Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT06HJQ1622CC4GPXE64ZYJ

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Duration:
28.8s
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$0.024204
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave its familiar, grudging click, and Rory pulled the door open expecting Eva. It was not Eva. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the rain that had clearly caught him outside. Water beaded on his shoulders. A single dark strand had escaped his usual slicked-back platinum, and it curved against his jaw like a brushstroke. His mismatched eyes — one amber, warm as candlelight, the other black as a stopped clock — moved over her face with an unhurried patience that made her stomach clench. "No." Rory gripped the door. "Absolutely not." "Good evening, Rory." "How do you know this address?" "You know how I know things." He tilted his head slightly. "May I come in?" "No." Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between Rory's ankles and push his tabby nose through the gap, sniffing at Lucien's shoes. Lucien looked down at the cat. The cat looked up at Lucien. Some silent, irritating negotiation seemed to occur, and Ptolemy walked directly over his foot and into the hall as though personally escorting him inside. "Traitor," Rory said, to the cat. She stepped back. It wasn't an invitation so much as a surrender to the geometry of the situation. Lucien came in, and she caught the scent of rain and something underneath it — cedar, smoke, the faint mineral sharpness that was simply him and had no name she'd ever found. She closed the door and turned to find him taking in the flat with a measured sweep. Books stacked three deep on every surface. Eva's research notes fanned across the kitchen table, weighted down by a ceramic mug. Scrolls she couldn't read tucked into the gap between the sofa and the wall. Ptolemy had already claimed the armchair and begun washing a paw. "This is Eva's flat," Rory said. "I know." "So you came looking for Eva." "I came looking for you." He set his cane against the bookshelf with a deliberateness that suggested he'd already decided he was staying. "Eva told me where you were." Rory stared at him. "Eva told you." "She was persuaded that it was important." "That's—" She pressed her knuckles briefly to her mouth. "I am going to kill her." "After, perhaps." He turned to face her fully, and the amber eye caught the lamplight. "I need your help." "You need my—" She stopped herself from laughing, because the laugh that was forming had a dangerous, unhinged quality to it. She'd been in London seven months. She had successfully, deliberately, kept herself on the correct side of the very clear line she'd drawn between her life and the city's other life, the one that existed in the margins of maps, the one that Lucien Moreau occupied. She'd done well. She'd been cautious. "Sit down," he said. Not unkindly. "This is not your flat." "You're about to fall into the bookshelf." She wasn't. But her shoulder was closer to it than she'd realised, and she moved away from it with what dignity she could and dropped onto the sofa. Lucien remained standing. He always remained standing when it gave him an advantage, and he was honest enough about it to never pretend otherwise, which was one of the many things about him she found deeply aggravating. "Three months ago," she said, "you told me that whatever had happened between us was a complication that didn't serve either of us." "Yes." "Those were your exact words." "They were." "So now you're here, in Eva's flat, in my — in the flat where I live, without being invited, asking for help." She spread her hands. "What happened to the complication?" Something shifted in his face — not softening, exactly. Lucien didn't soften. It was more like a door opening an inch. "The complication is still there." "Right. Great. Brilliant." She stood back up, because sitting while he stood had begun to feel like a disadvantage, and she'd learned that from him. "Lucien—" "Rory." He said her name the way he said most things in English: cleanly, slightly too precisely, with the Marseille vowels tucked underneath it like something he'd been told to hide. "I know I have no right to be here. I know exactly what I said, and I know what it cost. I'm asking anyway." The rain had started again outside. She could hear it against Eva's single narrow window, and beyond that the muffled bass thump of something playing in the curry house below, and the ordinary sounds of Brick Lane carrying on completely indifferently. She looked at him. The wet shoulder of his suit. The slight tightness around his jaw that he'd never been able to fully school away when he was concerned about something. The way his hand had tightened on the cane, just once, and then released. "What kind of help?" she said. He reached into the inner pocket of his jacket and produced a photograph, folded once. He held it out to her. She crossed the room and took it, and their fingers didn't quite touch. She unfolded it. It was a picture of a woman she didn't recognise, standing outside a building she did — a small, undistinguished office front in Whitechapel she'd passed on her delivery route. The woman was perhaps fifty, with a deliberately unremarkable face. Someone had drawn a red circle around her left hand. On the woman's wrist was a small crescent-shaped scar. Rory went very still. "The scar is identical to yours," Lucien said, watching her. "Down to the placement." She raised her left wrist without thinking, the old habit, pressing her thumb to the curved mark. Her pulse beat against it. "Who is she?" Rory asked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.789
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
58.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"deliberately"
2"very"
3"precisely"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"absolutely"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stomach"
2"absolutely"
3"measured"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords962
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount768
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Eva4
Moreau2
Ptolemy3
Lucien9
London1
English1
Marseille1
Brick1
Lane1
Whitechapel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"English"
2"Marseille"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
5"Whitechapel"
globalScore0.914
windowScore0.833
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount962
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean22.9
std24.31
cv1.061
sampleLengths
016
14
285
37
43
56
615
71
857
96
1050
1163
126
132
146
1529
167
177
1815
1919
2073
216
225
237
2465
2523
261
275
282
2931
3026
3126
3255
3341
3445
356
3687
379
384
3914
4022
415
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"been told"
1"was concerned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was staying"
1"was forming"
9.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences86
ratio0.047
matches
0"His mismatched eyes — one amber, warm as candlelight, the other black as a stopped clock — moved over her face with an unhurried patience that made her stomach clench."
1"Lucien came in, and she caught the scent of rain and something underneath it — cedar, smoke, the faint mineral sharpness that was simply him and had no name she'd ever found."
2"Something shifted in his face — not softening, exactly."
3"It was a picture of a woman she didn't recognise, standing outside a building she did — a small, undistinguished office front in Whitechapel she'd passed on her delivery route."
79.22% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.05228758169934641
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.02483660130718954
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.19
std9.65
cv0.863
sampleLengths
016
14
231
35
419
530
65
72
83
96
1011
114
121
1321
146
156
1624
176
183
1915
2032
2117
227
2314
2414
2511
266
272
286
2923
306
314
323
337
349
356
3615
374
3821
396
4040
413
423
434
442
455
467
472
4826
493
70.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.47674418604651164
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences57
matches
0"It was not Eva."
1"His mismatched eyes — one"
2"He tilted his head slightly"
3"She stepped back."
4"It wasn't an invitation so"
5"She closed the door and"
6"He set his cane against"
7"She pressed her knuckles briefly"
8"He turned to face her"
9"She stopped herself from laughing,"
10"She'd been in London seven"
11"She had successfully, deliberately, kept"
12"She'd done well."
13"She'd been cautious."
14"He always remained standing when"
15"She spread her hands"
16"It was more like a"
17"She stood back up, because"
18"He said her name the"
19"She could hear it against"
ratio0.491
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences57
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave its"
1"It was not Eva."
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"Water beaded on his shoulders."
4"A single dark strand had"
5"His mismatched eyes — one"
6"Rory gripped the door"
7"He tilted his head slightly"
8"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
9"Lucien looked down at the"
10"The cat looked up at"
11"Some silent, irritating negotiation seemed"
12"Rory said, to the cat"
13"She stepped back."
14"It wasn't an invitation so"
15"Lucien came in, and she"
16"She closed the door and"
17"Books stacked three deep on"
18"Eva's research notes fanned across"
19"Scrolls she couldn't read tucked"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway with one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane, his charcoal suit immaculate despite the rain that had clearly …"
1"His mismatched eyes — one amber, warm as candlelight, the other black as a stopped clock — moved over her face with an unhurried patience that made her stomach …"
2"Some silent, irritating negotiation seemed to occur, and Ptolemy walked directly over his foot and into the hall as though personally escorting him inside."
3"Lucien came in, and she caught the scent of rain and something underneath it — cedar, smoke, the faint mineral sharpness that was simply him and had no name she…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She stopped (stop)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.474
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.053
76.9567%