
8"She had thought she'd long"
9"she said finally, her voice"
10"Her hand remained on the"
11"Lucien's gaze never wavered, his"
12"The low, smooth timbre of"
13"The use of her nickname,"
14"Aurora's grip on the door"
15"She could refuse him entry,"
16"His gaze lingered on a"
17"Lucien suggested, his long strides"
18"He halted in front of"
19"The sound of cupboards opening"
ratio0.83
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"Yet, here she stood, her"
1"Yet, a morbid curiosity got"
ratio0.043
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His gaze lingered on a few scattered photographs before returning to Aurora, who had not moved from her position by the door."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"his voice sent, a reaction she hastily suppressed"
1"Lucien suggested, his long strides devouring the distance between them"
2"His eyes sparkled, the amber seeming to gleam brighter in the fading light"
3"she began, her voice firm,"
4"he said, the words dropping like a stone into the tense atmosphere"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
81.7553%