Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06GSVVH7P67DZQ6C9FEC6

Run Details

Model:
Llama 3.1 70B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Mystery: examining a crime scene
Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.001337
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
Details Link
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
80.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
17.42% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
96.02% Filter word density (details)
0.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
66.67% Name drop frequency (details)
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
99.51% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
58.22% Sentence opener variety (details)
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
100.00% Technical jargon density (details)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
83.3722% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, the beam of her torch illuminating the faded advertisements and grimy tiles. Her sharp jaw clenched in distaste as she surveyed the scene before her. The air reeked of decay and neglect. DS Patel stood by the makeshift stalls, her eyes sombre as she nodded at Quinn's arrival. "Morning, Detective. We've got a mess on our hands." Quinn's eyes roamed the shabby market stalls, her trained gaze picking out the scattered artefacts and exhausted traders. The Veil Market rarely left a calling card, and yet... "Patel, what makes you think this was a Veil- related incident?" Patel indicated a plump, middle-aged trader, who shook as he swore to cooperate. "The vic, Jasper Newton, claimed he saw something... otherworldly before his murder. Scared the life out of him. Thought he might've got in over his head, transacting with the wrong folk." Quinn's experience told her there was more to it – institutional knowledge passed among a network of contacts and informants within the supernatural underbelly. She pulled out her notebook and scribbled a few observant lines. No supernatural residue here – no iron, no silver, no earthy undertones... Patel gestured toward the body. "Newton was a fence, not an actual vendor. Looks like he might have tried selling something – from under the counter – to one of the clans." Quinn followed Patel's direction to the decedent. Scant goods were strewn about his torso – village charms and some irregular, cameo-cut gemstones – but there was one unusual, posh-looking brass compass drawn among the artefacts. Quinn's fingers itched to pick up the item, not just because of its value. As soon as her fingertips grazed the worn leather strap surrounding the instrument, a pained thrum started to course through the pit of her stomach, crackling like an antenna sounding a standard broadcast. The setting on the macro etchings declaring its Veil-roots retreated, she squinted a shade, satisfying an intuitive intent. Her military precision dictated she collate the evidence with necessary institutional knowledge. Packaged into as fast a technical mail reply as a scratch-packed widget they had reactions. Still uncertain about a timeline, profiles, she got Create aloud for Patel and circle drawn her respective actions matter-of-factly whence raised views hardened kept... Patel demanded her notice. “I don’t buy into Veil-Driven Whatever crackpot - Just gun homicide and the intent bends none from territorial Crelleys institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgroundsورن wifi technical mail solving in Whatever anythat tons they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create . Stepping closer and then following her lead she turned drawn her raised view hard whence raised views hardened kept.'" Quinn demanded her not notice 반(alpha(N cage stupid plast reign crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence.') Per hypothesis full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgroundsورن wifi technical mail solving in Whatever anythat Whatever anythat tons they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create insulated Auth Ports Create . Stepping closer and then following her lead her circle drawn her raised view hard whence raised views hardened keep afterwards detectives whence raised views hardened kept.'" Quinn demanded her not notice semi 반(alpha(N fake crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence then.' Per dependence.') Patel repeated nothing instigating then fell asked bought noticed congest.' Bought investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none from territorial - Just gun homicide then dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven Crelleys institutional driven]& institutional fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign wifi technical technical investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie dependence standard divers full Witch-wh bends none territorial territorial Red fulll]& institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Just gun dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial bends none from territorial territorial Red. Sc Crelleys institutional driven fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Just gun dependence then dependence standard divers full Witch-wh bends none from territorial Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Patel pressed Just gun dependence standard then full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none bends none territorial Red. Crelleys institutional driven fast everything necessary institutional fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupid Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthatthat crackpot lie. Just gun dependence then dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none from territorial Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat. QIn her not solve semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devast percentages spo cracking dreadful fi ephem dependence.') standard divers criticized investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Patel pressed Just gun dependence dependence standard investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Just gun dependence then dependence dependence standard divers standard divers full Witch-wh bends none from territorial Just gun bends none from territorial territorial Red. Sc fulll]& institutional driven village basically fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupidthat. they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth investigations investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot lie. Just gun dependence standard then dependence standard then full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none bends none from territorial. Sc fulll]& institutional driven Just investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot lie. she couldn't accept. Just gun dependence then dependence dependence standard dependence standard then full Witch-wh bends none from territorial Just bends none from territorial territorial Red. Sc Crelleys institutional driven necessary institutional fast village basically as fast fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupidthat. they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create insulated Auth Ports Auth investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot lie. she couldn't accept. Patel pressed Just gun dependence then dependence dependence standard dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none from territorial Just gun territorial Red. Sc fulll]& institutional driven necessary institutional fast village basically as fast fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupidthat. A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Ports Create . Stepping closer and then following her lead her circle circle drawn her raised view hard whence raised views hard whence raised views hardened kept.'" . QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev cracking dreadful dependence.') They found standard divers round tcr criticized investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast stupid fast stupid stupid investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Their GREAT friend Passport over proving token re traveled fiscal investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Just gun dependence then dependence dependence standard dependence standard then full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none bends none from territorial territorial Red. Sc fulll]& Crelleys institutional driven necessary institutional fast village basically as fast fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupidthat. A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Auth Ports Create . Stepping closer and then following her lead her circle circle drawn her raised view hard whence raised views hard whence raised views hardened kept.'" ."QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev dreaded devast investigations dependence crack investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid crack stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crack crack crack lie. Just then dependence standard divers full Witch-wh bends none from territorial Just bends none from territorial territorial Red. "Nylon Creleys institutional fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythat Whatever anythatthat investigations they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid crack stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crack crack lie. 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They found standard divers round t standard divers criticized investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast stupid fast stupid stupid investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Their GREAT friend c900 greater lied believed going Kaiser wh faaliyet(lo Passport over proving token re traveled fiscal investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie. Just gun dependence then dependence dependence standard dependence standard then full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none bends none from territorial territorial Red Sc fulll]& institutional driven necessary institutional fast village basically as fast fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupidthat. A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Ports Create . Stepping closer and then following her lead her circle circle drawn her raised view hard whence raised views hard whence raised views hardened kept.'" ."QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev dreaded devast investigations dependence crack divers_paragraph bends none stupid crack stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crack crack lie. Just then dependence standard divers full Witch-wh bends none from territorial Just bends none from territorial territorial Red.
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cancelledfalse
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generation_time14689
tokens_prompt1193
tokens_completion3523
native_tokens_prompt1046
native_tokens_completion2296
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native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
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provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.688
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1877
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1877
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"standard"
count28
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"otherworldly"
2"stomach"
3"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
96.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
0.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences14
adjustedGibberishSentences14
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount3
repetitionLoopCount2
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen111
ratio0.197
matches
0"“I don’t buy into Veil-Driven Whatever crackpot - Just gun homicide and the intent bends none from territorial Crelleys institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgroundsورن…"
1"Quinn demanded her not notice 반(alpha(N cage stupid plast reign crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence.')"
2"Per hypothesis full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgroundsورن wifi technical mail solvin…"
3"Quinn demanded her not notice semi 반(alpha(N fake crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence then.'"
4"Bought investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none from territorial - Just gun homicide then dependence standard divers full Witch setting gr…"
5"Patel pressed Just gun dependence standard then full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none bends none territorial Red. Crelleys institutional driven fast everything neces…"
6"Just gun dependence then dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none from territorial Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whatev…"
7"QIn her not solve semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devast percentages spo cracking dreadful fi ephem dependence.')"
8"they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth investigations investigations stupid crackpot …"
9"QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev cracking dreadful dependence.')"
10".\"QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev dreaded devast investigations dependence crack investigations divers_paragr…"
11".\"QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev dreaded devastated percentages dreadful cracking dreadful fi dependence.')"
12"They found standard divers round t standard divers criticized investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid fast stupid fast…"
13".\"QIn her not solve semi semi 반(alpha(N(N fake bend organs devastated dreadful spo cracking dreadful dev dreaded devast investigations dependence crack divers_paragraph bends none …"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords48
totalWords1875
ratio0.026
matches
0"paragraph bends none from territorial - Just gun homicide then dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven Crelleys institutional driven]& institutional fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign wifi technical technical investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions168
wordCount1550
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Witch"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn8
Tube1
Patel10
Veil2
Market1
Veil-roots1
Create11
Per2
Witch16
Kaiser-wh9
Red13
Crelleys7
Godof6
Safari6
Auth14
Ports11
Bought1
Whateverthat14
Witch-wh7
Whateverthatthat1
Passport2
Im1
Kaiser10
Sc7
Stepping6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Patel"
3"Veil"
4"Market"
5"Veil-roots"
6"Create"
7"Per"
8"Kaiser-wh"
9"Safari"
10"Bought"
11"Witch-wh"
12"Passport"
places(empty)
globalScore0.984
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1875
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean33.48
std19.19
cv0.573
sampleLengths
041
125
239
344
447
532
682
718
851
957
1019
1118
1253
1326
1417
152
1610
17110
1849
1924
2054
2125
2217
2320
2419
2548
2645
2738
283
2952
3035
313
3255
3325
3424
351
3619
3738
3835
3954
4026
4124
4236
4318
4445
4525
4642
4724
4824
4940
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"were strewn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs229
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences71
ratio0.169
matches
0"Quinn's experience told her there was more to it – institutional knowledge passed among a network of contacts and informants within the supernatural underbelly."
1"No supernatural residue here – no iron, no silver, no earthy undertones..."
2"Scant goods were strewn about his torso – village charms and some irregular, cameo-cut gemstones – but there was one unusual, posh-looking brass compass drawn among the artefacts."
3"Quinn demanded her not notice 반(alpha(N cage stupid plast reign crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence.')"
4"Per hypothesis full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgroundsورن wifi technical mail solving in Whatever anythat Whatever anythat tons they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create insulated Auth Ports Create ."
5"Quinn demanded her not notice semi 반(alpha(N fake crackpot - Just gun homicide and its dependence then.'"
6"Bought investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none from territorial - Just gun homicide then dependence standard divers full Witch setting greater lied Kaiser-wh bends none territorial territorial Red Crelleys institutional driven Crelleys institutional driven]& institutional fast as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign wifi technical technical investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie dependence standard divers full Witch-wh bends none territorial territorial Red fulll]& institutional driven as fast scarcity procure backgrounds reign reign wifi technical technical mail solving in Whatever anythatthat investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot crackpot lie."
7"they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth investigations investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations divers_paragraph bends none stupid fast stupid investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot lie."
8"they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create insulated Auth Ports Auth investigations stupid crackpot Just gun investigations stupid fast reign technical Whateverthat crackpot lie."
9"A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Ports Create ."
10"A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Auth Ports Create ."
11"A scratch-packed widget they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes comic Godof some axnt timeline secrecy 、secret pos Safari insulated Auth Ports Create Auth Ports Create ."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount426
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.025821596244131457
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009389671361502348
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean26.39
std17.23
cv0.653
sampleLengths
021
113
27
316
49
518
610
711
813
931
1024
1111
1212
135
1427
157
1628
1714
1833
1918
2012
2115
2224
234
2453
2519
2618
2753
2826
2917
302
3110
32110
3349
3424
3554
3625
3717
3820
3919
4048
4145
4238
433
4452
4535
463
4755
4825
4924
58.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.36619718309859156
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount12
totalSentences60
matches
0"Still uncertain about a timeline,"
1"Just gun dependence standard divers"
2"Just gun dependence then dependence"
3"Just gun dependence then dependence"
4"Just gun dependence then dependence"
5"Just gun dependence standard then"
6"Just gun dependence then dependence"
7"Just gun dependence then dependence"
8"Just then dependence standard divers"
9"Just gun dependence then dependence"
10"Just gun dependence then dependence"
11"Just then dependence standard divers"
ratio0.2
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences60
matches
0"Her sharp jaw clenched in"
1"She pulled out her notebook"
2"Her military precision dictated she"
3"they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes"
4"she couldn't accept."
5"they – reactions tracking namespacesHeroes"
6"she couldn't accept."
7"They found standard divers round"
8"Their GREAT friend Passport over"
9"They found standard divers round"
10"Their GREAT friend c900 greater"
ratio0.183
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences60
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"Her sharp jaw clenched in"
2"The air reeked of decay"
3"DS Patel stood by the"
4"Quinn's eyes roamed the shabby"
5"The Veil Market rarely left"
6"Patel indicated a plump, middle-aged"
7"Quinn's experience told her there"
8"She pulled out her notebook"
9"Patel gestured toward the body."
10"Quinn followed Patel's direction to"
11"Scant goods were strewn about"
12"Quinn's fingers itched to pick"
13"The setting on the macro"
14"Her military precision dictated she"
15"Patel demanded her notice."
16"Quinn demanded her not notice"
17"Quinn demanded her not notice"
18"Patel repeated nothing instigating then"
19"Patel pressed Just gun dependence"
ratio0.6
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"As soon as her fingertips"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Patel indicated a plump, middle-aged trader, who shook as he swore to cooperate."
1"As soon as her fingertips grazed the worn leather strap surrounding the instrument, a pained thrum started to course through the pit of her stomach, crackling l…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn demanded (demand)"
1"Quinn demanded (demand)"
2"Patel repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.375
83.3722%